Create your own Premeer Chawl Scenes! - Page 2

Meher is sitting at the window thinking of what excuses to make up next.. [silly? yes! 😆]

Heer is up on a stool, cleaning off the spider webs. [cause u know.. its all dusty..🤔]

Prem is going and cutting wood outside ☺️

As Heer is cleaning up the corner of the walls, she suddenly [😲] see's eyes open. She screams and covers her scratched face, as the Bat flies over her.

Prem who has just entered the door with a pile of logs, carrying on his back, is shocked to see Heer, almost about to fall off the stool. *chung, chung, chung* [the camera goes on his face, haha . 😆]

"DIDI!" yells Meher, snapping out of her 'zoned-out position'..

Prem runs over like a Hero, and catches her into his strong-bulit arms. Heer closes her eyes, and digs her nails into Prem's chest, sheiking.

Prem looks at her innocence and is mesmerized! Meher, standing at a distance slightly smiles and notices their "love".

Prem lays her on the un-dusted couch, and sits beside her. He begins to leave, just as Heer holds his palm. Prem looks back! She gets up and hugs him tightly. He wraps his arms around her, and pats her head, slowly..

"mujhe kabhi.. chod ke mat jaana, Prem." she whispers. "bachpan se tumhe dekhe bigair, tumse pyaar kiya hai maine. Bina jaane tum kaise ho, kaise dikhte ho. Band aur khuli aankhon se tumse mehsoos kiya hai maine apni ragon mein.. darr lagta hai, ki.. ki, humaare beech koi faansley naa aa jaye." she adds. "hum har faansley ko paar karke, ek dusre ke saath jiyenge, Heer. Chahe koi kuch bhi kahe. Prem, Heer ke bina nahi reh sakta.." he looks deeply into her eyes.

Meher standing before them wipes off her tears and sniffs. They suddenly look at her, embarassed! "Woh--mai.. *aachoo* kitni miti hai yaha.. mai zara khidki pe hoke aati hoon.." 😆

[first try at PH scenes😳]

Originally posted by: prettyasjen

Ok... heres mine...

Heer is waiting for Prem to come home, and Meher suddenly runs in and says Prem's here. Heers runs into the kitchen and starts heating up the parathas...

Prem comes in and asked Meher who is dusting about Heer, she says she's in the kitchen, Prem decides to take the shopping into the kitchen... He just steps into the kitchen and is stunned by Heer's beauty (Heer is smiling n making parathas thinking 'this is the first time Prem is gonna eat my hand made food')

N then suddenly notices Prem looking at her... they both have a looooooong eye locking session 😳 n Heer's index finger gets burnt from the paratha, she jumps up n screams 'OUCH@... Prem comes running n puts her finger in his mouth... Heer is stunned n just stares at him totalling forgetting tht the paratha is getting burnt... he relises her finger ... n another eye locking scene n he realises wat he's just done...

N THEN they realise the paratha is burnt... Heer's like... 'jaal gaya'... n makes an upset face... Prem picks up the paratha n eats it n says ' bahot achi hai' Heer smiles shyly! Prem leaves the kitchen...

Nxt scene... Heer brings some freshely baked parathas for Prem... n say's sorry about burning the one before!


Do let me know wat u guys think 😳

haha.. nicee.. additional scene, if I may add? 😳

N THEN they realise the paratha is burnt... Heer's like... 'jaal gaya'... n makes an upset face... Prem picks up the paratha n eats it n says ' bahot achi hai' Heer smiles shyly!

Prem turns his back towards Heer, so he can't see his expression.. and sticks his tougue out.. "Bano mat!" Heer says. Prem turns and says, like he dosen't know what she's talking about.. "Mai bann nahi raha hoon, Heer..🤔" he says. Heer snatches the burnt parantha from his hands and takes a bite.. she places her hand on her neck and makes sounds like "eechh! 🤢" "CHEE!" she adds. "Jhootey kahin ke!" she hits his chest. Prem laughs. "Jhoot kyun bola? Kyun nahi sach kaha ki achhe nahi hain. Itni bhi budhuu nahi hoon mai, jo pata na chale, paranthey jale hue hain.." she hits his forehead and makes a cute face.. "Sach kahu?" he says. His face 2 centimeters away from hers. "kaho.." she says. He goes behing her, and hugs her from the back.. "tumhaari har cheez pasand hai mujhe.. chache woh jale hue paranthey ho.. ya tumhara teda-meda face." he adds a laugh. Heer who was blushing all through, suddenly screamed, "YOU..!" and hit his chest constantly.. He was pushed towards the burning stove.. "AAHH..AAHH.. OUUCHH!" he yelled! [fake btw] 😆

..to be continued.. 😃

Haha!..you guys are awesome with this!..

Ahhh!! Those were some nice scenes, it would be wonderful if they incorporated such scenes into the show!!😳😳

Here's mine, pretty lame, I don't find it quite romantic, but here it is:

Heer is waiting in line with a bucket to get water. Its finally her turn, she fills up her bucket and is about to walk, when another hand grips the bucket, her fingers are slightly underneath that hand now. Heer surprised, looks up to find, intense, black eyes gazing at her. She says 'Aap.' For a moment, they are lost into each other's eyes, drowning into the sea of passion and immense love that overcomes them both in each other's presence. Prem tries to take the bucket from her 'Lao, mein utta letha hoon.' Heer tightens her grip on the bucket and in genuine modesty says 'Nahi..mai le jaungi..' 'Zid math karo Heer..mujhe de do...bohoth bhari hoga..' They both don't realize, that the bucket is tilting with them both trying to hold it, and before they know what's happening, they feel cold water splash onto their feet. They both let go of the bucket at the same time and Heer cries out in shock as the bucket tumbles onto her foot. Prem immediately rushes to her side and forcibly seats her on a stone. 'Dard ho raha hai?' Despite her protests, he kneels down and rubs her foot. 'Sab meri galati hai..' he mutters to himself angrily.

Heer just watches him with a slightly amused expression on her face. After a while Prem notices her smile and with a questioning look asks her 'tum has kyun rahi ho?' 'Aap toh esse mera pehr dekh rahe ho jaise koi bhaari wajan gira ho usse par...arre plastic ka bucket hi toh tha...isse toh dard toh kya..chot bhi nahi ayee..' Prem lets go of her foot and bites his lip and feels foolish and tries to defend himself 'toh..tum chilaayi kyun?' 'Arre achanak se gira isiliye..' Prem smiles despite himself as he marvels over his Heer's innocence..

Keep smiling..

Love

Soni

OMG...IT SO GUD PLZ COTINUE THANXX

really all imaginations r really good and i want every scene to take place in serial 👏

here goes mine
prem has gone for bath but suddenly water is over and he comes out in a towel with soap foams on his body and heer laughs and prem in that situation is lost in heer laugh and then heer give him water

^^^haha..I hope creatives read there & use some of these!..that would be fantabulous!

One more..

Heer comes out of the bathroom, her hair is soaked when she hears screaming.
Meher: DIIIIII!..dekho naa!, khana nahi hai
Heer: Chup kar, chilla mat, Prem soo rahe hai..aur har paal tujhe khane ke elava kuch nahi sujta naa?
M: par dii, bohut bhukh lagi hai
Meher clutches her stomach & continues screaming for food. Heer pretends to hit her as Meher runs, both end up circling the couch on which Prem is sleeping. Prem feel water all over his face & open his eyes to make sure he's not sleeping outside😆. He sees Heer running & continues to stare, Heer notices & stops running both lock eyes & Meher secretly disappears.
H: wohh, aap kabse dekh rahe the?
P: thodi der see, kyun?
H: wohh aapne kuch kaha nahi isliye
P: *chuckles* well, tumhe pehli baar itne maaze mein dekha hain..toh kya karta!
Heer blushes. Meher starts screaming again & Heer gets mad, shushing her & Prem just lies on the couch & smiles to himself!

😆 oh my god to make sure he is not sleeping outside hehehehe very funny although sweet too 👏

wow you guys have really good imaginations, i would love for these scenes to actaully happen in the serial 👏

Ok here's my try:
Heer is dusting and Prem walks into the room all wet, seeing him dripping wet heer drops her dusting cloth and they both bend down to pick it up which makes them bump heads. This then leads to an eye-locking session, Only to be interrputed by Meher who says: kitni miti hai yaha didi, making prem and heer go all shy 😳

(This is my first try at writing a prem-heer scene)

Sumaira

Originally posted by: mansi gandhi

really all imaginations r really good and i want every scene to take place in serial 👏

here goes mine
prem has gone for bath but suddenly water is over and he comes out in a towel with soap foams on his body and heer laughs and prem in that situation is lost in heer laugh and then heer give him water

i want to cont and cut when prem comes out all sope over his face and comes out in a towel bec of soap he is not able to see properly so he ask

is somebody here is somebody here

heer who was passing by sees him and laughs her heart out

prem asks wat happened why u laughing

heer..no nothing yeh lo have some water

prem splashes it on his face now he can see

he sees heer who was busy laughing he was likewat happened?

why u laughing

heer...nothing bas woh app is halat mein circus se nikle hoa joker jaise dikh rahe the

prem angrily

kya joker tumhe main abhi dekhta hoon

prem starts running to catch heer but heer to runs

while meher was cleaning the floor but she leaves the floor slippery and goes to have a glass of water

heer dose not notice the floor while she continues runing and prem too

and heer goes to the slippery floor and slips and prem who also was running too, with a sudden stop by heer falls on her and they have a big eye lock session

after a while

heer..ji woh mujhe jaana hai

prem ...mujhe joker bolne ki sazaa liye binaa

heer......ji woh toh maine bas aise he

prem..aise he kya

while still in the same position

heer...pls maaf kardi jiye aage se aisa nahi hoga

pre..ek shrth pe maaf karonga

heer...ji main sab manongi

prem..waada

heer..wadaa

prem...ki tum mujhe dekh ke humesha hasogi kabhi rogi nahi

heer.....ji

prem .....haan bolo manzoor hai tabhi jaane dunga

heer..manzoor hai

prem got up and heer did the same

while in all this he forget he was in towel

heer..aap jaenge nahi

prem kaha?

heer..woh aap ko yaad nahi ki abhi tak aapne bath nahi li

prem ooops sorry sorry

while prem was going and suddenly heer said

prem aap bahaut ache hai

prem was stunned for a sec but thne turn away for bathroom smiling and heer to went for kitchen while smilinmg😛