Create your own Premeer Chawl Scenes! - Page 10

Originally posted by: lian

Hmmm.....Well said😳,thier should b a lovely terrace scene.Let's try2make.Hope u ll like it.😊 at present there is lacks of idea in my mind.But i had tried my best.😃
Scene 3:

The sky is clean 2day.There is no rain sweet&cool air is blowing all around.Its a moon lit night.Prem cant sleep,i ll b missing his parents&family.He ll go 2 the terrace,Heer ll noticed it&will follow him.Prem is watching on the sky.Heer come&put her hand on his shoulder.Prem ll b shocked&turnd,it ll b Heer standing over there.
Heer:Aap is waqt yaha?Abhi tak soye nehi?
Prem:Nind nehi arahi hai.
Heer:Maa Bauji ki yaad a rahi hai?
Prem:Par tumhe kaise pata chala k mujhe Maa/bauji ki yad arahi hai.
Heer:Prem,kia mujhe inta bhi pata nehi chalega k apki khushi&udasi kis me hai.Apki is udasi ki waja mai hu,mere wajase apko apne parivar se alag hona para.
Prem:Heer!Bhul k bhi khudko meri udasi ka waja mat samajhna,tumto mere jine ki waja ho,mera wajood ho tumhara pyar meri ibadat hai.
Heer's eyes bcom wet.Prem wipe it wid his lips.&then both hugged.
Heer:prem,mai bhi tumhare bina adhuri hu,tum hoto mai hu tum nehi to mai kuch v nehi.This ll b a night when entire sky,stars&the moon ll b witness of thier pure love.Hope u all ll like it.

That was really very cute...woooooowwwwwwww!!!!!! hope we get to see smthg like this .....

another flick..I've gone crazy I think ..anyways here goes another one 😳

scene starts from where it ended..i.e.,Prem staring his family..they look at him..he looks at them..because of his father no one goes near Prem..all sit far from him..his father totally ignores him..while his other family share glances of both happy seeing him and sad not beeing able to talk to him..so the winner is annoounced..PREM..he goes to the podium..accepts the award..praises his family..without my father's guidance I would've done nothing..sort of thing..and then

Prem:I've recieved this award because of my father's guidance..me winning is just my father winning..this belongs entirely to him..and lately I've found a partner for life..and hope she'll contribute to my success beyond this(tada:Lalit's face shattered..and family members proud)

Party is over with lot of glances and glimpse of tears and all types of drama..now comes our Heer madam serving drinks to all..again missed by Prem..it's time to leave..Prem asks Meher again..

Prem:arre Meher..Heer abhi tak aayi nahi(thinking how can she miss such big occasion of my life)

Meher:haan mein bhi vahi soch rahi thi..shaayad woh kaam mein..err..mera matlab hai woh rishte daaron ke yahan zyaada time lag raha hai..shaayad woh ghar chali gayi ho..baarish bhi ho rahi hai na(it's raining outside)

Prem:haan shaayad..kya karen function toh khatam ho gaya..yahan rukenge toh baarish mein phas jaayenge..chalo hum bhi ghar chalte hain..shaayad woh wahin par ho..

Meher:teek hai

they r leaving and Heer is in a hurry herself to reach home before them..it's raining heavily..so much so they can't see who is infront..Heer who is walking fast directly goes into Meher and Prem..

Prem:Heer..tum yahan..(shocking face)

Heer:mein woh yahan

Meher:haan didi..aap yahan kya kar rahi hain..

Heer:mein woh..late ho gayi function ke liye..wahan rishtedaaron ke yahan..late hogaya..

in the meantime some employee comes and hands Heer her day salary(ta da..another shocker for Prem)

Prem:yeh kya hai Heer..tum yahan kaam karne aayi?!?

Heer:haan woh..

Prem:ab mujhe sab samaj mein aa raha hai..tumhara ghar se jaana..mera yeh naya suit..tum function mein na aana..yeh sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi Heer?!?

Heer:woh aapke paas koyi black dress nahi thi na isliye..aur kaam karna bhi zaroori hai ab..

Prem:mein yahaan koi baat nahi karna chahta..chalo ghar chalo..chalo Meher..

they reach home..slight of sadened look on all the three faces..Meher being samajhdaar leaves them both alone to talk..

Heer:please tum boora mat sochna..yeh kaam karna bahut zaroori hai humare liye..jab tak tumhe koi achi naukri nahi milti..tab tak..please..

Prem:Heer mujhe boora isliye nahi lag raha kyunki..tum uss jagah par kaam kar rahi thi..balki boora isliye lag raha hai kyunki..jab tum woh waitress ka kaam kar rahi thi..mein wahan aaraam se award le raha tha..

Heer:aisa kyun sochte ho..mujhe bilkul boora nahi laga wahan kaam karke..balki mujhe toh is baat ki khushi hai key tumhe yeh award mila..comgratulations..

Prem:thanks..

Heer:raat bahut ho chuki hai..so jaao..

Prem:ek minut..tumhe yaad hai woh couple jo hume mile aaj subah..unki yahaan party abhi bhi chal rahi hai..tum mere saath aaogi?

Heer:is waqt?

Prem:haan haan..kyun nahi..dekho humne woh award function toh miss karliye..saath nahi reh paaye..chalo iss party mein chalo..acha time pass ho jaayega..

Heer:teek hai..mein thoda change karke aati hoon..

Prem:teek hai

they reach the party..all punjabis full bindass dancing singing..joking around..the newly married couple come to Heer and Prem..and welcome them..also they announce to the other guests that these two r also newly married and all those things..

Heer is feeling shy..Prem giving slight sweet smiles..all the guests welcome them and ask them to dance..Prem puts his hands forward for Heer..and in acceptance Heer gives her hand and they start dancing..all sweet old memories r shown..Prem hugging Heer..Heer falling in arms of Prem..and back to party again..

Prem:mein chahta hoon humara saath yun hi rahe..

Heer:aisa hi rahega

Prem:(full kush)aur thank you Heer..tumne jo kuch bhi aaj kiya mere liye..

Heer:thanks ki koi baat nahi..jo mujhe teek laga woh kiya bas..

Prem:I love you

Heer:(blushes)I love you

Prem:(very happy hearing his Heer say..those words)

music stops and all clap for them..because they were so engrossed in themselves that they didn't even notice they were in a party!!so party is over and all other guests start to leave so does Heer and Prem..they thank for the party and leave for their home..

Prem:bahut acha tha na party?

Heer:haan..woh log ache hain

Prem:hmm..

so they get back home..share sweet glances!! 😳 😳

I thoght this was lil bit lame..I hope..I could do better next time..hope u guys liked it.. 😊

i love the short scenes u guys come up with
I wish they would all happen in the show

u guys are just amazing with the scenes u write! just hope that some of these are shown in the show. 😃 hoping to see more written 😉

Hi Guys,Hope u all r well.After A Long Time i have a scene in my mind which i want 2 share with u all.The scene is very short.Hope U All willl like it.

Scene 4:

The weather is very bad the rain is falling very Heavily.Everywhere is full with water.Prem is not at home.Heer is worried about Prem.Suddenly she got 2 knw tht the place is in the water,people r missing,no1 can get o ut of that area where Prem went for work.Hearing this news Heer bcom very anxious,see bcom scared&rush 2 search of Prem.She go out like crazy.The rain dont stop,heer is get wet&madly searching prem.Many people try 2 stop he but she didnt stop,after some time she get Prem's coat but not Prem,she bcom more frightened!She start 2crying,suddenly she saw Prem coming from a distance.She runs 2 Prem&hugged him tightly,Prem is shocked😲.Prem hold her&asked wht is she doing in this terrible rain?
Heer:kaha chalegaye the tum?jante ho mai kitna daar gai thi?Meri to jaan hi nikal gai thi,itna bhi nehi socha k agar tumhe kuch hojata to mera kia hota?
Prem:Mujhe agar kuch hota to ho jata tumhe bahar aneki kia zarorat thi?ghar jana mushkil hai,chalo dekhte hai koi rukne ki jaga miljaye.They take shelter to a hut,Prem make fire.Heer set opposite 2 Prem the fire is on the middle they r eye-locked,.........Im stacked!!!
Next is up2 u all.Imagine the next part as u want 2 imagine😉

i wish someone would continue to write more chawl scenes even though premeer are no longer there some of the things u guys come up with are brilliant I cannot get enough