FF - Unconditional Love (Part 20 - Page 67) - Page 37

Sorryyyyy... late again.. I still have a reservation spot on shabz and rehana di's fic.. 🤣
i'll reserve here too.. but i'll be back-o in a few min. Tehehe.. 😎

*edited*

Sorry I'm in a hurry, i wanted to write my comment before you updated the part, so i didn't read the note. And i have to go shopping in a while so yea... hehe...

Anyways you started off with such a cute scene, hooked from the start. CHEATER! << don't mind, i've been calling everyone that lately, for no random reason. I'm on the verge of making a new def. of it. 😆😆
I could just imagine that hurt/lovey-dovey look on Prem's face. And YESH! Red sari, where's the creatives, they HAFTA make Heer wear that one day. And Prem, don't worry, my mouths dry too. I'm sick, and i'm fasting, i'm soooo thirsty!!! Forget me, i'm always complaining. So yea, Prem was such a sweetheart to say sorry to her, even though he didn't do anything in particular. I swear, he is just the sweetest guy in the world. 😍

Yayyy! I was so glad Heer wasn't mad, i seriously thought she would be, and would burst. I was like, Prem, please please please don't meet her. But yesssss, she wasn't, and we got another cute sceneeee!!
*takes pillow and screams in it*
PREM PUTTING SINDOOR ON HEEERRR!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!
I could just imagine it. (Except Prem's wearing a white kurta with colors all over it in my imagination. 😕) I found that Prem's way to remind her that he is her husband, and he's there for her, whenever she needs him. I felt like he was trying to say that, if she wants to say something to him, then she can, without any barriers. Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww.... Hope thats what you were aiming for, if you weren't then, well i have an imagination worse than spongebob. 😆😆

Another thing, Heer smiled. 😃

Haila, they were at the beach? How romantic.. ☺️ I could just see it, Prem, Heer, the moon, the sand, the dark water reflecting the moon.... Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....
Prem not wanting intruders, he was soooo chance maaring. 😆😆
Loved how you described the night, and Prem's feeling towards Heer/Heer's pain in her eyes. It was really nicely written, the descriptiveness/creativeness of the sentences. It flowed really nicely, hats off. 👏

I was so happy when Heer finally talked. I could imagine how tense Prem must've been too. Trying to keep her from stopping, wanting her to say as much as she could. I guess the outside air was enough to make her feel better. Why didn't they do this before?
This has to be one of the BEST scenes in the world, it beats all the romantic scenes. It is just THE scene. Like it touched my heart, it was deep. I loved it. Finally the couple opened up to eachother, finally Heer let someone console her. And i just loved how Prem kept himself controlled for Heer, if they'd gone that far, Heer would've kept it as the biggest mistake of her life. And that would hurt Prem so much more.

Yay, the rasam's are coming up. Now Prem and Heer can feel like a normal couple, aaaaah BALLU GET YOUR LAZY BUTT OFF THAT STRETCHER... ughh, some people just can't stop being lazyyy.. *rolls eyes* Who does that? Goes into a coma right on there daughters wedding. *crosses arms and pouts*

I love how you add these little scenes that keep us updated on whats going on other than Prem and Heer. Its a really special thing about this FF. Love it! I found the DJ scene to be humurous, could just imagine her burnt up look. 🤣

The ending was awesome. Balwant repenting, aaaaah... I just love people that know what they've done wrong and want to make it right. I really hope Balwant speaks up, i'll give him candy then. My fave bar of choco, you want balwant? You want? Go tell everyone what a meanie your wifey is, then you can have it.

kimz

Updated, i think its longer than everyones. 🤔 Anyways, you always save the best for last. HAHHHHHH SHABZ! My comment was longer. Oh ANND... VIKKI LOVES ME MORE!!! *sticks out tongue and runs away*

aight shafaq....i am just starting to read ur ff...not even done with the 1st page....yet....so as soon as i am done...will comment....

Hey, i m new reader & loved this FF!, its so descriptive and flows nicely...ur a gr8 writer!, nice vocab & use of words, i hope Balraaj gets better, awsome plz update soon!

Originally posted by: .xganga.x

Fantastic update!
and i loved the Premeer scene, it was cute!
Loved it!
?xXx?
Sunayna
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Thanks a lot Sunayna 😃.....it really was very cute 😳 haina? I actually cannot believe 😲 I wrote something like that.

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part
the sindoor scene was really good finally heer opened up to prem and they had a decent conversation between the two.
hope balraj gets well soon.
the last scene were balwant was crying was emotional and also it showed how balwant is changing and starting to care about his brothers family.

Thanks 😊 so much.....I'm glad 😃 you liked the scene. You'll have to wait and see whether or not Balraaj recovers 😆....I cannot reveal anything 😉 hehe. Balwant is changing believe it or not....but lets and see for how long!

Originally posted by: ranrags

OMG..first of all THANK YOU SO MUCH🤗for dedicating this part to us..I was like ranrags??wait that's me..man u really did that..thank u..so sweet of u..and coming to ur FF..totally awesome..specially Prem-Heer scenes..well their scene was more so..I really liked the way Heer confided her feelings with Prem..atleast she thought she can share things with him as a partner..and also Prem..what a gentleman..so cute..aur DJ..something has to be done to her yaar..and Balwant should teach her a lesson..pls Balraj ko coma se baahar lao na..it'll be nice..but this part was really good..looking forward to know more..

Aww you're welcome dear 😊....you deserved it....you guys have been such loyal readers 😳 all this while. I really appreciate that!

Thanks for all your lovely words for this particular part. I hope I don't disappoint you with the upcoming parts. But you will have to keep reading to find out 😆 😉.....

Originally posted by: ravioli_11

Hey! I FINALLY get a chance to comment. Everytime when I was about to comment something came up. Anyway.....first things first
👏
Thats for all those wonderful updates. They were awesome amazing fantasitc terrificly mindblowing. Aww poor Heer. At least she finally spoke to Prem and he was able to console her. I hope Balraj gets better soon. Daljeet is just.....urgh!

Once again amazing update. Can't wait to read the next one

Hey and I finally get a change to reply 😆.....I've delayed things enough I believe. Sorry! Aww thanks so much 😊 for all those applauds.....it makes me feel so special 😳 even though I don't deserve this much praise. Do keep reading dear!

Originally posted by: lian

1st of all i ll say i dont have any problem with the updating times do the 1 which ll b easy for u im just enjoying the parts😃
&yes again u had written a great part happy to read such a great scene of PremHeer&im happy tht Heer is getting normal.hope Balraj get well soon &both The Maan&Juneja's live Happily a peaceful life😳ll b waiting for the next 1😃

Firstly thank you for letting me know you don't mind either option and thanks so much 😊 for liking it Liana! Its means a lot. I won't keep you waiting for long now.....I know its been ages since I last updated. Sorry! Do keep reading.

Originally posted by: fijiana

great part.glad ki finally prem and heer have a moment alone but hope balraaj gets well soon so that happiness returns to prem and heer.hope it is balwant who finds out who is the cause of balraajs condition.but hope that if balraaj does come out from coma,there is no misunderstanding towrds prem from heers side.looking forward to the next update to know about the grah pravesh and more.

I'm glad to hear 😉.....I believe everyone wants Balraaj to recover 😆....the next update will be up very soon...promise 😳...

Originally posted by: angel82

Shafaq, thankyou soo much for dedicating such a loveley part to us..🤗.. it was a pleasent surprise...

PRem- Heer scenes were soo cute....Heer in crimson red and Prem in Black ,what a combination....Prem filling Heer's maang was soo sweet...And dinner at the beach was soo romantic...Even though Heer was still little upset about her father's condition, it was romantic in its own way...And loved the fact that she actually opened up a bit to Prem and did behave tohim as to a stranger...
It really scares me how she is going to react upon knowing that her father's condition is due to Prem, even though its just a misunderstanding untill its solved ,how is she going to take it.....DJ arghhhh.....
I like the Balwant in your FF..He isnt bad...He really cares for his brother and his family....


Looking forward to your next update...

Angie....

Aww you're welcome 😊 Angie di.....hope you don't mind me calling you di 😳....its just you're so older than me and all.

I'm pleased 😃 to hear you found the scenes really cute! Yep she finally opened up to him yay 🥳.....live in the moment...don't worry how she'll react for now at least. Balwant in my FF is certainly different 😆 but I guess that's a good thing.

Well I won't keep you waiting any longer!

Originally posted by: Reemz93

fab upd8! h8 daljeet!!!! 😡

hope balraj gets better soon n all his misunderstandings are cleared...altho there will be problems caused even when he wakes up

Thanks 😊 dear! I hope so too 😳....oh wait I'm the one writing here 😆.....so you never know 😉. I won't upset you guys for sure....promise!

Originally posted by: SandstarQueen

Just read your FF and have to say thank you so much you have a really good way with words and manage to make it seem like we are actually watching the show.

So thank you again and please continue😊

Aww you're welcome 😊 but I should be the one thanking you of taking the time out to read this FF of mine. Thank you so much 😃 for all your lovely words and welcome to the FF 😉....do keep reading! I'm really sorry for not continuing sooner. I was really very busy. But the next update will be very soon!

Originally posted by: afreen.....

i read it today only in one-go!! 😳nd its toTally awesome matlab m outta words mann..toTally creating the atmosphere for romance nd evrything..keep writing..ur tooo great means kis desh's creatives shd take advices from u😊 keep it yp!!!👍🏼👏👏

Oh wow? All of it in one go 😲 huh? Welcome to the FF 😃 afreen! Thanks a lot 😊 for your wonderful comments dear. It means a lot 😳 to me! Do keep reading.

Originally posted by: pm rocks

aight shafaq....i am just starting to read ur ff...not even done with the 1st page....yet....so as soon as i am done...will comment....

i am gonna go and start reading it right now😉

P.S. I just read the last last update...not the one you just posted....tell me if i am wrong...so premeer are married and heer's dad is sick...right?...if yes then i kinda think i know the story so i will just go back and read the main point n the continue from there...😳if you dont mind...otherwise i can read ur ff from starting😳

OH of-course its okay. That's absoloutely fine 😊 Janki. The fact that you took the time out to read it means so much to me 😳 really! Yep you've got the story line right dear. Don't worry about reading it from the start at all. Just continue from no onwards!

Originally posted by: ruexangel

Hey, i m new reader & loved this FF!, its so descriptive and flows nicely...ur a gr8 writer!, nice vocab & use of words, i hope Balraaj gets better, awsome plz update soon!

Rue

Well welcome to the FF 😊 ruexangel! Thank you for your feedback! Do keep reading.

Originally posted by: shafaq92

Aww you're welcome 😊 Angie di.....hope you don't mind me calling you di 😳....its just you're so older than me and all.

I'm pleased 😃 to hear you found the scenes really cute! Yep she finally opened up to him yay 🥳.....live in the moment...don't worry how she'll react for now at least. Balwant in my FF is certainly different 😆 but I guess that's a good thing.

Well I won't keep you waiting any longer!

shafaq u have written very much nice i have readed all parts these all sence u have written very nice plz keep it up continue👍🏼