FF - Unconditional Love (Part 20 - Page 67) - Page 36

OMG..first of all THANK YOU SO MUCH🤗for dedicating this part to us..I was like ranrags??wait that's me..man u really did that..thank u..so sweet of u..and coming to ur FF..totally awesome..specially Prem-Heer scenes..well their scene was more so..I really liked the way Heer confided her feelings with Prem..atleast she thought she can share things with him as a partner..and also Prem..what a gentleman..so cute..aur DJ..something has to be done to her yaar..and Balwant should teach her a lesson..pls Balraj ko coma se baahar lao na..it'll be nice..but this part was really good..looking forward to know more..

Hey! I FINALLY get a chance to comment. Everytime when I was about to comment something came up. Anyway.....first things first

1st of all i ll say i dont have any problem with the updating times do the 1 which ll b easy for u im just enjoying the parts😃

Shafaq, thankyou soo much for dedicating such a loveley part to us..🤗.. it was a pleasent surprise...

fab upd8! h8 daljeet!!!! 😡

Just read your FF and have to say thank you so much you have a really good way with words and manage to make it seem like we are actually watching the show.

i read it today only in one-go!! 😳nd its toTally awesome matlab m outta words mann..toTally creating the atmosphere for romance nd evrything..keep writing..ur tooo great means kis desh's creatives shd take advices from u😊 keep it yp!!!👍🏼👏👏

Originally posted by: Fatima..

Amazing is the word ill use! Just simply nice! Thanks for writing sucha nice... part! UPDATE SOON!

Aww thanks 😳....you're welcome dear!

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

awesome fantastic
heer prem scene sooo cute

Thank you! I'm glad 😃 you liked it!

Originally posted by: pisces26

very nice i really like your ff the way you handle every one is awesome .

Thanks a lot 😊.....I'm pleased to hear.

Originally posted by: shabo24

WOW....fast update...hey we updated on the same day!! *shocked muh*

Yeah I know it is haina? Well for a person like me it is 😆. They do say great minds think alike 😉....hence the updating together and I'm so sorry but I haven't gotten to reading your FF yet. I want to do it when I have the time and frame of mind to. I don't just wanna read it for the sake of it as I'm sure you've done a fantastic 👍🏼 job!

Thanks for the PM didz!!! Wait did you say no didz?*scrathes head* Can't remember.

Oh you're welcome 😊 Shabz no problem! Hmm 🤔 no I didn't say no to didz. You can call me di if you want. I find it rather adorable 😳 in fact!

Anyway, getting to the important stuff! *rubs hands together*OMG, that first lil scene between PH, with the sindoor it was so perfect! I mean thier love is so pure. so destineed, yet still not whole. *sigh* I am so EAGARLY waiting for the day where Heer accepts Prem with open arms!

I'm really glad 😃 you liked it. All your feedback is not just really important to me but also of a great benefit.

AHHHHHHHHH! That PH dinner date! WOW....hey at least she agreed to go with him! It's a start. My heart was just weeping for her when she let go like that, it broke my heart! I can just imagine the pain Prem was feeling for Heer, wanting to comfert her, but not sure about his limits!! Uffff, it was so well done!

Well...well...well 😛 isn't someone a bit too excited? I knew you guys would hunt me down if I didn't give you enough of Premeer. But it turned out to be an amazing scene. I mean I really can't believe 😲 I actually wrote something like that!

Rest of the FF was very well written, I coupld completly see it happening, well even if you can't push DJ of a cliff, why not have her in some embarrassing moments??

Cliff huh? Not a bad idea you know.....but I can assure you she will definitely be experiencing her share of humiliation 😈 in the upcoming parts.

Waiting for the next update...

I'm sure you are....after-all aren't I just great? I'm just in the mood of flattering myself. Nah its an honor honestly speaking to have such lovely readers like you guys.

Shabz

Thanks 😊 Shabo!

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part

Thanks so much 😊..

Originally posted by: DMGanuthika

Amazing update. 👏 👏 👏I was waiting for it for a long time. Now I am eagerly waiting for the next part.Hope u can update it when u have time. Thanks for the PM. 😊
Karthika

Thanks Karthika 😳....well I'm sorry to have kept you waiting dear and you're welcome for the PM. It was no problem really 😊. Just so you know....I'll be updating today for sure!