FF - Unconditional Love (Part 20 - Page 67) - Page 38

Originally posted by: shafaq92

Hey and I finally get a change to reply 😆.....I've delayed things enough I believe. Sorry! Aww thanks so much 😊 for all those applauds.....it makes me feel so special 😳 even though I don't deserve this much praise. Do keep reading dear!

Well welcome to the FF 😊 ruexangel! Thank you for your feedback! Do keep reading.

Originally posted by: kimmu

Sorryyyyy... late again.. I still have a reservation spot on shabz and rehana di's fic.. 🤣
i'll reserve here too.. but i'll be back-o in a few min. Tehehe.. 😎

Its okay.....I should be the one apologizing no? Its been ages! But the truth is I've just been really busy and lazy 😆.

*edited*

Sorry I'm in a hurry, i wanted to write my comment before you updated the part, so i didn't read the note. And i have to go shopping in a while so yea... hehe...

Shopping eh? Lucky you! Hope you enjoyed yourself! I can't even remember what the note said 😳 hehe.

Anyways you started off with such a cute scene, hooked from the start. CHEATER! << don't mind, i've been calling everyone that lately, for no random reason. I'm on the verge of making a new def. of it. 😆😆
I could just imagine that hurt/lovey-dovey look on Prem's face. And YESH! Red sari, where's the creatives, they HAFTA make Heer wear that one day. And Prem, don't worry, my mouths dry too. I'm sick, and i'm fasting, i'm soooo thirsty!!! Forget me, i'm always complaining. So yea, Prem was such a sweetheart to say sorry to her, even though he didn't do anything in particular. I swear, he is just the sweetest guy in the world. 😍

Well I'll take me being called a cheater as a compliment k? You go ahead with that def. of your's 😆. I thought I'd make some of our dreams come true through Fanfics seeing as creatives have no intention of doing so. Someone sure likes to moan tsk tsk 😳 kimz.....fasting is rewarding....remember that! Prem is definitely the most amazing guy 😍 to ever exist!

Yayyy! I was so glad Heer wasn't mad, i seriously thought she would be, and would burst. I was like, Prem, please please please don't meet her. But yesssss, she wasn't, and we got another cute sceneeee!!
*takes pillow and screams in it*
PREM PUTTING SINDOOR ON HEEERRR!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!
I could just imagine it. (Except Prem's wearing a white kurta with colors all over it in my imagination. 😕) I found that Prem's way to remind her that he is her husband, and he's there for her, whenever she needs him. I felt like he was trying to say that, if she wants to say something to him, then she can, without any barriers. Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww.... Hope thats what you were aiming for, if you weren't then, well i have an imagination worse than spongebob. 😆😆

I thought I'd do the unexpected instead.....it would have been so typical of Heer to get mad no? I won't tell you to calm down dear as I too was just as excited whilst writing this very scene. You go the symbolic meaning of the scene spot on....well done 👏 kimmu! That was exactly what I was aiming for!

Another thing, Heer smiled. 😃

Yep she did yay 🥳.....we're finally getting somewhere 😆....I didn't want to drag things for long like Ekta is seen to do.

Haila, they were at the beach? How romantic.. 😳 I could just see it, Prem, Heer, the moon, the sand, the dark water reflecting the moon.... Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....
Prem not wanting intruders, he was soooo chance maaring. 😆😆
Loved how you described the night, and Prem's feeling towards Heer/Heer's pain in her eyes. It was really nicely written, the descriptiveness/creativeness of the sentences. It flowed really nicely, hats off. 👏

Haina? A really romantic scene 😳 after such a long time! You guys deserved it. Thanks a lot 😃 for appreciating my hard work and effort.

I was so happy when Heer finally talked. I could imagine how tense Prem must've been too. Trying to keep her from stopping, wanting her to say as much as she could. I guess the outside air was enough to make her feel better. Why didn't they do this before?
This has to be one of the BEST scenes in the world, it beats all the romantic scenes. It is just THE scene. Like it touched my heart, it was deep. I loved it. Finally the couple opened up to eachother, finally Heer let someone console her. And i just loved how Prem kept himself controlled for Heer, if they'd gone that far, Heer would've kept it as the biggest mistake of her life. And that would hurt Prem so much more.

Yeah why didn't they do this before 😕 ? I too am wondering now 🤔 but I guess everything has a fixed time....altering that shall do us no good. How philosophical 😆 ! Plus, I hadn't thought of something like this before hehe. OMG 😲 you just made my day kimz.....by telling me this is one of the best scenes in the world. Thanks! Nothing's perfect but I guess it is one of my best pieces of work. You really need to stop complimenting me! Too much of anything is never good. It'll end up getting to me 😆...

Yay, the rasam's are coming up. Now Prem and Heer can feel like a normal couple, aaaaah BALLU GET YOUR LAZY BUTT OFF THAT STRETCHER... ughh, some people just can't stop being lazyyy.. *rolls eyes* Who does that? Goes into a coma right on there daughters wedding. *crosses arms and pouts*

Yes.....get yourself into the festive mood again! Young lady.....behave yourself.....poor Ballu has no choice as it is all in my hands 😈 muhahah...so why not try buttering me 😆....it may actually work hehe.

I love how you add these little scenes that keep us updated on whats going on other than Prem and Heer. Its a really special thing about this FF. Love it! I found the DJ scene to be humurous, could just imagine her burnt up look. 🤣

I'm really glad 😃 you liked it..... humor is always necessary to keep us all going. DJ 😡 deserves nothing but such burnt up jealous looks 😆....

The ending was awesome. Balwant repenting, aaaaah... I just love people that know what they've done wrong and want to make it right. I really hope Balwant speaks up, i'll give him candy then. My fave bar of choco, you want balwant? You want? Go tell everyone what a meanie your wifey is, then you can have it.

Bribing eh? Naughty naughty! But I totally agree with on what you've said about Balwant. He's trying to fix his mistakes and is truly repenting or is he?

Do keep reading!

Sorry to have kept you and everyone else waiting!

kimz

Thanks so much 😊 for your as always lovely comments kimmu!

Originally posted by: angel82

Nah Nah I absolutely dont mind you calling me Di...You are my sis's age...so your also like my sis....😃

Aww thank you 😊....

Originally posted by: zaheerdin15

shafaq u have written very much nice i have readed all parts these all sence u have written very nice plz keep it up continue👍🏼

Thanks a lot 😃....do keep reading!

Originally posted by: ravioli_11

Np😊And yes you do deserve and I'm sure everyone will agree. And I'm impatient to find out what happens next so I demand another update right now!😳😆

Okay then if you say so 😆....and I'm so sorry to have kept you waiting all this time. Another update is on its way right this moment. I'm in the process of finishing it of so please be patient 😳 for just a while more. Thanks 😊 again.

Originally posted by: ruexangel

Hey, ya sure will😳, will wait for update, i kno how busy it cn gt,i also have 6th form next year.. ohh gosh. 🤢. neway plzz update wen u can Shafaq plz😊
Rue

Thanks 😊 for being so patient Rue.....don't worry Sixth Form isn't that bad but it can get pretty busy and hectic. I'll be finally updating in just a while.

Hello everyone 😃

How are my lovely readers? Hope you're not too mad 😳 at me. I know its been over a month since I last updated and I'd like to take this opportunity to apologize. There really was so much going on that I got caught up with things mainly school related. Plus, I was being my usual lazy self 😛 😆 which I'm not so proud off. But I hope during this process I haven't lost any readers of mine as that would certainly be a huge loss. Now starting from 2mrw I'm on half term yay 🥳....time to party ppl! Yes I have officially completed 7 whole weeks at Sixth Form and survived hehe. Things are going well for me and I hope all is well at all your ends too.

Now that I have no excuse whatsoever....the next part of this fanfic shall be up latest by Tuesday if not tomorrow evening. I'll be awaiting your wonderful comments as well as criticism. Do keep reading guys! Sorry once again.

Take care 🤗

Shafaq 😊

hey
time to party me complete 9 wks
and 4 more wks till thanksgiving can't wait..
anyways u did not lost any readers ok

Ahh SHAFAQ!! Where have you been? Ahh na-na... we aint mad at ya. I've been busy lately too, so totally understand what your going through. Hope you get time to update soon, cuz i've been waiting very (im)patiently. 😆

Don't worry, you didn't loose any readers. Still got what you had, you can't loose readers. You got the awesomest fic. 👍🏼 Keep it up, will be waiting.

Hey!

Dont knw about other readers but im still waiting to read the next part of ur FF&im glad that u ll b updating it .i ll b waiting for the update😃

Part 17

A big hello to all my lovely readers 😃

First and foremost, I'd like to apologize for the delay in updating. I'm extremely sorry! I hope you can forgive me 😳......I absolutely love writing for you guys.

Now how is everyone doing? Before you ask, I'm doing great 😆 with half-term and all. I'm finally getting the break that I deserved hehe.

Coming to the update, here's the next part i.e. Part 17.

I'd like to dedicate this part to Liana (lian) for making me a beautiful banner. Thanks a lot 😊 dear. I really appreciate it.

Before putting it up on the first page however, I thought I'd show you all it. She's really done a fantastic job. I hadn't even asked her to make me one yet she did.





Isn't it great? Anywayz now I'll spare you all and let you read the much awaited next part of this fanfic.

Take care,

Shafaq

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Gayatri welcomed her son and daughter-in-law into their home which should have rightfully been done on their wedding day with the traditional aarti warding of any evil influences from them. On completion, Kulraaj took the tray away from her mother. Heer was then asked to gently kick a kalash filled with rice which had been kept at the house entrance with her right foot symbolizing the arrival of wealth and prosperity into her marital home.

This was followed by another ritual wherein Heer put her right foot onto a tray also kept on the entrance of the house containing vermilion powder that had been mixed with either water or milk. After both her feet had been covered by the red paste, Heer entered the house with bare feet - right foot first of-course, making footprints on the cold marble floor as she did so. This symbolized the arrival of good luck and fortune into her new home.

"Bhagwaan kare kisi ki nazar na lage" Gayatri prayed to herself as she watched the couple who by now had reached the end of the hall. She quickly caught up with everyone and led them into the living room. Everyone was busy chatting away rather casually when Veera brought up the most unwanted topic at that moment, their suhaag raat.

"Mama, kya hum bhaiya aur bhabhi ka kamra sajaa dein? We didn't get to on their actual wedding night." she asked complainingly.

"Haan kyun nayi.....ye bhi toh ek rasam hi hai kyun Ji? she added turning to Lalit for approval.

Lalit agreed "Bilkul....bilkul. Jao Veera beta and you Preet.....why not help for once? Jab dekho farigh behta hua hota hai."

Preet whined to his mum whilst pouting. She just laughed at his child like behavior and asked him to accompany his sister upstairs. All this while however nobody noticed the fear stricken expression on Heer's face. Prem, himself looked rather sulky. The same Heer who had been avoiding him for the past week and treating him like nothing but a stranger would never be willing for this. He was sure of it. He didn't even have the guts to face her....meet her gaze. His family members had already forced her into accompanying him to a romantic dinner and it was during that dinner date that he had promised her with all his heart that everything would be alright. He didn't want it to seem as if he was taking advantage of her. But what was he to do? Veera and Preet were already busy decorating their bedroom and everyone else looked so content that he didn't have the heart to say anything. Now, for Heer it wasn't any different, although she wanted to say no right then, even she like her husband didn't have it in her to do so. She just looked down trying to hide her tears whilst the rest thought she was shy like any newly wed girl would be. But Prem knew the truth. How couldn't he? So when no one was looking he gently placed his hand over her's assuring Heer no such thing would take place. This certainly helped in lessening her tension as a few moments later she was smiling slightly whilst engrossed in a casual conversation with Kulraaj di who sat beside her.

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"Teji Tai, Mom aap ko niche bulaa rahi hain. Dad aagaye hain aur khana bhi lag gaya hai. Aap jaldi se neeche ajayein theek hai?" Vishaka informed whilst inviting her aunt downstairs.

"Nahi beta mere bilkul bhi dil nahi kar raha. Tum sab khalo." she refused politely.

"Aise kaise hum sab khaalein. Aapke beghair." she questioned looking rather aghast.

But before Teji could relent any further Ashlesha arrived "Kya di, itni deir horahi hai. Upar seh khana bhi thanda hojeyga." she complained so like herself.

"Haan Ash bas abhi ayi. Dekho na Tai keh rahi hain ke unko khana nahi khaana. Aise kaise! I was just trying to convince her" Vishaka explained to her younger sister.

"Uffo Vishaka di, agar unko bhook nahi hai then why are you pressuring her? Unki marzi....its up-to her whether she wants to eat or not. Hum kya kar sakte hain" she said getting ruder by the minute to her sister's surprise.

Not being able to hold on any more Vishaka interrupted angrily "Ash! Yeh kaise baat kar rahi ho tum?"

But before Ashlesha could defend her actions, Teji came to her rescue despite being offended deep down "Kya Vishaka, Ashlesha theek hi toh keh rahi hai. Mujhe jab bhook hi nayi lagi hui hai toh khaana khaane ka kya faida hain? Jao dono. Neeche sab intezaar kar rahein honge. Jao!' she ordered rather authoritatively.

The two young girls agreed, whilst Vishaka still wasn't convinced and made their way downstairs where Balwant immediately asked about Teji shaking Daljeet up altogether. Her husband was getting out of hand day by day and she needed to take desperate measures to stop this from happening. Vishaka let her father know the reason for Teji's abense which he didn't approve of at all. He then requested Meher to take some food up to her mother and Meher complied with her Chachu.

Now although it was nothing less than a mission actually getting Teji to eat, Meher finally succeeded after half an hour of convincing.

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"Chalo chalo ab bas. I think its time for everyone here to go to bed. Jao Prem beta, tum aur Heer kamre mein jao. Bahut raat hogayi hai. Aur tum Preet, subha office nayi jaana kya? Go to sleep! Are Kulraaj Gunjan ko bahut neend ayi vi hai. Ise sulaana nahi kya? Damaad ji bhi intezaar kar rahein honge. Chalo Gayatri hum bhi chalte hain. Veera sogayi kya?" Lalit ended with a question.

Kulraaj picked up Gunjan and left to her room whilst Preet followed. Prem and Heer still sat there rather statue like.

Gayatri answered her husband's unanswered question "Haan kab ki. She can't stay up......aap ko toh pata hi hai" as she got up and straightened her by now very creased sari.

Lalit immediately stood nodding in agreement "Are tum dono abhi tak gaye nahi kya? Jao beta bahut raat hogayi hai" he repeated upon noticing Prem and Heer still glued to their seats.

It looked as if Lalit and Gayatri weren't going to leave until they did and so reluctantly they got up only to find Heer's bracelet entangled with Prem's watch perhaps symbolizing their unbreakable bond. An uncomfortable Heer tried to release herself or her bracelet you could say from Prem's watch's hold. Prem did the same but not as effectively as Heer. Lalit and Gayatri watched the two silently until they felt the need to step in.

"Bhagwaan! Tum dono bhi na. What's so difficult in this?" Gayatri asked as she took their hands in her's and helped them untangle themselves just before adding "I just hope the two of you are inseparable in reality as well." at which Lalit grinned ear to ear.

They then blessed the couple and after what felt like an eternity left them alone.

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Meher lay wide awake in bed picturing Harman and recollecting all their moments spent together. Was he really the guy for her? Or not? It wasn't even right for her to think of such things whilst her father was struggling between life and death! But there was a beautiful life awaiting her. At-least that's what she thought. She mused on the great life her elder sister had with such loving in-laws, a supportive husband and mansion like home. But what she didn't know was that her sister was the least bit happy there. She had drowned herself in her sorrows and that too so greatly that it was unimaginable!

Meher sat up and turned to look at her mother who slept peacefully for once but only God knew what turmoil Teji was in. The truth was Meher was oblivous to the realities of life. She was still an innocent young girl despite seeing what her father had experienced. She still had a lot of hope unlike her elder sister and mother.

Now only time could tell when and how she'd come to face the realities of life.

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Prem slowly entered their room followed by Heer. He immediately reached for the switch and turned on the lights filling the room with unwanted brightness. Heer just walked past her husband as if totally ignoring his presence and into the ensuite bathroom shutting the door behind her loudly enough to bring him back to reality. An extremely exhausted Prem just loosed his tie and undid his coat which he then carefully hanged into his cupboard after which he sat down on to the two seater plush sofa resting his head against it with his eyes shut as if trying to get away from everything.

Moments later, Heer stepped out looking absoloutley stunning in her satin pink nightly. Prem found it ever so difficult to hold back and resist this beauty that stood before him. She looked so desirable at that very moment and he wanted to make her his right then. Heer, however was completely unaware of the affect she had on her husband as she casually carried on removing her jewelry returning it to its rightful place on her dressing table. She then went on to wipe of any make up that was yet to be removed. Prem continued to stare at her no longer fearful of Heer's objection.

It looked as though Prem had changed. He was now somewhat different mainly a lot more daring. The calm, composed, simple yet successful business man Prem Juneja had endured enough it seemed. He was not going to take no for an answer. Prem was up on his feet abruptly and soon began closing the short distance between him and his wife until he stood right behind her. Heer who had noticed long ago was finally beginning to react. Nervousness was clearly evident on her face. She had no idea whatsoever of what Prem was about to do. Prem, surprising Heer as well as himself held out his hand in front of her.

"Chalo mere saath!" he commanded.

"Lekin kahaan?" she questioned outraged at his sudden approach.

Prem spoke again with the very same firm voice "No questions asked! Do you trust me Heer? If yes then you'll agree."

However, Heer was just as stubborn and continued to moan demanding for answers as she did so "But Prem, I've already changed. I'm in no state to leave the house! At least tell me where we're going."

"Then change back! Just hurry up though." he now casually announced as if it was no big deal.

A curious Heer wanting to find out more relentlessly agreed and left to get dressed. Soon enough she emerged from the bathroom in a plain white shalwar suit with her hair tied up in a bun and no make up on her face. Prem grabbed his car keys from their bedside table and signaled her to follow him. Heer obliged and their car ride to wherever it was he was taking her was a rather silent one with Prem focussing on his driving and Heer pondering over where exactly it was they were going.

Suddenly the car came to a halt! Prem stepped out and Heer did so too. She could now with great ease recognize where it was they had come. They were at City Hospital. It was late at night but it was still very recognizable seeing as it had literally been Heer's second home these past two weeks. Only a few cars were parked in the car park and the only people around were the half asleep security guards and hospital staff on night duty.

Heer looked over at her husband looking confused and extremely distressed as everything that had happened lately came flashing back to her. Her eyes began to water and soon tears were forming in those beautiful eyes of her's. Heer felt so helpless and immensely weak. It felt as if she'd collapse onto the ground any second now, but how would that ever be possible with Prem around. Long before, Heer could touch the ground Prem's firm protecting yet warm hands clasped tightly around her and tried his best to comfort her. Once again that evening, despite not wanting to Heer surrendered herself to Prem and let him do what was necessary at the time.

"Heer! Hosh mein aao! What the hell is wrong with you? Calm down. Kya tumhare Bauji tumhe is halaat mein dekhna chhaate? He'd hate to see you like this Heer!" Prem strived to talk some sense into her.

Heer stopped crying immediately fearful of his harsh tone. Her breathing too soon returned to regular.However, her disheveled state would take time to overcome and so Prem suggested they return home. But Heer was obstinate and uncompromising. She wanted to see her father now! Prem had no idea how to make her understand and so they entered the hospital making their way to Balraaj's private intensive unit. Although it was no longer visiting hours, Prem had managed to convince the doctor in charge beforehand. Tonight, he was going to promise Heer something in the presence of her ill father.
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