FF - Unconditional Love (Part 20 - Page 67)

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fj08

@fj08

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Posted: 16 years ago

#381

you really did make us wait, with such a long wait i have to figure out which ff this was, there all similar in characters so it becomes a little confusing, make something happen now, tell prem abt heers promise or make prem convince heer otherwise....

nice update, looking forward to the next one :)

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#382

amazing part

poor prem has to deal with a lot but i hope he can make heer understand that her father wouldnt want to see her upset.

the way the family members were trying to make the atmosphere normal by doing all the rituals was really good.

the way ash spoke to teji showed she is defiantly daljeets daughter she was really rude.

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Ravjot

@rainydays.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#383

Amazing update!

Aww poor Heer. I hope everything turns out ok. At least she has Prem there who understands what she's going through. Loved the update. I gotta go study now but I shall edit this later😊 If I remember. lol

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cuteshabana

@cuteshabana

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#384

Awsome, I love your work, plz update soon.

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Angie

@angel82

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#385

Shafaq that was a nice part...and yeah the update was after such a looooooong time ... but we can understand...

ASh 😡 reminds me of the old ash in the show...And Meher here, reminds me of the present Meher in the show😡 all she cares for is Harman !!

OK loved the rest , Veera and Preet are soo cute...Prem is soo understanding...hmm wonder what promise he's going to make in front of Ballu...something similar to Heer's promise to herself...

eagerly waiting for the next update..

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ruexangel

@ruexangel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#386

Hey

nice update

Prem is being so caring, hope Heer can understand that, cant wait to see his promise to heer, than she will realise. Shes just been crying & crying so far. I rlly hope Balwant gets better.

btw how is ur half term so far? mines not been bad, it snowed in Diwali, & its only second day in winter! did it snow in your area? & how was ur Diwali? lolz neway plzzz update soon!

~Rue

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@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#387

Hey Shafaq!!! Long time..!

OK so for some reason I can't read the part, I have ot use this scroll bar to see from left to right and its taking wayy to long...do you mind PMing me the part???😳

Until that....

*reserved*

Ahhh that was fast!!! OK here I start...!!

*unreserving*

Uhhh isn't it a lil too late for these rasams?😆Sorry jkjk!!!😆But you described the whoel entry marroning so beautifully...I could completly imagine Heer coming in all shy and all...*feverishaly nazar utharing*

🤬🤬🤬Veera! I swear this girl has dusballs between her ears....can she not see that even IF Premeer were all lovey dovey with each other in public that this is a very touchy subject...! How would she like it if I brought it up with her and RR...chi chi chi.....

HAyye....mera pyara sa preet....shuffling his feet up to help his sister..Don't worry Preet, know one wants to be alone with her for too long...it can cause extensive brain damage...or so I've heard...🤔

Awwwwww Premu!!! He is like this BIG teddy bear that you just want to pick up and cuddle up with!!!Him all worrying over what Heer would think. But I ABSOLOUTLY loved how Heer didn't make any assumptions when Prem layed his hand on hers....she knew she could trust him not ot try anything till she was ready....the poor girl, dil de ke betgayii...aur pata bhi nahin usko!!!!😆😆

Huh...not much to say about Vishaka nad Ash....I just don't like Vishaka....and I like the new Ash so much better...!This one is just so RUDE...!!!😲Hayee...I'm so happy Teji ji decided to eat....starvign herslef aint goign to help the situation!!!

*screams till face is blue* Hayee...her bracelet, his watch...mein mar jawan!!!! I swear that reminded me of that scene in K3G...durign ht song, when Kajol's neacklace gets stuck to SRK's outfit...its meant ot be...*wags fingers* These two are too cute for their own good...! Arre, Gay3, you killed the moment!!!

really well described..! Becharra Prem, not knowing what to do....jannu just give her a big bear hug..if she doesn't melt there...she is PAKKA not human!!!!!😆

CLIFFHANGER..."Tonight he was going to promise Heer something in the presence of her ill father."

Love you buckets...missed you!

And HAHA Kimize (and Rinki if she reads this) I beat you!

Shabz

Edited by shabo24 - 16 years ago

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@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#388

OK updated...but it was underlining half of it all weird, so i just underlined the whole thing....🤣🤣

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swati

@sweta2005

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 16 years ago

#389

awesomeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggggg for next asap.

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Lady_Impala

@Lady_Impala

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#390

thanks for the update.better late than never as they say na.i want prem and heer to be the way they were before their marriage.what is prem going to promise heer.please make them happy.and do update soon

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