FF - Unconditional Love (Part 20 - Page 67) - Page 3

Thanks for the PM. Do PM me again when you update. Thx😃

You've really kept the characters like they are so 👏👏👏

Preet was funny when he imitated Veera and Prem... well, still the good son😊 Like you so well wrote, Lallu did something good in his life to get a son like Prem(what a pity it is though that he's bent upon ruining Prem's happiness in the show)

Great update!😃👏😃

Originally posted by: nandini90

wow...just like how i want the real
track to be going.....soo smoooth......i totally loved it yaaar...do cont
asap...i'l be waiting for ur next updt...gosh........loved it....

luv nans

Aww thanks Nandini! I'll be continuing soon.

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

oh thx for my sake u done sofast
and its really so nice part waiting for the next thx again dear

Yep just for ur sake. You're always welcome. Next part will be up soon.

Originally posted by: tania_786

WOW... awesome beginning... keep it
up👏👏👏

n thankz for the pm 😃

do continue soon!! 😊

Thank You! Yeah I've developed a habit of sending PM's each time I update
any of my fanfics. I'll be updating again later today if its possible.

Originally posted by: jedi_girl

Thanks for the PM. Do PM me
again when you update. Thx😃

You've really kept the characters like they are so
👏👏👏

Preet was funny when he imitated Veera and
Prem... well, still the good son😊 Like you so well wrote, Lallu did
something good in his life to get a son like Prem(what a pity it is though
that he's bent upon ruining Prem's happiness in the
show)

Great
update!😃👏😃

Yeah I wanted to keep the characters the same....wherever possible. Glad
you liked it. Thanks a lot. There will some new twists in the story in the
upcoming parts so do stay tuned (lol I said that like its an actual show on
TV).

Originally posted by: -Faith-

Shafaqqqqqqq😃You write so
beautifully..👏Detailed yet crisp!!👏Like bhavna said u did keep the
original spirit of each character intact.. and portrayed it really well..The first
part was Fab👏Plus the character sketches with ur original style tadka..
Very well written!Oh we wud definitely stay tuned for all the twists and
turns😳

Thank you Zainab! That's such a huge compliment. I'm really glad you liked
it. I myself believe that I've improved so much, its unbelievable and its all
thanks to the lovely comments from great readers like you. Thanks again!

yeah its good but i am eagerly waiting when prem and heer will meet.
anyways nice writing
luv iqra

amazing start
sounds really intresting
i liked the way u introduced each charachter and how the story flowed.
preet is defiantly an intresting charachter and prems charachter shows how much he loves his parents
also cant wait 4 heers introduction
cant wait 4 the next part
👏