FF - Unconditional Love (Part 20 - Page 67) - Page 15

Shafaq first of all, thanx for the PM. You have no idea how many times I checked to see if you continued or not.

Secondly, the part was amazing! Very beautifully written!!! Thank god Daljeet wasn't successful! 😆 So sweet of Prem. I love his maturity level yaar!

Continue soon or else I'm goiong to keep checking every 10 minutes. 😆


Komzie

please continue
u have got me hooked 😃

Originally posted by: moonlightgurl

i hope u get better soon, shafaq! 😊
luved prem's maturity. ahhhh..... good for nothing dirtchachi!!!
nooooooo......don't make the family live with Daljeet. She'll do something
as usual!

awww man. 😕
why was their journey for the sagaai jora and kangan silent? 😳

gr8 prt! update soon!

Originally posted by: moonlightgurl

oh oh one more thing!
luvvvvvvv preeet! 😳 😳
ah lallu, u deserve it!

I hope so too....thanks for the wishes though 😊. Daljeet can't live
without doing anything so we can't blame her now can we 😆? Just wait
and see...a lot will be happening in the future 😉. I can't say more than
that 😆. I actually didn't want to drag it on for any longer that's why it
was silent but I understand you guys would like to see more romantic
scenes 😳 so I'll keep that in mind in the future. I love Preet too
😳.....and Lalit 😕 certainly deserved that. I'm really glad you liked it!
Thanks a lot! I'll be updating later today inshallah.

Originally posted by: cool@sify.com

hey it was mindbloing update............ prem
surely love heer....... thts why dont want 2 go far frm her.............& this
dalljeet i juzz hate her................. idiotic personality.................

yet the part was awesome

do cont soon & do pm me when u will cont as well as thnx 4 da
pm

You're welcome for the PM 😊. I'll PM you when I update next time.
Thanks for liking it soo much 😃. I believe we all hate Daljeet
🤢..which isn't surprising considering her personality 😕. Anywayz I'll
be continuing later today so you won't have to wait long this time. I
promise 😳!

Originally posted by: nandini90

wow...yu move the story perfectly
yu know??!!!....its ok for the late updt...its the weekend so i had a double
treat reading it today.....lols..waise...apna khayaal rakhna....kk....coz am
ill too...same pinch......i too fell severely ill yesterday...
abt the story...ya bak to it...its cool reading them..its like watching the
actual show on tv..i mean...first break then 2nd break with lallu scene...its
just the way it has to be......gosh.....preet sure is naughty...haha....bhayyu
ko koi badhal nahi sakthe....and premeer's little shopping...no much
romance...but then..its different....i mean...it shud be....or else it'l be all
boring....aha...dj's plan failed...i knew prem wud be doing tht....i love my
bhayyu for tht......muuaahhh...for tht........
so they r to ludhiana...hmm...lets c wats in store for premeer there.......

cant wait...lekhin rest cums first...dont wury..u'l get well sooon...coz am
praying kkk...no wurries....and as usual...i am smiling reading ur superb
updt....i enjoyed every bit of it....words r just getting lesser and lesser for
me.....wat els eto say....

luv nans

Aww you're sick as well 😭 Nandini! Hope you feel better soon 😊! I feel
horrible but I'm trying my best too rest as much as I can 😳.

Thanks for your lovely comments once again 😃. I know there wasn't
much romance in this part particularly but there will be a lot more in the
future 😳. Yep DJ's 🤢 plan failed...serves her right according to me!
Prem's a sweetheart 😳 so he had to do that! There will be a lot in store
for Premeer in Ludhiana 😉 so do keep reading!

Thanks for praying for me 😳....it means a lot too me. Btw I'm really glad
it made you smile...that's what I aim to do when I write. Thanks again for
everything 😊!

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

oh very nice and prem is superb
preet lols playing good pranks
dear r u ok now? takecare of urself
and i will be waiting for next do it when u feel good
for u 👏

I'm still very sick 😭 but I'll be okay soon! Thanks a lot btw 😊! Preet will
be playing a lot of pranks in the future 😆. I'll be updating sooner than
you expect 😆.

Originally posted by: kimmu

Aw... I hope you get better soon!!

Haha, itching powder instead of soap!! 🤣 Oh god, I love Preet. It would
be so funny if Meher and Preet teamed up, it would be bad day for
everyone.. 😆

Yay, the engagement is done!! 😃 Dirtchaci kabhi nahin sudhregi.
Prem's such a good boy, he saved his engagement. I thought it was really
sweet that he took out a the ring he treasured forever and gave it Heer.

Poor Prem can't see Heer until they get married. Next thing you know he'll
be snaking up the balcony to meet her... I'd really wanna see that. Btw, is
there an Ash in here? I wanna see how Preet would treat Ash... If only he
would do his masterminded pranks on her... It would be hilarious to see.

Continue soon! 😃

Thank you 😳 for your lovely wishes. Who know's Meher and Preet might
really team up 😆....gd idea btw....I may use it.

Yep their engaged now! One step closer to getting married 😳. Prem
certainly is a gd boy.

They will still see each other just not as much 😆. Yep there is an
Ash....how can I forget that namuna 😕. But at the moment I haven't
given the character much importance 😆. Thanks for the balcony
suggestion btw...I may use it and for the idea of Preet playing pranks on
Ash 😃.

I'll continue very soon!

Originally posted by: fijiana

gr8t update bas shaadi hojaaye.hope evil chachi doesn't
spoil the celebration.awww prem doesn't want to leave coz he wont get
any alone time with heer.
will be looking forward to the next update

Thank you! Just keep your fingers crossed that she doesn't ruin anything
for Premeer 😛. Prem might just get more alone time with Heer than he
did in Ambala 😳. I'll update very soon!

Originally posted by: sadizzle

😊 again another amazing update! great job! Glad
you are feeling better! Health comes first!! 😳

Thank you for appreciating it 😊! I'm still sick 😭 but I couldn't keep you
all waiting any longer. But health does come first.

Originally posted by: tinap_83

thanks for great update. i loved it when prem put his
ring on heer.
lalit is still the same as he says "preet is not his son"...lol...love preet's
pranks.

i agree with kimmu....we should see prem sneaking from everyone to
meet heer. i think they need to talk to each other and not be too shy....
😃

anyways, keep up the good work

Tina

Hey you're welcome 😳...but I should be thanking you. You're the one
who takes the time out too read this fanfic of mine! I have taken Kimmu's
suggestions 😉 and might just include them. Preet's still the same and so
is Lalit....I've tried to keep it all real just like they've been portrayed in the
show changing hardly anything. Premeer will talk soon...don't you worry
😆. Thanks again 😃 Tina! I'll try my best too keep it up. Do keep
reading!

Originally posted by: blushpink13

shafaq ur too gud in ff. i just luved it waiting for
the next part.awsome!
luv iqra

Thanks a lot 😊 Iqra! I'll update again very soon! You won't have too wait
long 😆!

oh u still not well u should tc of urself dear
😊 get well soon 😊

Hey Shafaq!😊

I hope you're feeling better!😊 Sorry for not reading the updates before. I was very busy and out of town😳

What can I say? All the updates were great😃 Loved the scene where Prem makes coffee and the best was how Dj's plan was foiled!😆😆 That was the best!😆

Continue soon!😉

All the updates were great Loved the scene where Prem makes coffee and the best was how Dj's plan was foiled! That was the best!

Continue soon!

wow
i was been lookin for dis..FF
it is so nice..just loved it..
i must say..dis is ma another fav..FF in this forum
keep it up 👏

Originally posted by: shafaq92

Yeah no more exams feels great. I'd never tell you too stop reading or as
you put it give you a dhaka out of my ff 😆. Aisa kabhi nahi hosakta!
You're a great friend...in fact you're more like an elder sister and one of
my favorite readers. Aur waise mujhe zyaada sar par math charhayaein
😳.....it might get to me. I don't think I deserve as much praise as you all
give me. Nevertheless I love you for it 😊!

Awww Shafaq I hope u r feeling better🤗 I just read thru ur last two updates...
Amazing Job as always...
And omg the dedication.. I m truly honoured😳
Arre u r like a choti sis for me too... A bery pyaari and sensible si choti sis.. Ab mein tou sar pay charhao gi...hehe ju no got any choice😃
Hehehe dont be sure abt the dhakka part... But I know u r a shweet hearttttt and u cud never possibly say sumthing slightly harsh to anyone...

And the parts were sooo well written! Simple and effective...
I like how u r smoothly handling the plot...
Aww and the engagement is done...
And waiting for more cute Premeer moments...
And apna khayal rakhna.. Get well soon🤗.. The update can always wait...
Loveeeee you Lots🤗

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

great part as always
i liked the way prem handeled the situation and failed daljeets plan it
shows how eager he is to get married.
preet is such a big prankester i liked the prank he played on lalit it was
really good
hope prem does not have to wait too much time to spend some moments
with heer
👏
👏
👏
👏

Thank you 😊! Prem is very eager to get married as you can see from his
actions 😳. As for Preet is just being himself....even in the show he's a
big prankster always troubling his dad which I totally love 😆. Don't
you worry....Prem and Heer will be spending a lot more time together in
the near future....more than you can imagine for sure 😳.

Originally posted by: aishu_fan

wayyyyy tooo god!!fnatabulouuus!!

Thanks so much 😛!

Originally posted by: Faima_PremHeer

plzzzzzzzzzzz continue

I'll continue very soon 😛!

Originally posted by: salma_786786

👏 bravo,
excellent, fantastic, superb, mindblowing..... u knw why im saying all
these compliments!!!.... serial Creative's need to learn something from
you.... this is exactly how a serial should move.... smoothly and without
much trouble.... Not that i dont love the original show coz its going
amazing right now but the beginning when Heer's parents were alive, it
was soo disappointing... we had to wait a whole month for Prem to
enter....
you kept every character's the way they are.... Lallu's scene was soo
funny.... itching powder 🤣 🤣 🤣 good one!!!!!

Shafaq once again this was amazing..... cant wait to read your next
update....i want a scene wid Premeer
😳😉😆......

Aww 😳 thanks so much Salma for all the lovely words you've used to
describe my fanfic. It truly means a lot too me 😊! We all love the original
show which is why we're here right 😆? Its just we want it to head in the
right direction which hopefully it will very soon with all our prayers 😊.
Yeah I clearly remember how long we had to wait for Prem's 😳 entry and
believe me that wasn't very pleasant 😆 on my part. Lalit 😕 totally
deserved the itching powder prank 😆.

There will be many scenes between Premeer 😳 coming up so you won't
be disappointed...I promise 😛!

Thanks again 😃!

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Shafaq first of all, thanx for the PM. You have no
idea how many times I checked to see if you continued or not.

Secondly, the part was amazing! Very beautifully written!!! Thank god
Daljeet wasn't successful! 😆 So sweet of Prem. I love his maturity level
yaar!

Continue soon or else I'm goiong to keep checking every 10 minutes.
😆


Komzie

Hey, you're welcome...I can actually imagine you checking over and over
again 😆. Thanks a lot 😊 for liking the part! I believe we love
everything about Prem 😳.

I'll definitely continue very soon as I don't want you checking every 10
minutes now do I 😆?

Originally posted by: kellz

please continue
u have got me hooked 😃

I'm glad I've got you hooked....that's exactly what I intended on doing
😆. I'll be continuing very soon 😃. Do keep reading 😊!

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

oh u still not well u should tc of urself dear
😊 get well soon 😊

Yep I'm still not well 😭 but I'll take care of myself and inshallah I'll be
fine very soon. Thanks for your concern though 😊!

Originally posted by: jedi_girl

Hey Shafaq!😊

I hope you're feeling better!😊Sorry for not
reading the updates before. I was very busy and out of
town😳

What can I say? All the updates were great😃
Loved the scene where Prem makes coffee and the best was how Dj's plan
was foiled!😆😆 That was the best!😆

Continue soon!😉

I am feeling much better than before but still its in the recovering stages.
Its okay I totally understand that you were busy. But I really missed you
😊! Now that you're back I'm expecting you too stay 😆. As for the
updates.....I'm glad you could catch up and thank you for your comments
😳. They really are very encouraging 😊. I'm glad you liked the parts! I'll
be continuing in a while 😉.

Originally posted by: Nazara

All the updates were great Loved the scene where Prem
makes coffee and the best was how Dj's plan was foiled! That was the
best!

Continue soon!

Thanks Nazara Di 😊! I'll continue very soon inshallah 😛.
Do keep reading 😉!

Originally posted by: nihalfan

wow
i was been lookin for dis..FF
it is so nice..just loved it..
i must say..dis is ma another fav..FF in this forum
keep it up 👏

Thanks so much 😊! I'm really glad to hear you like it so much to call it
one of your favorites. It truly is an honor 😳. Do keep reading! I'll be
looking forward to your comments.

Originally posted by: -Faith-

<FONT face=Verdana color=#990099 size=2>Awww Shafaq I hope u
r feeling better🤗I just read thru ur last two updates...Amazing Job
as always...And omg the dedication.. I m truly honoured😳Arre u r like a
choti sis for me too... A bery pyaari and sensible si choti sis.. Ab mein tou
sar pay charhao gi...hehe ju no got any choice😃Hehehe dont be sure
abt the dhakka part... But I know u r a shweet hearttttt and u cud never
possibly say sumthing slightly harsh to anyone...And the parts were sooo
well written! Simple and effective...I like howu r smoothly handling the
plot...Aww and the engagement is done...And waiting for more cute
Premeer moments...And apna khayal rakhna.. Get well soon🤗.. The
update can always wait...Loveeeee you Lotsforums.com/smileys/smiley31.gif">

I'm still sick but yes I do feel much better than before 😊. I'm really glad
you're back....I missed you so much 😳. Thanks for your lovely
comments...there will be some cute moments between Premeer in the
near future. You totally deserved the dedication 😊. In fact that is nothing
for such a lovely sis like you 😳. As for the plot well it will be developing
further so keep reading 😆. I'll definitely take care of myself. Thanks
for being so patient regarding the update 😃. Love you lots
too!

Originally posted by: sweta2005

update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

I'll update very soon 😛!