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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
luved it plz update the next part soon.
luv iqra
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
hiya 😛
first of all, hats off! 👏
i absolutely luv the storyline (heer being blind and all), prem's just a sweetheart ( 😳) and preet's too cute!

hope u continue soon! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
^ thanks moonlight 😃 i ll continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
awww its so good your so good please post the next part as soon as possible
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks faima .. i ll do it as soon as possible dont worry 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
thanks kellz ..i ll do it as soon as i get the first opportunity 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 4

Next morning at prems house:

Prem was sleeping in his room when suddenly heer in a bright red saree with her hair open comes to wake him up

Heer: prem utho ...office ke liye deri ho rahi hai....papa gussa ho jayenge ...

Prem: (turns , smiles n holds heers hands) ummm .... ruko na ... thodi der aur.. papa ko tum samjha lena ...

Prem's mom get shocked listening this ...

Gayatri: arey badmaash uth ... ye kya kar raha hai ..haath chod mera ...(she slaps on his face gently) chal uth (she shakes him)

Prem: (gets up puzzled and starts rubbing his eyes) err..maa tum ? tum kab aayi ?

gayatri: main kab aai matlab? roz to aati hu tujhe uthane ..chal jaldi kar ..neeche sab breakfast par tera intezaar kar rahe hai ...

Prem: haan abhi aaya maa ..aap jaiye ... (gayatri goes away) phew..aaj to marte marte bach gaye .... ek kaam karta hu aaj office ke baad heer ko dhundne chala jata hu ... par kahan jau ? shayad wahi jagah jahan kal mile the ...

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Afternoon:

Prem goes to the same road where the accident took place and he met heer...he waits for sometime for heer but she does nt turn up ... he gets upset and starts returning ..just then he thinks ..

Prem: heer aur meher ko aana hi chahiye ... un dono ke paas bags thi yani woh dono college ki ladkiyan thi...main us raaste par jakar dekhta hu jahan woh dono gai thi...

prem turns towards tht direction ... there was a huge gate over there but no one else .... after lking for sometime he turns again ... he lks at a board which said 'Welcome to HSI'.

prem: (to a passerby) bhaiyya ye kaunsi jagah hai?

passerby: ye? ye heer bitiya ki music class hai ...

prem: HEER😃 kaun heer aur ye HSI kya hai ..

passerby : arey ye HSI yani HEER SINGING INSTITUTE.. heer ke papa ne apni pyari beti ke naam par banaya hai ... heer yahan music classes leti hai ..

prem: accha .... ye wahi meher ki badi behan heer hai na?uske naam par kyu nahi

passerby : behan? wahi samjh lo caretaker hai ...behan jaisi hi hai ...

prem: behan jaisi? 😕 (he gets a little confused,as in why he said so but did nt care) khair ... kahan milengi woh

passrby: yahan se seedha jao ..

prem: shukriya ... (prem turns and starts walking towards heer when he listens to a melodious voice ... )

heer was singing this song with the kids from 'taare zameen par'

(dont miss the lyrics, it has story as well)

http://youtube.com/watch?v=QOm6vpHqrdc&feature=related

he listens heer singing

Dekho inhein yeh hai onss ki boodein
Patto ki goodh mein aasamaan se khude
Angdai le phir karwat badal kar
Nazuk se moti hasde phishal kar
Kho na jayee yeh

the kids sing in chorus

Taare Zameen par

heer goes on ...

Yeh toh hai sardi mein
Dhoop ki kirane

Meher sings...

Uthre jo aangan ko sunehara sa karne
Maan ke andhero ko roshan sa karde

both together ...

Thiturti hatheli ki rangat badal de
Kho na jayee yeh

kids in chorus

Taare Zameen par

heer , meher n kids go on ...

Jaise aankhon ki debiyan mein neediyan
Aur neediyan mein meetha sa sapna

prem runs and reaches the lawn where the kids were singing and meher and heer were sitting opposite to them ... meanwhile heer goes on ....

Aur sapne mein mil jaye faristha sa koi
Jaise rango bhari peechkari
Jaise Thitliyan phoolo ki pyari
Jaise bina matlab ka pyaara rista ho koi

Yeh to asha ki lehra hai
Yeh to umeed ki seher hai
Khushiyon ki nehar hai
Kho na jaye yeh

kids in chorus

Taare Zameen par

prem tries to have a lk at heer but she was turned and there was no other way ... heer n meher goes on ...

Dekho raaton ke sene pe yeh to
Jhil mil kisi lao se uge hain
Yeh to andiyan ke khushbo hai bhago se beh chale
Jaise kaanch mein chudi ke tukde
Jaise khile khile phoolon ke mukhde
Jaise bansi koi bajaye pedo ke taale

Yeh to jhoke hai pawan ke
Hai yeh gungroo jeevan ke
Yeh to sur hai chaman ke
Kho na jayeee

kids in chorus

Taare Zameen par

prem suddenly lks at a corner from where he can go n see heer ... he runs towards there whereas meher goes on ...

Mohale ki ronak galiyan hai jaise
Khilne ki zid per kaliyan hai jaise
Muthi mein masam ki jaise hawaein
Yeh hai buzurgo ke dil ki duyaaein
Kho na jayeee

kids in chorus

Taare Zameen par
Taare Zameen par

heer: ok bacchon sab saathme ..
everyone starts in chorus....heer plays the piano .. meher smiles n claps ...

Kabhi baatein jaise dadi naani
Kabhi chale jaise num num pani
Kabhi ban jaye bhole saawalo ki jhadi
Sanate mein hasi ke jaise
Sune hoton pe khushi ke jaise
Yeh to noor hai barse gar pe kismat ho padi

prem finally reaches there and lks opposite the kids ... he cud see 2 young girls sitting there .. one was meher and other other was sitting playing piano but her face was covered with hair ... only the eyes cud be seen ... he lks at the eyes and remembers the eyes he saw the day b4 .... he gets a smile n gets to his senses with the singing voice

Jaise jhil mein lehar aye chanda
jaise bheed mein apne ka kandha
jaise manmauji nadiya
jhaag udaye kuch kahe
jaise baithe baithe meethi si jhapki
jaise pyar ki dheemi si thapki
jaise kaanon mein sargam
hardam bajti hi rahe
jaise barkha udati hai bundiya…

prem goes on smiling lking at heer n kids keeping his hands on his cheeks ...

kho na jaaayeeee yehhhh
Kho na jaayee yehh
kho na jaayee yehh
kho na jaayee yehhhh..

meher: very good bacchon .... 👏chalo heer didi se haath milao ...

meher takes each n every child to heer .... while lking at this prem cudnt stop smiling ....

a kid: heer didi hamari chocolate ..

heer : arey aapki chocolate ..kahan gai aapki chocolate ... meher zaraa bacchon ki chocolate to laana ...

meher offers the kids chocolates ...

meher: chalo baccho ghar jao ab aapke ghar jane ka waqt aa gaya hai ... heer didi ko bye karo ..

kids wave bye n go away ..prem wanted to meet heer and was waiting for a chance

meher : chalo didi ab ham bhi jaye ...

prem gets a call and he moves away ..

heer : haan ..par bacche gaye kya ?

meher: haan didi sabhi bacche chale gaye ... aaiye .... (takes her hand n gets up)

prem did nt listen to what they said n did ...

prem: (to himself) oh ...aaj office me kaam hai ..koi baat nahi ..kal phir aaunga tumse milne ...

heer n meher leaves too ....

days passed and prem used to come to see heer everyday but he never imagine nor cud he make out tht heer was blind .. he also did nt get a chance to meet her....but the coming day was something different.... he slowly realized tht he cud nt live even one day without seeing heer and he has already fallen in love with her... he decided tht whatever happens he will definitely meet her and tell her tht he loves her a lot.

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Ok , i hope the story did progressed a little.... nw the next part is going to take a very good turn so keep reading and pls do comment if u read it and if u like it.. ur comments help me continue. thanks😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
its mindblowing as u said next part has a grat turn can't wait
plsssssssssssssssssss for me update it soon
i hope u will
and this is for u 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

its mindblowing as u said next part has a grat turn can't wait
plsssssssssssssssssss for me update it soon
i hope u will
and this is for u 👏



hey tanyaaa thanks a lotttt ..... u made my day 😃thanks once again ... i ll update soon hun 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks nice update.love the song.can't wait to read the next update so jaldi karna

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