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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
this is really interesting, looks like its gona b a emotional drama here...

eager to read more

this very good ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: salma_786786

this is really interesting, looks like its gona b a emotional drama here...

eager to read more

this very good ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘



thanks a lot salma!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2

Afternoon:

Meher: heer didi chalo tayyar ho jaate hai.. music classes jana hai na .... aaj aap kaunsa dress pehnegi? aapko kaunsa color pasand hai ?

Heer: arey pagli, main kaise batau mujhe kaunsa colour pasand hai ... in aankho kabhi koi rang thode hi dekha hai ...

Meher gets upset listening this .... she gets tears in her eyes when...

Heer: arey kahan kho gai ... dress nikala ki nahi mere liye ...

Meher: (come bks to her senses and wipes her tears) arey to kya hua .... ek kaam karte hai ..aap in dress me se kisi bhi dress par haath rakhiye main usi suit se aapko tayyar karungi ...

Heer: arey waah , ye to tune bohat hi acchi idea batai hai .... accha bata kahan hai dresses .....

Meher takes heer near the dresses .. heer points out a pink and yellow suit and chudidaar with light silver work on it.Meher dresses her properly and brings her to the main room.

Heer : maa-papa ham classes ke liye jaan rahe hai ....

they both turn.

teji: nazar na lage , kitni soni lag rahi hai heer ... (she puts kajal on heers neck) accha meher sun zaraa ye letter jaate jaate post kardena ...aur heer tu ise yaad dila dena warna ye to bhool jayegi

Meher: kya maa ..main kardungi

later they both leave

teji: meri beti itni khoobsurat hai ... phir kyu koi use sweekar nahi karta ... aap dekhiye ye painting jo usne banai hai (she gets a grt painting as if made by an artist) aisi painting koi aankhon wala insan bhi nahi banaa sakta phir kyu meri hi beti ko ye sab sehan karna padta hai ..

balraj: sabr rakho teji sabr rakho ...bhagwan sab theek karega ...ye duniya ye samaaj ko ham nahi badal sakte ... ye duniya heer ke gun nahi dekhegi aur naahi use samjhegi .... hamari beti ko bhagwan par poora bharosa hai to hamein uske bharose par bharosa karna chahiye .....

teji again starts crying n balraj tries to console her ...

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On the way:

Heer and Meher were walking for the classes when Meher saw a post box on the opposite road...

Meher: heer didi waha saamne postbox hai main yeh letter post kar deti hu warna baadme bhool jaungi ..

Heer: haan bilkul bilkul karde ...

Meher: didi , aap yaha se hilna nahi .. yahi khadi rehna ....thik hai na

Heer: thik hai babaa .... tu meri fikar na kar .... jaldi jaa ... classes me bacche aa gaye honge....

Meher goes on the opposite road to post the letter ... whereas over here near Heer someone wanted a place to park the car .... the person keeps horning but heer ds nt move .... he comes out of the car ....

person: arey memsab kab se horn bajaa raha hu sunai nahi de raha kya? zaraa hatiye yahaa se mujhe car park karni hai ...

heer: jee sorry bhai sahab ... (she moves randomly anywhere)

the person parks the car n goes away .... and heer is almost in middle of the road .... vehicles r moving here n there n making noise ....heer feels a little uncomfortable and just whispers 'meher meher meher....meher tu aa gai kya'. Meanwhile Meher is done with posting n she turns and what she lks is danger! A truck is coming just towards heer ..... she starts running n shouting ....

Meher: heer didi ..heer didi .... heer didi ...(heer starts moving her eyes here n there)

meher is still half way away n the truck is nearest to heer when someone comes all of a sudden and moves heer away frm there, yes obviously it was none other than prem! heer was below n prem was above her .... prem kept watching heer's innocent eyes and heer cud feel prems breath .... prem felt as if heer is badly hurt ...suddenly meher came running....

Meher: heer didi..heer didi .. aap thik to hai na? (she grabs her hand n helps her get up, prem moves n gets up as well)

Prem: sorry aapko meri wajah se lag to nahi gaya na ....

Heer: (she had her eyes lowered) nahi nahi kaisi baat kar rahe hai aap ... aapne to hamari jaan bachai hai ...

Meher: haan jaan bachai hai Mr......

Prem: Prem ... mera naam prem hai ... aur aapka ....

Meher: main Meher hu .. heer didi ki choti behan ...

Prem: aap dono se milkar badi khushi hui ....aap dono kahin jaa rahe hai? main chod du ?

Heer: nahi nahi ... hamein bas yahi jana hai ... waise bhi aapne hamare liye bohat kuch kiya hai .... thanks a lot ....ab ham chalte hai hamein deri ho rahi hai ... chalo meher ....

they both leave for classes and prem kept on lking heer from behind until they disappeared.

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Ok so i think u all will like this part since prem n heer met ... please do leave comments .. thanks.
Edited by talkativetaurus - 17 years ago
cutegirln thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
interesting Taurus.
I like the concept of ur fanfic ๐Ÿ˜›
2nd part is great ...our sweet heer n prem met. ๐Ÿ˜›
looking forward to read the next part
little request...plzzzz post it SOON ๐Ÿ˜† .
and yeah Well Done ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
Awesome part ๐Ÿ‘
I love your FF, it seems so different ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Aww, Heer and Prem meet ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Prem's in love ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜†
Can't wait for you to continue, you are an awesome writer ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutegirln

interesting Taurus.
I like the concept of ur fanfic ๐Ÿ˜›
2nd part is great ...our sweet heer n prem met. ๐Ÿ˜›
looking forward to read the next part
little request...plzzzz post it SOON ๐Ÿ˜† .
and yeah Well Done ๐Ÿ‘



oh omg! i never saw this reply ..... i missed it ...so sorry ..... well nw since i have got a few readers i will start writing it ..thanks a lot for the comments!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: mumpet

Awesome part ๐Ÿ‘
I love your FF, it seems so different ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Aww, Heer and Prem meet ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Prem's in love ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜†
Can't wait for you to continue, you are an awesome writer ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘



hey thanks a bunchhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
i luved it. n waiting for the next part
luv iqra
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
Part 3

As Heer and Meher disappeared Prem started leaning a little to see if he cud see them more when suddenly someone called him from behind tapping his back

Preet: Prem, kya hai waha ...kise dhund rahaa hai ...

Prem: err... kuch nahi ....tu yahan?

Preet: haa yahi se guzar raha tha .. tu mil gaya

Prem:kool... chal lets go to the office ..

Both of them sit in the car ..prem sits on the driving sit and Preet sits besides him .... and here they go ...Prem is driving when suddenly he gets flashes of heer and hw he saved her and they both were on each other ..... the flashes brought smile to his face when suddenly ....

Preet: Preemmmmmmmmmmmm ... kya kar raha hai .... brake maar ... (thank god prem did it on time!) uff kya hua tujhe ..tera dhyaan kahan hai ... r u ok ?

Prem: oh yh main thik hu ... i m sorry .....

Preet: sach na ..nahi to main driving kar leta hu ....

Prem: haa yaar ... i m fine .... ab baatein mat kar ..mujhe chalane de warna dad hamein maar dalenge ...

At the office:

Lalit : (almost angry) Prem kahan the tum donon ..maine kahan hai na ab tumhare mauj masti ke din gaye ... ab kaam me serious ho jao .... jald tumhari shadi bhi ho jayegi ...

Prem: papa woh ham bike .... (Preet interrupts)

Preet: (coughs) woh uncle meri behan ki tabiyat thik nahi hai na to prem ki bike lekar ham medicines lene gaye the...

Lalit : r u sure preet ? lekin preet tumhari to koi behna nahi hai

Prem : (lks at preet with anger) haan papa right ... yahi baat hai ..woh preet ki cousin aayi hai na papaa...

Lalit : ok thik hai apne cabin me jao prem ... aur preet tum mere saath aao mujhe tumhe kuch kaam samjhana hai...

prem goes to his cabin .... sits and lks at the heap of files over there .... takes one and opens it .... as he glances thru the pages once again he gets flashes of heer ..... he just blinks his eyes with wonder and smiles .... shakes his faces then starts reading the file again ... after a few minutes he tries to concentrate and again he gets those flashes ... his mind cudnt remove a girls innocent face ..who was so simple yet sweet and beautiful ...he finally gets up from his seat ..went to the washroom and put water on the face ....

Prem: its ok prem its ok ..... iska kuch na kuch to karna hi padega ... kal use phirse milna padega ..use janna padega ....par kaise ?? kaise bhi .. use dhoondna padega ...warna iska ye chehra mera peecha nahi chodega aur mujhe kuch kaam karne nahi dega ....kya naam bataya tha uski behan ne uska ... umm ... haan Heer!

Preet: kiska chehra tera peecha nahi chodegi ? aur yeh Heer kaun hai? ๐Ÿ˜›

Prem: (turns...totally baffled) err.. koi nahi ....

Preet: koi to hai ... kiske sapne dekh raha hai mere dost?

Prem: arey kahan na koi nahi ...

Preet: thik hai thik hai .. aaj nahi to kal bataa dena ... kabhi na kabhi to pataa chalega hi ki mere dost ka dil kis ladki ne churaya hai ๐Ÿ˜‰

On the way to class:

Meher: Heer didi aap ko kahin chot to nahi aai na? dikhayi zaraa..

Heer: arey nahi main bilkul thik hu ... woh jo the mujhe unki fikar ho rahi hai ..tune unhe kuch poocha bhi nahi ki woh thik hai na ... tune dekha to hoga na ..kahin unhe chot to nahi aai ?

Meher: arey waah! main yaha aapki fikar kar rahi hu aur aapko woh prem ki fikar hai ,,, woh to bilkul thik the .... unka chehra dekhne layak tha ...

Heer: kaisa tha unka chehra ? ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Meher: oye hoye hoye .... waah waah .. chehre pe baat aa gayi ... (she comes near to heers ears) waise sach kahu?

Heer :(whispers) haan bolna ..

Meher : bohat handsome tha ... aur itna hi nahi jab aapke upar tha tab poori tarah aapke chehre se ghayal ho gaya tha ...

Heer : kya ? use chehre par chot aai thi ?

Meher : arey nahi meri bholi didi ..mera matlab woh aapke chehre par fida ho gaya tha๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Heer : hehehe๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜† chup kar ..... mujhpar kaise ghayal ho sakta hai woh ...

Meher : kyu nahi ...aap koi pari se kam ho kya

Heer: bas bas ..ab jaldi chal classes chalte hai ..waise bhi der ho gai hai ...

they finally reach the classes after few minutes

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I hope the part was good enough . Very soon PH will have their further meetings. Please leave comments if u read it and like it.
Thanks.


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Posted: 17 years ago
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ya very nice update hope to see more of ph soon
plsssssssss do continue it soon

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