PH OS|| Coffee Of Love|| New Year Special

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Hello guyz, i am back again with my ramblings. Well the new year has started and i have thought of writing a new os on Premeer. I know many of the forum members are busy in their respective lives and so they can't get enough time to visit the forum. So the chances of my writing getting response is very less. Then also i thought to give it a try.

If you guyz want the synopsis and the story tomorrow itself then please comment. If i get a good response then i will surely post tomorrow and if i didn't then...




then also i will post😃. You know me right? Even if i don't get a single response i have posted my earlier works so why not now? And consider this as a humble request from my side😊



Thank You,

Love, Sunayana

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Pls update soon eagerly waiting
Pls update daily it's a request
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Originally posted by: ananyaguptha

Pls update soon eagerly waiting
Pls update daily it's a request



Thanks for commenting. i will update the synopsis today in the afternoon and the main story in the evening or may be night.

And deas it is an one shot so there is no question of updating daily. You will get the story today itself😊
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Hey guyz i am back with the synopsis of my story "Coffee Of Love-A Sip With A Stranger". The main story will be posted in the evening or in the night. Hope to get a good response...enjoy reading.

COFFEE OF LOVE

PH OS

Meet HEER Maan, a talented, beautiful, self-employed girl of today's generation. She had everything that one could wish for...a loving family, a good job and her friends who mean the world to her. She is now 26 and her family is worried for her future like most of other girl's families and thus they had decided to get her married. If this is not enough, her mother had already found a match for her. Her mother told her to meet this guy who was her father's best friend's son.

And now she was waiting for her cousin and best friend Ashlesha to discuss about this matter. I mean she was happy and contended with her life. Why should she got married to anyone?

But off course her family won't understand so she asked her cousin to come and meet her and help her to get out of this mess.


So what do you think what will happen? What connection does have the coffee and the marriage? You will get the answers tonight. Do read and share your opinions. And if you liked it don't forget to hit the like button.


Thank You,

Love,

Sunayana

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sunayana! Wishing you a very happy new year filled with love and happiness.🤗
Sorry I've been gayab from IF due to work and personal commitments.

Loved the prologue, story sounds good and really promising... Seems that Heer is going to meet Prem soon hehe...😳 and that too on coffee date? lol 😆

Lovely start and plz continue soon.
Hugs🤗
Maria
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Originally posted by: DreamyButterfly

Sunayana! Wishing you a very happy new year filled with love and happiness.🤗

Sorry I've been gayab from IF due to work and personal commitments.

Loved the prologue, story sounds good and really promising... Seems that Heer is going to meet Prem soon hehe...😳 and that too on coffee date? lol 😆

Lovely start and plz continue soon.
Hugs🤗
Maria



Hey maria thanks for commenting😊 first of all a very happy new year🤗
It's ok dear, everyone has their work and family problems so no need to be sorry.

Thanks for liking it. I will post soon...may be tonight. Actually i had guests in my house so couldn't get time to post.

Tc bye❤️
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[Banner by me (Sunzz.Harshiti)]


First of all a very HAPPY NEW YEAR to all Deshians. As Promised I am back with my OS on Preeer. I know I am a bit late for my new year os but what to do. Lately I have been very busy so couldn't post earlier. So now let's start the story...enjoy.


COFFEE OF LOVE

(A sip with a stranger)

"Hello, hello Ash, where are you girl? I have been waiting for you so long and here there's no sign of yours", Heer literally screamed on the phone.

"Chill chill meri ma. I am on my way. Now the traffic isn't my fault", Ashlesha sounded innocent and tried to convince Heer, her cousin and best friend.

"Yeah yeah, I know your excuses" Heer said in a known voice.

"Arree but... Ashlesha was immediately cut off by Heer. "If you don't come within 10 minutes then you can't even imagine girl what I am gonna do with you", Heer threatened her.

"Ok ok I am coming sweety. Just relax and have your favourite coffee. Now bye and let me drive".

Even before Heer could reply anything, she cut the call.

"This girl...", Heer greeted her teath. "Fine, let's just order", thought Heer and started looking for the waiter.

"Excuse me", she called out for a waiter to give her orders.

"Yes ma'am, what would you like to order?" asked the waiter professionally.

"One Cappuccino please", she smiled and waited for her order to come.

{A Cappuccino is an espresso-based coffee drink that originated in Italy, and is traditionally prepared with double espresso and steamed milk foam. Variations of the drink involve the use of cream instead of milk, and flavoring with cinnamon chocolate powder}.

{Source: goolge}

Heer's drink is the earlier one...steamed milk foam with chocolate powder.

"Ummm...yummy. No need to hurry Ash...come when you want. Main to apni coffee enjoy karungi", thought Heer licking her upper lips.

"Excuse me?" a voice has been heard by Heer.

She turned and looked a really handsome guy with slight brown eyes and messy hair falling on his forehead was standing there with a killer smile on his face.

If it was any other time she wouldn't have given him any reply but now the time is different. She was enjoying her favourite coffee all by herself. Yes, Heer Maan likes to enjoy her coffee all by herself. She thinks no company is needed when you have a refreshing coffee and a beautiful view in front of your eyes to cheer you up. However as she was in a good mood so she just replied in short "Yes"with a smile to show him that she did heard him.

"Mind if I join?" She heard him asking.

First she didn't understand but then she saw him signaling to the seat opposite to her. She didn't mind it but in actual she did mind. Actually she didn't want any stranger at this time. But seeing that the Caf was full and only her table was empty, she agreed.

"Ok sit but please be quiet", Heer warned him beforehand.

"Off course", he smiled and sit opposite to her.

Heer had completed her coffee and was looking at her watch wondering what was taking Ash so long. It has already been half an hour. And the man opposite to her was constantly looking at her. He was having his strong black coffee staring at her though not saying anything.

From her big almond shaped eyes full of heavy eyelashes, which he can definitely say, were natural to her silky smooth hair, to her small cute nose, to her slender figure made her the most beautiful girl he had even seen. The blue top on her fair skin made her more beautiful. He had the hardest time controlling himself when she was licking her lips after sipping the coffee. The way she was closing her eyes enjoying the coffee, the expression on her face, he felt liking giving trail of kisses on every part of her beautiful face. He had seen many beautiful girls before but she was different. This feeling which his heart was feeling was different.

He smiled and blushed at his own thoughts and shook his head. He had become mad.

Heer felt a constant gaze upon her. She looked up from her wrist and saw him looking at her with his same killer smile.

"What?" she asked the man with a raised eyebrow.

"Nothing, I am just having my coffee", he replied with a mischievous smile sipping his coffee.

"Really? Then why I am feeling that you are doing everything but sipping your coffee?" she replied irritatingly. Sarcasm was evident in her voice.

"Aap itne gusse mein kyun hain? Thodi der pehle to mood bohut achcha tha", he asked innocently.

"Yes actually m..." Heer stopped abruptly. What was she doing? He was a pure stranger to her and she was ready to share her problems with him. She had become a gone case for sure.

"It's none of your business. Chup chap apni coffee pijiye and leave me alone", Heer replied sternly.

"Okk" he replied acting so sad. He pretended to have the coffee but actually he was trying hard to delay the time as much as possible as if he had all the time in the world to sit there and stare at her.

"Shit yaar, ye ladki kab aayegi?" thought Heer and decided to have another Cappuccino. She was about to hold the cup as soon as the waiter delivered her order but stopped by his voice.

"You know you shouldn't have such milky and creamy coffee. It's not good for health".

She widened her eyes at him. "How dare you? It is my favourite and you are asking me not to have it", she snapped at him.

"Kya? I was just saying what is right", he replied.

"And care to explain what is right?" she raised her eyebrow.

"That you shouldn't drink such a coffee. You know if you want to stay fit then you should drink this, pointing to his coffee, "black coffee with no sugar and no milk", he advised.

"Main kuch bhi piyu aapko kya?" asked Heer annoyed.

"How should I not bother? You know I am a responsible citizen of this country and it is my duty to help others", he replied all being proud on himself.

"But I don't need your help mister".

"But i..." he was immediately interrupted by her hand which she had shown him indicating him to stop.

"Listen mister let me tell you something. If you want to sit here then please be quiet and let me enjoy my milky sugary coffee and if you don't then feel free to leave the table. I will be more than glad she said sarcastically.

"But I won't be glad if something happens to you. Do you know this black coffee is so much healthier than this milky and creamy coffee of yours?" he continued.

Ohh god kahan phas gayi", murmured Heer and looked at him. She totally ignored him and was about to have a sip from her coffee when again that man started his lecture.

"Stop stop!!! I told you not to drink this but seem you don't believe me. Ok, let me explain to you then only you would understand", he said and shifted a bit closer to her. But her attention was not in that. She widened her eyes when he said "let me explain to you". "Does he really going to explain all this? Oh God please send Ash as soon as possible", she murmured under her breath.

"Listen it has been shown that drinking black coffee really improves your liver. It lessens the probability of cancer. Coffee has caffeine in it. This caffeine travels into your brain and makes you smarter, and not to forget black coffee is very useful if you want to lose weight", he explained everything to her while showing the researches of various people from the internet.

Now Heer had had enough. She got up from her seat and smiled at him...a fake smile. "Ok mister I think I should leave now. If you want you can sit here and give your explanations to others. There are so many people around you".

Saying this she paid the bill of her coffee and was about to exit from the caf but her luck was not in her favour that day. As soon as she stepped out of the caf rain started to pour.

"What the hell? Iss mausam mein barish!!! Great! Now I can't even get out of this Cafe". She sighed and again came back to her sit where she noticed the guy grinning shamelessly. She ignored him and sat down. Some minutes passed by utter silence and Heer couldn't thank god more for this.

"Well I can tell from your frustration that you aren't enjoying my company. Are you?" he asked suddenly catching Heer off guard.

"No, no...nothing like that. I was just...you know...I was just waiting for my cousin to discuss about an important matter and she is so late, so I was just a little worried", she tried to smile.

"Oh then it's ok. Btw you know most people find me boring as according to them I always give free advice to them, he laughed. "But since you are already tensed, I will not bore you anymore now. I can understand when you wait for someone for discussing some important matter and they don't appear on time, instead keep giving excuses", he said genuinely.

"Exactly! Heer shook her head in an affirmative manner. "Btw sorry, I was a bit rude earlier", Heer apologized.

"When?" asked the man surprisingly.

"Umm...when first time you were saying something and I told you to keep quiet", she bit her lower lip and lowered her head. "I really didn't mean to sound so rude".

"And I also told you it was ok. Didn't I?" the man raised an eyebrow at her and she smiled. "He is not as bad as I thought at first", thought Heer.

"Btw miss...", he was immediately cut off by Heer. "Heer...Heer Maan", she answered.

He smiled. "Btw Miss Heer, I can leave if you want. I mean I am done with my coffee so I can wait on the counter", he proposed.

"No no...no need. You can sit here", she denied.

"If you want you can order one more coffee for yourself. Promise I won't say anything", he assured her.

She looked at him and laughed. This is the first time that he was watching her laughing. "She looks beautiful", thought he.

"It's ok. Even if you say something, I am going to order another one for myself", she replied giggling.

"Btw aap kiska intezar kar rahe hain?" she asked him.

He was about to answer her when his phone rang. He excused himself and went to attend the call. While returning back suddenly a waiter bumped onto him and the cup which he was holding, turned and the coffee inside it poured all over the guy.

"I am really sorry sir, I didn't do it intentionally", the waiter apologized being afraid.

"It's alright. You don't have to apologize", he replied assuring.

"Thank you sir. Sir the washroom is this way. You can...", he was cut off by the guy. "I will clean it. Don't worry. You can go".

Heer watched all this and smiled. "He is so good at heart", thought she.

"I guess you should clean it quickly before the stain got unwashable", Heer proposed to him after he came back to the table.

"Yeah", he said and left to washroom.

"So where was I?" asked he coming back from the washroom.

"You were saying that you had been waiting for...?" Heer reminded him.

"Yes, My best friend. Apparently his mother has chosen a match for him and he doesn't not want to get married. So he asked my help and here I am waiting for him", replied he.

Heer's eyes widened at this. This was exactly like her problem. Should she ask more? It wouldn't harm anyone if she asked him his solution. She thought for a bit and decided to try.

"So...did you think how would you help you?" asked Heer very carefully.

"Not really. First I will listen to his problem. I mean I know that he doesn't want to get married but I have to make sure that he has a valid reason", he replied.

"Yeah", she smiled. How could she bring up the topic? She cleared her throat. "You know my friend has the similar problem", she said carefully not giving him any hint that it was actually her problem.

"Really? So what did she do?" asked he being surprised.

"Actually she asked my help but I am not finding anything", replied Heer. So I was thinking if you could help me...off course if you don't have any problem", she asked nervously.

"Off course not. So tell me why doesn't she want to get married? Does she have any boyfriend?"

"Not at all. The thing is she thinks she doesn't need to. I mean she had a beautiful family, her friends and a good job. Then why should she have to get married?"

"Only this? Then I would say she should tell her family".

"They won't understand", Heer replied sadly.

"Off course they won't", said the guy and Heer looked at him scrunching her eyebrows.

"Matlab?"Heer couldn't help asking.

"Matlab I, myself, is not understanding anything. This is not a reason not to get married. Is there anything that you are hiding?" he asked.

"Actually she thinks all boys, in today's generation, are flirty, like playboy types. She wants a guy who would understand her completely, who would love her and respect her opinions, who would give her full independence and would support her when if she would need him, who wouldn't be so possessive and jealous if she would talk to any other guy", Heer replied drowning in her own thoughts.

"And she thinks such boys doesn't exist in today's generation, right?" he asked as if understating her and Heer nodded slowly.

"What do you think of me?" he asked out of nowhere.

"What?" she asked being surprised.

"I am asking what do you think of me. Do you think me as a flirty, playboy types?"

Heer couldn't answer. Well she did think of him something if not flirty. Seeing her not responding anything he asked again, "So you did?

This time Heer smiled. "Frankly speaking I did think of you as annoying, bothersome, irritating and a little flirty", she replied biting her lower lip.

"And now?" he asked.

"Now I have realized that I was wrong. You are not as I thought of you. Infact you are really nice and helpful", she smiled at him...a real, genuine smile.

"See that is the solution. You have to make her realize this", he replied smilingly. "Btw why I am thinking that this is more of yours problem than that of your friend's?"

"What...what are you saying?" Heer tried to deny.

"I am saying that I think this is entirely your problem. But it is absolutely alright if you don't want to share. I can completely understand".

Heer sighed and closed her eyes. Should she admit? She opened her eyes and looked at him from the corner of her eyes. He was busy with his phone...may be messaging to his friend. He looks nice, he is good at heart not like most of the guys who pretended to be good in front of girls. He is not at all flirty, so helpful to others. He respects people. She decided to tell him.

"Yes, you are right. I am the girl", she almost whispered.

"What?" he looked up at her and asked.

"What you are thinking is right. I am the girl whom I was talking about", she pouted.

He smiled. "So finally you decided to open up".

She looked at him and sighed.

"Listen, just give a chance. I am sure not all boys are like what you are thinking. I am sure there are some good guys who would match your expectations", he replied with sincerity.

"Yeah, I guess", she replied."Btw, are you an adviser?" she asked suddenly.

"Huhh?" he asked being confused.

"Wo actually you were giving advice to what coffee we should drink, then you are waiting here for your friend to give him some advise on his problem and most of all you helped me, a complete stranger. So I was thinking this might be your profession", she asked with a teasing smile.

He burst into laughter. "No not at all. I have hotel business. This advice thing, you can say, is a part time job. Hey, you know what you should get married in our hotel. I can give you discount since we know each other", he replied with humour.

Heer couldn't help but laugh. He was such a funny guy. Heer didn't notice him earlier. He was not only good looking in a general way, but hot, attractive, reliable, funny, had the most charming smile and a perfect body that any girl could drool over.

"I think I should leave now", he said suddenly.

"So soon?" thought Heer Disappointment was clearly evident on Heer's face. She really liked talking to him. It was so fun and...relaxing. But she couldn't say anything. What would he think of herself?

She plastered a smiled on her face and replied "Ok".

"Btw here's my card. If you change your mind and decide to get married then you can try our hotel. I can assure you the best services", he gave his card and bid good bye.

Heer looked at his direction with a smile and an unknown feeling in her heart.

END of PART-1

So I am ending the part here. Hope you find it worth reading. The second part will be posted soon. Till then take care, good bye.

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Awesome update enjoyed reading thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Sunzz.Harshiti

<p align="center"><font size="2" color="#3333cc"></font></p><p align="center"><font size="2" color="#cc0000">[Banner by me (Sunzz.Harshiti)]</font></p><p align="center">
</p><p align="center"><font size="2" color="#3333cc">First of all a very HAPPY NEW YEAR to all
Deshians. As Promised I am back with my OS on Preeer. I know I am a bit late
for my new year os but what to do. Lately I have been very busy so couldn't
post earlier. So now let's start the story...enjoy.</font>
</p><p align="center">
</p>
<p align="center"><font size="2" color="#cc3300">COFFEE OF LOVE</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2"><font color="#cc3300">(A sip with a stranger)</font></b></font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Hello, hello Ash, where are you girl? I have been waiting for you so
long and here there's no sign of yours",
Heer literally screamed on the
phone.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Chill chill meri ma. I am on my way. Now the traffic isn't my fault",Ashlesha sounded innocent and tried to convince Heer, her cousin and best
friend.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Yeah yeah, I know your excuses"Heer said in a known voice.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Arree but... Ashlesha was immediately cut off by Heer. "If you don't come within 10 minutes then
you can't even imagine girl what I am gonna do with you",
Heer threatened
her.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Ok ok I am coming sweety. Just relax and have your favourite coffee.
Now bye and let me drive".</font>
</p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">Even before Heer
could reply anything, she cut the call.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"This girl...", Heer greeted her teath. "Fine, let's just order", thought Heer and started looking for the
waiter.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Excuse me", she called out for a waiter to give her orders.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Yes ma'am, what would you like to order?"asked the waiter
professionally.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"One Cappuccino please", she smiled and waited for her order to
come.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2" color="#ff0000">{A Cappuccino is an espresso-based coffee
drink that originated in Italy, and is traditionally prepared with double
espresso and steamed milk foam. Variations of the drink involve the use of
cream instead of milk, and flavoring with cinnamon chocolate powder}.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2" color="#ff0000">{Source: goolge}</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">Heer's drink is the
earlier one...steamed milk foam with chocolate powder.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Ummm...yummy. No need to hurry Ash...come when you want. Main to apni
coffee enjoy karungi",
thought Heer licking her upper lips.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Excuse me?"a voice has been heard by Heer.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">She turned and looked
a really handsome guy with slight brown eyes and messy hair falling on his
forehead was standing there with a killer smile on his face.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">If it was any other
time she wouldn't have given him any reply but now the time is different. She
was enjoying her favourite coffee all by herself. Yes, Heer Maan likes to enjoy
her coffee all by herself. She thinks no company is needed when you have a
refreshing coffee and a beautiful view in front of your eyes to cheer you up.
However as she was in a good mood so she just replied in short "Yes"with a smile to show him that she
did heard him.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Mind if I join?"She heard him asking.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">First she didn't
understand but then she saw him signaling to the seat opposite to her. She
didn't mind it but in actual she did mind. Actually she didn't want any
stranger at this time. But seeing that the Caf was full and only her table was
empty, she agreed.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Ok sit but please be quiet", Heer warned him beforehand.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Off course", he smiled and sit opposite to her.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">Heer had completed
her coffee and was looking at her watch wondering what was taking Ash so long.
It has already been half an hour. And the man opposite to her was constantly
looking at her. He was having his strong black coffee staring at her though not
saying anything.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2"></font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">From her big almond
shaped eyes full of heavy eyelashes, which he can definitely say, were natural
to her silky smooth hair, to her small cute nose, to her slender figure made
her the most beautiful girl he had even seen. The blue top on her fair skin
made her more beautiful. He had the hardest time controlling himself when she
was licking her lips after sipping the coffee. The way she was closing her eyes
enjoying the coffee, the expression on her face, he felt liking giving trail of
kisses on every part of her beautiful face. He had seen many beautiful girls
before but she was different. This feeling which his heart was feeling was
different.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2"></font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">He smiled and blushed
at his own thoughts and shook his head. He had become mad. </font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">Heer felt a constant
gaze upon her. She looked up from her wrist and saw him looking at her with his
same killer smile.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"What?"she asked the man with a raised eyebrow.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Nothing, I am just having my coffee", he replied with a
mischievous smile sipping his coffee.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Really? Then why I am feeling that you are doing everything but
sipping your coffee?"
she replied irritatingly. Sarcasm was evident in her
voice.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Aap itne gusse mein kyun hain? Thodi der pehle to mood bohut achcha
tha",
he asked innocently.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Yes actually m..."Heer stopped abruptly. What was she doing? He was
a pure stranger to her and she was ready to share her problems with him. She
had become a gone case for sure.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"It's none of your business. Chup chap apni coffee pijiye and leave me
alone",
Heer replied sternly.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Okk"he replied acting so sad. He pretended to have the coffee but
actually he was trying hard to delay the time as much as possible as if he had
all the time in the world to sit there and stare at her.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Shit yaar, ye ladki kab aayegi?"thought Heer and decided to have
another Cappuccino. She was about to hold the cup as soon as the waiter
delivered her order but stopped by his voice.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2"></font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"You know you shouldn't have such milky and creamy coffee. It's not
good for health".</font>
</p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">She widened her eyes
at him. "How dare you? It is my favourite
and you are asking me not to have it",
she snapped at him.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Kya? I was just saying what is right", he replied.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"And care to explain what is right?"she raised her eyebrow.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"That you shouldn't drink such a coffee. You know if you want to stay
fit then you should drink this,
pointing to his coffee, "black coffee with no sugar and no milk",
he advised.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Main kuch bhi piyu aapko kya?"asked Heer annoyed.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"How should I not bother? You know I am a responsible citizen of this
country and it is my duty to help others",
he replied all being proud on
himself.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"But I don't need your help mister".</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"But i..."he was immediately interrupted by her hand which she had
shown him indicating him to stop.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Listen mister let me tell you something. If you want to sit here then please
be quiet and let me enjoy my milky sugary coffee and if you don't then feel
free to leave the table. I will be more than glad
she said sarcastically.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"But I won't be glad if something happens to you. Do you know this
black coffee is so much healthier than this milky and creamy coffee of yours?"
he continued.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">Ohh god kahan phas gayi", murmured Heer and looked at him. She
totally ignored him and was about to have a sip from her coffee when again that
man started his lecture.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Stop stop!!! I told you not to drink this but seem you don't believe
me. Ok, let me explain to you then only you would understand",
he said and
shifted a bit closer to her. But her attention was not in that. She widened her
eyes when he said "let me explain to
you".
"Does he really going to
explain all this? Oh God please send Ash as soon as possible",
she murmured
under her breath.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Listen it has been shown that drinking black coffee really improves
your liver. It lessens the probability of cancer. Coffee has caffeine in it.
This caffeine travels into your brain and makes you smarter, and not to forget
black coffee is very useful if you want to lose weight",
he explained
everything to her while showing the researches of various people from the
internet.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">Now Heer had had
enough. She got up from her seat and smiled at him...a fake smile. "Ok mister I think I should leave now. If
you want you can sit here and give your explanations to others. There are so
many people around you".
</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">Saying this she paid
the bill of her coffee and was about to exit from the caf but her luck was not
in her favour that day. As soon as she stepped out of the caf rain started to
pour.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"What the hell? Iss mausam mein barish!!! Great! Now I can't even get
out of this Cafe".
She sighed and again came back to her sit where
she noticed the guy grinning shamelessly. She ignored him and sat down. Some
minutes passed by utter silence and Heer couldn't thank god more for this.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Well I can tell from your frustration that you aren't enjoying my
company. Are you?"
he asked suddenly catching Heer off guard. </font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"No, no...nothing like that. I was just...you know...I was just waiting for
my cousin to discuss about an important matter and she is so late, so I was
just a little worried",
she tried to smile.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Oh then it's ok. Btw you know most people find me boring as according
to them I always give free advice to them, he laughed. "But since you are
already tensed, I will not bore you anymore now. I can understand when you wait
for someone for discussing some important matter and they don't appear on time,
instead keep giving excuses",
he said genuinely.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Exactly! Heer shook
her head in an affirmative manner. "Btw
sorry, I was a bit rude earlier",
Heer apologized. </font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"When?"asked the man surprisingly.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Umm...when first time you were saying something and I told you to keep
quiet",
she bit her lower lip and lowered her head. "I really didn't mean to sound so rude".</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"And I also told you it was ok. Didn't I?"the man raised an eyebrow
at her and she smiled. "He is not as bad
as I thought at first",
thought Heer.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Btw miss...", he was immediately cut off by Heer. "Heer...Heer Maan", she answered. </font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">He smiled. "Btw Miss Heer, I can leave if you want. I mean I am done
with my coffee so I can wait on the counter",
he proposed.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"No no...no need. You can sit here", she denied. </font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"If you want you can order one more coffee for yourself. Promise I
won't say anything",
he assured her.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">She looked at him and
laughed. This is the first time that he was watching her laughing. "She looks beautiful", thought he.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"It's ok. Even if you say something, I am going to order another one
for myself",
she replied giggling.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Btw aap kiska intezar kar rahe hain?"she asked him.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">He was about to
answer her when his phone rang. He excused himself and went to attend the call.
While returning back suddenly a waiter bumped onto him and the cup which he was
holding, turned and the coffee inside it poured all over the guy.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"I am really sorry sir, I didn't do it intentionally", the waiter
apologized being afraid.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"It's alright. You don't have to apologize", he replied assuring.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Thank you sir. Sir the washroom is this way. You can...", he was
cut off by the guy. "I will clean it.
Don't worry. You can go".
</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">Heer watched all this
and smiled. "He is so good at heart",
thought she. </font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"I guess you should clean it quickly before the stain got unwashable",
Heer proposed to him after he came back to the table.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Yeah", he said and left to washroom. </font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"So where was I?"asked he coming back from the washroom.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"You were saying that you had been waiting for...?"Heer reminded
him.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Yes, My best friend. Apparently his mother has chosen a match for him
and he doesn't not want to get married. So he asked my help and here I am
waiting for him",
replied he.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">Heer's eyes widened
at this. This was exactly like her problem. Should she ask more? It wouldn't harm
anyone if she asked him his solution. She thought for a bit and decided to try.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"So...did you think how would you help you?"asked Heer very
carefully.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Not really. First I will listen to his problem. I mean I know that he
doesn't want to get married but I have to make sure that he has a valid
reason",
he replied.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Yeah", she smiled. How could she bring up the topic? She cleared
her throat. "You know my friend has the
similar problem",
she said carefully not giving him any hint that it was
actually her problem.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Really? So what did she do?"asked he being surprised.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Actually she asked my help but I am not finding anything", replied
Heer. So I was thinking if you could
help me...off course if you don't have any problem",
she asked nervously.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Off course not. So tell me why doesn't she want to get married? Does
she have any boyfriend?"</font>
</p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Not at all. The thing is she thinks she doesn't need to. I mean she
had a beautiful family, her friends and a good job. Then why should she have to
get married?"</font>
</p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Only this? Then I would say she should tell her family".</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"They won't understand", Heer replied sadly.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Off course they won't", said the guy and Heer looked at him
scrunching her eyebrows.</font></p><p align="center"><font size="2"> "Matlab?"Heer couldn't help asking.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Matlab I, myself, is not understanding anything. This is not a reason
not to get married. Is there anything that you are hiding?"
he asked.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Actually she thinks all boys, in today's generation, are flirty, like
playboy types. She wants a guy who would understand her completely, who would
love her and respect her opinions, who would give her full independence and would
support her when if she would need him, who wouldn't be so possessive and
jealous if she would talk to any other guy",
Heer replied drowning in her
own thoughts.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"And she thinks such boys doesn't exist in today's generation, right?"he asked as if understating her and Heer nodded slowly.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"What do you think of me?"he asked out of nowhere.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"What?"she asked being surprised. </font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"I am asking what do you think of me. Do you think me as a flirty,
playboy types?"</font>
</p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">Heer couldn't answer.
Well she did think of him something if not flirty. Seeing her not responding
anything he asked again, "So you did?</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">This time Heer
smiled. "Frankly speaking I did think of
you as annoying, bothersome, irritating and a little flirty",
she replied
biting her lower lip.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"And now?"he asked.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Now I have realized that I was wrong. You are not as I thought of you.
Infact you are really nice and helpful",
she smiled at him...a real, genuine
smile.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"See that is the solution. You have to make her realize this", he
replied smilingly. "Btw why I am thinking
that this is more of yours problem than that of your friend's?"
</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"What...what are you saying?"Heer tried to deny.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"I am saying that I think this is entirely your problem. But it is
absolutely alright if you don't want to share. I can completely understand".</font>
</p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">Heer sighed and
closed her eyes. Should she admit? She opened her eyes and looked at him from
the corner of her eyes. He was busy with his phone...may be messaging to his
friend. He looks nice, he is good at heart not like most of the guys who
pretended to be good in front of girls. He is not at all flirty, so helpful to
others. He respects people. She decided to tell him.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Yes, you are right. I am the girl", she almost whispered.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"What?"he looked up at her and asked.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"What you are thinking is right. I am the girl whom I was talking
about",
she pouted.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">He smiled. "So finally you decided to open up".</font></p>
<p align="center">She looked at him and sighed.</p><p align="center"><font size="2">"Listen, just give a chance. I am sure not all boys are like what you are thinking. I am sure there are some good guys who would match your expectations", he replied with sincerity.</font></p><p align="center">"Yeah, I guess",she replied.<font size="2">"Btw, are you an adviser?"she asked
suddenly.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Huhh?"he asked being confused.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Wo actually you were giving advice to what coffee we should drink,
then you are waiting here for your friend to give him some advise on his
problem and most of all you helped me, a complete stranger. So I was thinking
this might be your profession",
she asked with a teasing smile.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">He burst into
laughter. "No not at all. I have hotel
business. This advice thing, you can say, is a part time job. Hey, you know
what you should get married in our hotel. I can give you discount since we know
each other",
he replied with humour.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">Heer couldn't help
but laugh. He was such a funny guy. Heer didn't notice him earlier. He was not
only good looking in a general way, but hot, attractive, reliable, funny, had
the most charming smile and a perfect body that any girl could drool over.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"I think I should leave now", he said suddenly.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"So soon?"thought Heer Disappointment was clearly evident on Heer's face. She really liked talking to him. It was
so fun and...relaxing. But she couldn't say anything. What would he think of herself?</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">She plastered a
smiled on her face and replied "Ok".</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">"Btw here's my card. If you change your mind and decide to get married
then you can try our hotel. I can assure you the best services",
he gave
his card and bid good bye.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">Heer looked at his
direction with a smile and an unknown feeling in her heart.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2"></font></p>
<p align="center"><b><font size="2">END of PART-1</font>
</p>
<p align="center"><font size="2"></font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2">So I am ending the part here. Hope you find it worth reading. The
second part will be posted soon. Till then take care, good bye.</font>
</p>

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Hello Deshians, I am back with the 2nd and last part...enjoy reading.


Part 2


"Heer don't you think lately you have been thinking a lot about that coffee guy?" asked Ashlesha surprised a bit at her cousin's behaviour. Heer Maan, who had never given a damn to any boy in her whole life, had constantly been talking about a stranger from the cafe.

Heer, on the other hand, was drowned in her own thoughts. Since that day at the caf, she was unable to think straight. Only one week had passed but it seemed she had known him for years.

"It's nothing like that Ash. I was just thinking about what he said...about the marriage stuff", she tried to explain. "And btw, it was your fault. You didn't come on time so I had to sit there and talk to him. So don't try to blame it on me", she further added putting the whole blame on Ashlesha.

Ashlesha's jaw dropped at this. "My fault?!" she asked being totally shocked. "Oh hello Miss! I didn't tell you to talk to him. I just told you to wait for me not to talk with some random guy who happened to be so handsome", Ashlesha added the last part with a wink.


"Ash, stop it!" Heer retorted.


"Ok ok, sorry. But really Heer, it is not right to think about some other guy when you are going to marry the guy whom your parents has chosen for you", Ash reminded Heer about the current situation that she had agreed to meet the guy of her parent's choice.


"Ash I was not thinking about him. I was just...just...you know...," Heer felt short at words. She didn't know what to say. Wasn't she really thinking about him?


Ash saw her and smiled. "Btw girl, you haven't told me his name yet".


"Oh shit!" Heer slapped her own head.


"What happened?" asked Ash being confused.


"I forgot to ask his name", Heer pouted.


Ash widened her eyes. "Are you serious?! You talked to him for like hours and you forgot to ask his name?" She couldn't help asking. Heer nodded her head.


"Heer I will kill you for sure!" Ash shouted. "For the first time you liked a guy and you don't even know his name. What were you doing? Were you so busy checking him out that you didn't even ask his name?"


"Aaahhh Ash, chup ho ja yaar. First of all, I wasn't checking him out and second of all, I already told you everything. So why are you asking again?" Heer replied annoyingly.


Suddenly she remembered something. "But wait, I have his card. May be we can find his name there". Heer squealed in joy. Her eyes were sparkling.


"Then what are you waiting for you stupid girl?" Ash quickly sat beside her and both started searching for the card in Heer's purse.


"Got it", Heer took the card out and held it infront of Ash. But as soon as they look at it their faces dropped. It has only the hotel's name, address, its best services and two phone numbers which they guessed might be the reception's numbers.


"Ismein to naam hi nahi hain", Ash complained like a kid and put it in the purse again. She nodded her head in disappointment and said, "I am going to go and get some coffee".


But Heer was in drowned in her own thoughts. At first she also felt disappointed but somewhere in her heart, she felt relieved. She didn't want to know his name, at least not now when she had decided to give a chance to this guy of her parent's choice. It would be unfair to him. If she wanted the guy to be faithful to her then she would also need to do the same.


She literally lost the track of time until Ash came and said, "Here you go...drink it and just relax". We will think something about this.


Heer's thoughts came to a halt by Ashlesha's voice. She looked up and took the cup from her. "There's nothing to think about this Ash", she said. Her voice was calm and firm but a sensible disappointment was there.


"What do you mean? Don't you want to know him?" Ash asked being puzzled at her answer.


"No. This is not right. You yourself said it earlier. Remember?"


"Because then I didn't know exactly how much you liked him", Ash responded.


"I don't like him the way you are saying Ash. I just like him as...as a good human being. That's all", replied Heer. She had a distant look on her face.


"Really Heer? Then why did I see disappointment on your face when you couldn't tell his name? Why did I see the sparkle in your eyes when you remembered that his card was with you where you could find his name? Why for the past one week you were just talking about him?" Ash tried to reason out.


"Ash you..." she was immediately cut off by Ash who had put her hands on her. "Heer why aren't you admitting that you like him...a lot?" This time Ash's voice was a bit softer.


"You know the reason very well Ash. How can I just go and tell dad that suddenly I have started liking someone else? That I don't want to marry a complete stranger? And most importantly I don't even know the name of the person I like or anything about him", Heer covered her face with her hands.


"But Heer tu..." this time Ash was cut off by Heer. "No Ash let it be. May be this is right for everyone". Heer smiled.

Ash nodded and both hugged each other.

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"We've been waiting for you so long and you are coming now?" asked Balraj Maan, Heer's father to his long lost best friend who had just arrived to the Maan house with his family.


"Sorry man! But you know ladies, right?" replied the other man teasing his wife and gave a wink to his best friend.


"Bas bas rehne dijiye aapki nautanki", his wife replied. "Bhaisahab der humein inki wajah se huyi. He and his sons, all are pure workaholic. Office se der se ayenge to der to hogi hi na", his wife told the truth and gave a "Tit for Tat look to her husband.


"Are baba ab bas bhi kijiye. Sari baatein darwaze par hi hogi ya aap unko andar bhi aane denge?" Balraj's wife Teji Maan hurriedly came at the door and said smiling at them.


"Teji, it's been so long since I had last seen you. How are you?" greeted the lady gently engulfing Teji in a hug.


"I am good. How are you? Aur waise bhi ab to rishta judne wala hai. Ab to mulakatein hoti rahengi", Teji responded welcoming them inside the house.


"Son, take blessings from them", the man asked his sons and they did so. The man had 3 sons and one daughter who was the eldest of all. Only 2 sons were there with them and the eldest one was outside...talking in phone.

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"Heer, c'mon, they have come", Ash shouted while coming in Heer's room where she was getting ready.


"Ash, stop shouting. I am not deaf. Aa rahi hun", Heer replied annoyingly.


"Arre main to bas keh rahi thi, chilla thodi rahi thi? Ash smiled sheepishly. Btw there are two men and both of them are really handsome, exactly like Greek Gods", Ash added dreamily.


"Did I ask you?" Heer rolled her eyes.


"No. I just thought you would want to know but off course, you wouldn't say anything. So why not to help you?" Ash winked.


Heer was about to go but was stopped by ash who had held her wrist. She turned and gave ash a questioning look.


"Are you sure?" asked Ash completely understanding Heer's state of mind.


Heer smiled. "Yes Ash, I am sure. Btw, thank you for being there for me. I don't know what could have I done without you", Heer responded and then engulfed her in a tight hug.


They came downstairs.

"There she comes". Balraj was pleased to see her daughter. Heer was wearing a beautiful pink salwar. Though the girl whom the groom's family was about to see for their wedding is supposed to wear a saree but Heer refused to wear it. It was not that she doesn't love wearing sarees but she wanted the guy and his family to like her as she was. So she decided to wear salwar.


Seeing her Teji hurriedly went to her and led her to where the others were sitting. Balraj introduced her to everyone. She took Lalit and Gayatri's blessings and exchange pleasantries with the two Juneja brothers Harman and Preet.


"Are Harman where is your elder brother?" Lalit asked his second son finding his eldest son missing from the scene.


"Dad bhai is attending a call. He'll be here any moment", Harman replied.


"Oh ho...ye ladka bhi na! Aate hi phone pe lag gaya!" Gayatri exclaimed at his son's workaholic nature.


"Are mom leave it, he will come, Preet tried to calm his mother. "Jab tak wo nahi aate let's talk some time with Bhabhi. Unke aane ke baad to pata nahi ye dono humse baat karenge bhi ya nahi". Preet had already started his teasing business and he targeted Heer in first meeting. While everyone laughed at his remark, Heer was little uncomfortable or should I say embarrassed.


"Chup. Why are you teasing her?" came the motherly scolding from Gayatri which saved Heer from further embarrassment. However, Lalit and Gayatri started talking to Heer and they really liked her. Gayatri was more than excited to make Heer her daughter-in-law.


"Hii mom, hi dad", came a manly voice from behind. As soon as the voice came everyone turned their head towards the door and saw an extremely handsome walking towards them. Heer who was sitting quietly looking at her parents and her would be in-laws talking, instantaneously looked up on hearing the voice. That she was shocked would be an understatement.


"Aa gaya", Gayatri was excited to see her eldest son. The man came and took Lalit and Gayatri's blessings first and then from Balraj and Teji. He greeted Ashlesha and took his seat. Amidst all this one person was there who was looking at him like some kind of alien. The eyes were expressing shock and utter disbelief, and not to forget the fire of anger. Yes it was our Heer.


"Prem, she is Heer...Heer Maan, your Balraj uncle's daughter and Heer, he is my son Prem", Lalit introduced them.


He grinned. "Hii Ms. Maan, he held out his hands for a handshake.


"Mr. Prem, right?" she held his hands but sarcasm underlying her voice as she coolly raised her eyebrows at him and almost fumed in anger when his grin widened all the more, making him look for any signs of smoke coming out of her ears and nostrils. He was expecting a loud slap or an ear piercing scream but not receiving any such greetings he became surprised. Heer was smiling at him but not an ordinary smile. There was a smirk playing on her lips.

"Are Heer give him some coffee", Teji proposed.


"Ji ma", Heer replied sweetly all the time looking at Prem.


"Are nahi Teji, Prem doen't like this coffee", Gaytri interrupted. "Actually he only likes his Cappuccino. You won't believe but that's true. He never listens to anyone when it comes to his coffee. Pagal!" Gayatri ruffled his hair.

Now it came as another surprise for Heer. Oh so he was just irritating me. Fine, let's do the same.

"Really? Heer ko bhi aisi hi pasand hai. Coffee peeni ho to sirf Cappuccino. Dono ki pasand kitni milti hai na!" Teji was so happy that both have same tastes.

"Not anymore ma".

All the heads turned towards Heer on her reply.

"Kya matlb?" Teji asked.

"Wo actually someone told me that this is not good for health. You know, you might face various health problems due to this. So if we want to have coffee then we should have black coffee", Heer told the whole thing with the same smirk eyeing Prem who was giving her a pleading look.

"But tune...kab se?" Teji couldn't help asking because Heer giving up cappuccino came as a shock to her.

"Bas ek hafte se ma", Heer gave a toothy smile. Though Prem wasn't showing he was totally enjoying this Heer and her antics.

"Crazy Girl! But this girl has made me crazy too", Prem smiled at his thought and shook his head.

"To rishta pakka samjhe?" Gayatri asked hopefully. Balraj truned to Prem and then to Heer. "Beta if you want you can go and talk alone. We don't have any problem".

"No uncle I don't need to. I trust my parents and I think they will chose the best for me", Prem's reply made Balraj proud on himself that he had chosen a perfect match for his daughter.

"Heer?", he asked his daughter. Heer placed her hands on him and just nodded her head. Understanding her, Balraj placed his hands on her head and smiled. He had tears in his eyes.

"Are gale mil ballu hum samdhi banne wale hain", screamed a happy and excited Lalit Juneja engulfing his friend in a tight hug. They decided the engagement date and fed sweets to each other. In this whole excitement Prem's eyes were totally on Heer who was trying every possible means to avoid him.

Later That Night

Heer was infront of her dressing table applying her night cream in her night gown suddenly she heard some noise coming from the window. She went there and as soon as she opened the window her eyes popped out of their socket. Prem was hanging holding the windowpane.

"Hi", Prem smiled.

"H..h...hi. What...what are you doing here?" Heer was shock enough to stammer.

"Batata hun. But first please let me come in or else I can fall down any moment", Prem tried to make his grip stronger but failed miserably.

Heer held his hands and pulled him in a way that both ended up landing on floor with Prem on top of Heer.

"Ouch!" Heer hissed in pain. She literally pushed Prem who was busy staring at her and got up. "You idiot! You broke my waist".

"Don't worry, I will carry you everywhere", Prem flirted with her.

Heer sighed. She looked at him and said, "So I was right about you".

"What?" Prem gave a questioning look.

"That you are a big flirt".

"Nah...you didn't think that of me". Prem's reply made Heer scrunch her eyebrows.

"You yourself told me, remember?"

Heer remember the last part of her conversation with Prem and said, "Yes I remember. But that time I didn't know you well. But now...", she left her sentence incomplete and tried to walk away but Prem held her wrist. A jolt went through the two of them but neither of them made the effort to move away.

"Hey", Prem called her. "Don't walk away please". He called out from behind so softly that Heer couldn't continue walking. She stopped but didn't turn. Prem came closer and made her turn towards himself.

"I know you are angry but atleast listen to me". Heer didn't look at him but also made no movements to free herself from him. Knowing that he had her attention he continued, "Heer I already knew about you and your hesitation of marriage. So I was just trying to remove your fear. I just didn't want to lose the girl I like so much".

"You barely know me. How can you like me before?" She was confused.

"I...I saw your picture. Actually mom showed me. And believe me I instantly liked you so much that when I heard that you didn't want to marry me I was really devastated. So I just..."

He couldn't complete his sentence as Heer interrupted him. "But you lied to me", she made a cute pout. Prem furrowed his eyebrows as he tried to comprehend what she was talking about.


"You said you work at Juneja Hotels. But that's your father's hotel so how can you work there. You are supposed to be the boss", told Heer understanding him.


Prem smiled. He encircled his arms around her waist and said, "If you remember correctly I never lied to you. Yes that's my father's hotel but I really work there as an employee. I take salary every month like other employees. Actually Heer I joined business 3 years back. I was just a fresher and didn't have enough experience to run a hotel or the chain of hotels that my father had developed with his hard work. I wanted to gain experience so I started working there but off course I need to take over it at some point. So dad gave me 3 years and now here I am, ready to hold the responsibility", Prem replied making her understand.


"But...",
again she made a pout.


"You know what you look really cute when you pout", Prem teased her pulling her cheeks with one hand while holding her securely with the other.


"Stop it!" Heer pushed him but he didn't even move an inch.


"Now what are you angry at Heer. I told everything right?" he asked sweetly.


"Except...", Heer replied fidgeting with her fingers.

"Except?"


"Who told you about me?"


"Do you actually want to know it?"
he asked mischievously.


"Yes, off course".


"Your dad".


"What? Dad!"
Heer was in complete shock and surprise.


Prem nodded his head. "Heer he knew about your feeling towards marriage so he asked me to meet you. Off course he didn't knew I would be meeting you at the coffee shop. It was just my plan. I, if any means offended you, I am really sorry", he bowed down.


Heer couldn't help but smile. "It's ok", she replied.


Prem looked up and gazed intently at the woman infront of him and saw her smiling. She tried to free herself but he didn't let her go. Heer looked and saw him staring at her.


"What are you staring at?" she aksed.


"Your smile, your eyes, the way you laugh, the way you talk, the way you walk...I can stare at you forever", Prem replied making a faint red color appear on her cheeks.


She tried to hide her blush and said, "I already said yes then why are you flirting with me now?"


"It's not flirting madam, it's called...hmmm(thinking)...praising".


"Praise me later. Now please go Prem. I need to sleep",
she tried to dismiss him.


"So that you can dream about me?" he asked with a wink.


"Preeemm!" she pushed him, led him to the window and showed him the exit.


"Fine", Prem said half-heratedly and went to climb down but again came back.


"Heer I forgot something", he called out.

"What?"


"This",
he suddenly kissed her on her cheeks and whispered, "I love you". Before Heer could possessed what had happened, he hurriedly climbed down the window.


Heer looked at his direction and a smile appeared on her lips. "Pagal!"

The End

So this is the end. Thank you to everyone who has at least given it a view. Hope to see your wonderful comments in this part too.

Thank you,

Love,

Sunayana

Edited by Sunzz.Harshiti - 6 years ago

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