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Titile inspired by heena..'s video mix day before she shared in FB
Banner: sana.harshiti
Story is completely from imaginary point of view.
Song Lyrics to original writer & google
Please excuse if it turns out to be very boring or uninteresting.☯️
Please excuse if it turns out to be very boring or uninteresting.☯️
Hi all
This is a write up on Premeer.
Dedicated to our fan Tara aka tarannum6
for being active fan in forum.
This is based on PH post leap - their personalities.
This doesn't have cute scenes. it doesn't have dialogue of Heer much.
So basically it's just a write up not like an actual story.
This thought came to me when I work up this morning.
So I wrote it after letting sana.harshiti know.😆
She usually knows everything I do pretty much.
Here we go. Read at your own risk. 😆
Sun Mere Humsafar
(Banner credit: sana.harshiti in instagram KDMHMD page)
Sun mere humsafar
Kya tujhe itni si bhi khabar
Ki teri saanse chalti jidhar
Rahunga bas wahi umrr bhar
Rahunga bas wahi umrr bhar haaye
Song playing in the background in the house - may be Meher is watching tv Prem thought.
Prem was in their bedroom thinking. His face shows worry may be because of things the family experienced in the last couple of weeks.
He remembers how excited the family was when he married Heer again - this time with full fledged ceremonies up until the post marriage rituals. Despite the unexpected visitor, other hick ups during those ceremonies, they managed to keep a happy atmosphere in the house.
He was saddened and felt alarmed about Ashlesha's sudden appearance on the day they had remarriage. Even though he convinced himself Heer, his wife more like his life will stay forever with him, he felt very threatened by Ashlesha. His heart beat faster and he did not know what to do.
But thankfully Heer's words seeing Ashlesha reassured him. She said to Ashlesha that she has forgiven her Prem and that she trusts him completely.
This made him smile from the heart. His heart swelled in happiness hearing those words from Heer but he maintained a serious face at that time. This time too his heart started to beat faster and faster but only cz of happiness and of his Heer.
Now you may wonder why this Prem looks worried?
Well what happened to the happy marriage? Was there a fight?
In some way it is true. Fight was orchestrated by Ashlesha in a very careful manner. No one had a clue what is happening and who is doing it specifically.
Ashlesha and her mom Daljeet Maan has planned well. Because of it Heer almost left Prem and Junejas' house. Thankfully she did come back.
But what happened after? Prem was accused of abusing Ashlesha and that caused a series of new worries for the family.
He was in jail and Heer was heart broken, Media bashed him and family.
Ashlesha created a wave of suspicion that another random child as Prem's from 6 years ago when he mistakenly went into her room in a drunken state and slept.
Thankfully Harman, his brother was successful in winning this case, Geet their close friend gave solid proof to relieve Prem from prison life and accusations and most of all Prem was cleared off his guilt, he did not cheat his wife!!
It was a story created by Ashlesha to separate Prem from his wife.
Prem now wondered "I should be the happiest man on earth right now. I have everything I want with me. Why do I feel worried or sad or feel there is something wrong in the whole picture while everything looks great.!"
Heer walks into the room cheerfully calling her Prem.
Where would he have gone at this time without informing me, she wondered.
Ashlesha created a wave of suspicion that another random child as Prem's from 6 years ago when he mistakenly went into her room in a drunken state and slept.
Thankfully Harman, his brother was successful in winning this case, Geet their close friend gave solid proof to relieve Prem from prison life and accusations and most of all Prem was cleared off his guilt, he did not cheat his wife!!
It was a story created by Ashlesha to separate Prem from his wife.
Prem now wondered "I should be the happiest man on earth right now. I have everything I want with me. Why do I feel worried or sad or feel there is something wrong in the whole picture while everything looks great.!"
Heer walks into the room cheerfully calling her Prem.
Where would he have gone at this time without informing me, she wondered.
It was Prem's habit to disappear in a moment - that is how he was before she got married but after that he always let her know about his plans. After their remarriage their relationship has strengthened even more - he told her he needs to know exactly where his wife is 100% of the time - not because he wants to control her but because he needs to reassure that his wife is present somewhere close to him.
It's weird if you ask me - why should a person want to control ? Then he answered his own question and said to Heer "I really missed you. No one can be you and I'm extremely possessive about it. It's for my peace of mind please let me know what your schedule is. You will always know where I am".
They maintained this promise until this moment. So that is why Heer is puzzled.
She decided to search the entire room - it's a huge one from corner to the next.
Voila - she found him staring outside the window that has a view of their beautiful backyard garden.
They often spend time there in the evening as a family or sometimes just Premeer discussing their daily happenings to each other.
She touched Prem's shoulder. He seemed startled by her touch.
Heer: Hey Prem tum kaise ho? Kya hua? Kya dek rahi ho?
Prem: um tum kab ayi? I didn't see you.
Heer: Bas abi abi. Ya I noticed you were lost in thoughts. What is bothering you.
Prem: I just can't get out of this thought.
Heer(getting worried goes close to Prem and puts her palm on his right cheek): Kyon kya hua?
Prem: I am still very puzzled what made you to leave the house 6 years ago Heer? I know and the family knows all that I did, what happened to you, how I behaved. But that is not how you ever handle things - you never been this rash or haste nor do you ever run away from a problem. Even if I was the problem, the Heer I know would not have run away.
Haan people will say, the husband cheated and wife left. Our problem is not as simple as that and beyond all that we trusted each other so deeply. I made a mistake but you did not.
When I met you after 6 years, you were very angry, but I could see you cared so deeply. Nothing changed between us even after that length of time.
You were the same as I left you. I did not move on nor have you!
At one point you were almost going to tell me who is that person that is from this house stopped you.
I know it's someone from here Heer. Geet clearly told me on phone, you were leaving her house so happy to return to me, your Prem and your family.
Either someone stopped you in the road or someone at this house stopped you!!
Please patao na.
Heer looked downwards when Prem started this again. She thought he let this go on their wedding day. She does not know what to say or how to clear his doubts.
She cannot tell the truth - cz that will break his heart. After all she and Prem are together. What is the use of bringing up the past bad deeds of someone? Why this Prem is so adamant and torturing me with questions. She felt her heart sink as she really felt he seemed too determined today than ever before to find the truth!!!
This was late afternoon - a serious convo is taking place in Premeer room.
It's more like Prem's voice towering over as Heer is silent.
Bauji was walking to his room after having read the paper for the 3rd time that day 😆 he was so bored 😆 and thought may be a nap will cure his boredom. 😆
He heard Prem's voice and got startled and he knocked on their door but it was slightly opened so he opened further to find Premeer standing close to a window facing the garden.
He walked slowly and heard the last bits of Prem's words.
He went near them.
Bauji: Prem beta (Premeer were surprised and turned to look at him)
Bauji: Prem Heer will never tell you. cz the truth will hurt you - in a more unbearable way. That is why she is quiet. It is not her nature to say anything bad about some other person even if it is a stranger. You know your wife.
Prem: Bauji iska matlab aap janti hai? 😲 ( Prem felt saddened that even his father has full faith on his daughter in law, but he the husband doubted his pure heart wife. Tears pricked back of his eyes and Bauji sees this.)
Bauji: Prem beta you were the victim of this whole circumstance that happened around you. Someone very close to you has planned to separate your wife from you. Framed you as a bad guy to get your wife all confused then created a fictional threat, named as a black mailer and finally succeeded in planting a doubt for your wife in your mind.
Haan Heer has her own share of mistakes, not being able to share her worries with you. She did not do because she was told not to. 2ndly she was afraid truth will hurt you. She never imagined her husband will doubt her or her character.
All that was done and over with now why bring that up beta?
Prem: Bauji aap ko sab kuch pata hai. You never let me realize what my mistake was. I mean you advised me what I should do. I tried too that day and failed to bring Heer back. (Prem's voice trembled and Heer went over and held his left arm patting it to sooth away his uneasiness.)
Bauji: Beta tu aur Heer mereliye ek hi hai. Dono mere bache hai. I see you as one and the same. I cannot stand your tears nor can I see Heer in sadness.
Prem: So please tell me what did happen. Who is that close to me that separated my wife from me.
(his tone of voice suddenly changed to strong yet quiet like angry dog ready for attack seeing an enemy)
Heer: Prem please stop this. Bauji please aap isko samjayieh. Ab kya faida.
Prem: No I must know (he says in an angry voice. He turns to Bauji)
Prem: Bauji it's obvious my wife is not going to confess no matter how many times I beg her to.
I must know. I have the right to know. You cannot NOT tell me who my enemy is. What if this happens again? Whether anyone come between us in future or not is not an issue. I must know about the past!!
Bauji: Beta years ago. Heer was told that you had killed a person in Canada. That guy, the black mailer came to India to blackmail her stating you will be put in jail if he reports to police. Now Heer did not believe this threat right away. She went and told g3 and asked her for guidance. Heer did not ask you because she was worried how you will react. She thought g3 is your well wisher and will guide her.
g3 acted as if she is sympathizing with Heer. But she is the one created this fictional murder that you supposed to have committed, and an actor she hired as a black mailer. She told that actor how to threaten Heer to get her to do things he wants. She on the other hand was pretending to console Heer and giving advise. She made Heer look bad in front of you many times - she made you doubt about her. Even the money you had given her to keep 20000 Rs , g3 told her to give to this black mailer without informing you to keep him quiet. Then she asked you to find out how the money was spent.
Prem: What when did I kill someone ? 😲 what the heck!
Heer: NO No no you did not.
Bauji: No beta - you did not pay attention. I said fictional - matlab g3 ne yeh create kiya hai ki aisa koi story hai Canada mei jab tu college mei tha.
Prem: But how did Ashlesha come in this picture. How did she find me? Where did she see me? Is that also from ma? 😲
Bauji: NO Ash did that on her own however she was aware that g3 hates Heer and wants to take revenge on her.
Prem: Revenge?
Bauji: Haan g3 was taking revenge by separating Heer - who is a sister of Nihal for Veera. g3's logic is Veera did not live happily and Heer is the reason for her destruction.
She decided to search the entire room - it's a huge one from corner to the next.
Voila - she found him staring outside the window that has a view of their beautiful backyard garden.
They often spend time there in the evening as a family or sometimes just Premeer discussing their daily happenings to each other.
She touched Prem's shoulder. He seemed startled by her touch.
Heer: Hey Prem tum kaise ho? Kya hua? Kya dek rahi ho?
Prem: um tum kab ayi? I didn't see you.
Heer: Bas abi abi. Ya I noticed you were lost in thoughts. What is bothering you.
Prem: I just can't get out of this thought.
Heer(getting worried goes close to Prem and puts her palm on his right cheek): Kyon kya hua?
Prem: I am still very puzzled what made you to leave the house 6 years ago Heer? I know and the family knows all that I did, what happened to you, how I behaved. But that is not how you ever handle things - you never been this rash or haste nor do you ever run away from a problem. Even if I was the problem, the Heer I know would not have run away.
Haan people will say, the husband cheated and wife left. Our problem is not as simple as that and beyond all that we trusted each other so deeply. I made a mistake but you did not.
When I met you after 6 years, you were very angry, but I could see you cared so deeply. Nothing changed between us even after that length of time.
You were the same as I left you. I did not move on nor have you!
At one point you were almost going to tell me who is that person that is from this house stopped you.
I know it's someone from here Heer. Geet clearly told me on phone, you were leaving her house so happy to return to me, your Prem and your family.
Either someone stopped you in the road or someone at this house stopped you!!
Please patao na.
Heer looked downwards when Prem started this again. She thought he let this go on their wedding day. She does not know what to say or how to clear his doubts.
She cannot tell the truth - cz that will break his heart. After all she and Prem are together. What is the use of bringing up the past bad deeds of someone? Why this Prem is so adamant and torturing me with questions. She felt her heart sink as she really felt he seemed too determined today than ever before to find the truth!!!
This was late afternoon - a serious convo is taking place in Premeer room.
It's more like Prem's voice towering over as Heer is silent.
Bauji was walking to his room after having read the paper for the 3rd time that day 😆 he was so bored 😆 and thought may be a nap will cure his boredom. 😆
He heard Prem's voice and got startled and he knocked on their door but it was slightly opened so he opened further to find Premeer standing close to a window facing the garden.
He walked slowly and heard the last bits of Prem's words.
He went near them.
Bauji: Prem beta (Premeer were surprised and turned to look at him)
Bauji: Prem Heer will never tell you. cz the truth will hurt you - in a more unbearable way. That is why she is quiet. It is not her nature to say anything bad about some other person even if it is a stranger. You know your wife.
Prem: Bauji iska matlab aap janti hai? 😲 ( Prem felt saddened that even his father has full faith on his daughter in law, but he the husband doubted his pure heart wife. Tears pricked back of his eyes and Bauji sees this.)
Bauji: Prem beta you were the victim of this whole circumstance that happened around you. Someone very close to you has planned to separate your wife from you. Framed you as a bad guy to get your wife all confused then created a fictional threat, named as a black mailer and finally succeeded in planting a doubt for your wife in your mind.
Haan Heer has her own share of mistakes, not being able to share her worries with you. She did not do because she was told not to. 2ndly she was afraid truth will hurt you. She never imagined her husband will doubt her or her character.
All that was done and over with now why bring that up beta?
Prem: Bauji aap ko sab kuch pata hai. You never let me realize what my mistake was. I mean you advised me what I should do. I tried too that day and failed to bring Heer back. (Prem's voice trembled and Heer went over and held his left arm patting it to sooth away his uneasiness.)
Bauji: Beta tu aur Heer mereliye ek hi hai. Dono mere bache hai. I see you as one and the same. I cannot stand your tears nor can I see Heer in sadness.
Prem: So please tell me what did happen. Who is that close to me that separated my wife from me.
(his tone of voice suddenly changed to strong yet quiet like angry dog ready for attack seeing an enemy)
Heer: Prem please stop this. Bauji please aap isko samjayieh. Ab kya faida.
Prem: No I must know (he says in an angry voice. He turns to Bauji)
Prem: Bauji it's obvious my wife is not going to confess no matter how many times I beg her to.
I must know. I have the right to know. You cannot NOT tell me who my enemy is. What if this happens again? Whether anyone come between us in future or not is not an issue. I must know about the past!!
Bauji: Beta years ago. Heer was told that you had killed a person in Canada. That guy, the black mailer came to India to blackmail her stating you will be put in jail if he reports to police. Now Heer did not believe this threat right away. She went and told g3 and asked her for guidance. Heer did not ask you because she was worried how you will react. She thought g3 is your well wisher and will guide her.
g3 acted as if she is sympathizing with Heer. But she is the one created this fictional murder that you supposed to have committed, and an actor she hired as a black mailer. She told that actor how to threaten Heer to get her to do things he wants. She on the other hand was pretending to console Heer and giving advise. She made Heer look bad in front of you many times - she made you doubt about her. Even the money you had given her to keep 20000 Rs , g3 told her to give to this black mailer without informing you to keep him quiet. Then she asked you to find out how the money was spent.
Prem: What when did I kill someone ? 😲 what the heck!
Heer: NO No no you did not.
Bauji: No beta - you did not pay attention. I said fictional - matlab g3 ne yeh create kiya hai ki aisa koi story hai Canada mei jab tu college mei tha.
Prem: But how did Ashlesha come in this picture. How did she find me? Where did she see me? Is that also from ma? 😲
Bauji: NO Ash did that on her own however she was aware that g3 hates Heer and wants to take revenge on her.
Prem: Revenge?
Bauji: Haan g3 was taking revenge by separating Heer - who is a sister of Nihal for Veera. g3's logic is Veera did not live happily and Heer is the reason for her destruction.
Haan she is also hurting her step son Prem whom she claimed and still claims to love - I don't think she realized this part. She was hell bent on punishing Heer and forgot Prem's life will turn hell cz of what she is doing.
g3 believed all the lies Veera in her immature state told her about Heer and Nihal. She believed every word of Veera.
Beta Prem after Heer saw you with Ash , she came to g3 for advice. g3 told her to leave the house immediately and never come back. She took a promise from Heer.
g3 believed all the lies Veera in her immature state told her about Heer and Nihal. She believed every word of Veera.
Beta Prem after Heer saw you with Ash , she came to g3 for advice. g3 told her to leave the house immediately and never come back. She took a promise from Heer.
Yeh pagal Heer always so obedient and respectful to her elders gave such a promise without thinking how it impacts her or her life or you!
Prem put his hands on his head and sat down on floor slowly. He felt he may pass out any moment. Heer looked extremely worried and tears flowing from both her eyes uncontrollably seeing Prem's condition. She did not know what will happen now and that worried her so much.
Bauji: Prem (he looks up at Bauji)
Bauji: After 6 years, in India also g3 took promise from Heer never to come back to you.
Heer does not know g3 hates her she does not know g3 orchestrated the entire plan to get rid of her. Heer only knew half of what has happened to you.
She later found out everything about g3 and has forgiven her. That is why Heer came back to you when you asked her to come.
Prem: You meen when Heer was coming from Geet's house ma made her to leave again? 😲
Bauji: Yes - I did not witness it but based on information I gathered and observing g3's behaviour that is the conclusion I came to. Heer will not accept this but I'm sure Geet knows a lot more.
In any case beta. I know this whole thing is distressing - for me too. I mean of all the ppl, we have enemy in our house. Ashlesha or DJ are not enemies. Veera and g3 have both separated you two.
Veera, you brought her up as a child and you may be able to forgive her for being immature and she is a departed soul. We cannot speak ill of departed soul anymore. We only have one option - that is to pray her sins will be pardoned.
Prem: Bauji... ( tears rolled down his eyes and his lips started to shake cz of over whelming emotions of sadness/ anger / hurt / feeling cheated by lot of ppl)
Bauji bent down to Prem's level on the ground and hugged him tight. Prem was sitting on floor from half way through the story and never thought to get up.
Bauji: Prem beta - ab jo hogya so hogya. Leave that. Please listen to me.
I did not chase g3 cz our family will be broken. The same reason others in family are staying quiet - they know some of what g3 has done.
We are together after so long as a family - now your children are in the house. At this point of time, I cannot chase out their grand mother hai na.
Prem nodded his head.
Bauji: uth jao beta. You wanted this bitter truth and here you have it.
You may not be able to face g3 or speak for a while. Eventually I know you will as you cannot function without your mother. She is your weakness.
Prem put his hands on his head and sat down on floor slowly. He felt he may pass out any moment. Heer looked extremely worried and tears flowing from both her eyes uncontrollably seeing Prem's condition. She did not know what will happen now and that worried her so much.
Bauji: Prem (he looks up at Bauji)
Bauji: After 6 years, in India also g3 took promise from Heer never to come back to you.
Heer does not know g3 hates her she does not know g3 orchestrated the entire plan to get rid of her. Heer only knew half of what has happened to you.
She later found out everything about g3 and has forgiven her. That is why Heer came back to you when you asked her to come.
Prem: You meen when Heer was coming from Geet's house ma made her to leave again? 😲
Bauji: Yes - I did not witness it but based on information I gathered and observing g3's behaviour that is the conclusion I came to. Heer will not accept this but I'm sure Geet knows a lot more.
In any case beta. I know this whole thing is distressing - for me too. I mean of all the ppl, we have enemy in our house. Ashlesha or DJ are not enemies. Veera and g3 have both separated you two.
Veera, you brought her up as a child and you may be able to forgive her for being immature and she is a departed soul. We cannot speak ill of departed soul anymore. We only have one option - that is to pray her sins will be pardoned.
Prem: Bauji... ( tears rolled down his eyes and his lips started to shake cz of over whelming emotions of sadness/ anger / hurt / feeling cheated by lot of ppl)
Bauji bent down to Prem's level on the ground and hugged him tight. Prem was sitting on floor from half way through the story and never thought to get up.
Bauji: Prem beta - ab jo hogya so hogya. Leave that. Please listen to me.
I did not chase g3 cz our family will be broken. The same reason others in family are staying quiet - they know some of what g3 has done.
We are together after so long as a family - now your children are in the house. At this point of time, I cannot chase out their grand mother hai na.
Prem nodded his head.
Bauji: uth jao beta. You wanted this bitter truth and here you have it.
You may not be able to face g3 or speak for a while. Eventually I know you will as you cannot function without your mother. She is your weakness.
Now don't let that ruin your life anymore.
Only thing I ask of you is - take care of my beti Heer.
Only thing I ask of you is - take care of my beti Heer.
If you respect me that is all I ask of you.
Prem nodded his head once again. He had a determined look about him.
...
Few hours after ...
Prem nodded his head once again. He had a determined look about him.
...
Few hours after ...
Heer decided to cheer her hubby.
She was hurt too but she knows he's suffering more at that moment.
She had asked Chahat to play with her father - not leave his side until she comes back up. Prem was in their room still. Chahat agreed that she will take care of her dad.
Heer made favourite snacks of everyone in family including the lil kids.
Heer made favourite snacks of everyone in family including the lil kids.
She has invited all to come to the garden in the back to have snack.
Preet rushed down first 😆 Even before his kid daughter Gungun who was being carried by Meher.
Gulraj di and Kiran Jiju, Maya, Harman with Arjun and Kul di's 3 kids all rushed to the garden.
Heer made all the items with the help of workers.
Preet rushed down first 😆 Even before his kid daughter Gungun who was being carried by Meher.
Gulraj di and Kiran Jiju, Maya, Harman with Arjun and Kul di's 3 kids all rushed to the garden.
Heer made all the items with the help of workers.
She gave leave to Meher and Maya and Kul di.
She managed the treats all by herself. The house maids took all treats to the garden.
They enjoyed the food. Kids went to play afterwards.
She managed the treats all by herself. The house maids took all treats to the garden.
They enjoyed the food. Kids went to play afterwards.
The adults had a great time catching up with that week's happenings.
Couple of hours later close to 6 o' clock all went inside the house.
...
Heer was deep in thought sitting in their bed.
...
Heer was deep in thought sitting in their bed.
After evening snack everyone seem to be in good mood.
Prem too seem relaxed.
He did not talk much but smiled and played with kids most of the time.
Heer felt some movement in the bed. Before she realized what is happening, she felt something on her lap. 😲
Prem: Love you Heer (he put his head on her lap and hugging her thighs like little child hugging mom)
Heer smiled and patted his head slightly and was petting him, moving her fingers though the hair in a soothing manner. Prem had a huge grin on his face and his eyes closed enjoying the pampering from his wife. 😃
Heer had her ipod on the side table and it was softly playing this song.
Sun Mere Humsafar
Sun zaalima mere sanu koi darr na
Ki samjhega zamana
Oh tu vi si kamli
Main vi sa kamla
Ishqe da rog seyana
Ishqe da rog seyana
Sun mere humsafar
Kya tujhe itni si bhi khabar
Sun mere humsafar
Kya tujhe itni si bhi khabar
Ki teri saanse chalti jidhar
Rahunga bas wahi umrr bhar
Rahunga bas wahi umrr bhar haaye
Jitni haseen ye mulakatein hai
Unse bhi pyari teri baatein hai
Baaton mein teri jo kho jaate hai
Aaun na hosh mein main kabhi
Baahon mein hai teri zindagi haaye
Sun mere humsafar
Kya tujhe itni si bhi khabar
Zaalima tere ishq ch main
Ho gayi aan kamli haye
Main toh yoon khada kis
Soch mein pada tha
Kaise jee raha tha main deewana
Chupke se aake tune
Dil mein sama ke tune
Chhed diya kaisa ye fasana
Oh muskurana bhi tujhi se sikha hai
Dil lagane ka tu hi tareeka hai
Aitbaar bhi tujhi se hota hai
Aaun na hosh mein main kabhi
Bahon mein hai teri zindagi haaye
Hai nahi tha pata
Ke tujhe maan lunga khuda
Ki teri galliyon mein iss kadar
Aaunga har paher
Sun mere humsafar
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