-Premeer SS *NEW*- OBY -Epilogue Pg 9 15/11 ||COMPLETED||

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priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

vrushu.. last day i was too lazy to login with my id and comment.. but you caught me na..

and awesome updates vrushu.. i loving this cute story.. ph's love at first sight <3 hayee.. and ballu toh itna intelligent nikala ..lol.. direct shaadi.. aww.. i cant wait to see their wedding now.. and post marriage scenes.. premeer and the kiddo preet <3

update soon yaaa

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sana.harshiti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Wow super duper update vrushu

Balraj was such a great father

] premeer is awesome can't wait for thier meriage

thank u vrushu for pm 🤗

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anitasharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Awesome update
balraj is very understanding
prem loves heer
waiting for next

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heena..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Wow vrushika awesome story ...love at first sight hmm so cute ...
Balraj is such a great father ...
finally they confess ther love n ready for the marriage... now I'm eagerly waiting for the marriage ... Plz update soon Thanks for the pm...

Edited by heena.. - 10 years ago

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luv.Harshiti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

I loved the shy and nervous prem

Awww.!!

Please update next soon

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AASUS

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Vrushu :P saw the reply. ty ji. Do u get scared reading my comment.😆
But I was right hain na Prem has reservation about whether Heer will be happy + she's his boss's daughter. If he makes this very obvious, Heer wouldn't really know what to do.
But the way you turned the story around, it looks smooth now. 😆

so pg 4
It was interesting confession part. Nice to know what happened before with Balraj & Prem.
Balraj is a coolest dad isn't he! 😎
The way Heer replied, about choti si family with Preet is so cute. ❤️ Could we have post marriage scene of Preet & Heer & Prem too.🤗

This was funny - I did giggle. 😆😆😆

Prem looked at her bewildered.

"Now don't give me that look. What do you think I have been trying to tell you since the past two months. And my dad thinks you are one of his best employees. I seriously thinks he need to re think on that. You can be so dumb at time." Heer said letting out a breath.

haiyyye PH hug too. i love the update. waiting for next part.

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tarannum6

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

WOWWW Awosome SS... aww preet is very very cute
loved premeer sceans... Balraj is a Awosome dad... Cant wait to read next part Please update soon :)

Edited by tarannum6 - 10 years ago

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Seema sharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Hi vrush plss update next now...

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classyandsassy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Balraj Maan ki Jai Ho😆 ... He is such a cool Dad😛 ... So this is love at first sight? & our Heer madam started to go office just to see Mr. Prem? This Prem is also too much😳 .. He can make girls do anything with his charm be it unknowingly😳 😆 .. & I agree with Heer .. Prem actually talk too much ... He could use this time for something else .. like romance shomance 😳😛😆