-Premeer SS *NEW*- OBY -Epilogue Pg 9 15/11 ||COMPLETED||

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello People!! Remember me?? Oh It's me Vrushika. :D I know its been like forever but then I had other things to look after. First semester is always short and then so many assignment and tests etc etc kept me busy. Although I couldn't comment on anyone's update, whenever I logged in I made sure to atleast like it. So my apologies to everyone! On Divya Di's suggestion I was suppose to read the new OS Series which is going on but didn't get time to. So I've to do that as well. I am yet to be done with my exams.. but I wanted to post this...

M here to post a Short SS.

It will be a short story. 5-6 Parts I guess. It will be updated every three days ! I want to finish it before my vacation ends coz then I get hell buzy..

INDEX

PROLOGUE-( Below)

Part 1- Page 3

Part 2- Page 4

Part 3- Page 7

EPILOGUE- Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
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ONLY BECAUSE OF YOU

Prologue

He woke up with the ringing of alarm clock. He turned it off and turned towards the other side of the bed to find his baby sleeping peacefully. It was yet another day, and he had to start with his routine work.

First things first, he decided to do the most difficult task of the day.

"Preet.." he called out to his baby brother who was 13 years old. Waking him up from his slumber was equal to climbing mount everest. His brother loved his sleep more than anything.

"Preet, bachaa.. wake up.. you have to get ready to go to school as well."

He saw him stirring in his sleep..

"Preet.." he called out again.

"Haan Bhai.. Just 5 more minutes.." his baby brother answered still half asleep.

He shook his head and smiled. He decided to get other things together for the next five minutes before he had to wake his brother.

**

He Prem Juneja, was 24 years old. He was the guardian of his baby brother who was 11 years younger to him. Their parents had passed away when Preet was 10 years old. And since then he had been looking after his small family, consisting of him and his brother.

He had a degree in Architecture along with a degree in Human Resource which he had done as a part time studying. However, the architect degree was not of any use right now as he was working at Maan Hotels and was a assistant to Mr. Sharma, head of Human Resource Department. Its not like he had not tried to get a job of his qualifications but people needed experience and he did not have that. He did not earn much, but whatever he earned was enough to run the small rented apartment that they lived in and to keep his little brother happy.

His brother was all he had, and his world revolved around him.

**

He came back to see Preet already awake.

"Good Morning Bhai.."

He ruffled his hair and wished his bother a very good morning.

After this they both got in their usual routine, of preet getting ready for his school and Prem working on Preet's backpack, morning breakfast and trying to get him ready.

There laid another tast ahead of him, and that was getting Preet into drinking milk. How that kid hated even the name of it.

**

"Preet.. jaldi bahar aja.. You have to drink this milk fast otherwise you'll get late."

"Bhai no, please,... not milk.. I am tired of telling you the same thing every day, I DON'T LIKE MILK."

"Yeah I hear it everyday, I understand also but you have no option but finishing this in next 5 minutes or else no playtime for you.."

"That's unfair Prem Bhai.."

"You my kiddo brother don't tell me what is fair.. come fast now and finish this .."

Preet huffed and drank the milk making all kinds of faces and prem just smiled at his cuteness."

********

"BYeee Bhai.."

"Bye..."

Prem said waving his hand at his brother whom he had just dropped at his school and started his bike to head towards the office.

****

Entering his office he went to the 17th floor which was his temporary office for the next 2 weeks. Mr. Balraj Maan who was the owner of the company, had needed some help with his work and his Departmental head had suggested his name. So he had been working with Mr. Maan for the past one week and it was to continue till the upcoming two weeks.

Mr. Balraj Maan was a kind hearted Maan and very down to earth. From what he had heard, his wife had passed away while giving birth to their baby. He loved his daughter very much.

On the very first day Mr. Maan had asked had generally asked him about his qualification.. Upon knowing that he had a degree in architect he had asked him why did he still work at his office, to which he had politely told him his explanation. Mr. Maan had given him that understanding look.

***

He reached the 17th floor and went straight to Mr. Maan's cabin.

Knocking the door he got the expected response and he entered in.

"Good Morning Sir.." wished Prem.

"Good morning to you too Prem. Finally you are here.. I've some very important work for you. My driver will take you to my home and my daughter will hand over to you an important file. Please get it for me. Its important and I can't trust anyone else." Said Balraj Maan with a pleading look.

"I shall go sir.. but your daughter.." asked Prem uncertain.

"Well don't worry about that I've already informed her." Balraj informed smiling.

"Okay then. I shall take your leave.."

****

He reached Maan mansion 20 minutes later. The security was already informed so he let him in. Unsure of what to do, he made his way towards the door and rang the bell.

"1 minute.. abhi ayi..." he heard someone say.

He looked towards the front yard and after a minute or so heard the front dorr being opened.

Turning behind he found a pair of almond shaped eyes staring right in his chocolate brown orbs. He didn't know what to say..

"Arrr.. well I am prem.. who Balraj sir had sent me to collect some file.. that's why.."

She gave him an understanding smile and telling him to come in, she went to get the file.

He looked at her while she went to get the file. Apart from the almond shaped eyes, she had beautiful button nose, long lush hair and a fragile form. She was a perfect example of simplicity in beauty.

His thought process was cut down by her coming back with the file.

He handed over the file to him with a smile and he smiled back now knowing what to say.

"Arr.. thank you.." he said and turned to leave.

"Its Heer.." he heard a say and with a confusing expression he turned behind.

"My name.. Its heer.. Earlier, there you had told me your name so it will be fair for you to know mine.." she said.

"Heer".. he said as if whispering to himself.

"Bye Heer"

"Bye Prem" she smiled again.


****

There is the prologue.. Sorry for all the typos.. in a hurry.. !!


love you all..


Edited by MSD_Vrushika - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Vrushu wow u surprised me :P Ty ji. So u hv holidays now? Good to know.
All the best for you.

Interesting title - dunno what to expect.
Prem Preet cute scene aw my fav❤️ I'm so happy you hv Preet's childhood bit in here.😆 I mean it would hv been great to hv Prem's childhood too and all other Kis Desh cast but but but ... at least we hv Preet's 😆😆 I'm grateful for that effort.🤗

Dialogues I enjoyed reading. Colorful post.⭐️ - it's nice treat for the eyes.😃
I hv a feeling Prem will eventually get to make use of his architect degree soon - I mean get to work in a project related to his field of expertise. I got this idea from the way Mr.Maan being sympathetic towards Prem's situation.
Heer's description is v.cute.😛
My fav part in this story and what stands out is Prem and Preet's relationship. Good job establishing lovely chemistry btw them in the initial scenes.
Best of luck for this effort and hope u'll hv a chance to finish what you've started.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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U knw wat vrushu from last 2-3 days i was craving for new PH story...and nw u completed my wish :D
While reading this muje kahin na kahin muje kaho na pyar hai..wali story lagi..i mean 30% of it..
Now lets way happen next..
Pls update next part soon..and dare u keep it pending like ur FF 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi vrushika
long time , how r u ?


thanks for taking time and writing :)

prem and preet's bonding is really cute :)

preet the adorable kid , sounds good :)

I share the same degree with prem yay :D

I hope balraj maan is not a possessive father , It will make things easier :P

Heer yay , So prem is attracted to his heer at first sight waah , Heer hai hi aisi ;)

What about heer ?

lovely start :)

Thanks for the pm

tc :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww...that was a lovely start...<3
already hooked to the story
eagerly waiting for the next part
thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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super duper prologue..
pls update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Are wah😃 ... U've started a new SS of Premeer ?? Since a long time I was craving for some new stories of PH .. & u fulfilled my wish ... The starting looks very promising👍🏼 ... looking forward to the next chapter 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow super duper start vrushu...<3
vrushu add me in ur pm list tooo
waiting for next update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello Vrushika!
Thanks a lot for your pm 🤗

I'm already addicted to this SS...plz update next part soon...Really loved Prem&Preet moments so cute and adorable especially that milk part reminded me of my own childhoold moments😳😆

Prem&Heer 1st meeting was adorable kya hua Prem ko? 1st meeting mein SPEECHLESS?😲 WAAAH

eagerly waiting for the next part Vrush 😳

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