NEW OS Last pt 9/ pg 10 (28/8) - Page 3

Originally posted by: -Sadi-

Chapter 3 and 4

Awesome parts loved that heer said her feeling and her pain to prem..and loved prem's gift

do continue soon

Originally posted by: AASUS

kp_yasharan😃

Cute banner😃

parts 3 & 4 on pg 3

Wow so emotional😒really felt for Heer. We can understand how she feel when Prem also didnt call her.

The bonding between PH is fab. They are cute and understanding. Prem promising to never leaving her alone😆he can't keep that promise but I guess he'll keep in touch.

we're beginning to see both PH pov's .

I liked your style of writing. It's different in a way - like reading a diary.

Please continue. You're doing v well with scenes and dialogues are pretty good.

Originally posted by: Premeer_Diwani

wow..lovely OS yaar..

cute story...

waiting to read next

keep writing..

Originally posted by: additi11

lovely update ..

waiting to read next

Originally posted by: Barbie-19

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Nice update</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Prem didn't call Heer n made her upset :(..i hope he keeps his promise this time</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">This OS is kinda different..i liked the way you explained their POV separately</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">keep it up⭐️</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">lets see what happens next</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">update soon!!</font>