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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv.Harshiti

Its cute.. please continue👍🏼

thank u 😊

next part comming up
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Thank you so much friends ffor hit like butten and lovely comment
HARSHITI12, sreyap92 ,premeermania, additi11 , AASUS , -Sadi- ,




PART : 2

******HEER THOUGHT, FLASHBACK ********

HEER : Its was my last semester in my
college life. But i was little sad because i didn't get to enjoy, my friends were
scared of me they never talked to me
freely because I had 2 bodyguards
who were always with me. They didn't
allowed anyone to come near me. That was strict warning from my parents. My parents Rishi Agarwal and radha Agarwal.
They are the owners of the big business empire so they didn't have time for me. Monthly, Once they come to meet me in my room and talk about my college that's it. While going back to their work they give me the card with lots of money which i
didn't need it. I just wanted their love and affection but due to their busy schedule they didn't get time to talk to me. I was the only one daughter to them. I was lonely
person as my parents were very busy and i was alone at home too When i was a kid i used to cry for my parents. why not even a single day they didn't come to me and talked after that i got used to. When i was
in my last year of semester of my architecture my parents come to me and told that they have fixed my marriage with some business man prem juneja , i told my parents that i don't want to get married soon . But my parents convinced and i agreed. I even didn't wanted to see his
picture and i didn't saw his picture at all. I use to hate him for, why he agreed but what do to my parents forced me , i didn't know the same person will become my life.

One fine day of our engagement party when i put the ring in his right hand
finger that time i saw him of the first
time and i thought oh wow!!!!!! he is
very handsome , dashing and very
hot, he was killing me at his look, he
has perfect body i just stared at him
but when my mom call me i came
back to reality that and we both
exchange the ring in each other's
finger and after sometime party got over and we didn't get chance to talk to each other as we were surrounded by many guests and our relatives, we just smiled to each other warmly, when he was leaving i just stare at him without blinking my eyes
and i again thought Why i didn't saw
his picture before, why i didn't try to
find how he looked and i missed many chances to talk to him to be near him, he looked at me he saw i was staring him before he left, he smiled broadly he winked at me and raised his eye brows and i was shocked and i immediately turned to other side and my cheeks turn red.

Few days has passed, he called me and we
talk to each other every day, i become
very happy when his number flash on my
screen before i picked up i smiled broadly.
We become best friends first and i thought he is not that bad. One day he went out of town for business meeting and he didn't call me for 15 days. I was very sad and waited for his call eagerly wanted to talk
to him, those 15 days were like a hell
for me. At that time i thought he is
also like my parents, always work comes first then everything, I was so depressed i again become lonely no one was there to
talk with me. As usual i went to college with my boring bodyguards around me. When i entered the college my friend Maher came running to me. I asked " kya
hua maher ? " and then she told me.

maher : yaar heer day after tomorrow
we are having campus selections, we
have to prepare CV and Submit them
today

heer : oh ok ( disinterested )

maher : Arey heer its a very no 1 company . We have to attend for interviews

heer : oh ok sure we will. With that we both
went to class

After college i went back to home. Actually i was very excited for the interview after talking to maher about although my parents didn't want me to do a job but i wanted to stand on my feet rather than depending on my parents or husband.

Next day i submitted my CV and i got
selected for the interview . I was very
very happy . I went home but no one
was there to share my happiness. I went
to my room and i sat on the bed. I
was staring at the my phone, waiting
for prem's call and tears rolled down
my cheeks continuously,

just then...

i hope friends u all will like it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kp_yasharan. 🤗Beautiful banner 👍🏼

pg 2 awesome ch. 😃
thanks for leet img us know about Heer
Sad her parents were workaholics 😕 weirdos
Hehe Heer didn't even look at Prem's pic 😆 she got surprised.
She is cute. Meher seem like sweet girl. Would love to see Heer and Meher :)
It's great Heer got selected for intw and excited! She seem independent and wanted to stand on her own feet. Hey but I'm confused - if she wanted to work then why she is bored now - at present time? Does that mean she never joined the company to work or had quit after marriage hmm
I enjoyed reading. Thanks so much. Looking forward to see next ch. 😃
Edited by AASUS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AASUS

kp_yasharan.🤗Beautiful banner👍🏼


pg 2 awesome ch.😃
thanks for leet img us know about Heer
Sad her parents were workaholics😕weirdos
Hehe Heer didn't even look at Prem's pic😆she got surprised.
She is cute. Meher seem like sweet girl. Would love to see Heer and Meher :)
It's great Heer got selected for intw and excited! She seem independent and wanted to stand on her own feet. Hey but I'm confused - if she wanted to work then why she is bored now - at present time? Does that mean she never joined the company to work or had quit after marriage hmm
I enjoyed reading. Thanks so much. Looking forward to see next ch. 😃

Thank u so much 😊 u have to watin till last part

next part i am postin 3 and 4 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: additi11

awasoem dear

waiting for next

Thank u so much 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Hey :)
read both the parts in one go
I so love this OS <33
Your lovely banners add to the beauty of it 👍🏼
Its really a treat from ur side ⭐️
Love this Premeer..Heer is a sweetheat..i love the texting scene..haha Premeer were cute in that 😆..Prem knows his Heer so well :D
I'd love to read more..
Thanks for writing it
Plz cont soon..
Edited by Barbie-19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barbie-19

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Hey </font>:)

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">read both the parts in one go</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I so love this OS <33</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Your lovely banners add to the beauty of it👍🏼</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Its really a treat from ur side⭐️</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Love this Premeer..Heer is a sweetheat..i love the texting scene..haha Premeer were cute in that 😆..Prem knows his Heer so well </font>:D
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I'd love to read more..</font>
Thanks for writing it
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Plz cont soon..</font>

Thank u so much for lovely comment .

next part i will post tonight
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u so much friends for hit like butten and lovely comment



part : 3

I went to home but no one is there to share
my happiness. I went to my room and sat on the bed. I was just staring at the phone , waiting for prem's call and tears rolled
down my cheeks continuously, jus then prem come there to my room to surprise me. But when he saw me crying he immediately come to me and cupped my
cheeks and asked me.

prem : Heer why you are crying ? What
happend ?

I just hugged him very tight and placed my
head on his chest wetting his shirt. I was so happy seeing him after a long time my tears become of joy. I couldn't control and
broke down completely. This tensed prem to the core. He kept on asking me what happened. But i was silent. Suddenly i
remembered that i was angry with him for not calling me. I broke the hug and my
hand formed into first. I started beating him on his chest lightly. Finally i asked him
why he didn't call me for so many days? And i said " U r also like my parents they have to take care of work then me and left me alone, u all think of work first then any thing in life. Now you also." I beat him again n again on his chest and told him " i
hate u prem.. " your work comes first
then me, i hate you . Then i again
hug him tight and sob on his chest he hold
me very tight After some time we broke the hug and he cupped my face and said

prem : sorry baby i was so busy i thought of calling u today but i wanted to surprise you. Sorry baby i m so sorry and i love u so much my sweetheart

Heer : what sorry you don't know how i felt so lonely i wanted to share many things
to u. My mom dad are not listening to me they are also busy in their own world even now u too.. Aur aap ka surprise gaya barme

prem : acha surprise barme jai, lekin pehle yeh toh dekhlo prem bought a beautiful diamond bracelet for her Heer looked at it and said " muje kuch nahi chahiye yeh
bhi nahi muje shirf apka pyaar chahiye aur kuch nahi .

prem : yeh bhi toh mera pyaar hai ( and tie a bracelet on her hand) aur mein tumse bohut pyaar karta hu

Heer: esa hai toh muhje phone kyu nahi kiya, kya aapne muhje miss nahi kiya ( looked into his eyes )

prem : nahi Heer aisa kuch nahi hain . I was so busy in buniccess meeting that i
didn't get the time to call you. But from now onwards i won't leave you
alone.

we hugged again very tightly After some time i broke from the hug and looked at
him and said " prem i don't want any
money , i just want you and your love. I am
so lonely prem i want someone in my life to share my happiness and sadness.

prem : i promise i will be there for you. From now you are not alone.

Heer : pakka ?

I asked cutely then he smiled at me and he
closed the distance between our lips. I was first shocked with his sudden act but i too started responding to him. He bit my lower lip and blood starting oozing out. He linked it and soothing my pain. I parted my
lips and he entered my mouth. Our tongue was playing to each other, his hands went under my top but we didn't break our kiss. His one touch made me.insane and craving for more. But i came back to my sense and whisper his name "prem
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part : 4

******** NOW prem'S THOUGHT ********

prem was coming back in the car when i come to meet Heer i couldn't tolerate seeing her crying my heart broke down into million pieces. Immediately went to her and asked her " what happened ?." and
she told me how she was feeling lonely without him I have decided not to leave her alone never in my life. I don't want her to suffer more, she asked me so cutely "
pakka ?."

I saw her innocence and believe on me. So i wanted to answer her differently so i took the bold step and kissed her and she too responded that made me go on and didn't felt to stop myself but then she whisper my name " prem ." i broke the kiss, we both came to our sense, she got from bed and moved near the window i ruffle my hair and smiled i moved near her and hugged her from behind n said sorry sweetheart i couldn't' control myself she blushed and i turn her to face me, when she faced me i cupped her face i kisses her forehead she closed her eyes And i promised myself that i will never hurt her in my life. We talked sometime on her bed, Heer was telling me her one week activity at once she came near me, and we.couldn't control ourselves We moved closer to each other and kissed forcefully, i make her lay on bed i lost it completely and i started kissing her furiously and
giving her love bites. After sometime, she
removed my shirt and start kissing me, we controlled our selves after that and after few minutes we laid facing the ceiling breathing hardly down on her bed. She placed her head on my chest and we slept
peacefully in each other's arm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter 2
awww... heer was so lonely and prem his not calling heer making her feel lonely once again..hope this will change soon

loved the part

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