NEW OS Last pt 9/ pg 10 (28/8)

hey guys how r u? i thought to start a new OS for Heer prem befre u get in confusion i also have shaan khanak version on this OS which is completed on that forum and Heer prem also my fav jodi 2 so i
thought should start here too :)

i hope u all like it it my romantic Os plss share ur views





U MADE ME COMPLETE

Part 1

She was pacing in herown room from
one corner to another corner waiting for his hubby. She wanted to share good news with him but he went to U.S.A for business meeting .

Heer called him to asked when he was coming back, prem's phone rang and he picked the call with grined on his face

prem : hello baby ( grinning )

Heer : keso ho aap, aur aap kaabh
araheho

prem : my baby... i am so sorry my meeting got extended so i have to stay here for more 2 days. Heer about to say
something but prem interrupt her

prem : i am very sorry baby i have to go now so will call u later. Bye baby love u and miss u so much ( than he cut the call )

Heer just stared at her phone and said "
prem neh mera phone kaat diya, mein
bhi Mrs prem juneja hu, mein bhi abh unse baat nahi karungi" then she slammed her phone on the bed and again started pacing in the room and said stupid (angrily ) She looked up and made a baby face and talke to God " dekha bagvan dekna aapne
prem neh kya kiya, mera phone kaat
diya uhnone Muje baat karne ka mohka
bhi nahi diya aur phone cut kardiya, Aane do unko mein baat hi nahi karugi unse,
Nahi nahi mein baat karaugi aur bohut datungi uhne.

" After some time she rested her head on her palm on the bed and took prem photo
and start to complain prem ekk hafta hogya hai aapko U.S.A jaake ,abhi taak nahi
aye ho. Mein apko bhohut miss karati hu prem ...( teary eyes and sad )Then at the
same time her phone cell beeped, first she got irritated than she took mobile and checked the message she smiled widely It was prem's message, She open it and read the message.

message.
prem : baby tum apne bagvan ko meri complain karna baand karo, Voh tumari baak baak nahi sunenge ( smiling broadly )

Heer was shocked and made an angry face
and reply " kya baak - baak mein
baak baak karti hu ?? "

prem : ok ok aabh tum gussa maat ho aur plz meri taswir leke complain maat karo.
Tum na meri tasver ko bhi nahi
chodti ... ( smiling n laugh while replying )

Heer just smiled and thought he is not around but how he knows her every little act and what she do, What she thinks ? She said to herself " I am so luky to have him in my life and thank u so much God to give me the best hubby in my life, he is my life, he loves me so much he changed my life
completely by filling a lot of love tear roll down her cheeks talking to herself prem mein apsebohut pyaar karti hu bohut
pyaar.

hey friends i hope u all will like it . if u all not like it tell me i will not write it i will stop hear.

PART : 1/ PG : 1

PART : 2/ PG : 2


PART : 3 and 4 / PG : 3

PART : 5 / PG : 5

PART : 6/ PG : 6

PART : 7/ PG : 8

LAST PART : 9 / PG : 10

Awsum,too gud plz countinue sooon

superb plz countinue soon😊

Its cute.. please continue 👍🏼

Originally posted by: premeermania

plz continue😊

thank u 😊

next part coming up

Originally posted by: biyaahmad

Awsum,too gud plz countinue sooon

Thank u so much next part coming up

Originally posted by: additi11

superb plz countinue soon😊

thank u so much next part coming up 😊

Originally posted by: -Sadi-

Cuteee :D

thanks u so much 😊

Originally posted by: AASUS

kp_yasharan. arre wah you're multi talented😎that's awesome.

Love this cute banner so like our precious PH😛

You chose a v meaningful title. Like this.

Haha Heer is so cute - liked her lil antics😆aww but she misses Prem.

y Prem had to cut the call and make her angry hmm

PH texting is cute and interesting. We saw Heer's thoughts a bit , wonder if you will elaborate more or you are gonna show Prem's thoughts.

Excited to read next ch.

Ty v much for writing. Keep it up.

thank u so much for lovely long comment. 😊

next part comming up