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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome story.
premeer is passionate made everyone fool 🤣 but meher is smart 😛
loved this one.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow awosome 2 parts :D
love it awosome and superb SS premeer and meet are so cute
pls post one more part :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow Selvy Di 🤗 Kya Mindblowing Twist👏👍🏼
Premeer no each other 😉... from college times😉
Premeer Love Birds❤️... successful in keeping their secret👍🏼
but Preet and Mehr found out it👏😆...poor Rishab and Ash🤪
Finally Prem and Heer got married 🥳
Thanks 🤗Thanks Thanks Selvy Di👍🏼 for the Beautifull OS👏
Selvi Di we Love❤️ you writing🤗please keep writing 😃
Waiting for moreee.
If you can please update other😭 FFs too as soon as possible

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Posted: 9 years ago
Seeing this corner after ages 😆 But I was reading two of ur stories in last few days Cute cute Heer and adorably sweet Prem. I read all ur stories many times now I can't count 😆
Haa update the other FF Rishton Ki Daastaan. What happens to PH there ?
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

Seeing this corner after ages😆But I was reading two of ur stories in last few daysCute cute Heer and adorably sweet Prem. I read all ur stories many times now I can't count😆

Haa update the other FF Rishton Ki Daastaan. What happens to PH there ?


Athi me too I read kismat Connection many time its my fav
plsss update Rishton ke daastaan
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Posted: 9 years ago
pleaseee please pleaseee please begging you...😭😭
Selvy Di Update na.🤗..please Rishton ki Dastaan...pleaseee
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Posted: 9 years ago

Mohabbatein


Heer playing with her bangles like a child. Teji scolded 'Heer, today is your marriage. You are behaving like a child.'


Heer fired back 'ha, i'm still a kid. I'm just 18. You forgot that.'


Teji gave a loving pat on her head. 'In this age you was in my womb. I got married at 16.' Knowing very well her girl will continue blabbering for hours she diverted her daughter attention. 'beta, get up. I want to have my child in bridal wear.'


Heer got up 'ma its too heavy. How long i should wear this?' Teji put black mark behind Heer's ear 'until your husband ask you to change.' Heer like kid 'ma please don't tell me to get permission for this'. Teji 'have to beta.' She smiled. Heer 'ma please. I don't want to go away from here.' Teji pat her cheek 'looking like princess. Your prince already at door.' She placed a kiss on Heer' forehead God bless you beta.' Hiding her tears she walked out Heer's room instructing few girls to stay with Heer. Heer pouted seeing her mother silently walking away.


Prem entered marriage hall and received by Balraj and Teji. He sat in mandap following pandits instruction. Lalit and Gay3 standing near Prem. Heer comes and sits next to Prem. He can sense her giggling under her head cover. being a matured 25 year old man, he is sitting with a calm face. she is very nervous doing every steps in rituals.

Girls asked Heer to sit on a bed and left the room. Finally Heer lifted her head and looked around. her mother had instructed to sit looking down. Heer turned her neck left and right 'OMG. Its paining. Finally i'm free.' She looked around 'WOW, what a beautiful room. Its big too.' She jumped out of the bed. She is about to fall. But managed 'this dress.' She walked around 'big tv. Big bed. Everything nice. Must be very rich.' She stopped 'is this a hotel room?' she shook her head 'no can't be. I did all those pushing and dipping leg.' She walked to big window. Looked outside 'big garden.' She sat on window frame 'nice. I like this.' She tried to keep her legs on frame. Failed because of her heave lehenga.'not possible with this.' She got down 'its going to be my coffee place from tomorrow.' She looked at framed picture of Prem on wall.

For the first time she is looking at him clearly. Everything went so fast she couldn't see his face properly. She walked towards Prem picture 'handsome.' She smiled. She looked around 'i want my picture here.' She heard 'ours' she jerked and about to turn back but she felt his hand encircling her waist. He placed his cheek on her shoulder. Words refuse to come out of her mouth. Her body felt like cold. She blabbered 'act actually.' He tighten his hug 'actually.' She refuse to talk further. He slowly turned her towards him. worst her lips went dry and her eyes refuse to move away as she is seeing him so close for the first time. he too stoo silent absorbing her as he haven't seen her that much closer.


He inched closer and about to place his lips on her forehead. With full force she pushed him and walked to bed. He is disappointed. She looked around 'where is my bag?' she found it near one corner. c'an i change my dress?' he is confused 'what?' she walked towards her suitcase this is very heavy. I can't manage with this anymore.' He smiled 'okay change.' she 'you go outside. I need to change.' he 'you can use washroom.' She 'dress will get dirty.' He 'it is not public toilet to get dirty.' She 'i hate changing in washroom.' He thought 'what is she saying?' he gets little irritated 'i can't outside now. Elders will think wrong about us' she 'i can't change infront of you.' he 'i'm your husband.' She 'that doesn't mean you can see me changing dress.' He is shocked and confused. She instructed him 'turn that side. Close your eyes.' he felt giving explanation to her is of no use. He turned other side. She took few minute to change into her night dress.


'Finished' she jumped on to bed. He turned and looked at her direction. He is shocked to see her dress all over the place. he sat on the bed 'what is this Heer?' she looked at pointed direction my dress. 'Ma will fold it later.' He 'Heer, you have to that here. Ma won't do that for you.' she 'why?' he 'we are married and you are in my house that is our house. Your mother won't come here to do all these work. You have to manage' she interrupted 'i won't. I'm very tired.' She lied down.

He helplessly looked at her and lied next to her. he put his hand around her. she pushed his hand away 'i wont' get sleep if someone puts hand on me.' she turned to otherside. He sadly turned off the light and went to sleep thinking 'how i'll manage this girl. She doesn't seems to be understood the meaning of marriage.' Tiredness of his body took over him to sleep.


Morning,

Prem opened his eyes and saw Heer sleeping peacefully. He looked at the clock which showing 6 as time. he sat leaning on back. He stretched his hand and took deep breath. He got out of the bed. He grabbed all her cloth on floor and dumped it on the couch. He went to washroom. He came out after taking shower. He changed himself into white kurta. Still she is in deep sleep. Knowing she will get scolding from his mother, he gently touched her 'Heer, wake up. It is 6:30.' She murmured 'ma 5 more minutes.' He understood her mood. He sat next to her 'Heer, wake up.' This time he shook her little hard so that she will feel the difference of touch. She jerked and got up 'oh I'm sorry.' he smiled 'good morning.' She 'good morning.' She jumped out of bed. He 'get ready fast. This is your first day in this house.' She ran towards washroom 'ha.' After few minutes she came out with water dripping hair. Her dress little wet. Sitting on bed he is staring at her beautiful face. He wanted to hug and give nice kiss on her face.

His thought disturbed 'come we go.' She is about to move. He stopped her by holding her hand 'wait.' She looked at him confusingly. He d'o you know my name?' she smiled 'ha. Prem Juneja.' He 'good. Call me Prem. Don't talk without any address.' She 'okay'. He 'again.' She 'okay Prem. Come we go.' He 'good.' He pulled her towards him. she straight away landed on his chest. Before she could realize the situation he started caressing her cheek with his lips. She tried to escape 'what are doing?' he 'loving my wife.' Unable to understand the new feeling raising up in her stomach, she tried to escape. Within few seconds she gave up her protest and stood silently enjoying his lips on hers. His hand caressening her back. She clutched his kurta top tight. He brushed his lips on hers. She shyly turned her face away which let him to kiss her beneath her ear. Unable to hold her feeling she started giggling. He stopped and looked at her blushing giggling face. Before he could proceed further they heard door knock.

Gay3 'Heer Prem. Come down for breakfast.' Prem 'ha ma.' He looked at Heer who is trying to hide her blushing face. He straighten his kurta. Then looked at her hair and straighten it. He also did some straightening of her dress knowing she will jump out of room without thinking about anything. He held her hand and came out of the room. She walked along with him looking around. He 'after breakfast I'll show you all the room in this house.' She 'it is really beautiful.'


Gay3 Prem, take Heer to some place for few days.' Heer quickly 'I want to go to my house first.' Gay3 smiled 'ha. Prem take her.' Heer like a kid 'come Prem we'll go.' Prem 'sure.' Gay3 'Prem, did you planned any place for honey moon.' Prem 'few places. I'll decide' Heer interrupted 'I don't want to go anywhere until I get my marks.' Her face turned pale and tensed. Gay3 smiled 'harrey Heer, why are you tensed so much. You will score nicely.' Heer like a kid 'I didn't do well.' Lalit walked to table 'which subject beta?' Heer 'all.' All burst out aloud 'what?' Heer 'ha. It was so hard. Stupid teacher asked all tough questions.' Prem 'you must have studied properly.' Heer 'all boring subjects.' Lalit 'Do you know Prem got first rank in his school secondary exams.' Gay3 'proudly state rank holder.' Heer 'I'm not that much intelligent.' Prem decided to pacify her 'cool Heer.'

Gay3 'why spoiling your mood now. Let the results come.' Heer heard her phone ringing. She answered 'ha Moni tell... what? Tomorrow... oh no.' Prem, Gay3 and Lalit heard this and sensed her result coming next day. Gay3 placed a hand on her shoulder 'relax beta.' Heer started biting her nails 'I want to go to ma now.' She got up. She turned and confused which way to go to her room. Lalit and Gay3 smiled. Prem teasingly 'looks like you lost path in jungle. Heer, come I'll take you.'

They went to her home. Heer entire day tensed. Balraj and Prem were chatting. Teji tried to calm down her daughter but she refuse to think anything away from her results.

Prem convinced her and came back with her to Juneja house. Sitting on bed Heer still biting her nails. He sat next to her 'don't bite your fingers.' She angrily 'I'm tensed.' He teased 'I know.' she lied down 'sleep not coming.' He lied next to her 'I know how to make you forget everything.' She 'interestingly how?' he 'come close to me.' he hugged her. Morning still fresh on mind, his touch took her up in air. She unknowingly snuggled into his hug. He lovingly kissed her ear 'how do you feel now?' she 'umm. Nice.' He tightens his grip around her and keep rubbing his cheek on hers. He adjusts himself against her and started kissing her neck. He rubbed her back lovingly. She slowly closed her eyes and drifted into sleep. He smiled looking at her angelic face.



Prem took laptop to check her results. She restlessly paces up and down in their room. He 'Heer, come. The site is open. number' She jumped next to him and started telling her number. She nervously held his hand closed her eyes. He 'congrats. Pass.' She slowly opened her eyes and saw the marks. She managed to clear all her subjects. She smiled 'uff. I managed.' He teased 'ha. You jumped out of well safely.' She kept her face sad 'I'm not intelligent like you.' He lovingly y'ou can. Concentrate. That is enough.' she 'Next time I'll try.' He closed laptop 'come we'll go and collect your marksheet.' She got up 'I'll go alone.' He 'how?' she 'no I'm going alone.' He looked at her surprisingly. She 'my friends will tease me for marrying so early.' He smiled 'okay. I'm not coming. I'll ask the driver to take you to your school.' She like a kid 'my friends will ask question about car.' He 'then'. She 'I'll go by auto.' He 'as you wish.' Internally he is not happy about her hiding marriage to her friends.


Gay3 questioned Prem about him not going with Heer. she is not happy about Heer's childish answers. Lalit 'you wanted a very young girl then you have to accept childish behavior of your bahu.' Gaya3 'I'll teach her how to be DIL of a Juneja house.' Lalit walked away 'I don't think it is possible. She seems to be child in everything. Very much immature.' Prem 'dad, she will be okay soon.' Lalit 'I'm watching her from the day we fixed your marriage. Every time she is doig something stupid.' He walked away 'your mother wrote your fate with this girl.' Gay3 'we can't mold a mature person. But she is innocent and will chage herself.' Prem sat in his couch with deep thinking.


Heer returned home in the evening. Gay3 looked at her 'had your lunch beta?' Heer ha ma. I had with my friends.' Without waiting for further question from Gay3, she rushed to her room. Prem busy in his laptop looked up and smiled 'got your marksheet.' Heer threw her hand bag and file in the couch and lied down on the bed 'ha. Got it.' He closed his laptop and sat next to her 'had good time with your friends'. Heer lied flat 'ha. All had good time in this holiday. Except me.' he 'no problem. We'll go to someplace. Where do you want to go?' she sat facing him 'london... No... usa... Sydney' he smiled. She why are you laughing?' he first 'we go to some cool place. Then we have life to go all over world.' She 'then Switzerland... no. I don't want to go too far. Umm... not now. Later.' He got up 'decide a place.' he walked back to couch to concentrate on her laptop.

She got out of bed and went to couch and sat next to him. she slide her hands around him. and rested her cheek on his hand. He 'what happened?' she 'hug me tight.' He closed his laptop and pulled her into his hug. She buried her face into his chest 'kiss me please.' He kissed her forehead 'what happened?' she pressed herself more on to him 'I feels good.' something uncomfortable happened to him. he felt her closeness towards to him is more of her reaction to a feeling of first touch of a man on her. he decided to stay calm and make her comfort instead of fueling her unknowing pleasure arising inside her. he caressed her head and slowly lifted her head to look at him 'what is your next plan?' she looked at him confusingly 'about what?' he 'studies.' she rubbed her head on his chest 'no idea.' she murmured 'please Prem.' he 'Heer'. she 'please make me fly.' he is helpless and don't know how to handle her. he is thoughtfully caressing her waist. she moved more closer to him and tilted her head to give him good view of her collar bone. he pressed his lips on her collar bone. she murmured 'its so nice Prem.' he felt relieved when his phone rang. she is in no mood to move away from him. he attended the call still holding her in his arms. she just played with his kurta button. he managed to release himself from her hand as his conversation extended for long time. she got up and walked to bed expecting him to returned to her after finishing his call. but he started working on his laptop ignoring her. she went to sleep after dinner as he continued his job.


Morning, he saw her getting ready. he decided to talk to her about higher studies. 'Heer, what is your favorite thing in your free time?' she walked to him and leaned on him 'I like to draw something on a paper.' he 'then join some drawing related studies.' she drew circle on his chest 'no'. he 'why?' she 'I hate studies. and i'll miss you.' he 'i'm not going anywhere.' she 'I know. but you will stay away from me.' he is confused 'i'm not understanding anything of your talks.' she 'listen Prem. i'm frankly telling my feeling to you. I like this pleasure. I don't want to study further.' he pulled her away from him and strictly 'you are studying Heer. I spoke to papa. he said you always wanted to design your own dress. fashion designing is best choice.' he walked to couch and pulled papers from his bag 'fill this. you are joining college soon.' she pouted sadly 'no Prem please.' he 'you are too young and don't waste your time and talent. do what I say?' she shook her head 'okay. but one condition.' he 'what?' she 'you shouldn't stop kissing me.' he got angry 'are you stupid? all the time talking only about kissing and hugging. first learn about the meaning of marriage.' she hugged him 'teach me.' he pulled her away 'first fill this application. I have business to manage. you need to grow up in your career.' he walked out of the room.


Heer wondered why Prem is so harsh towards her. Next few weeks he is busy in his work. he asked her to apply for her studies. he is always ready to take her to college but she refused and went alone. He is shocked to see her marital status in application as 'unmarried'. he is confused about her behavior. Gay3 and Lalit were firing in anger knowing this. but Prem managed to handle them. Prem's action gave more confidence to Heer and she turned more weird in her action. she never helped in any house work. she comes down eat and go back to her room and sleep or chat with her friends in phone.

After her first day in college,
Prem returned home from his office. She is sitting on the window frame. he changed his dress and walked to her 'how was the day?' she uninterestingly 'its okay.' he 'what happened?' she 'seniors did lot of teasing and ragging' he 'its all part of college life.' she 'I know'. she hugged him 'this is also part of life.' he hugged her back with a smile 'yes. I agree.' she looked at his face. he pulled his nose. she 'then why are you not allowing me to hug you.' he 'when did I say like that.' he brushed his nose on hers 'just to make you agree for higher studies I behaved little harsh.' she smiled. he kissed her cheek 'you are the only one have rights on me.' he took her to couch. she sat leaning on his shoulders. his hand around her waist caressing her 'you are too young to handle this pressure. I want to move ahead in slower phase.' she 'i'm not understanding anything.' he 'just listen to me. i'll guide you.' she shook her head 'okay.'




Edited by newt2007 - 9 years ago
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3 Years later,
Prem leaning in his office chair took a deep breath. He couldn't recollect what went wrong in his life. He agreed to marry Heer as she was selected by his mother. she is just 18 when they got married. He loved her so much. she is innocent and stick with him all the time. He couldn't understand her behavior only when she steps out of the house. to outside world she want to stay 'single'. why? he never got answer for that. is it her immature behavior or did she had any other motive behind this?

After Heer started going to college situation changed at home. she never showed any interest in household works. all the time sitting with book or chatting with friends on mobile created tension between his mother and Heer. He tried to explain her responsibility as DIL of Juneja house.

His mother anger brust out when she found Heer roaming outside with bunch of her classmate in a mall. She found Heer without mangalsutra. When enquired about it later in the evening, Heer angrily answered about removing her mangalsutra as soon as she steps out of house. it came as a big shock to all. Prem angrily slapped her. she started crying. Gay3 shouted in high voice. Lalit blamed Gay3 for chooseing such girl for Prem. In the end Heer threw mangalsutra down on floor and walked out of the house packing her things. Few days Prem tried convince her. but Heer seems to be childish and not ready to understand anything. Heer parents tried their part. all came to end when Prem parents and Heer Parents has their chance of fight and Heer decided to stay away from Prem forever. Prem too angry on Heer for insulting their marriage and his parents.

Since then Prem never thought about Heer. 3 years passed, he never felt like finding about her. today, unknowingly his mind wondering about Heer because of his mother's question about choosing another girl for him. his father suggested Prem get divorce from Heer.


Prem pacing up and down in his office room. he is questioning his heart. 'is it correct to divorce her?' he out through his office window.

Heer drawing something on a note. Prem walked in with a big smile on his face. He sat next to her 'what are you scribbling?' she angrily 'drawing'. he smiled 'oh I'm sorry.' she 'why are you telling sorry? I won't take it wrong.' he 'oh. its nice.' she looked at his teasing smiling face 'you are teasing me.' he acted innocent 'no. i' she jumped on to him and hugged tightly and pressed her lips on his cheek. he hugged her back 'finish your record Heer.' she shook her head 'no. please give me some kisses.' he 'sure. but I have something else for you.' she released herself from his hug 'what?' he got up 'wait for few minutes.' she restlessly waited until he changed into his kurta. he took one small box and handed it to her. she happily un wrapped the pack and saw beautiful earings 'is it diamond?' he nodded. she quickly changed her earings 'how is it?' he 'beautiful' she jumped into his arms 'thank you.' he hugged her back with a smile. she 'I love hugging you.' he 'why?' she 'it triggers my hormone.' laughed innocently.


His thoughts were disturbed by his business partner Preet 'Hi Prem, seems to be lost in something.' Prem 'just some FlashBack. why are you so late today?' Preet settled opposite to Prem 'Just went to see Meher. she wanted to buy some things for our marriage.' Prem 'purchase over.' Preet 'almost. ha I forgot to tell you something. She is starting a business.' Prem 'wow great. so you will be more concentrating on her business.' Preet 'no Prem. she strictly told me to stay away from her business.' Prem laughed.

Fiancee of Preet's talk remainds Prem something. As soon as Preet left his cabin, he opened his laptop and searched for 'Modern school of Fashions'. he browsed through several page of website and noticed Heer in Gallery page. she has won lots of awards in these 3 years. he thought 'she must have completed her course.' he smiled 'brilliant Heer.' he leaned back on his chair staring at picture of Heer's enlarged at his screen. he leaned forward and looked closely. she is wearing those earings 'is that mean she still has feeling for me?' he got up from his chair 'why cant I meet her once? she must be a matured girl now.'



Prem with a thoughtful mind got out of his office building and walking towards car. he stopped seeing a familiar figure. he called 'Heer'. she turned with a happy blushing face 'Prem' she ran towards him and stopped in front of him with a smile 'how are you?' he 'i'm fine. what are you doing here?' she blabbered 'I came to see you.' he is surprised. she 'I wanted to meet you.' he 'why suddenly?' she 'not suddenly. I use to come hear daily.' he is shocked 'what?' she 'ha. I watch you leaving in car hiding behind that tree.' he 'why?' she 'I won't get sleep without seeing your face.' he 'are you crazy?' she nodded 'ha. i'm mad.' she looked down. he 'okay get into my car.' he opened the door for her. he started the car. he parked it in lonely place.

Heer silent. Prem opened his mouth 'what is your plan Heer?' she 'don't know. but I want you. i'm missing you lot.' she got out of the car and started walking towards thick tree area. the road is deserted. he looked around 'where are you going Heer?' he followed her. she stopped and looked back at him. he 'do you want to live with me.' she hugged him tight 'I know it is not possible.' he hugged her 'possible. but you have to do few things.' she looked at his face 'what?' he 'are you ready to apologies to my parents? I forgive you.' she agreed. he 'let me talk to ma and dad first. then i'll take you home.' she nodded. she refuse to break her hug. he tightened his hug. she 'i'm loving your hug.' he smiled and placed few kisses on her cheek. he let her to stay like that until she felt like leaving. he knows convincing his mother and fathers is not a easy job.






Edited by newt2007 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is awesome...plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow amazing story 👏
Loved it!! heer is so Puerile.
But Prem heer are not together what happened between them?😲
Eagerly waiting for next part please continue soon.
Edited by bhagyashri12 - 9 years ago

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