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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg heer doesn't know meaning of marriage...she is so childish.. Prem slapped heer..heer and prem a part since three years ..this is very interesting...plz continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow Selvy this is a total surprise 😆
pg 19

Omg Heer is hilarious. Aww she's cho cute too.😆
Prem is sweet - hmm so under pressure Prem and Heer are separated.
I don't like Prem's parents at all - too interfering.
Why should they be annoyed if Prem doesn't mind Heer's kiddishness!?

Anyhow read the 2nd part. Fab glad Prem met Heer.
aww she hides behind tree and watched him everyday for 3 years 😲
That is incredible and wow Prem never noticed her till now 😲
Like the Premeer scenes
Looking forward to the next part 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wooow selvy this is awsome...👏
Plzzz continue soon...😳
Waiting for it...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wowww New SS 😃 Love Heer prem sceans I loveed it Love The Way You Write When I Read Your Stories I See The Sceans Playing In My Head Amazing SS Selvy di plsss contunue 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
superrr awosome ss
Heer: Ma will fold it later :p love it ...love prem heer sceans ...Please update next part asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mohabbatein

Part 2

Holding hands they walked towards car. Prem 'tell me why you came to office everyday?' Heer 'just like that. I feel like seeing you everyday.' he 'I won't chase you out if you comes to my cabin.' she 'i'm scared.' he smiled 'i'm not animal.' she tugged her left hand into his and leaned on to him 'i'm missed you very badly.' he covered her hand with his right palm and smile. she looked at her smiling 'what is the meaning of this smile.' he shook his head negatively 'nothing.' she bugged him to tell until they reached the car. he maintained smiling face. he opened the passenger front door for her 'get in. i'll drop you at home.' she got inside. as he started the car, she surprised him with a quick peck on his cheek. he 'shall we.' like a kid she 'yes.'

He parked the car two building before her house. she looked at him 'not coming inside.' he shook his head negatively 'not now. first i'll talk to ma and dad. then i'll come. until then don't tell anything to ma and papa.' she nodded her head like a obedient child 'okay. bye' she showed her mobile 'i'm using same old number.' he 'I have. i'll call you. bye take care.' she got out of the car and walked to her house. he started his car after he saw her entering into her compound.


Prem busy checking his mail before going to bed. Lalit and Gay3 walked in. Lalit sat next to him while his mother stood next to his bed staring at picture of Prem. Prem saw them and waited for them to open their mouth. Lalit 'Prem, did you think about your future?' Prem kept his laptop away and got up. he walked to his mother 'yes'. Gay3 happily looked at him 'I know you will agree to my decision.' Prem 'ha ma. i'm ready.' Lalit 'Gay3, tomorrow i'll tell out pandit ji to bring' Prem interrupted 'dad, please. listen to my fully.' Lalit and Gay3 confused. Prem 'ma. I agree to think about my life.' he looked at his father and mother once before walking few steps away from them 'i'm thinking of giving a chance to Heer.' Gay3 'what?' Lalit 'Prem, again you are taking wrong decision.' Gay3 'she may have moved ahead in her life.' Prem 'no ma. i'm confident.' Lalit and Gay3 to opened their mouth to explain. but Prem didn't give them chance 'please ma, give her a chance. I promise. she will be a good DIL to you.' Gay3 'I have no hope.' Lalit 'no Prem. it is not possible.' Prem 'dad. now she is grown up girl. I know she loves me lot. this is enough for me to change her.' he pleaded 'Please ma, dad.' after few minutes silence Gay3 'give me sometime to think about it Prem.' Prem agreed. Lalit 'Gay3, what is there to think about it?' Gay3 held Lalit's hand and dragged him out 'come with me.'


Heer is restlessly staring at her mobile for 100th time. she almost jumped in her bed when she received his call. she quickly attended the call 'what happened, did ma agreed?' Prem smiled 'no.' she became sad and silent. he 'why are you silent?' she 'i'm disconnecting' he 'hai. don't. listen to me.' like a crying baby, she 'ma will get angry. you cut the call.' he 'so you don't like speaking to me.' she 'I like. '. he 'then speak.' she 'ma won't like.' he 'you are not talking to ma.' she stayed silent. he broke the silence 'listen Heer. everything won't happen in a second. ma has agreed to think about it. give her sometime.' she unhappily 'okay.' he decided to cheer up 'okay listen. tomorrow morning take all your certificates and biodata.' she interrupted 'are you planning to register it in martimonial' he got angry 'shut up Heer. listen to me. take everything and come to bus stop near to your house. i'll come and pick you up sharply at 10.' she sadly 'okay.' he repeated 'what time?' she '10' he 'now smile and go to sleep. don't think about anything.' she slowly 'what should I tell about this to ma?' he 'tell you are going for a job interview.' she 'where? why?' he 'Heer, don't start your stupid questions now?' she 'why are you scolding me. I won't get sleep now.' he 'i'm not scolding you. i'm teaching you how to behave.' she 'okay thanks.' he 'now go to sleep. good girl. good night.' she 'good night. ummma' he smiled 'thanks baby.' she smiled. he disconnected the line. she slept thinking him calling her 'baby'. she kissed his picture in her mobile several times before closing her eyes for a peaceful sleep.



Teji is surprised to see her daughter getting ready like machine. morning Heer informed her mother and father about job interview. Balraj happy his daughter is planning something useful for the first time. Before leaving to his office he wished her for the interview. Teji is confused yet she helped her daughter.

Heer is happy to see Prem. happiness is visible in her face. he is also happy but sad because he couldn't give any good news to her. she didn't show any sign of sadness in her face. she quickly asked 'where are we going now?' he pushed his confusion aside 'my friend's fiance is owning a office. she needs a fashion designer.' she continued 'so you are recommending me to her.' he nodded 'yes.' he winked 'I think i'm not making mistake.' she smiled.


Meher teased 'Prem, I personally interview all candidates.' Prem 'as you wish.' Heer staring at them like a school. Preet 'see, Heer is already tensed.' Prem put his hand around Heer's shoulder 'she will be asset to your new venture.' Meher teased back 'lets check your confident'. Meher asked Heer to come with her. Prem and Preet settled back in Meher's office room.


Prem looked at Heer who is happily smiling at her. he 'so you got selected.' she 'no' he confused 'what?' he is about to find Meher 'where is she?' she pulled his hand 'appointed.' he is confused. she looked at him with her bright eyes 'she has confident on you. she didn't ask me to do anything. she straight away showed my seat'. he proudly smiled. she 'okay. i'm going to my seat.' he 'okay carry on. i'm going to office.' she 'will you come.' he negatively shook his head 'no..o..o' she sadly 'why?' he 'you concentrate on your work. i'll call you in the night.' she agreed.


Three month passed. Heer sincerely concentrated on her work and earned appreciation from Meher. Prem never came to pick up or drop her. but he never forget to call her in the night. from her talk he understood she is getting matured.

Heer checking her designs. she worked hard for last one month as they were getting new international orders. she closed the file and leaned back on her seat taking a long breath. she is feeling someone watching her. she looked around confusingly. she saw Prem leaning her cabin door with a proud smile on his face. she jumped up from her seat and ran towards him. she is about to hug him. she is shocked when he stopped her. her face turned like crying. she looked down for a second. quickly she managed 'how are you? why are you standing here? come sit.' she walked to her seat. he followed her. he sat opposite to her 'nice cabin.' she 'I must thank you for all this.' he shook his head accepting her thanks 'finished your work.' she 'yes. over. about to leave.' he got up 'come we'll go.' she got collecting all her things.

she sat silently in his car. he looked at her and smiled 'angry.' she shook her head negatively 'no.' she looked other side. he 'i'm sitting to your right.' she 'I know.' he 'look at me.' she refused. he pleaded 'Heer look at me.' she turned towards him 'what?' he 'looking beautiful.' she didn't respond. he 'now we are going to your house.' she coldly 'okay.' both remained silent until they reached home.


Balraj and Teji happily welcomed Prem and Heer together. Heer is confused. Balraj cleared her confusion. Heer happily 'did ma agreed?' Balraj 'no' she sad 'I know. she won't'. she ran to her room. Teji was about follow her. Prem stopped Teji and went behind Heer. he closed the door behind him.

she standing facing otherside. he touched her shoulder 'Heer'. she walked away. he pulled her into his hug. she fights back. he didn't leave her. finally she gave up and started crying in his chest. he 'Heer stop crying.' she 'I'm unworthy'. he cupped her face 'you are precious to me.' she is not convinced. he looked into her eyes. 'Heer Listen, I spoke to your papa. tomorrow i'm going to Delhi for a week. after that i'll take you to ma and dad. you apologise. then they will agree.' she 'I don't think'. he closed her mouth with her palm 'i'm with you.' she hugged him tight 'I can't live without you.' he caresses her back 'calm down baby. i'm not leaving you.' breaking hug he kissed her forehead. 'Listen, ma or dad will definetly visit you. behave normally and don't tell anything about meeting me.' she fearfully shook her head. he 'good girl.' he cupped her face and placed a getle kiss on her lips. she blushed. he teased 'enough for one week.' she 'no' he 'just wait for few more days.' both hugged.

Edited by newt2007 - 9 years ago
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Its Meher's Mehendi. Heer didn't want to attend this party. but Prem insisted her to go. She entered the hall thinking about Prem. she murmured 'i'm missing you.' she looked around that beautifully decorated hall. she felt like falling down. she opened her mouth like a kid 'OMG'. next second she became conscious and looked around like a lost kid seeing high class dressed people around her. she wanted to stand in one corner to hide herself from others. she fiddled her dupatta tensely.

She turned around hearing someone calling her name. she breathed a relief seeing a staff member. he came to her 'why are you standing here Heer?' he pointed to another direction 'come our staff members are there.' she looked at the pointed direction and found most of her senior post persons standing there. she followed him and joined the gang. she stood next to a female staff member. everyone having some drinks in their hand and chatting. she smiled.

He called a waiter and asked for drinks. He took a glass and handed to Heer. she looked at others. they all smiled at her. Heer looked at the color of drinks in her hand and others. looked different. he and others encouraged to drink it. she is about to drink but she didn't like the smell of the drink. she didn't drink. she remembered Prem's instruction 'don't drink or eat anything if you doesn't feel comfortable.' she decided to skip this drink. she have no idea how to keep this away. others were telling her to drink. she is helpless. she is about to drink again.

Just them a hand held her wrist. she looked at Gay3 standing next to her. Gay3 didn't give chance to utter a word. she took the glass from her hand and dragged her away. Heer followed 'ma'. Gay3 dragged her to one corner 'when will you learn? what is this' she showed her the glass. Heer 'ma. woh' Gay3 'shut up' she placed the glass and took Heer along with her.

Meher saw Gay3 coming with Heer. she called 'Heer come.' Gay3 signaled Heer to sit next to Meher and asked for mehendi cone. Gay3 placed a spot in the middle of Heer's palm and signaled another girl to continue. Heer forgot situation around her. she recalled her own mehendi ceremony. that time she was unaware of the reason for all these rituals. this time she enjoyed it. she blushed when the girl asked her love name. she shyly told 'Prem'. Gay3 noticed it silently.

Lalit looked for Gaya3. 'Gay3, where is Prem? He is suppose to reach now.' Gay3 'he already reached home. he will come in another half and hour.' he looked at the girl sitting next to Meher 'she looks like Heer.' Gay3 'ha. she is Heer only. I told her to put Mehendi on her hand.' Lalit 'why she is here?' Gay3 'she is working in Meher office.' Lalit surprised 'how do you know that?' Gay3 'morning Prem told me.' Lalit 'behind the screen so many work going on.' Gay3 'Prem loving her.' Lalit 'I'm dump here. you people are doing so much.' Gay3 interrupted 'when we get a chance to set right our son's marriage why should we miss that?' Lalit shook his head 'good. go ahead. hope she understands everything properly this time.' Gay3 'i'll take care.'


Heer looking at her washed hand. Hearing a knock she looked back. she saw Lalit, Gay3 and Prem standing in that room. Prem closed the door of the room behind them. He signaled to Heer telling her to apology to his parents. Heer ran to Gay3 and Lalit and touched their feet 'Please forgive me.' she blabber 'i'm a stupid. I made mistake.' Prem was like 'what else she is going to tell as she continued cursing herself for all the things happened. luckily Gay3 stopped Heer by lifting her up 'its okay Heer. we'll forgibe you.' Lalit warned 'if you make mistake again then i'll will not allow you in my son's life.' Heer promise 'I won't repeat mistake. promise.' Gay3 smiled 'okay I trust you.' she touched her head ' you stay here with Prem.' they moved out. before leaving Gay3 instructed Prem 'take her to shopping and buy some good cloth for sangeet and wedding. she is Juneja's DIL.' Prem agreed.


As soon as they left, Heer like a kid hugged Prem 'missed you'. Prem smiled 'me too.' he pulled her away and cupped her face 'I love you Heer.' he placed a kiss on her cheek. she snuggled into his chest 'me too.' he caressed her hair 'first we go out and inform this to papa and ma. then we go for shopping.' she agreed.

Heer loved next two day as Prem was with her all the time. In the night, Gay3 asked Prem to drop Heer at her home. Gay3 told until they find a good time and date they can't be together. rest of the time Prem is holding Heer. Heer liked the way Prem teaching dance in sangeet. during marriage Heer enjoyed and recollected her own moments. tears came out of her eyes. Prem put his hand around her waist and calmed her. she leaned on to him. she touched her neck sadly. he took her away to their room.

Heer stood silent in his arms. Prem caressed her back. she murmured 'I made mistake by throwing that sacred thing.' he pat her back 'don't worry. i'll tie it again in your neck.' she blabbered 'i'm stupid.' she kept on blabbering. he cupped her face and captured her lips. he started kissing her. first she didn't know how to reciprocated. soon she responded. she melted in his mouth. her hand tightened around him. they started breathing heavily. they broke up. he hugged her tight and breathed in the crook of her neck. she moaned as she placed feather kisses on her neck. he squeezed her body more close to him. she threw her head back. and her breath visible in her throat as her chest started breathing up and down fast. he placed his lips on her throat. she moaned his name holding his hair tight.

He realized their state. he slowly started pulling up. she is still high and refused. he whispered 'wait for few more days Heer.' she pulled his head back on to her chest 'Please Prem.' he hugged her into his chest 'Heer listen to me. this is not a place. time and place matters. Dad and ma are waiting outside.' she pulled away from him with a sad face. he teased 'i'm not going anywhere. we have one full life.' she shyly smiled. he smiled 'okay straighten your dress. we need to go out to party.' as she straighten her dress and hair, he too helped her.



A week later, completing all rituals Heer entered Prem house as DIL. Prem always enjoyed her innocent mistakes and corrections. she always asks stupid questions for everything. Prem always enjoyed answering her stupid questions.


Edited by newt2007 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
wowww AMAZING Update.. loved it ..
love premeer sceans ..
Eagerly waiting for next part
Please update soonn
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Posted: 9 years ago
Always ready to read all stuff of premeer hehe lovely update
Waiting for the next part⭐️


Next part was realy cute & innocent loved it selvy
Great job 👏
There a big hug for you 🤗
Edited by Princex178 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wowww Super Awosome
love it
Premeer sceans haaye 😳
pls update ASAP

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