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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Fatima
So Meher was wearing lehenga while running - even that's so heavy so I'll stick withy original imagination of sofa scene.
Ooh we may hv spy / thriller scenes hm - let's see how it is.
Na I'm interested in full spy story. It's ok - u hv this in back of your head and I'll just think something will come out someday :P
But I'm sure all your other readers will be ecstatic knowing your upcoming story after this.
ttyl for now and will chat later.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS


Hi Fatima
So Meher was wearing lehenga while running - even that's so heavy so I'll stick withy original imagination of sofa scene.
Ooh we may hv spy / thriller scenes hm - let's see how it is.
Na I'm interested in full spy story. It's ok - u hv this in back of your head and I'll just think something will come out someday :P
But I'm sure all your other readers will be ecstatic knowing your upcoming story after this.
ttyl for now and will chat later.



What fatima is coming up wid another story...
Am i dreaming😉😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
I think by now, you must be used to my random disappearances.
But yeah, life gets busy and im honestly just a lazy person when it comes to IF 😳
But, I've finally caught up with reading all your chapters and I AM LOVING IT! 😃
Okay I guess I'll kind of start where I left off - Meher about to get married to that jerk. In one of the chapter precaps your wrote "Meher's Marriage." You have no idea how happy and relieved I was when the marriage actually did not happen. I had been afraid that in a tragic twist of events you might actually have made Meher get married and her husband would either die/abuse her or she would have some sort of extra-marital affair with Preet or something. Yeah that precap really misled and freaked me out. 😳
But of course, I should have known, Fatima loves Preet and Meher a little too much to put them through that. ;)
Proud of Meher for refusing that marriage and must say, Meet had quite an unusual second meeting. ;) Silly Preet actually thought she came all the way just to assist him in his lies
Absolutely loved the Gaurav - Meher interaction, her sweet-talking him with "bhaiyya bhaiyya" was just so funny 😆 - could totally imagine the sorts of facial expressions Preet would have been making at seeing their bonding! 😆 You know, I actually really like Gaurav. Him and Preet are hilarious together and its good to have more characters in a story than just the two main leads. 👍🏼 He really adds to the story!
Moving on, thank god Meher finally told Preet the full truth. His rudeness and indifference was really starting to tick me off! But you know, I kinda like that about the Preet in this story...he kinda pretends to be all tough guy, but I feel like hes got a very soft interior and I cant wait for all his tender feelings to come out 😉
In fact, as annoyed he pretends to be with Meher and the whole "fake wife" business, I can already sense him starting to enjoy it. 😛
But yo, that last chapter where he knew about that guy who was set up by Rishab to go after Meher, did surprise me! I wanted to think that all his anger was real! But wait, maybe it was? See I know what you are trying to do Fatima! 😛 You are sort of making it so that Preet's feelings for Meher are sort of a mystery to him and to us with slight hints that they are developing. ;) And I'm loving that too!!!
Im wayyy tooo excited by your precap so pleaseee update sooonn!!!
Love yaaa <3
Edited by xxDaydreameRxx - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS


Hi Fatima
So Meher was wearing lehenga while running - even that's so heavy so I'll stick withy original imagination of sofa scene.

Well...she wasn't the bride...so the lengha shouldn't be too heavy 😆

And even if she was...I wanted Preet to catch her...😉

Ooh we may hv spy / thriller scenes hm - let's see how it is.
Na I'm interested in full spy story. It's ok - u hv this in back of your head and I'll just think something will come out someday :P

Ah...but for that...I have to think of a good case plot first. Will seriously think about this one.

But I'm sure all your other readers will be ecstatic knowing your upcoming story after this.
ttyl for now and will chat later.



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rhea_401



What fatima is coming up wid another story...
Am i dreaming😉😳


No you are not dreaming...😆

I do have a fab idea for a story...and I have a title...Ishq Bulava.
I love that song.
Other than that I have a rough outline of where the story is going to go...but that will come much later. Right now I have to focus on Jab We Met.

By the way...are exams over?
When are you going to make me happy with an update? 😈
Edited by ummesulaiman - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

I think by now, you must be used to my random disappearances.

But yeah, life gets busy and im honestly just a lazy person when it comes to IF 😳

Yay!! You re back...and with a rocking update of your own no less

But, I've finally caught up with reading all your chapters and I AM LOVING IT! 😃

Thanks Ranjana...🤗

Okay I guess I'll kind of start where I left off - Meher about to get married to that jerk. In one of the chapter precaps your wrote "Meher's Marriage." You have no idea how happy and relieved I was when the marriage actually did not happen. I had been afraid that in a tragic twist of events you might actually have made Meher get married and her husband would either die/abuse her or she would have some sort of extra-marital affair with Preet or something. Yeah that precap really misled and freaked me out. 😳
But of course, I should have known, Fatima loves Preet and Meher a little too much to put them through that. ;)

No no...I'm not into tragedies you know...😆

Proud of Meher for refusing that marriage and must say, Meet had quite an unusual second meeting. ;) Silly Preet actually thought she came all the way just to assist him in his lies

Yeah...the fact that she was in a wedding dress should have been a dead give away 😆

Absolutely loved the Gaurav - Meher interaction, her sweet-talking him with "bhaiyya bhaiyya" was just so funny 😆 - could totally imagine the sorts of facial expressions Preet would have been making at seeing their bonding! 😆 You know, I actually really like Gaurav. Him and Preet are hilarious together and its good to have more characters in a story than just the two main leads. 👍🏼 He really adds to the story!

Gaurav is a great friend.
Moving on, thank god Meher finally told Preet the full truth. His rudeness and indifference was really starting to tick me off! But you know, I kinda like that about the Preet in this story...he kinda pretends to be all tough guy, but I feel like hes got a very soft interior and I cant wait for all his tender feelings to come out 😉

Exactly...see you understood where Preet's coming from.

In fact, as annoyed he pretends to be with Meher and the whole "fake wife" business, I can already sense him starting to enjoy it. 😛

Yes he is...😆

But yo, that last chapter where he knew about that guy who was set up by Rishab to go after Meher, did surprise me! I wanted to think that all his anger was real! But wait, maybe it was? See I know what you are trying to do Fatima! 😛 You are sort of making it so that Preet's feelings for Meher are sort of a mystery to him and to us with slight hints that they are developing. ;) And I'm loving that too!!!

Ah...see you are a great writer...so you've got this all figured out...😆

Im wayyy tooo excited by your precap so pleaseee update sooonn!!!
Love yaaa <3


Welcome back Ranjana...and thanks for leaving your feedback 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

OMG Fatima 🤣... I'm always left in splits after reading each of ur updates🤣 ...

This chapter was something😆 ... I had a inkling that Meher will come up wearing something that'll remind Preet of Aunties😆 ... So I was right ... & loved the way how Preet made her dress appropriate for d club 😉.. This was beyond my expectation😳 ..

Truth to be told .. I was expecting our hatti katti punjaban to do something when that guy was forcing her for dance😆 ... knowing Meher ... I was very much expecting that Meher will become the Hero here & start fighting him 😆... but for a change Mr. Preet came to rescue 😛... which was actually a set up by Rishab ... but later u fulfilled my wish by showing Meher beating Rishab ... Oh one of my wishes came true here😃 ... during Kis Desh time I so wanted that someone will go & beat him black & blue😆 ...

"Just be urself (dumb)" this dialogue was hilarious 🤣... loved the whole song sequence ... & loved the sequence after the song more .. yaar u r becoming a Tv serial director ... so close ... yet so far😳 ... I thought today a kiss will definitely happen😳 ... but no ... at the end u had to leave us yearning for more ... don't u??😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mou_farah

OMG Fatima 🤣... I'm always left in splits after reading each of ur updates🤣 ...

This chapter was something😆 ... I had a inkling that Meher will come up wearing something that'll remind Preet of Aunties😆 ... So I was right ... & loved the way how Preet made her dress appropriate for d club 😉.. This was beyond my expectation😳 ..

Necessity is the mother of invention...so Preet invented 😆


Truth to be told .. I was expecting our hatti katti punjaban to do something when that guy was forcing her for dance😆 ... knowing Meher ... I was very much expecting that Meher will become the Hero here & start fighting him 😆... but for a change Mr. Preet came to rescue 😛

Meher doesn't really go around beating up on strangers.

Yes she stomped on Viren's foot when he was bothering her in the elevator, but she knew him.

And she beats up on Preet all the time, but that's because she knows he's too shrareef to fight back 😆

But in the club it was this big muscular guy...and he had her in his grip. She was struggling to get away...but he was a bit to much for her.

Luckily Preet came to her rescue...even though it was all a set up. 😆


... which was actually a set up by Rishab ... but later u fulfilled my wish by showing Meher beating Rishab ... Oh one of my wishes came true here😃 ... during Kis Desh time I so wanted that someone will go & beat him black & blue😆 ...

Yeah...I think in Desh we all wanted someone to wipe that smirk off Rishap's face 😡


"Just be urself (dumb)" this dialogue was hilarious 🤣... loved the whole song sequence ...

Well...I had to give Meher a chance to get back at Preet.


& loved the sequence after the song more .. yaar u r becoming a Tv serial director ... so close ... yet so far😳 ... I thought today a kiss will definitely happen😳 ... but no ... at the end u had to leave us yearning for more ... don't u??😳


You're about the only one who thought Preet should have kissed her 😆
I think if he had...Meher would have slapped him. Because she might have mistaken it for him getting back at her for the way she treated him during the song sequence.

As I said in my response to another reader...I want Preet to kiss her...but only if he's sure about her feelings for her. And also because she wants him to. 😳



Thanks for reading Mou 🤗
Edited by ummesulaiman - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ummesulaiman



Thanks for reading Mou 🤗



@bold ... U got me wrong😛 ... even I don't want him to kiss her just now😛 ... Meher's slap will come later😆 ... he needs to realize his feelings 1st ... I was stating d fact that like TV serial directors u r also making us yearn for more after watching an intimate scene ... which makes us say ... Are yaar ... can't they just kiss ???😳😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mou_farah


@bold ... U got me wrong😛 ... even I don't want him to kiss her just now😛 ... Meher's slap will come later😆 ... he needs to realize his feelings 1st ... I was stating d fact that like TV serial directors u r also making us yearn for more after watching an intimate scene ... which makes us say ... Are yaar ... can't they just kiss ???😳😆


Ah! Okay okay...I got you now.

Well In that case...
I guess I am a bit of a fiend now am I not? In a TV serial director kind of way...😈 😆

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