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brainychild92

@brainychild92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

by the end of it ( especially at his last dialogue) i had a goofy smile on my face!!!!!! awww!!!! thanks for a great story!

Edited by brainychild92 - 12 years ago

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Fatima

@Fatima_Q

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: brainychild92
by the end of it ( especially at his last dialogue) i had a goofy smile on my face!!!!!! awww!!!! thanks for a great story!

I'll take that as a complement...😆

Thanks Brainy 🤗

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sushantfan

@sushantfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

this is awww cho sweet😳 ❤️

lovely story👍🏼

love each n every nuance of it⭐️

looking frwrd to somethin more frm ur side..

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

wow great story to a great ending
thanks for the pm

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bhagyashree2011

@bhagyashree2011

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

thanks for the pm

awesome update and a perfect ending

u always do justice to ur writing i loved the way preet introduced himself to his son

but now again i am feeling sad as it has ended

please please promise me that u will be back

and that too with a grand new story of meet and if possible with a ff

sorry for the late reply i had my net problems on friday

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ProudSushantian

@ProudSushantian

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: ummesulaiman

Thanks Taz 😃

Huhn? You want another Meet SS? 😕

I better put my thinking cap on again fast...😆

what to do fatima...yeh dil maange more😆

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Shikha

@lunza

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

lovely end to such CUTE ss !!

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Nikita Lakhe

@nikitagmc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: ummesulaiman
"Um...Meher", said Preet.

"Yes Preet?" said Meher.

"I don't know how to change a diaper", said Preet.

"It's okay Preet", smiled Meher. "We'll learn together".

The most beautiful part of the whole story- if I had to write about the story in short, I would just quote these four lines. They sort of summarize everything, and explain the characters too.

Loved the story! Thankyou so much for this Fatima.

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AASUS

@AASUS

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Hey wow
FB scenes told us how Meet learned to appreciate having a baby.
Cute scene of Meher running into her sis and niece at medical ctr.
Midnight craving of Meher and Preet's reaction was hmm - He usually tries to look at things practically so he was trying to make do with what was available. He was learning about the changes gradually so I guess later he got better at taking care of Meher.

It's great family was there in hospital to support. Prem was quiet but helpful. It was shocking the way nurse updated Preet - he really was surprised . But that was not v nice - even though it wasn't intentional. The way Preet informed Heer about new baby is nice. Preet introducing himself to his son was the best in this update.

Thanks and keep up the writing.

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Fatima

@Fatima_Q

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: bhagyashree2011
thanks for the pm
awesome update and a perfect ending

u always do justice to ur writing i loved the way preet introduced himself to his son

but now again i am feeling sad as it has ended

please please promise me that u will be back

and that too with a grand new story of meet and if possible with a ff

sorry for the late reply i had my net problems on friday

Thanks Bhagyashree...🤗...Thanks to you and everyone else who went on this little journey of Meet along with me.

I'm glad everyone liked the SS...It's no surprise to anyone that I love this jodi to bits...so yes...I hope to be back soon with a new story written specially for Meet...

Edited by ummesulaiman - 12 years ago

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