Hamari Adhuri Kahani ~ff~ (PH) Part 14 page 30 - Page 18

Originally posted by: kiran_28

Awesome update dear👏 - thanks alot

I love the song sequence between Premeer and their little romantic session😳 - yeh they always are romantic together

But i hate this Sid..how dare he touched Heer😡 thank god that prem came to the rescue 😊 - well he is corrupted enuf to do so and yes the hero always comes at the right time

And in present Sid was regretting about his action 🤔...lets see what gonna happen nextn😃 - yeh let's see

And sid made Kiran against premeer's relation 😳 and now both Kiran and Sid going to play a trick
so premeer..ufff Now i really hate them 🤢 - yep the two villains in Premeer's life

at the last i love the way prem defined his love for heer in front of kiran😳...he's dailoge was awesome ⭐️ - that's our Prem

Now it will be interesting to see that what going happen next 😃
great job...keep it up👍🏼 - thanks very much

now eagerly waiting for the next update specially for premeer fb scenes 😳
pls cont soon
Thanks for PM 😃 - ur welcome
Love ya 🤗

Originally posted by: AASUS

Hey Kiran 🤗

pg 27

gripping ch. wow.

PH scene was v. sweet. - thanks a lot for loving it

whoah Sid omg is he awful or what. Can't really believe he's Prem's younger brother 😲 - yes he is the bad guy of this story

Kiran is so ruthless like Bauji at the beginning of the show. - yes very similar indeed

These two are so disgusting. oh man why couldn't these two die instead of Prem lol - they were very materialistic

Now I'm afraid, did they kill Heer 😭 I can't believe, what a tragedy.. - hmmm it shall be revealed further on

As usual this was wonderful update Kiran. oh man you're so good at writing and I want to see what happened next. - aaw thanks a lot for the appreciation

I'm happy Preet cared for Prem at least sigh. Why did Prem had to live that house with his horrible bros :( - truly Preet is his only well wisher

Pretty pls. I would like to see if Kulraj is from rich family or not. How did Kiran agree to marry her. And more importantly how did Kulraj agree for it. That puzzles me. I mean she's so nice like Prem 😕- her story will also come in between the flashbacks

Show some of Kulraj scene too. This will help us understand what this family is like.

So many mysteries

1) is how Kulraj Kiran end up together

2) Didn't Preet know what Sid and Kiran are up to. Did he also blindly believe his bros like Prem did?

3) How exactly Heer got trapped or was her father threatened by Kiran or something as he is their employee?

4) where were Prem's rest of friends and Heer's friends when all this happened and especially when Heer Prem were separated. - all shall be revealed as the story goes on

Can't wait. Pretty pls continue *showing goofiest grin*

Thanks and for you 😃

Originally posted by: iheartChai

What a fantastic update! - thanks a lot for loving it so much

So in the beginning Sid and Kiran were against Prem and Heer's relationship. I can't wait to find out how and what happened to break Prem and Heer apart and how Kiran will find out the truth that Sid manipulated everyone and how Sid gets the reality check he needs. Seriously, I can't believe he tried to hurt his brother so much like that 😡- yes the two brothers were at dirty work. surely everything will reveal slowly

I'm sorry for posting so late...I haven't been very active on the forums lately 😳 - ur more active than me hehehe

By the way could there be a little more English in the next update? I'm not Indian so I can't understand Hindi...I'm a little lost in the dialogues...I got the jest of some of the things because of the English you used to describe the situation and the replies from other forum members to your posts. -awww yeh sure ill try but u c i find it easier to write in hindi sometimes

Anyways, can't wait for the next update. Thank you so much for posting. For awhile I was scared you stopped writing. - i cant be regular but i will try and post and finish this fic

Originally posted by: -Sadi-

WOW this is getting interesting
Loved it