Hamari Adhuri Kahani ~ff~ (PH) Part 14 page 30 - Page 16

Originally posted by: -Sadi-

Loved preet in this part. aesome update.. i think its kulraaj who called additi heer.. looking forward to the next part eagerly..



Thanks for the pm and do continue soon..

take care

Originally posted by: Mfm_06

awsum part ... Can't w8 2 read d nxt part :)

Originally posted by: kiran_28

nice update yaar
i really loved the fb scenes - thanks alot for loving it so much

but u have stopped on the very intrstng part - yeh to keep the interest rolling

is heer is back??? - lets see what happens

pls cont soon - yes i shall do very soon
thanx 4 pm 😃 - ur welcome

Originally posted by: AASUS

Kiran awesome chapter 😃 - thanks alot for loving it so much

Meher getting all emotional in FB scene was so sweet. She feels the connection with Prem and his thoughts in a way.- yes she also sees him as her older brother

Preet Meher friendship is beautiful. - yes they are very good friends

You're revealing the past of Prem through everyone's FB - I was getting impatient when you did that at the beginning but I'm used to it now 😆 It doesn't bother me so much. - hehehe well that way u can see everyone's point of view

Prem's other bros and their guilt of not being there for their brother is v. sad. We could relate to how they may be feeling. - surely they feel very bad now

You did a great job. Thank you so much. - thanks for loving it so much

Can't wait to see what will happen next and how Additi will get to solve the problem. - surely lets see

Originally posted by: seema.sharma86

I love ur all chapters of this ff pls update sooon dear

Originally posted by: harshitideewani

thanks😊 for all the updates and pm

awesomee 👏lovedd it, getting interesting😉

pleasee update as early as possible.

Originally posted by: Barbie-19

well written FF..plzz cont soon

Part 12

Additi halted when she heard someone from behind and she turned around. "Excuse me, can I help you?" she found a man standing there in front of her who seemed like he had seen a ghost.

He couldn't say much as the shock of seeing her was too much to take. "I can't believe I'm actually seeing you Heer. Tum zinda ho?"

"I'm sorry but I think you're mistaken sir." She moved a piece hair behind her ear and then looked at her watch. "Mera naam Dr. Additi Gupta hai, Heer nahi." She saw the man was still staring at her and she felt uneasy. "Please excuse me kyu ke mere patients mera intezaar karahe hai." After have had said that she left to go inside her office leaving the bemused man outside.

He still kept wondering about what happened and he couldn't believe his eyes. His eyes were playing tricks on him. It had to be that as what he thought he saw couldn't possibly be true.

"Kiran bhaiya aap yaha kya karahe hai?" Preet saw Kiran near Additi's office and he came over to check out. He saw how lost Kiran looked which worried him. "What happened?" he shook him.

That took Kiran out of his thoughts and he looked towards Preet, still looking lost however. "Preet wo zinda hai."

It was Preet's turn to be lost. "Who are you talking about? Koun zinda hai?" He saw Kiran pointing some place in front but he couldn't see anybody and then his phone beeped. "I'm sorry bhaiyya, let me take this then I'll get back to you." Saying that he left from there and Kiran still stood there in a daze. He wanted to go inside and find out if he saw the right thing but then he changed his mind and walked back towards the ICU. He still walked in his thoughts and Sid also found it odd.

"Where did you go? I was looking for you everywhere." Sid shook Kiran.

"Sid wo zinda hai."

"Koun zinda hai?" Sid could feel the hairs at the back of his neck sticking up indicating that something was going to go wrong. "Bhaiya what are you talking about?"

"Heer…Heer zinda hai." And Kiran just fell down on one of the chairs and put his head in his hands.

This bit of news certainly made Sid equally shocked. "This can't be true bhaiya. Aisa kese hosakta hai? I mean hamne khud Heer kee laash dekhee thi. She died in front of us to phir…" he brushed his fingers through his hair not being able to think straight.

Back inside Additi's office she sat down with her head in her hands as she also kept thinking about that guy who had looked so lost when he saw her. For some reason she felt as if she knew him but it was not possible as she had never met him. Perhaps he had been one of her previous patients so how was she to remember all of them. But why was he calling her Heer? Her cell phone shook her out of her thoughts and she searched around on her table for it. "Hello?"

"Hello Additi how are you?" a sweet motherly voice sounded through the receiver.

"Hey mama, I'm fine…" she was really glad to hear her mother's voice. "…yeh happy Holi." She continued to chat with her about here and there things. "…I'm sorry mama I won't be able yo come to Malaysia…ha…yes there was an emergency case two days ago so I am stuck…" she talked more with her mother and then her father came on. "Hi dad." She paid her respects to him. "I'm really sorry I can't come."

"Additi beta tum jaantee ho hum tumhaara kitna intezaar karte hai her saal sirf inee kuch dino ke liye. The whole year you stay away and still you…" Her father Prakash Gupta sounded disappointed as every year he waited for that day when he would meet his daughter.

"I know dad and I'm really sorry." She knew he felt bad but she was stuck so what could she have done. "I promise dad ke me aapki shaadi ki salgirah pe zaroor aaungi."

"Is baar tum hame waado do Additi." Prakash sounded adamant.

She shook her head, "Dad please me kehrahee hu na…" he didn't agree and wanted her to agree or else. "Okay dad as you wish. I promise I'll come for your wedding anniversary." She grinned, "ab to khush hai na aap?" Prakash seemed happy and just wished her to stay happy all the time.

"Excuse me Dr. Additi but there is an emergency." A nurse came running in informing her.

Additi looked up and then quickly cut the phone, "Dad I need to go I'll call you again later…ok bye." She quickly put the phone down and ran out of the office with the nurse to her duties.

Sid did still not believe what Kiran told him. It couldn't be true and he tried to reason with him that perhaps he saw someone else and thought it was Heer. It couldn't be her. It just couldn't. To some extent Kiran did begin to agree with Sid and simply just went back to sit inside Prem's room.

It wasn't easy to see him in this condition at all as his Prem was always the one teaching others how to live and not to give up and here he was today giving up everything he had. He went and held Prem's hand. "Nahi Prem me tujhe itnee jaldi apni zindagee haar ne nahi dunga. Nahi haarne dunga." Tears streaked down his cheeks which made Sid also break down and he left Prem's room and leaned against the wall in the corridor outside. He closed his eyes and cursed the horrible fate and the circumstances which had taken place. He still remembered that day when he had first met Heer and that day he hadn't known how much well he was going to know her. He hadn't known how much she was going to be involved in his life.

FLASHBACK

The navratri celebrations were in full swing and the whole hall was flooded with people playing the garba and dandiyas. The music was on high volume and people were just enjoying themselves.

Sid and his group of friends were also present and were enjoying themselves. More like enjoying themselves by not playing but by staring at the attractive girls that came there. Sid as usual was popular amongst the girls and continued playing with them making passes here and there and enjoying their attention.

Amongst the crowd there was a woman who was enjoying herself to the core or was atleast trying to enjoy. She had spent three hours in disappointment and now finally her friends convinced her to join in. she played along but her eyes were set on the entrance with hope that he'll arrive anytime soon. But he was no where to be seen.

The garba continued with no one tiring out and Sid and his gang had made a rukus. But they were the most popular on the floor and nearly every girl wanted to play with Sid but his eyes were out only set on one. His eyes were set on a girl dressed in a blue lengha. She seemed quite reasonably pretty and the way she was enjoying herself made him more attracted to her. Her innocent features persuaded him to explore her more and he had set his rather inappropriate eyes on her. Slowly with his friends he kept moving still playing and nearly reaching that girl with her group. The boys were up to their mischiefs and on purpose kept coming in their way and crashing into them. The girls were annoyed and tried to move away from the boys but it went in vain as the guys just were not going to leave them alone. They continued to keep playing and getting close to the girls on purpose.

The girls realized what the guys were doing and didn't appreciate and thought of leaving the floor. But the guys had crowded around them which prevented them from leaving. They tried to push them away but they kept playing and blocking their way.

"Agar khelne kee tameez nahi hai to phir pehle jaake wo sikh ke aao." A woman stopped Sid midway. "Looks like your mother didn't teach you how to behave with a woman."

He halted to look at her and just smirked as her rebuking nature simply turned him on. "If you'll teach me then I'm sure I'll learn a great lot." He eyed her from head till toe and she twitched at his gaze. She could feel him undressing her with his eyes and she felt disgusted by him. She just ignored him and walked off with the group of girls but Sid held onto her hand holding her back. "Itnee bhi jaldi kya hai?" he held her hand up higher making her more uncomfortable. "abhi maine sikha hee nahi kuch to phir…" he was going to kiss her hand when she snatched her hand and gave him a tight slap on his face.

Everyone halted in the hall, amazed by what happened. Sid was shocked the most and just stood there with anger boiling. The same was with the woman as she became red with fury. "How dare you touch me? Tum jese awara larko ko khoob pehchaanti hu me but mind you I won't let you mess around here with any girl." She pointed her finger at him, "let this slap be a lesson for you that next time before being so indisciplined with a woman you'll think twice." Then she grabbed the hand of her friend and walked away from there.

Sid was left infuriated that the woman humiliated him in front of so many people. He was not going to spare her. He would teach her a lesson she won't forget and make her beg for his forgiveness in the end. He just grunted and walked from there.

Fifteen minutes later

A man slowly crept up behind a woman and instead of making her afraid got a fright himself.

The woman turned around to attack him "tum waapis aaagaye," she stopped midway when she saw who he was and how he was defending himself.

"Kya karu madam aapse pyaar jo itna karta hu to aajaata hu baar baar aapki daant khaane." The man made a cute face trying to make her smile but she was still angry.

"Prem tum?" Heer turned away from him. "I've been waiting for you from the past four hours aur janab ko ab fursat milee." She folded her arms across her chest not wanting to face him at all.

He saw she looked really upset so turned her towards him, "I'm really sorry. Tum to Delhi ki traffic ko jaanti ho." He tried to hold her tight but she struggled out irately.

"Excuses, excuses, excuses." She clicked her tongue and turned away from him again. "You always have a new excuse every time Prem."

"Heer please…" she didn't turn to him so he went and stood in front of her. Then he put his finger under her chin and made her look up towards him. "Jaantee ho jab maine tumhaara yeh haath thaama tha tab waada kiya tha ke me tumhe kabhi bhi koi dukh nahi dunga." He took both her hands in his hands. "Or aaj me tumse ek or waada karta hu ke me chaahe dunya ke koi bhi kone me rahu me tumhaare bulaane pe daurta huwa chala aaunga." He kissed both her hands one by one. "Now you're the only thing that matters in my life and nothing else. To agar ab tum bhi mujhse rute jaaogee to me kaha jaaunga?"

Heer just kept staring at him and was awed by his love. "Why do you love me so much Prem? It scares me that it shall make us go astray."

"That would be my last day Heer. I'll be able to handle everything but won't be able to handle the distance between us. Me tumhe khoke jeenahi sakhunga."

She hugged him at an instant, "Or jese ke me jee paaungi Prem. Jese Prem, Heer ke bina adhura hai wese hee Heer Prem ke bina."

They stayed in each other's arms for a while and then Prem smiled. "Are waah yeh to itnee jaldi maan gayee. Mujhe ziada mehnat bhi nahi karnee paree."

"Prem tum…" she pulled out and got annoyed again. Then she slapped his arm and he kept laughing. Then he stopped her and took her in his arms again. "Mazaak karna koi tumse sikhe."

"Are bhai ab yeh mazaak masti hee to zindagee ka asli maza hai. Ab yehi nahi rehenge to kese phikee parjaaehgee zindagee." Both of them laughed and just enjoyed being with each other. "Atleast that finally granted my wish." She gave him a confused look as to what he meant. "It brought this beautiful smile on your face which always makes my day." He kissed her on the cheek and she just gave a shy smile. "Warna jab me aaya to kese ghusse se laal hogaya tha chehra tumhaara to me to darr hee gaya tha ke aaj to me gaya."

"Agar thori dair pehle tum aaye hote to sach me tumpe bhi baras partee."

"Tumpe bhi ka matlab?" he narrowed his eyebrows.

She remembered the earlier incident and she scrunched her face. "Ha tha ek batameze larka jo bewaja ham sab ko chere raha tha. Per maine bhi ose aisa sabak sikhaaya ke wo zindagee bhar yaad rakhega."

"Baapre," Prem made a pretense awestruck face. "pata nahi koun bechaara hoga jispe tum baras paree. I feel sorry for him."

"Oh really?" she gave him a sarcastic look, "mister Prem ziada oske liye hamdardi dikhaa ne kee zaroorat nahi. Aise awara larko ko to beecho beech hee sabak sikhaana chaheeye."

"Okay, okay my Mother India." He laughed, "now why don't we just forget about that or jo yaha karne aaye hai wo kare?"

Both of them returned to the dance floor and began playing garba with the rest enjoying themselves. Someone's eyes set on them and they became wide with alarm. He couldn't believe what he was seeing. "Yeh larki Prem bhaiya ke saath…" Sid's eyes became blood shot red with envy. "I won't spare her at all." Saying that he left from there with a huff.