Hamari Adhuri Kahani ~ff~ (PH) Part 14 page 30

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Hey guys I'm back with another fic on Premeer. Hope all of you appreciate this one too like my last one.


HAMARI ADHURI KAHANI

Part 1

Bheegi bheegi si hai raatein

Bheegi bheegi yaadein

Bheegi bheegi baaten

Bheegi bheegi aakhon me kaisee namee hai

Aa ha ha ha ha aaa

Aa ha ha ha ha aaa

Aa ha aaa

The song played in the radio of the car as an over intoxicated driver drove it at high speed. The man was disturbed and lost in old thoughts and to make it worse it was raining cats and dogs. The Mumbai rain had always been unpredictable but that night it had come as a storm, just like his life had turned into.

Sapno ka saaya palko pe aaya

Pal me hasaya pal me rulaya

Phir bhi yeh kaisee kamee hai

Aa ha ha ha ha aaa

Aa ha ha ha ha aaa

Aa ha aaa

Drinking hadn't always been his habit but since that incident he had begun to drink non stop and always remained intoxicated. He had left contact with the world because they had given him nothing, but sorrow. The only thing left for him was drinking, drinking till the end of his life.

Naajaane koi, kesee hai yeh zindagaani, zindagaani

Hamari adhuri kahani

Naajaane koi, kesee hai yeh zindagaani, zindagaani

Hamari adhuri kahani

He was just driving away on the empty road of the highway not knowing where he was going or what he was doing. It had been two days since he had left home from Delhi and now he didn't even know where he had got to. He just was not in his senses to realize it. The song kept playing making him remember all that had happened with him and now it was left just as scorching memories. Memories which didn't allow him to sleep. Memories which didn't allow him to live. Memories which didn't allow him to breathe. He needed to always be out of it in order to continue otherwise he would become insane with the constant voices in his head.

Aadhi aadhi jaagi aadhi aadhi soyi

Aankhen yeh teri to lagta hai royi

Lekar ke naam hamara

Aa ha ha ha ha aaa

Aa ha ha ha ha aaa

Aa ha aaa

In the beginning he had spent all the time in tears but soon they also dried up and now there simply was nothing left to be poured out. He didn't feel any pain or anything as a matter of fact. He was simply dragging around a body which had lost its soul long ago and now was just waiting for the machine to die down.

Rutha rutha rab, chuta chuta sab

Toota toota dil tere bina ab

Kaise ho jeena gawaara

Aa ha ha ha ha aaa

Aa ha ha ha ha aaa

Aa ha aaa

Naajaane koi, kesee hai yeh zindagaani, zindagaani

Hamari adhuri kahani

Naajaane koi, kesee hai yeh zindagaani, zindagaani

Hamari adhuri kahani

All of a sudden from the opposite side a truck was coming his way on the highway and the light was blinding. The truck kept horning towards him but the man's car was at high speed that he couldn't see or stop and the car went out of control and instead of going passed the truck it skidded off the road and ended on the side road and falling down the hill.

The car didn't stop and kept falling down the hill and due to the high speed it tumbled over and ended at the edge and the man was stuck inside the car as he had no way to get out.

Half an hour later the whole place was flooded with the police, ambulance, fire brigade and the media. The man inside the car was badly injured from head till toe and taking him out of the car was also tough. Finally they managed and the paramedics quickly stripped him up to the stretcher and hurried him off to the nearest hospital.

Lilavati was the biggest hospital in Mumbai and one of the best. As the trauma patient arrived he was taken immediately into the emergency to be checked. His pulse rate was down and he had lost a lot of blood. His surviving chances were very vague.

"Jaldi jaake Doctor Additi ko bulao." One of the interns doctor Rahul came rushing to the patient and realized he had a severe head injury so he required a neurosurgeon. Dr. Additi was one of the best neurosurgeons in Lilavati and all her cases till date had been successful.

When she got the beep she came rushing towards the emergency and checked on the patient. She saw he was in terrible state and quickly began taking the procedures. "Patient ka naam kya hai?" she asked the ward boys as she examined him.

They went through his wallet and got a business card. "Prem...Prem Juneja."


Ok guys here ends the first part.

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Characters

Prem Juneja

He is a suave handsome young man who loves to stay in his dream world. He loves poetry and music. He has three brothers from which two manage the family business but he had never been interested in it. He is completely different than them all and tends to stay to himself. Out of them all he is very close to Siddharth and Preet and has a rift with Kiran.

Kiran Juneja

A well organized and calculated man. He is the eldest of the four brothers and the most responsible one. After their parents died all of them were quite young and he was the one who took care of them all and worked hard to get here. He does everything after planning and thinking properly and never makes any mistakes as far as business is concerned. However his family and social life are limited. He cares a lot about Prem and worries about him day and night as he knows that the rate he is going he won't get far. He wants to see him well settled.

Siddharth a.ka Sid Juneja

The middle brother and the biggest trouble maker. He loves money more than anything and he would do anything to achieve it. He makes many hasty decisions in business and Kiran is unhappy with them but Sid doesn't listen and gives rational explanations. He cares a lot about his family though especially Prem as he is the only one who understands him. He is very popular amongst the ladies.

Preet Juneja

The youngest of the brothers and the sweetest. Currently he is doing his MBA in Mumbai. People love him every where he goes as he spreads fun and laughter. Loves to joke around and make a sad person feel better. Happy go lucky nature and is famous in the whole University. He is very emotional and possessive about his family and friends. He is very close to Prem as he was the one who helped him get till here and the only one who understands him. He cares and loves him too much.

Heer Maan

She is just like her name, a person who everyone would love to meet over and over again. She lives in Ludhiana with her parents and has recently finished her studies as an interior designer. She loves the rain a lot and outdoors and most of her time is spent out on the streets of Ludhiana and when it rains she would just completely get out of control. Although she is afraid of many things like the dark and thunder lightning. Whenever she is tensed or excited she becomes a non stop chatter box and just goes on without thinking what she is doing. But in a whole is loved by all and makes friends easily.

Additi Gupta

Is a senior doctor in Lilavati. One of the best neurosurgeons in the country and nearly all her cases have been successful. She loves poetry and reading romance novels. Her favourite poet is Harshad Chopda. Not very out going and doesn't have much friends but those who do get close to her, she cares for them a lot. (More about her as the story progresses)

Kulraj Juneja

Kiran's wife and a close friend of Prem. She is a great home maker and has managed the house with good responsibility. Has a sweet nature and she shares a lot with Prem more than Kiran since he has less time to spare. She learns music from Prem and adores him. She is too concerned about his nature and hopes that he becomes serious and settles down quickly instead of musing about his unknown beauty.

Meher Bedi

Also a MBA student in Mumbai. She always is afraid of doing the wrong thing so always tries to follow the rules even when her heart doesn't agree. She thinks too much about small things turning into big ones and ends up making a mess. She likes Preet a lot but is afraid to reveal her feelings as he is always lost in his own world and she doesn't want to loose his friendship.

Robbie Ganguly

A MBA student and Preet's best friend. He is a major cluts but still is studying to become a very smart businessman. He is sweet and cute and loved by all even with all the mess he creates and the troubles. The women of the university adore him. He likes Mauli a lot but she just wants to be friends with him.

Mauli Bannerji

Also a MBA student but more focused on what she wants to do. She always puts work first and gets it down to its best. She likes Robbie a lot but she doesn't want to complicate her life with love so wants to be just friends with him. She cares about her friends a lot especially Meher. She knows how gullable she can be sometimes so keeps an eye on her all the time. She doesn't approve of Preet as he is never serious about his work when she is always follow the rules type.

Okay guys here are the main characters of this fic. Other characters shall come in as the story progresses.

Edited by Harshuillisious - 13 years ago
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Index

Part 1 ...Page 1
Part 2...Page 4
Part 3...Page 6
Part 4...Page 8
Part 5...Page 11
Part 6...Page 12
Part 7...Page 14
Part 8...Page 16
Part 9...Page 18
Part 10.Page 20
Part 11.Page 22


Edited by Harshuillisious - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yaayyy...u're backkk 😃!!!
Very happyy to see n most imp ur FF 😊!!!
Wid different story n sume different characters bt of premeer...loved it 😉!!!

Loved the starting!! Prem drunken...awww!!
I guess now u wil show sume past of him which may be related to heer!! Let see
liked the family tree...prem not being strick n preet there too...loved it 👏!!!

Do add me in ur pm list if u make a new one otherwise i was in the previous one!!!
Really happy to see back n lookin forward to ur updates!!

Do update soon ⭐️!!
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WOW! U BCK WID ANOTHER FF! GHANKU SO MUCH REALLY LOVE UR WRITIN! PART 1 WAS INTERESTIN! PREM MET WITH AN ACCIDENT AND ADDITI WIL SAVE HIM! I THNK ADDITI IS EITHER HEER OR RELATED TO HER! DO CONTINUE SOOM! AND I M ALREADY THERE IN UR PM LIST! SO THNKU FOR D PM! =D :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start...do pm me when u update :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey...
loved it...
please pm me the next time u write...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey nice concept yaar
waiting 4 d nxt
pls cont soon
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome concept ...loved it ...👏
can't wait for the next update ...
please update soon ...
thanks 4 d pm ...😊
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hey back with another update/...cool.. i m gonna love this 1 also..so add me 2 ur pm list..and waiting for next..superb start

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