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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Babycakes-

Thank u for the comments everyone I guess I may aswell finish these off one by one.

How wud I like short updates not everyone week buh every couple of days say Monday,Wednesday, Friday etc?

Buh hello that all comes for a prize I want loads of comments manzoor Hai?

Oh and people I so do not write well okay it's just a load of words which just form a sentence which is crap n u guys r nice enough to say u like it.

Premeer will meet buh not in india okay I thought ill do something for a chance love will bloom in London!

Just hold on ;)


won't u cheer up cuz handful of us do comment 😳 do u hv a target how many comment u want to see? :P I can't make the silent readers to speak up 😆 wish we had magic wand 😎
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sadi-

wow an update such a nice treat...

wonderful.splendid . loved the part


Thank u for the comment Sadi :)

So glad u liked the update keep reading!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveHarshAddit

nice update ...

waiting for the next update
please update soon ...


Thanks for liking the update :)

Means a lot ill try to get something done by tonight
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

Preeti 🤗 this is a cool surprise 😃

Meet all set to go for hm - so nice.
You wrote so well. Heer's surprise and Meher's reaction I'm looking forward to see. Hope Meet will have a blast on Paris. It'd be nice to know what Prem is up to and what Heee is up to. I don't know if Ashleaha and her mom are good or bad but if Prem is interested on Heer then there is problem coming for PH I guess.
I loved this ch , though its mainly a filler.
Thank you and continue soon.


Athi 🤗

Thank u for such a long comment hun means a lot and the questions n answers not happening here u guys just gotta wait n watch everything will be answered soon.

Keep reading
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Pumpkinn

Hey ...

After a loong time ...
Great part ...
But no Premeer ...
Cont. soon ..


Yesh!

Updating after a whole year hehe

Thanks for liking the update n ik filler was needed story continues now!

Keep reading :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

won't u cheer up cuz handful of us do comment 😳 do u hv a target how many comment u want to see? :P I can't make the silent readers to speak up 😆 wish we had magic wand 😎


You know me Athi im never happy about anything 😆

Hmmm im guessing 3-4 pages? I wanna finish this fast n the more comments i get the more updates ull get 😉

Ive started writing up the chapters so when theyre done ill post em haha

Everything comes for a price my dear n the magic wand yh or a genie
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updating for u guys coz im nice like that :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 10

Preet and Meher had just landed in Paris. This was the perfect honeymoon destination. This is the place where they had met for the very first time. The place where they had found each other. No the place where they had found that missing part in their life, where they had found themselves.

"Meher I can't believe we have come a long way from back then," Preet said. "We didn't even realise when hate turned to love,"

Meher looked him in the eyes and said "Preet when something is meant to happen it happens. We are nobody to change fate. We were meant for each other and God has made that happen,"

Preet looked at her. "Are you sure your not some kind of writer?" he asked her.

"Why do you say so?" she asked back.

"I for one would never be able to think of all that you said let alone even say it," he told her.


"You can tell that," she giggled.

He gave her one look and chased her around the Eiffel Tower. It didnt matter if anyone was looking at them. What mattered was they were there together enjoying their honeymoon and they wouldn't have liked it to be any other way.

~~~

Heer on the other hand packed for her to leave for England. She had finally told everyone else in the family and they had shared her happiness with her. She just couldn't wait for Meher to return to London from her honeymoon and surprise her. It would just be the best thing ever!

On the other hand Prem too was packing his suitcase. He was to return back to England a week before his family would. He had been running the business from the India branch for over a month now but he had somethings which needed checking by him.

Prem and Heer were both to go by the flight BA (British Airways) 234 (sorry people i don't know of other planes that go to India never been there)
~~~

Heer had bid a teary farewell to her family. It was the first time she was to go away with out her parents being with her. She didnt know how well it was going to go down and on top of that she was scared of heights.

She sat in her seat. The person who was going to be sitting in the seat next to her hadn't come yet but she was hoping they would nice she could do with some company these 6/7 hours were going to be very long especially if you're alone.

Just then she saw someone making their seat comfortable. She looked up from the magazine she was reading to see Prem Juneja!

Yes the Prem Juneja. Her sisters devaar she was shocked for a minute or two but then she realised that they are originally from London and that he must be returning too for he takes care of the branch in London whilst his middle brother Harman does in the Toronto one.

He hadn't notice her yet.

"Maybe he doesnt remember me yet," she thought to herself.

Prem looked down to see Heer. His eyes couldn't be mistaken he could recognize her in his sleep. Ever since the wedding he hadn't been able to forget her. There was something about her which there wasn't in other girl. That is the reason he hadn't wanted to get married before he hadn't found the one but this woman she was a beauty. Someone who anyone would get attracted to.

He settled down in his chair and saw her looking at him.

"Hello Mr Juneja, nice to see you again," She said with a smile.

"Call me Prem," he replied. " And nice to meet you again Miss Heer,"

They both smiled at each other the flight was about to take off. Heer had mixed feelings she was nervous and excited at the same time. She had never been out of India before. There was never the need to Lalit uncle had asked her father to come over with his family for a holiday however they had declined. Her father never wanted to leave his motherland. It was very close to his heart and he would always say the day he leaves would be his last day on the earth.

Heer shook the last thought away and said a quick prayer to baba ji. She prayed for everyone's health and happiness. For her satisfaction till she was away now that Meher was also no around to keep her updated.

The announcement by the pilot had been made and the plane was reading for take off in 7 hours they would be at Heathrow Airport.

Heer didnt know what to do she was scared. This was the first time she had ever been on an plane she wished someone was there with her. She quickly held on to Prems arm.

Prem was shocked. He felt something hold his arm tightly. He looked to his right to see Heer holding on tightly eyes closed.

"Dont worry Heer everything will be fine," he assured her.

She nodded she had needed that reassurance from someone and she was glad Prem had understood her nervousness and had tried to make her feel better.

The plan was flying smoothly now and when Heer was sure of that she let go of Prem's arm. She had been holding on to it for a good 2o minutes and he hadn't even moaned.

"Thanks for the reassurance i really needed it," she told him. " The thing is i have a fear of heights and this is also the first time i have ever come on an aeroplane. The nervousness just hit me and then i blanked out. Once again thank you so much Prem"

Prem smiled back at her " Its okay you don't have to thank me. Also I've seen worse before compared to them this would be nothing,"

She nodded. Maybe one day she could overcome this fear. Maybe one day he could help her to do so

~~~

Balraaj has spoken to Lalit about Ashlesha and Prem and Lalit has said that he would consider the proposal after speaking to Prem about it. He knew that it would take some time and Prem being Prem would probably say no but there was no harm in trying.

Ash had been happy about this was an understatement she was over the moon. She knew that after seeing her picture Prem would never be able to say no to her. She had gotten a lot of proposals but she had turned them all down. They didn't have what it takes to be Ash's husband. But Prem; he was different. She had liked him ever since she had first seen him at Meher's wedding. He had everything which she had wanted in her groom. The charisma, the looks, the money and what not.

She liked Prem he was better than her last boyfriend Rahul Khanna. He was nothing compared to what Prem is. She had decided that she would marry him however his mother had wanted someone who was traditional, someone who she could treat as her 'servant' Ash didnt want to go into a house where she would just have to cook and clean 24/7. She was a girl of the 21st century. She was the type of girl who had everything laid in front of her. Her mother was the only person who had known about her secret fling with Rahul. In fact she was the one who had introduced her to him.

Right now she wanted Prem Juneja. This was her one chance her had returned back to England and she was sure of the fact that he was single he hadn't ever been in a relationship and whenever asked why work would be his excuse. She would make sure of it that Prem and she were together. After that no one would be able to stop her from inheriting all the wealth the Juneja's owned. She would be the queen of the house. She would finally have what she had dreamed of all those days.

Final her day was coming. It wasnt too far to when she would finally be Mrs Prem Juneja. Or is it?

~~~

It had been a week since Heer had come to England. Her university was to start in a week and she was getting used to everything there. It was so different to how India was. She had met a young girl called Alice who was from Germany she had also been accepted into Oxford and therefore they had met when they had gone to check out the campus. They had clicked very well.

Heer needed a job and she had gone on a job hunt. She had spoken to Kulraaj di on the phone who had become a very good friend of hers. She had advised her to go and try her hand at J&S LTD and thats was what she was going to do. Having a job would things so much easier for her and therefore she wouldn't have to rely on other people for the money. When she would be earning for herself she would be reassured that everything is going fine.

She looked up at the large building and took a deep breath.

It was now or never...

~~~

I believe this was quite long seeing as i took a break from my revision to write this part up :p

Long comments n likes peelij

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Edited by -Babycakes- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmm it was an awesome update dear
totally great
meet scenes was very cute and premeer flight scene also
hmm so now premeer both are in england...now thats very interesting
great going dear
pls cont soon
thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤗 wow update yeshhh Thanks Preeti.

saw your replies. Yeah wish the wand or genie is at my hand 😒 but instead it just lil old me 😆
You do deserve all the appreciation for your hard work and time. I know we pester you a lot and you give in sometimes and other times not 😆😆

*rubs hands* *all set and excited to read*

ch 10 pg 37


"Meher I can't believe we have come a long way from back then," Preet said. "We didn't even realise when hate turned to love," 😆😆
over here Preet sound a bit too matured. I guess cuz of marriage. Not expected from him.

Meher looked him in the eyes and said "Preet when something is meant to happen it happens. We are nobody to change fate. We were meant for each other and God has made that happen,"
😲 Meher tends to be very practical and at the same time optimistic too. They both seem lil serious I guess when reality hits that they are married, it's natural to reflect on what happened or how they reach to this point.


Preet looked at her. "Are you sure your not some kind of writer?" he asked her.
😆 It's so like Preet , he gives compliment and teases at the time time. Poor Meher, she'll be seeing this behaviour for life time 😆

"Why do you say so?" she asked back.

"I for one would never be able to think of all that you said let alone even say it," he told her.


"You can tell that," she giggled.
me too joining Meher giggling. Nice humour betw them. 👍🏼

He gave her one look and chased her around the Eiffel Tower. It didnt matter if anyone was looking at them. What mattered was they were there together enjoying their honeymoon and they wouldn't have liked it to be any other way.

aww the classic *chase* wouldn't they been a sight to see for tourists 🤣

Heer on the other hand packed for her to leave for England. She had finally told everyone else in the family and they had shared her happiness with her. She just couldn't wait for Meher to return to London from her honeymoon and surprise her. It would just be the best thing ever!

😎 I feel very excited for her too. Can't wait to read more scenes on her.


Prem and Heer were both to go by the flight BA (British Airways) 234 (sorry people i don't know of other planes that go to India never been there)
😎 Exciting wow PH 😳😃


Heer had bid a teary farewell to her family. It was the first time she was to go away with out her parents being with her. She didnt know how well it was going to go down and on top of that she was scared of heights.

😒 I hate to see her sad. Aww she's afraid of heights 🤗

She sat in her seat. The person who was going to be sitting in the seat next to her hadn't come yet but she was hoping they would nice she could do with some company these 6/7 hours were going to be very long especially if you're alone.
😆 I was eagerly waiting when her mate gonna show up

Just then she saw someone making their seat comfortable. She looked up from the magazine she was reading to see Prem Juneja!
😲ooh who would have thought I mean we kinda expected🤣, but still shocking. You're so sweet Preeti to bring them together 🤗

Yes the Prem Juneja. Her sisters devaar she was shocked for a minute or two but then she realised that they are originally from London and that he must be returning too for he takes care of the branch in London whilst his middle brother Harman does in the Toronto one.

I was just wondering why Heer didn't know about Preet's family in detail.😕 I mean she was hesitant.

He hadn't notice her yet.

"Maybe he doesnt remember me yet," she thought to herself.

Prem looked down to see Heer. His eyes couldn't be mistaken he could recognize her in his sleep. Ever since the wedding he hadn't been able to forget her. There was something about her which there wasn't in other girl. That is the reason he hadn't wanted to get married before he hadn't found the one but this woman she was a beauty. Someone who anyone would get attracted to.

This was sweet to look at Prem's thoughts on Heer. Well written 👍🏼


He settled down in his chair and saw her looking at him.

"Hello Mr Juneja, nice to see you again," She said with a smile.

"Call me Prem," he replied. " And nice to meet you again Miss Heer,"

See this is what I mean, she's v. formal with him. Why is that after all there is not much age difference hmm🤔

The bg infor re: family you explained pretty well. So we know what kind of relationship both families / parents share.

Heer shook the last thought away and said a quick prayer to baba ji. She prayed for everyone's health and happiness. For her satisfaction till she was away now that Meher was also no around to keep her updated.

I can just picture that 😆 she's shoo cute and innocent at heart. Want to give a hug

Heer and Prem scene are lovely.

Ash had been happy about this was an understatement she was over the moon. *giggles* I know she's coming betw PH but couldn't help laughing at her excitement. 😆

She knew that after seeing her picture Prem would never be able to say no to her.
😲 really she's that beautiful wow. She's really up for hmm some shock 😆

She had gotten a lot of proposals but she had turned them all down.

😕bad luck 4 us *sigh*

They didn't have what it takes to be Ash's husband.

😲😲

But Prem; he was different. She had liked him ever since she had first seen him at Meher's wedding. He had everything which she had wanted in her groom. The charisma, the looks, the money and what not.

oooh so she won't give up huh

She liked Prem he was better than her last boyfriend Rahul Khanna. He was nothing compared to what Prem is. She had decided that she would marry him however his mother had wanted someone who was traditional, someone who she could treat as her 'servant' Ash didnt want to go into a house where she would just have to cook and clean 24/7. She was a girl of the 21st century. She was the type of girl who had everything laid in front of her. Her mother was the only person who had known about her secret fling with Rahul. In fact she was the one who had introduced her to him.

I loved reading this part though it's about the villain. You made it funny some how cuz all I could do was laugh or giggle when I read this.
oooh her prev. affair was a secret 😲 Does that mean if her father knows then it'll be a problem or he'll ignore it.🤓

G3 won't make her bahu work 24/7 what a wild imagination Ash has 🤣

Right now she wanted Prem Juneja. This was her one chance her had returned back to England and she was sure of the fact that he was single he hadn't ever been in a relationship and whenever asked why work would be his excuse. She would make sure of it that Prem and she were together. After that no one would be able to stop her from inheriting all the wealth the Juneja's owned. She would be the queen of the house. She would finally have what she had dreamed of all those days.

Final her day was coming. It wasnt too far to when she would finally be Mrs Prem Juneja. Or is it?

Ahh what fairy tale dreams Ash has. I'm a lil worried, if she doesn't get what she wanted , she'll lose her mind 😳

It had been a week since Heer had come to England. Her university was to start in a week and she was getting used to everything there. It was so different to how India was. She had met a young girl called Alice who was from Germany she had also been accepted into Oxford and therefore they had met when they had gone to check out the campus. They had clicked very well.

This is awesome she's got new friend yaay😃 Wonder if Alice play any part in bringing PH closer later on.

Heer needed a job and she had gone on a job hunt. She had spoken to Kulraaj di on the phone who had become a very good friend of hers. She had advised her to go and try her hand at J&S LTD and thats was what she was going to do. Having a job would things so much easier for her and therefore she wouldn't have to rely on other people for the money. When she would be earning for herself she would be reassured that everything is going fine.

I think I forgot how or when Heer and Kulraj end up discussing this. No matter.

She looked up at the large building and took a deep breath.

It was now or never...

I'm nervous about it as Heer 😆 Wish her all the best for job👍🏼
I'm excited to see what surprises are in store for Heer in that building and what will happen.

Thanks Preeti 🤗Best wishes for exams as you're revising. 👍🏼

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