SS - Man Disposes God Proposes ~ COMPLETED!! - Page 4

Heyy

congratulations,for completeing a year writing ff.

hey selvyy....conragulation on completing one year as writer.......u r a wonderful writer........its a treat to read ur ffs or ss....and i had never missed any of ur ffs and ss.....its a gift for us.....i hope u write many many more ffs and ss like this....cming to this two shots.....just womderful.....luvd chahat and her sweet talkings......she is sooooooooo cute.....how can prem behave like this with her.....i didnt like it prem.....and now he os calling heer prostitute and saying chahat as servants daughter......how will he react when he will cme to knw tht chahat is his own daughter.......poor heer....i hope everythng goes welll...and yaa i luvd prem chahat scene on stairs,....thanks for pm...continue sooon

Pllllzl updateee verry soon!!!! Amazinggf ss!!

Awesome loved this update!!
Love this ff!
Please update soonn!
and do pm me!

hey

congrats for completingg one year and awesomeeeee ss now waitingggggggg eagerlyyyyyyy for next asap

awesome start

Hey Selvy first of all congratz for completing 1 year as a writer 🤗 and thank u sooooooooooo much for coming up with this lovely SS. 🤗

Loved it hun. Awesome ......................... Awesome ........................., Awesome update hun. Loved it to the core. 👍🏼 👏 👍🏼 👏 👍🏼 👏

Loved chahat's dialogs. She talks very cleverly. Very interesting and cute ..................... 😊

The way she was questioning the relationship of Teji and Lalit was cute. 😆 😆

Loved prem & Chahat's fighting scene where they fight for the house 😆 and chahat calling him "Chottu" 🤣 😆 🤣 😆 🤣 😆 🤣 and chahat saying chottu is a cheater was too cute.

Gosh Ash is so wicked 😡 😡 😡 😡 to slap a small kid.

Looks like Prem knows heer and i'm sure chahat is prem' daughter 😉 as she has the same features and habbits like prem plus when lalit asked heer about chahat's father she was silent which is another indication which shows prem is chahat's father if not heer would have told her hubby's name. why was she quiet ???? 😕 😕 Anywayz chahat having prem's features shows that prem's daughter is chahat. But have no idea as to how it will be revealed in the story. 😕 😕

Felt sorry for heer for geting accused by prem. 😭 Oh gosh how can lalit order heer heer to leave the house. 😲 Where will she go with chahat ???? and when chachi comes to know that heer has left wonder what will be her reaction ...........

Anyways looking forward to the next chapter.

Pls Pls update ASAP hun and thanks for the PM.

🤗