SS - Man Disposes God Proposes ~ COMPLETED!!

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

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Posted: 14 years ago

#151

Awesome updates !

Loved them !

Great story !

Perfect ending !

Thnx for pm !

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458742

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#152

shot 5

nice part

prem asking her to marry someone else

and she thought of leaving house

nice part

shot 6

wow

teji ne emotional blackmail kiya

gud

sabka dimaag bada tez hai....

shot 7

wow

birthday surprise

i loved the ending......

Edited by heer193 - 14 years ago

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Jyothi N

@-Jyo-

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#153

Al is well if end is well

Shot 6 & 7 were awesome

I really dint expect u to finish this one soooo soon

Keep writing premeer ffs.............................................

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-alisha-

@-alisha-

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#154

i love happy ending just like ur stories alwz have......great ss selvy.....please write more like this

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munni_sheela

@munni_sheela

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#155

luved your SS
it was an awesome story
thnx for pm

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Gayani

@Anu*Gayani*Anu

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#156

Selvy, what can i say hun, it's Awesome ............................ Awesome ............................ Awesome update selvy. Loved it ................. 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Awwwwww Gaya3's plan is great. 👏 👏 👏

Teji is clever to stop heer leaving the house.👏 👏 👏

Loved Prem - Chahat scenes. Chahat is such a cutieeeeeee ................ 😃

Premeer scenes were awesome too ..................... 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍

Loved prem's comment " Monning anger shoots up BP" on heer being angry. 🤣 😆 🤣

Awwwwwww heer has felt prem's absence during the time when he was at Delhi. May be this would have changed her. 😉

Finally heer accepts prem. Awesome ..................... 🥳

Lovely ending selvy. Absolutely amazing hun. Well written.👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 Enjoyed very much reading this SS. Loved it to the core.Thank u soooooooooooooooo much for coming up with this lovely ....................... lovely ........................ lovely SS. 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 Keep up the great work and pls do come up with more FFs or SSs. Love reading them and Thanks for the PMs hun. 🤗 🤗

Luv Gayani.

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rishi

@Rishi87

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#157

great ss

i am reading ur story after a long gap due to my work i couldnt read ur ss and ffs after 2 months i am loging in to this forum and this ss is a treat for me.

hats off to ur creativity👏👏👏

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@0577jj

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#158

Spectacular SS…👏👏👏

'Man Disposes God Proposes' ….another successful SS from talented writer titled in different way….& the entire story proved the title is 100% perfect resemblence of the SS content…….A man who wishes to enjoy his life avoiding his parents for his wickedness ,who always desired for their son's good character formation, who want to make him a good human being,one cultured person to the world….its a nice drafting even in his immoral act his mind shows sme positive thinking which he heired from his genes…the moment he calles back Heer after his need…his thanks & that hug….which shows he possess sme good nature within him….he disposed the life of a poor girl who had no way to secure herself from the sin….but the main planner who plans everything before our birth destined Heer to her ultimate place….the struggles she faced in her life turned her to lead a powerful role….life got colourful with the cute symbol of her unwanted deed… person who deprived her, came back to her life with more authoritative & authentic way……😳

There your SS gets its success as our disposal may turn to God's proposal …. 👍🏼

From childhood we heard & learned 'man proposes & God disposes'….it always proved right as 'Human beings can make any plans they want, but it's God that decides their success or failure.' …Your vision & dream made a perfect story which again proves the divine power possess everything…Shakespearean thought taught us 'there is a divinity that shapes our ends'…😊 ❤️

Always keep God given talent with more & more powerful writing…⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️