Na Jaane Kyun pg28 - 12 june 13 - Page 6

Mindblowing update

Originally posted by: shivangi2092

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.it was really amazing girl!

thank you!!!😳😳😃

Originally posted by: moon_mine

it's very nice!!!!
seems that u hv takn a lot of pain n done hardwrk to write it.....
thnx for entertaining us wid the story along wid the song so well!!!
thnx a lot!!!!
do update the next part soon!!!!

Originally posted by: sonia7

awesome update
finally prem and heer met
thanks for the pm
i hope prem saves her from those goons
update soon 😊

let us see kaun kise bachata hai??? thanks

Originally posted by: khajju

awesme update...finally premeer met.....it was beautiful....the song.....premeer scene was verryy good....the update shows ur hardwork...keep it up....thanks for pm...update sooon.

Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen

I am mesmerizd by the sng nd ths goons r rly scary haye frst meet ab ao salo prem tumhari band bajayega

ohhhhhhhhh........

Originally posted by: NIMMY

Loved it..........

Heer running 4 the goons.........

and then a goon in front of her....... she pushed him out of the train.... really bold to do something like tht

those guys killed a guy just coz he stood for her.........

the girl had a run 4 her life.......

and there our hero was sleeping peacefully totally not interested to get disturbed......... but tht radio poor guy cant get any sleep.......

she reaches his compartment........... loved her idea to lock the doors

and woh usse takaraati hai..........

and tht song by NUSRAT FATEH ALI KHAN........

I JUST LOVE AFREEN AFREEN..........

and they way u used it was mind blowing...........

Prem mesmerised by her........ and he didnt liked to see her tears.........

loved this part sooooooooooooo much

but are the goons back....... or is she afraid of him

WOW!!!

m jumping all around my house after seeing ur reply

thank you

i too luv this song

thank u thnk u

keep readingand commenting

Originally posted by: premheer19

Mindblowing update

Now its became more intersting to read

I loved the lyrics too, plz can u tell me it is from which album or movie?

Egarly waiting for ur next update

Continue soon..................................

thank you!!!

it was nice dear...😊 and the song selection was superb....perfect for the romantic first clash ..😉

amazing part.......loved the way u described each n every moment......awesome........songs selection was great......loved the way they met........wow heer always fall in prems arms......i think it is her habit hehe........thnx for the pm............cant wait....update sooooooon