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NOTE: i have used a song of nusrat fateh ali khan , and i am requesting you to read the lyrics along the ff, it has meaning, anybody having problem with hindi, english translation is also there, i found lyrics with english translation only so purpose solved
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Recap: In the very first update firstly, we had very brief scene of a guy, then we saw a girl whose physical appearance wasn't like of most of the heroines we have,(so it is clear she is the main female lead of my FF) she was just not perfect by looks, she is OVER-WEIGHT, then , we got to see that she was traveling in a train , then she had went on a station to buy mineral water, she had seen a very hyper vendor, then she had heard a scream, following which she saw a gang of men troubling a girl, she saves her, then when she realize something wrong she makes her run, gives her all the money she had, after returning back she sees those men waiting for her on her seat, in fear she runs from there to save herself.........
***Afreen Afreen***
She ran for her life, not even once looking back, while running she observed whole train was empty, not even
a single person, and now she understood why no one came in this train and especially at this hour, she ran as fast she could, she crossed 2-3 bogies,......BANG!!!
a man came in front of her, he had a iron chain which he banged on a handle very loudly, she stops , due to the she gets scared, then he takes out a knife from his pocket...she starts sweating, nothing comes to her mind to save herself....
'need help? you seem to be in a hurry....kuchh madad karun aapki...'he says with a smirk, that made his face look even more disgusting...
and then she remembers, he was the same guy who she had seen in the rest room, lying on that girl whom she had saved,
'jerk , moron!!' she says, almost in a whisper....as she remembers the scene in restroom...
then suddenly she starts moving towards him, he gives a confused look, as she advances he steps back, she gives him a very cute smile, he wonders what she was doing while she places her hand on his chest, and before he could understand he felt a push and then he was out of the train ...
from the sound he made when he fell, she knew he would have got at least 10-20 fractures, but he deserved this only, even worse, suddenly she heard foot steps, she turned back and saw thm out which 2 were looking out side, then stormed towards her, hearing the sound of swords striking she gets scared and starts running again,.....
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He was sleeping when he heard a sound, he opened his eyes, looked towards both sides , concentrated and then figured the sounds were of someone running may more than one, he stood up to see, but the sound subsided, he thought may be he was imagining all that he had been very tired may thats y.....he again sat in his seat and then closing his his tried to sleep again, in not more than 20 seconds he heard a girls scream, he got up startled, he went to the passage way looked in both the sides, their was no one, and suddenly radio of train starts a girl with a sweet voice was telling about the next song to be played,
'what in this world made them switch on the radio at this hour?' he said in disbelief as he shook his head
'koi na koi jarur aa jata hai just to ruin my sleep, from last 24 hours i didnt got sleep, and God u still are doing this to me have pity, let me have peace in my life, let me relax, ab is radio ka kya karun?' he said, feeling defeated he lowered his head...
husn-e-jaanaan ki taareef mumkin nahiin,
It is not possible to praise the beauty of beloved.
afreen afreen afreen afreen
O the most beautiful one!
tu bhi dekhe agar to kahe ham-nashin
Even if you see my beloved, you would also say
afreen afreen afreen afreen
O the most beautiful one!
aisa dekha nahin Khoobsurat koi
jism jaise Ajanta ki murat koi
jism jaise nigahon pe jaadu koi
jism nagma koi jism Khushbu koi
jism jaise machalti hui raagini
jism jaise mehakti hui chaandni
jism jaise ke khilta hua ek chaman
jism jaise ho suraj ki pahli kiran
jism tarsha hua dilkash-o-dil-nashiN
sandali sandali
marmari marmari
I never saw anyone so beautiful
[her] body is like the images of Ajanta*
[her] body is like a spell on eyes
[her] body is like a song [and] perfumed
[her] body is like ecstatic music
[her] body is like sweet-smelling moon-light
[her] body is like a blooming garden
[her] body is like the first ray of the Sun
[her] body is like carved statue, eye-catching and arresting
like sandalwood
like marble.
Note: Caves in India containing beautiful murals.
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after crossing around 3 bogies she sees someone in uniform sitting on a seat near the window, she rushes to him, before he could ask what was the matter he sees 4 men with swords, and guesses out they were after her, he goes towards them to stop them, but before he could do anything they catch him with his coller and beat him badly, being one against 4 he is unable to save himself, he gets injured starts to bleed, the leader face him in front of him and turns him at a 90 degree angle & then one of them puts his sword in his stomach, she never hear his scream because he fell from the train even before he could scream, but she seeing this she close her eyes and screams aloud......hearing her they turn towards her, she turns back and starts running, upon reaching next bogie she turns back and start closing the doors of the coach as she had reached to the AC coaches and they had a facility to close, she runs and runs, cross several bogies, doing the same, this lowered their speed, but didn't stop them, they somehow managed to open the doors and ran behind her...................but were left far behind, just to confirm they werent behind her she turned back frequently...she thought'ek insaan ne meri madad ki aur inhone sue maar dala, usne to kuchh kaha bhi nahin tha, oh god what is going on, he is dead just because of me....'
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he looks towards one end, and realise he was all alone no one was there to complain too...he shakes his head again, and turns...........
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she runs , still looking behind her...............and suddenly she bumps into a hard wall..............wall? in the middle of a train? she turns to look but tripples over something and almost like flying falls, her hair too revolve with her, she fall and
waits to hit the floor....
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he turns and bumps into something brown coloured, and tries to balance himself , but sees the thing fall and suddenly bends forward to save it from falling.......
his one hand goes below her lower back and other behind upper back, behind her neck, supporting her shoulders and his elbow over her nape , while falling her open flies in air and hair covers her face , not completely but like a net he sees her and....
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he suddenly realise the thing was a girl, her face covered with a net of her hair, her face wasnt fully clear but, her eyes were closed with fear of falling...
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chehra ek phool ki tarah shaadaab hai
chehra uskaa hai ya koi mehtaab hai
chehra jaise Ghazal, chehra jaan-e-Ghazal
chehra jaise kali, chehra jaise kamal
chehra jaise tasavur ki tasveer bhi
chehra ek Khwab bhi, chehraa tabeer bhi
[Her] face is like a fresh flower.
Is it her face or moon?
[her] face is like a Ghazal, [her] face is like heart of Ghazal
[her] face is like a bud, [her] face is like lotus
[her] face is like manifestation of imagination
[her] face is like a dream, and its interpretation too.
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he sees her face, and his eyes go wide open,.....her face was bit chubby, but cute , he traced her features , her eyebrows shaped beautifully, she had a cute nose, and very beautiful pink lips...and suddenly shaking his next thought he looked towards her eyes, a tear fell from her closed eyes, something in him went numb seeing the tear, his heart ached seeing it falling, he felt an urge to stop them, he got confused with his sudden thoughts and justifying them told himself, may be because she is scared it had appeared...
chehra koi alif lailavi daastaan
chehra ek pal yaqeen, chehra ek pal gumaan
chehra jaise ke chehra koi bhi nahin
maah-ruuh maah-ruuh
mehzabin mehzabin
[Her] face is like the tales of Alif Laila*.
One moment real, another moment imagination
[her] face is like no other face
[her] forehead is moonlike
so is her body.
Note: Arabian Nights.
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she waited to hit the floor and in fear closed her eyes, thinking it was her end now, they will get her and kill her... a tear rolled down her eyes thinking about that, but the floor never hitted her, or instead she never hitted it , anstead she felt strong warm fands on her back...........
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he wondered what was happening, from where she had landed, what was going on, he wanted to ask her too but here she is in his arms with closed eyes,
his mind had already got numb due to the confusions he had, and then he saw her flickering her eyes, she opened them and he was like under some spell...
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Aankhen dekhi to main dekhta reh gaya
jaam do aur donon hi do aatishan
I could not keep off my eyes after seeing her eyes
they are like two cups of wine and that too, burning
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her eyes were almond shaped, in darkest shade of brown like almost black, beautiful!!!, like wine...they were alcoholic, and he was now not in his senses,
and the way they moved all he did was stare at her...following her gaze...
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aankhen yaa maikade ke ye do baab hain
aankhen inko kahun ya kahun Khwab hai
are these eyes or two doors of wine-house or should i say they are like a dream
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she opened her eyes and was in complete shock for next 10 seconds, then to see where she was she looked below,
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aankhen neechi huin to hayaa ban gayin
her downward glance is abashness
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realising she was safe she looked upwards, not towrds her saviours face but to the roof of train, thanking God to save her
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aankhen unchi huin to dua ban gayin
her upward glance is prayer
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then she saw his face, her eyes went wide, and realising her state she lowers her eyes, a bit embarrased
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aankhen uth kar jhuki to adaa ban gayin
when eyes look down after up,is like a style
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then she suddenly remembered everything and raised her eyes looking at both the ends
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aankheN jhuk kar uthin to khata ban gayin
when eyes look up after downward glance, it is like some silly mistake
she looked to every side to confirm they weren't there....
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aankhen jin mein hai qaid aasmaan-o-zamin
eyes, in which arrested are the sky and the earth
nargisi nargisi
surmayi surmayi
like Narcissus
[and] greyish
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she looked everyside and after confirmimng tried getting up , applying a little force she managed to get up...while getting up her hair flew and brushed his face
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he was mesmerised by every moment of her eyes, the way they moved, up down left right, or in any direction any angle , the way her eye lashes covered them when she lowered her eyes, the way they went wide when she was shocked, he felt her struggle and loosened his grip a bit, she with a little force got up, and while standing her hair brushed his face, he closed his eyes, perfume of roses filled his senses
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zulf-e-jaanan ki bhi lambi hai daastaa
zulf ke mere dil par hai parchaiyan
zulf jaise ke umri hui ho ghata
zulf jaise ke ho koi kaali balaa
The story of the tresses of beloved is also long
tresses are like shadows on my heart
tresses are like over-cast clouds
tresses like some black spectre
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he opened his eyes and saw her straightening her dress and untangle her hair, she had a slight frown on her face, and lips pouted, and this made her look very cute, a slight smile crept on his face as he saw her
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zulf uljhe to duniya pareshan ho
zulf suljhe to ye geet aasaan ho
zulf bikhre siyaah raat chhane lage
zulf lahraaye to raat gaane lage
zulf zanjeer hai phir bhi kitni hasin
reshmi reshmi
ambariN ambarin
when tresses are entangled, so also is the world
when tresses are straight, then writing this song becomes easy
when tresses spread apart then black night downs
when tresses sway then the night sings
tresses are chains, but so beautiful
silken
[and] perfumed
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he felt so peaceful seeing her, he felt a push an his elbow, but didnt gave any attension because he was busy looking in her eyes, and as he saw her eyes they suddenly showed anger with a bit of fear...
***the end***
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Edited by heer193 - 14 years ago
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