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Namastey/Hello/Salaam !!!😊
I am here with a new ph ff😊
many of u may be knowing me
and if u dont know
koi baat nai😉
we will get to know each other very soon.
So now back to ff, i had planned to write a story about our lovely premeer and their eternal love story...
Actually this story had been in my mind since the day i saw kdmhmd station scene, the very first one, when our canada return PREM saves our gaon ki chori HEERIYE from those goons😡 on ticket counter😍, but the only problem for this story was i was not getting a suitable title for it, but now, i have got a suitable name too...
i know its been soo late, but as it is said in hindi
"der aaye durust aaye"
today i m posting only a sort of preview or beginning
hope u like it
pls do comment and tell if i should continue
only those people will get pm who want it, so tell me if u want pms
and pls do comment
I got inspiration from the following lines
If it is because of her eyes, her body or her great looks, its not Love
Its Lust.
If its because of her intelligence or insight about life, its not Love.
Its Admiration.
If its because of her cries everytime you try to leave, its not Love.
Its Pity.
if its because she makes you loose your concentration and sleep,
its not Love.
Its Infatuation.
LOVE is when you dont know why you seem to be attracted to a person.
Love has its own reason
and
the reason is unknown...
So Love kyun hota hai?
Dunno y ... na jaane kyun???
***The Beginning***
A man in his around mid twenties is shown from his back, he is boarding a train, he searches for the seat number, finds it sits in his seat, the train starts moving, he closes his eyes and dozes off, ...hearing a sound he is gets up, on hearing clearly, it was sound of someone running, may be more than one, he gets up from his seat, moves to the centre of passage way and...
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A girl of around 23 yrs is shown, she is not like other girls slim, beautiful, gud figure, she is a bit over weight, and only her half face is visible, her eyes are closed, her hand covering half of her face as she had her face on its support, she is sitting in a train ,...suddenly the train stops, she comes out of her thoughts as the train jerked, she opens her eyes, they were brimming with tears,... she sees outside the window,...outside she observs a platform that is deserted, no one was there except for a railway vendour, she got out of the train, goes to him...he was closing the shop in a hurry,...she took a water bottle, and gave him the money,...he took it , kept it in his pocket hurriedly and closing the shop,...ran...
She looked in the direction where he went running, and in a couple of seconds he was also gone, she was all alone on the platform,...suddenly she heard some commotion behind her,...she turned and went towards the noise,...then she stopped thought it would be better if she went in her coach and sit in her bogie,...she started moving towards the bogie , the moment she kept her foot in the threshhold, she heard a girl scream, it was loud enough to scare anyone to the core,...she again turned and went towards the place from where she had heard the scream, she reached near a ladies restroom, and again heard the girl's scream this time it was much more audible and clear and she could make out it was from inside the restroom only, she opened the door slightly and saw,...a group of men were gathered in a circle, she wondered what they were doing in ladies restroom, then suddenly a man in the group threw a piece of cloth , it fell on her, it was a duppatta, and she understood they were surrounding a girl and ,..., oh no she has to save her, but this way may be she too get in trouble,she closed the door...she started thinking what should she do, help her or leave her,...no she cant they will ruin her,..., ok fine i will save her, ye to maine karna hi tha, bohut jyada samajseva mein jo lagi hun, apni madad to kar nahin sakti kam se kam kisi aur ko hi bacha lun, till this time , the girl surrounded was on floor and a man was on her, ripping her clothes, and others were surrounding them, they were 5 in total, and now she saw 3 swords on the near by table and two men had knives in their back pocket, 'tujhe kya laga tha hum tujhe chod denge, apne ghar ka naam dubo ke tu bach jaegi, apne bhai ka naam duboegi, khaandan ki izzat mitti mein milaegi , ab tera muh kaala karne ka shauk bhi poora ho jaega aur tere jeene ki khawaish bhi',said a man who was sitting at the far end who wasnt visible due to the gang, but now he was clear ..., 'what sort of brother is he? i curse him to cry all his life to do this to her, but this wish if his i wont let him fulfill it'she said to herself and,...she went in the bogie, went to her seat, took her bag, digged in it, and took a few things with her, she came out, saw her watch, she had 8 min. to save her, coz the train was to leave the station in 8 min.,...she went near the restroom door, took a fire extinguisher along with her which she had taken from the shelf near the vendors shop, she took a box and with a match stick burnt it and threw it in the room, in not more than 30 seconds whole room filled with smoke, everyone began to cough,...now she took her hai band from her hair and made a slingshot out of it, took a stone and broke the only bulb that was lit in the room,...whole room was dark she opened the door , picked up the extingusher, and started blowing it on everyones head , she somehow reached to the girl, held her hand, made her stand and took her along,...upon reaching the door she burnt a few more boxes she threw them in room and closed the door from outside, she made the girl board the train, fortunately, train started moving, it started and then paced, after 5 minutes she tried to talk to the girl, but got no response, she shook her, and the girl was concsious, she made her eat what she had in her bag, and then bandaged her wounds with whatever she could manage, after 1 and a half hour, she could get out everything from the girl(2), she was pregnant and wasnt married, her brother was against marraige and after knowing the news of pregnancy was fierce,she had run away from house, and when reached the station, he had caught her, killed her beau and was about to kill her too, to punish her he had let his gang mates to ruin her...she was feeling bad for the girl(2), and had a rage to kill any brother of this sort...a station came and the train stopped, girl(2) asked for water, she(girl(1) gave it to her, and saying she will be back in few min went to washroom, when girl(1) returned she was sweating, and holding the girl(2)'s hand, she took her to the door and made her jump off train and gave her the money she had ...instructed her to go to any place where her brother will not reach her,...train started moving...after 3-4 minutes she came back to her seat and was shocked to see the other girl's brother on her seat who had a smirk on his face, she stepped backwards...1 step, he got up...another, he moved forward,...another she saw two more sitting, on the next seat, and then they were all together, she joined her hands kept them on her head bowed and said aloud ,'Jai bhole naath', seeing this, men were amazed, they did the same , they too bowed,...when they got up she was gone, the leader instructed to find her, and they started running behind her..., while running she observed whole train was empty, not even a single person, and now she understood why no one came in this train and especially at this hour, she ran and ran and ran, without looking behind even once, she crossed several bogies,...AND then...BANG!!!
***The End***
***Index***
***The Beginning***
pg1
***Afreen Afreen***
pg 7
***Anjaana Anjaani***
pg 10
***Milenge Milenge***
pg 13
***jindagi do pal ki***
pg 15
***Dor***
pg 18
***NOTE***
pg 21
***new ch***
pg 22
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to know what happened next
u will have to tell me if i should continue or not, and tell me if u liked it or not
all sorts of comments are welcome, as long comments as possible😆😆
it is almost the first chap only, i would like to clear it that nothing is written to disgrace anyone it is just the beginning and the tragedy is to give the plot a start and not to disrespect anybodies feelings
hope you like it, coz it is the first chap everyone is getting the pm who are in my pm list but from next time as per the situation, only those people will get pm who want it, so tell me if u want pms
anyone who still waits for twilight sort of story which i once started, pls u will have to wait till june next year, coz i cant write it now...sorry
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loads and loads of love
heer193
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