FF-I like the way it hurts-1/11ch17pg58+NOTE pg 59

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..Naina..

@..Naina..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#301

o.O very hot! awesomely written...and wow just wow😳

can't wait to see how the morning after will turn out....hope they're not too awkward with each other....but looking forward to more romance😉

thanks for the pm!

~Naina

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natasha

@zzzzzzzzzzfffff

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Posted: 15 years ago

#302

wow! okay so i like the fact that they consummated their marriage because it adds an interesting effect. they aren't completely in love yet they have been intimate already. now i feel like they are going to be awkwardly close- which is adorable!!!!

I saw your reply about new characters which is awesome, i want preet and meher to explore with other people but can you have them end up together please!!!? i love them- i think they are perfect compliments!

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

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Posted: 15 years ago

#303

ooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhooooooooooooooooooo......

awsum yar....too hot!!!.....wow first nite n steamy romance.....

too gud yar....thnks for da pm...do continue asap...plz....

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swati

@sweta2005

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Posted: 15 years ago

#304

awesomeeeeee too good very nice part.

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Motibah

@Ilovepie.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#305

WOW that was HOOOT☺️ *blushing* The way you decribed it was soo good!😍

LOL I bet they'll feel akward in the morning😆 Cant wait to read the next chapter! Update Soon!😃

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friendsforeverh

@friendsforeverh

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Posted: 15 years ago

#306

Oh my God that was just Wow......It wa actually Hot.....loved the way you explained... having this update after soo much of pleading.... i forgive you for everything......

now im just waiting for the next part as usual..... dying to read what will premeer gonna do or how they will react in the morning....

Madiha

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sana

@saniiaaa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#307

ehm ehm ehm.......😳😳😳 em blushing too hard nd my sis must be thinking m sum kind ov jrk.......... it ws HOT & of curse awsume beautiful ..... cnt thnk of other words em soo lost in it 😳 GREAT JOB EXCELLENT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK !!!👍🏼

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

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Posted: 15 years ago

#308

ok..time to comment.. i read this last night but didnt know what o comment..i was absolutely speechless so i htought why not wait for other comments and then maybe you'll find a word.. i agree with everyone else here..HOT!!!ihow'd u find words for that?!lol

wonder how their relationship will form now.. i mean how will they overcome the awkwardness! now to preet. who's he's thinking of...not meher.. but i guess u dont always know ur soulmate at the first right.. u gotta explore at times!lol

continue soon

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isomers

@isomers

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Posted: 15 years ago

#309

wow. *ahem* don't really know what to say..but I will say this, I definitely wasn't expecting them to consummate! 😆 but then I realized you hate the way they show it in TV shows..

that was an awesome chapter!! very..hot?🤔 yes, I think that suits it. and Preet is into someone else? ): aww, poor Meher! I hope she's his end destination though. 😃

😆 I bet Prem and Heer are going to feel extremely awkward the next morning!! can't wait to read it!

update soon!
-Nitya

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-SnowKid-

@-SnowKid-

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#310

Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee part...........................loved it loved it loved it loved it...................prem n heer was like☺️☺️☺️☺️.......cant explain yaar................the way u described it thats just👍🏼 ...............thnx for the pm................................update soooooooooooooooooooooooon

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