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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyyyyyyyyy

awesome n very nice ff really loved it
w8in 4 d next
update soooooooooon plz
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb!...
wow!...atlast prem and heer got married!....
i know prem will do nothing with heer!
wonder whose the guy that is helping prem!...
continue soon!
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waiting 4 ur update.........
plzzz update soooooon
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hey I'm sorry I couldnt comment in detail earlier...oh btw, read my earlier comment in a funny way...I was happy to read such a lovely update but I was left mouth opened when u stopped right before what I was eagerly waiting for..hehehe...
coming to the update, I love Lalit !! I love him for giving Heer 5 yrs minimum to stay in london...Thanks to him, I need not worry much abt Prem fussing over that now..hopefully in those 5-8 yrs, both Prem and Heer would reach great heights in their career, or are u planning something else, whatever its fun to read...
haha loved Preet's part...aha so enter miss ashlesha , is it? Veera - Nihaal art is also interesting...and Maya -harman also meet ...good..
this Maya is really funny..
Thanks for keeping the marraige ceremonies short ..now cant wait to read how their life moves on...I am eagerly waiting to know what you will make Prem do...
eagerly waiting for the next update
luv
Angie
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Originally posted by: tadashi

now premeer's true love story starts! But i am worried- is preet going to have another love interest? poor meher she helped him so much- she should make him jealous!



I'm not sure myself at this point, but I will be introducing a couple of characters in the upcoming chapters 😳

Originally posted by: premheer19

Hi nics


hw r u?

Bcoz of my busy shecdule i am not able tohang out here regularly.Project,assigments & internals.I am totally pissed off bcoz of these assinments they make us to write again & again😡, I ll stop my bak bak,otherwise i ll go on & on. Updates were minblowing, i loved every bit of it.



CHAPTER-10

Awesome part

premeer met & checkhing out each other😳.

I like the way u've written their disasterous date.

I looooooooooooved meher in ur ff, i am not very found of her charecter in show,dont know y i really like way u vepotrayed her charecter in this ff.

She convinced preeth to apply for enterance exam was simply superb.



CHAPTER-11

Phabulous update

Milind-prrachi were doing great job👏👏👏.

Again loved meet scenes,

Oh poor meher got warning from balraj, seriously her love life would never go easy

Maya & her crazzzzzzzzzzzzzzy ideas, she definitly screw up heer's love life

Again milind-prachi being older couple, giving good advises to premeer



CHAPTER-12

U ve written amazingly each & every thing in this part😊

One dance change premeers life

Glad to know that finally prem agreed to move in heers apartment

Lol who would not like twillite, if not story...........tecqnical aspects were too good, i love cinematography of movie

I hate the fact that night ended with disaster, cant help both r right in their own way



CHAPTER-13

Veera is in love with nihal, its quite surprising😵

I dint like prems attitude😡, its high time.........................................

Akir kab tak prem dosronpe depend karega apni shadisuda zindhagi sambalnekeliye.............?

And who is misterious person, who is giving weired ideas to prem????????????

When ll prem learn it is his life & he should make effort to work his relationship with heer??????

This time maya is right, kash heer uski baath sunthi

Glad ur heading srtaight to wedding.



CHAPTER-14

Oh i really feel sorry for prem...........he is already away from home for 15yrs & lalit want him send prem away for another 5yrs, poor boy😭

Lalit is right afterall success is important, moreover even heer wants same thing for her carrier

May be this help premeer to solve their major differences.

Oh meher love life would never go easy, preeth is falling for another girl😲

Poor veera,nihal least interested in her. this ll be interesting to read further.

Is this misterious person helping or ruining prems marital life???????????????




Thank you sooooooooooo much for pms

continue soooooooooooooon.




Hey hun, thanks for the detailed comment. I'm doing fine, how're you? I understand about not having enough time, real life must always come first 😊 Yeah, Veera's in love with Nihaal because I wanted to explore a different aspect of their characters 😳 you know how it happened in the show- Veera always took him for granted and when we {and she herself} actually wanted her to stay around, she died, I always wondered what it would've been like had they given her the chance to pursue him 😳 hence this 😳 can't promise a happy end to their love track, we'll see how it goes. And about Prem's friend- 😛 I guess we'll have to wait & watch eh? 😉

Originally posted by: curledup

Bonjour! so reserved! :D



So going to wait for the comments! 😛

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: friendsforeverh

pplzzzzzz update krdo....waise where are you????? lagta hai bohat busy ho.



hey, sorry *hold ears* yes I've been a little busy- a little lazy and a little confused about how the next chapter should be 😳 hence the delay, will continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: angel82

hey I'm sorry I couldnt comment in detail earlier...oh btw, read my earlier comment in a funny way...I was happy to read such a lovely update but I was left mouth opened when u stopped right before what I was eagerly waiting for..hehehe...

coming to the update, I love Lalit !! I love him for giving Heer 5 yrs minimum to stay in london...Thanks to him, I need not worry much abt Prem fussing over that now..hopefully in those 5-8 yrs, both Prem and Heer would reach great heights in their career, or are u planning something else, whatever its fun to read...


haha loved Preet's part...aha so enter miss ashlesha, is it? Veera - Nihaal art is also interesting...and Maya -harman also meet ...good..

this Maya is really funny..


Thanks for keeping the marraige ceremonies short ..now cant wait to read how their life moves on...I am eagerly waiting to know what you will make Prem do...


eagerly waiting for the next update

luv

Angie



I did, no worries about it 😊 but I did know that most of you wouldn't be too pleased about the abrupt halt 😳 about Premeer's time abroad, I'm not too sure about what it's going to be like- I just wanted the side characters out of the way for now 😆 and that does not include MEET and probably Veera-Nihaal 😕 but who knows? 😛 thanks for commenting
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey guys, thanks for commenting.

Everyone who asked me to update- I am in the process of writing the next chapter 😳 I knowww, I am too damn slow 😡 but I will update soon 😳

Everyone who wanted to be added to the PM list, thank you, you've been added.

Thanks for reading everyone!

Ciao 🤗
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Here's the next 😛 long awaited 'ahem' night 😆

Inspired by Bryan Adam's 'Let's make a night to remember' I suggest you listen to it while reading this 😳



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Chapter 15- A Night to Remember




Heer was standing there wondering what would happen when she felt his hand on her shoulder, she was nervous as hell and wanted to run away when he spoke, she'd never liked the sound of her name, but coming from him…the way her name sounded was enough to make her swoon…he spoke again and brought her out of her reverie…

Prem- Heer?...{she turned around} you okay?

Heer- I'm sorry, I was a little distracted

Prem- would you like to change first?

Heer {to herself}- change first? Oh my God! He's asking if I want to change before we…before we…{she could think no further because he continued}

Prem- or shall I go in before you?

Heer- huh?

Prem- I mean we can't stay in these clothes forever right? And since we're sharing a bathroom either one of us has got to change first…so…

Heer cut him off- I'll go…thank you

Prem {to himself}- great! Now she's behaving like a 16 year old virgin…she's not to make it easy for me…what does she think I am? This is a first for me too…not like I do this every night…

Prem's lost in thought and sitting on the couch as he tries to think of a way to break the ice and loses track of time…after about 20 minutes Heer comes out of the bathroom, she's changed into a black silk sleeveless nightie with a deep neck and back, another one of Veera & Meher's creations who'd insisted that she should have that and some sexy lingerie for her first night. Heer is grateful for the silk gown that goes with it and covers her, she feels protected…

Now she looks at her husband who's sitting on the couch thinking something and he hasn't noticed that she's come out yet

Heer- Prem…{Prem jolts} sorry, I didn't mean to scare you

Prem reddens- you didn't scare me…are you done?

Heer- yes

Prem- good…excuse me then…

Heer goes to the balcony as she doesn't know what else to do and she's there when Prem comes out of the bathroom wearing a T-shirt and tracks, he'd firmly refused when Veera & Meher had offered to make fancy nightclothes for him…he'd let them make all his wedding clothes but frilly nightclothes? No thank you! He was very comfortable in his Nike T-shirt and tracks, although he was more used to sleeping with in his shorts but he had to maintain decorum now. Prem looked at the figure standing in the balcony and walked to his closet and took out a box, wedding night present his mother had told him, every husband gives something to his wife…he opened the box and saw the diamond eternity bracelet he'd bought from Dubai on his mother's insistence- the Indian salesgirl at the store at shyly told him it would make a good wedding night present as he himself had no idea what to get her; it had been the first time he'd done jewelry shopping but his mother had deliberately insisted he get it from Dubai as she wanted him to choose something on his own without help from anyone…that's where he'd bought the earrings for his sisters. As he walked up to Heer he hoped she would like it

Prem- Heer {she turned around to look at him} the AC is on and you left the door open?!

Heer {embarrassed, comes in and closes the balcony door behind her} I'm sorry

Prem- nevermind…I, I got this for you {he clumsily hands her the box, she nervously takes it from him} actually…I didn't…I mean I got it because ma said there's this tradition…umm, I don't know if you know about…

Heer {as she opens the box}- I know…

Prem- great…I hope it's okay {he walks to the bed lies down, the room is bright with candlelight and
he doesn't have the heart to put them out as he doesn't know what she'll think of that}

Heer- it's very nice…thank you

Prem- you're welcome

Heer walks to her side of the bed and gets in, he has his back to her so she removes her gown and gets inside the covers. They're both lying with their backs to each other waiting for sleep to come.



Our heart can start beat in funny manner in the weirdest of situations, for Harman sleeping on the roof was an excuse for escaping the sound of mausaji's snores, he was glad that the wedding was over, now mausaji would go back to wherever he'd come from in Punjab and he'd get his room back, but tonight as he went up to the roof of his house he noticed a figure in white on Balraj uncle's roof and wondered who it was…he felt his heart beating for the first time ever, it had only functioned mechanically previously, but this was all about Mills & Boons.


Maya Binder was upset. She was happy for her friend but she felt out of place and lonely at the Maan residence now that Heer was married. She wondered what her friend was up to at the moment, was she thinking about her, Maya? Was she going to follow Maya's advice and be happy for an eternity or would she come back with a sob story the following morning? Maya knew it was wrong of her to intrude, but she couldn't help it. She'd met Heer at Oxford five years ago when Heer had first set foot in the United Kingdom, she was new and Maya had taken her under her wing, she was used to playing mother hen now, the transition- giving Heer her personal space, was going to be difficult now.

Maya sighed as she decided the best way out would be to occupy herself with the restaurant her father wanted to open in Delhi, she'd faffed around for nearly two weeks in India, it was time to get back to work.



Preet lay on the living room floor between two cousins from Ludhiana who kept kicking him in their sleep, he'd hated giving up his room for relatives visiting from Punjab but he'd had to do. However, he didn't feel bad about it tonight, the reason was a particular girl, she'd clouded his mind, stopped him from thinking straight. For once he wished the setting would have been different, that they'd met at a club or a friend's party. He knew he wouldn't get into the MBA program so easily and wondered when and how he'd be able to meet her next


Not too far away in a hotel room in Delhi lay a girl, she couldn't sleep because she'd been dreaming a dream with open eyes. She wanted to get into the MBA program, spend two years away from the shackles of her family and then head a marketing and PR firm- but today, something was disrupting her, someone didn't let her sleep. It was the guy she'd bumped into. The girl knew her limits, she knew how conservative her family was and how protective her brothers were of her so she'd always avoided looking at boys as she believed one thing led to another, but this guy- he was different, there was something different about him and she wondered when she would meet him next.



Veera was glad she didn't have to give up her room or worse still share it with some nosy relative. She knew she had Kulraj's kids to thank for it. Her sister and her kids were in the room and Vikas & Tanu weren't too bad once you'd put them to sleep, Veera had been careful enough to spread a plastic sheet under the bedsheet and had told her sister she didn't want her mattress to smell of baby piss when they went back to Chicago. She was now thinking about Nihaal and wondering why he'd looked at Kulraj with such…she couldn't find the right word…wait, longing? Yeah! That was it! He'd stared at her sister with such longing and held her babies with such love and she wondered why he'd done it. Nihaal was an introvert and no matter how much she tried, she just couldn't bring him out of his shell, why was different around Kulraj then? Did he…? No, no, it wasn't possible, Veera cursed herself for such thoughts. Nihaal was not that kinda guy, especially because Kul di was married, may be he was closer to her because she was nearer to his age? Veera knew she'd have to try harder now that PB was married. She'd heard Teji auntie voice her concerns over Nihaal's reluctance to get married, she knew things would take a sharp, speedy turn now that PB- who was the same age as Nihaal had gotten married. Nihaal being the Maan's oldest son and first born, Teji and Balraj would want the perfect girl for him, Veera didn't want to get married before she graduated but wondered if she could afford to risk things for two years, she knew she'd have to take things to a parental level soon, if Nihaal Maan wasn't going to court her their parents would intervene. Filled with new resolve, she went to sleep.



Maya made her way to the kitchen and made herself a cup of hot chocolate and was surprised to see Meher there

Maya- hey, what's up with you?

Meher- Maya di, you scared me {Maya rolled her eyes} I can't sleep

Maya- nor can I, what are you making?

Meher- hot chocolate

Maya- wow! I was just about to have some myself, make me a cup?

Meher- sure, would you like some hot chili pepper in it?

Maya was not sure if she'd heard her right, Heer's younger sister was not only obese, she was weird- some what?

Meher smiled before explaining patiently- hot chili pepper, you know the Aztecs were the first to serve chocolate as a drink, but they also mixed it with hot chili pepper to make a really special beverage. It makes a simple drink really exotic

Maya gave her a fake smile- wow, you're interested in food history, I thought you were studying fashion

Meher grinned at her- yeah, I love my food. I actually took evening classes at this really cool place for a year. They not only taught us how to make wonderful dishes, they also taught us about stuff like food history, nutrition, health and benefits of various types of food, I have a diploma!

Maya rolled her eyes and muttered under breath- I shouldn't have asked, you're figure gives you away

Meher looked up at her- did you say something? {Maya mumbled a quick nothing so Meher continued} you're in the restaurant business, right Maya di? I thought you'd know

Maya smiled- I am darling, but I'm only involved in the business aspect of it, my team handles it all

Meher- oh, so do you want it?

Maya was confused- what?

Meher- the hot chili pepper? In your hot chocolate

Maya- oh sure…I can give it a go I guess


Minutes later, the girls sat on the kitchen table sipping hot chocolate and Maya had to admit the pepper gave the hot chocolate an amazing flavor, she didn't admit it to Meher- a restauranteur's thing, her dad had taught her never to say if she liked something but always make a mental note of it to use at their restaurants later.

Meher- I'm going to miss Heer di

Maya was brought out of her reverie and paused for a while before answering- why Meher? She's been away for 5 years, you should be used to it

Meher- I know it's going to sound weird, but it's not going to be the same anymore. She's got responsibilities now, I won't be able to call her anytime of the day- or night like I used to and I know she's never coming back to stay with us

Maya felt sorry for Meher- you know you have me Meher, I've always wished I had a younger sibling, we can both be soul sisters, I have that bond with Heer you know

Meher smiled- really Maya di?

Maya smiled- yeah, I'm going to be in Delhi for a while you know, we'll hang out, do girl things, even I'm going to miss being around with Heer all the time, we can fill that gap for each other

Meher was touched- thanks Maya di

Maya shifted the discussion to Heer- speaking of Heer, what do you know about her mother in law?

Meher was surprised to hear about Gayatri auntie but continued- Gayatri auntie? We've known her all our lives, she thinks of us as her own children

Maya- really? Because I got weird vibes from her today'

Meher was confused- why Maya di? She's quite nice

Maya- not saying she's a bad person, but you know, she's a mother in law now

Meher was finding it hard to keep up with Maya's cryptic talk- so what di?

Maya- all mother in laws make life miserable for their daughters in law

Meher- all of them? You're generalizing di

Maya- nope, I'm not, I'm so glad Heer's going to be away from her in London because I knew she'd have made Heer miserable

Meher- why?

Maya- you know, my mum died when I was quite young but she used to say that mothers in law hate their daughters in law because they remove the underwear the mother's kept up and firmly round the bum and the thingies for 25 years {Maya giggled at her own joke before holding up her hands} 26 in Prem's case, my dad was 25 when he got married

Meher forced a laugh, what was it that Preet always said about Maya? Yeah, a little loose in the head, that made her laugh genuinely and Maya thought she'd actually liked the joke

Maya- I know that's really funny Meher but there's a lot of depth in that joke, I wonder what Heer's doing right now?

Meher thought she'd had enough and wondered how her sister managed to stay sane with Maya around, she faked a yawn and excused herself- I think I should go to bed now, thanks for the company Maya di {she chuntered as she made her way to the sink} this is a night to remember! Wonder what Preet will have to say when I tell him



It had been an hour since they'd been in bed and Prem couldn't sleep without turning to face her- Heer, are you awake?

Heer- yes

Prem- why?

Heer is surprised and she turns to face him- why are you still awake?

Prem still has his back to her- I can't sleep

Heer- neither can I

Prem- try…

Heer- yeah {and she turns her back again}


After a while, Prem turns around to face her and he sees that she's sleeping with her back to him, he sees her bare shoulder and back notices that the nightie she's wearing is very revealing and knows it Veera & Meher's job…he is stimulated as he feels lust take over; the candlelight and her exposed skin do wild things to his body…he reaches forward to caress her shoulder and runs his hand along her arm as he moves near her…Heer is still awake and shivers at his touch…is this how it's supposed to be? She thinks; Prem realizes she's awake and keeps caressing her arm with one hand as he moves her hair away with the other and leans in to kiss her in the crook of the neck…his mind explodes as he takes in her smell and as she shivers at the contact and involuntarily moves closer to him…he wraps a hand round her waist and twirls his leg with hers as he continues to kiss her on the neck and shoulder and nip her ear…Heer is aroused…she's never felt like this before and her innocence and naivety makes her respond to his touch in a way that drives him crazy…Prem gently turns her around and she's now lying flat on her back still looking away from him so he gently moves her face to make her look up at him…

As Heer looks into those dark eyes she sees unmasked desire, she wonders if it's okay to go on. Is being married good enough? Weren't they supposed to hit it off on an emotional level first? Form a bonding? Get connected to each other? She isn't able to think further as Prem bends in to capture her lips with his…Heer is not sure how to respond so she lets him kiss her at first as he sucks her lower lip…nibbles…increases and decreases the pressure doing wild things to her mind and logic vanishes, her hands go up in his hair and he increases the pressure demanding entrance into her mouth, his tongue meets hers when he's allowed…Heer naively kisses him back and he can't help but think how naively she's kissing him back…and he thinks how weird that is as he just can't imagine that she's never been with a man…nevertheless her innocence and beauty captivate him and he nibbles and sucks at the mouth and moves his hand to cup her bosom…and caresses over the silky material…Heer moans and excites him further…Prem removes his shirt and kisses her again…as his tongue explores her mouth her hands explore his torso and his well toned muscles excite her further, her hands move down to the elastic band of his track pants wanting to push it down and discover his roused manhood which she feel through the fabrics but instead of pushing it down right away she toys with it with the hesitance of someone who's never done it before…her innocent touch explodes his brain as he's caught up in the flames of desire and quickly undresses her as the need to touch every bit of her skin takes over…as Prem touches the tip of her bosom and feels it respond to his touch he kisses her there, toys with the tip before replacing his mouth with his fingers.
Heer moans and digs her nails into his back as sweet, sweet desire takes over like a tornado…she clutches him and entwines her legs with his. This simple action is enough to make him forget the need to touch her, kiss her caress her…all he can of now is taking her…making her his forever.
He pushes down his track pants and Heer moans as his manliness comes in contact with her skin, Prem gets on top of her and captures her mouth with his and thrusts inside with urgency.

Heer forgets all pleasure and moans in pain…she'd heard the first time is never fun but never had she imagined that it could be this painful, a lone tear escapes her eye as she's unable to do much her…they haven't broken the kiss so it's hard to understand that she's moaning in pain. Prem comes out and as he's about to penetrate again he realizes the tightness he'd felt, he pauses for a second as he feels the warmth of blood in between her legs and breaks the kiss in shock…shit! She'd actually been naive, she just wasn't acting it she'd actually never been with a man before...
Prem curses himself for hurrying the consummation and resumes the act of giving Heer pleasure in an attempt to arouse her again…he kisses her neck and her bosom…gently nibbling, sucking, licking and moves downwards to kiss her on her belly…he then moves all the way down to her toes and kisses her feet slowly moving up to the ankles then further up to the knees and then her thighs…he can feel that Heer is starting to get aroused again…his own desire is overpowering but he manages to control it somehow and continues to kiss her as he moves all the way up to her bosom again and kisses her…when he feels that Heer is completely aroused he penetrates her again, carefully this time and feels the rawness inside her…Heer is a bit hesitant this time but he takes care to keep her aroused as he takes her and slowly and gradually increases the pace of his thrusts to bring both of them to satisfying climax.

They later snuggle into each other's arms and sleep, subconsciously happy…she feels complete today and he feels good about himself as the fact that Heer belongs to him & him only does wonderful things for his ego…he pulls her closer to him in his sleep and she snuggles up to his chest feeling protected.


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A little too 'bold' eh? 😳 I wanted to put up a warning but that would've been such a spoiler! 😳 so I do hope under 16's are not reading this fic 😳😆 I decided that they should just go ahead and consummate their wedding on the first night because that's when a lot of couples actually do it and also because a conversation was asking for A LOT of brains 😆 this was easier 😆 but it did take me 5 days to write the consummation part, the rest I was done with quickly 😳 anyway, please comment 😳
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One word HOT! 😳😳😳

Dang, that was a juicy bit...and I could see that happening hormones take over and the next thing you know...you've done it 😆

The morning after is going to be really weird for them I guess?

Really liked this chapter...aside from the PH romance part the rest of the chapter was filled with a lot stuff.

Gayatri is starting to maybe act like the mother in law
Harman and Maya
Preet and this mysterious girl...poor Meher 😔

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
Edited by iheartChai - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
this ws relly a hot one!!!!!
m at loss of wrds aftr reading this!!!!!!
u described evrythng so beautifully!!!!!
really a night to remember !!!!!!!!!!
nyws watng fr the nxt part nw!!!!!!
pls update soon!!!!

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