FF-I like the way it hurts-1/11ch17pg58+NOTE pg 59

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Jyothi N

@-Jyo-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#311

Awesome update

I am doing good😊. I love veer this way. Veer drooling over nihal, its really fun to read, even i never wanted her to dead in show. Cant help she got another show & left kis desh😭. I would love to read wt ever u write, now i ve become fan of ur writting. For sure i ll wait to see who is prems friend who is giving weired ideas, do i ve any other choice???????????? Nahi na

Now cming to update, Very well explained hw uncomfortable everyone r feeling................this happens oftenly when we ve lot of guests at home😡. Umm now veera is on right track👏. Maya-meher conversation was hilarious😃.

I was taken back aft reading consumate part, Nikila one who belives falling in love actually wrote this part😲. U want them to fall in love na then hw cm u wrote this one😕 & plz dont give reason wt u mentioned above. I know that u hate wt they show in daily soaps.......................... still i dint expect this one. Now i am eagarly waiting see hw they feel when woke up in mor, akward or ok with it😉. Continue soon..........................................................

p.s. lol most of them in this forum r under 16, hw can expect them to miss such an juicy ff😉

Edited by premheer19 - 15 years ago

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Nisha

@nisha1984

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#312

awesome part
please add me in your pm list.

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Khadija

@khajju

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#313

hot hot hot....this is whti cud say.....i really luvd.....u explained everything sooo beautifully......especially premeer part....yes now they are premeer.....luvd their romance.....i had goose bumps reading it....still blushinggg.....rest of the part was also good....meher maya part was funny....luvd every bit of it.....awesmeeeee.....thanks for pm...cant wait to see wht happens next in the morning....hope for more premeer romamce....update soon plzzzzzzzz

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Diya

@premdesh

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#314

☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

perfect writinggggggggg.

awesome update

want next part with confident move of premeer

plz next asapppppppppppppppppp

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sonia7

@sonia7

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#315

awome update

very wild one lol

wow they became one instead of waiting to know each other fully

i hope gaya3 doesent change and act like a proper mother in law

thanks for the pm

update soon

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newt2007

@newt2007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#316

not only the night to remember. its a update to be remebered by us.

very hot.

two shy and tensed couple became one.

Prem taking care of their love making very carefully.

you expressed their every feeling wonderfully.

now both feeling happy and complete.

waiting for their morning scene.

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Angie

@angel82

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#317

*fans herself * that was Hot 😳

But the update was just perfect...that was what i was expecting to happen coz like you said most couples do it on their first night -in normal cases...And the way you have written everything from the time prem entered the room till the end was just perfect - the sequence of events were genuine ... And yeah though the consummation part was bold, it was needed to convey Prem's thoughts and Heer's thoughts during the entire thing..Prem actually wasnt expecting heer to be a virgin? duffer !!just becoz she lived abroad for some yrs.... I can imagine how happy he must be to know that she was one , esp when he himself was one..heheh...and dont worry , the under 16s on the forum are all used to all this...hehehe...your 5 days ka mehnat really paid off...that was awesome...hehehe..

NowI cant wait to read what happens ahead in their lives...from the morning after..

I really am not interested in any other pair other than premeer...but still u have writtten all the other parts also well..

Edited by angel82 - 15 years ago

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-alisha-

@-alisha-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#318

did i just read something😆?omg that was the most bold consummation ive ever read on IF.....my frnd told me abt this ff (special mention abt premeer part) so i came here and speed read the other parts, read the ahem part.....girl u r surely to go places.....and no worries i toh surely am not under 16......phew still feeling the hotness

i wonder what will happen in the morning...do update soon and oh can i get a pm?

Edited by alisha_harshiti - 15 years ago