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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zigzagway_sadi

awesome update


prem heer dream song sequence was superb romantic... - thanks very much for loving it


looking forward to the next part..

continue soon..

thanks for the pm.. - ur welcome

take care

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sadhz

Awesomeee update...loved it - thanks a lot


omg loved prems dream...hottt...😳.. - glad u did as everything to do with them is hottt

cant wait for nxt chap...plz plz update soon...thnx for d pm - ur welcome




Originally posted by: AMMI6

awesomeee updatee loveedd it - thanks very much


So Heer was surprised 😛by Preeth's hug🤗, hope againn preeth doesnt force her and consoling Heer, - yes no drama which is gud

but really confused of things happened want to clear with Ash but happy that kulraj-kiran marriage was not affected by this. - yes somethings are solved yet others remain

Prem😭 is guilty abt his wrng decison and also not listening to his mother on Veeras Marrge, and also disturbed😕 by Heers question - too much on his table

and so Prem decided to talk to Heer,
😒Surprise to see Heer in Rv house ,lovedd the ❤️Prems romanticc dream😍 anddd songg in Rvs housee, interstingg 😉😉 - Yeh I'm glad u really luved it

waitinggg forrr next updatee soon

Edited by awaazilicious - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz update Sooon!! CAnt wait any longer
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awaazilicious I'm new reader and caught up with all the chapters yesterday.

Whoa you're an amazing story teller. I love the twists you bring in each chapter.
Sometimes there are just so many twists in one chapter! I found this is the best part in your story to look forward to.
The concept is catchy and it lives up to the title of your story 👍🏼
The whole story revolves around bunch of friends. It's basically how they help each other in life. This is something I can easily relate to. Great job⭐️

Pics shared are cute. I think sometimes you shared vms too.

I'm not fond of songs sequence mix with story, so I had to skip those parts. I did the same for dreams bec. they usually involved songs.

It's definitely v. entertaining. My fav. in story is comic relieves. I always enjoy it no matter which character does it.

I like the first scene, Pot breaking. It got my attention 😆

Ash is wild wow & totally unpredictable.
Heer is so cute and some what different from the show. I kind of like her being the carefree, youngest kid in the family.
Prem is a 180 turn from the show hehe.
Veera is caring sis, that's nice too.
G3 doesn't have much to say in the story, but it's fine for me.
Harman being so caring despite family situation is interesting.
Preet & Meher are cute, though different from show. They're still v. caring to everyone they know.
RV & Naina & their children are very entertaining 😆 Family scenes, interaction with kids are like watching movie - great job writing those scenes.

I could see the similarities you bring in and also how you define each character with unique personality.

So many jokes / funny moments I enjoyed but like all of your other readers, this line really sticks to my head:
"Log bacche kyu paida karte hain?"😆

Hope you'll find time & take interest in continuing the story. Again I'd mention, I like the way you write chapters with so many twists - you really get your readers' attention.😎
You're an awesome entertainer. Hope we'll see next update by you.🤔

Keep up the writing & wish you all the very best👍🏼





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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

awaazilicious I'm new reader and caught up with all the chapters yesterday. - thats really gr8


Whoa you're an amazing story teller. I love the twists you bring in each chapter.
Sometimes there are just so many twists in one chapter! I found this is the best part in your story to look forward to. - aaaw thanks alot for noticing that and enjoying it

The concept is catchy and it lives up to the title of your story 👍🏼 - i'm glad u've found it so

The whole story revolves around bunch of friends. It's basically how they help each other in life. This is something I can easily relate to. Great job⭐️ - surely as we all have a few friends who actually do stick together and help us through life

Pics shared are cute. I think sometimes you shared vms too. - yeh I did so thanks for finding them cute

I'm not fond of songs sequence mix with story, so I had to skip those parts. I did the same for dreams bec. they usually involved songs. - its ok

It's definitely v. entertaining. My fav. in story is comic relieves. I always enjoy it no matter which character does it. - hehe yeh that is important in stories to lighten up things for the readers

I like the first scene, Pot breaking. It got my attention 😆 - well that was the intention hehehe

Ash is wild wow & totally unpredictable. - yes she and very positive

Heer is so cute and some what different from the show. I kind of like her being the carefree, youngest kid in the family. - surely as it gives her more ground

Prem is a 180 turn from the show hehe. - oh yes totally

Veera is caring sis, that's nice too. - hmmm yep she is very positive too

G3 doesn't have much to say in the story, but it's fine for me. - well truly i wasn't that fond of her at all

Harman being so caring despite family situation is interesting. - well yeh since he only wants love

Preet & Meher are cute, though different from show. They're still v. caring to everyone they know. - surely as i made everyone quite different from their original roles

RV & Naina & their children are very entertaining 😆 Family scenes, interaction with kids are like watching movie - great job writing those scenes. - thanks very much for loving them and their scenes

I could see the similarities you bring in and also how you define each character with unique personality. - yeh i wanted to reflect everyone in a different light

So many jokes / funny moments I enjoyed but like all of your other readers, this line really sticks to my head:
"Log bacche kyu paida karte hain?"😆 - hehe it seems to be everyone's favourite

Hope you'll find time & take interest in continuing the story. Again I'd mention, I like the way you write chapters with so many twists - you really get your readers' attention.😎 - thanks again a lot

You're an awesome entertainer. Hope we'll see next update by you.🤔

Keep up the writing & wish you all the very best👍🏼





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Posted: 13 years ago

~~~Part 30~~~


Of course the kiss was totally unexpected not to mention that Prem's arrival was unexpected altogether. She wasn't sure how to react since the kiss had totally lost all her senses to think right yet she could understand that whatever happened wasn't right so the spell soon broke out. She pushed him back and glared at him catching onto her breath.

On the other hand he was stunned for some time as he couldn't believe he just did that. The last he remembered he had stood and watched her play in the water with the girls yet how did he come and kiss her he had no clue. Was he still enthralled by the dream? Perhaps he must have been other wise he wouldn't have had done that in full senses. He could see how timid she appeared and he had to admit he had scared her.

"What the hell do you think you're doing Mr. Prem Juneja?" she burst out on him. "Aise hee chalte phirte aap samajhte hain ke aap jo chaahe karsakte hain?" she complained as she wiped her lips with the back of her hand.

He gave her an apologetic look. "I'm sorry yet I don't know what happened to me I..."

She didn't let him finish, "just forget it." She turned away from him to hide her flushed face. "What are you doing here?' she knew if she looked into his eyes any further then she wont be able to control herself at all so it was best to look the other way.

Yet before he could have answered the two twins returned to get their babysitter back. However when they saw Prem they paused and quickly went and hid behind Heer as if he was a monster. "What is he doing here?" Simran asked outrightly since she never had liked him at all. She gave him a mean look.

Heer explained to Simran not to talk about her elders like that and it was very rude. Then she told both the girls to go and play and she would join them soon. They agreed and went off and then she turned around towards him.

"I'm sorry I scared you like that yet my intentions were totally different." He said something and his heart something else. It was true that he hadn't thought of running into her there yet when he did he couldn't control his inner inhibitions any longer. Yet at the same time he felt very stupid and he totally hated looking stupid. "Actually I'd come here on important business for RV and I guess he isn't home." He stopped as he could see that slight bit of disappointment on her face which didn't please him much.

Of course she was disappointed because the way he had approached her had made her believe for those mere few seconds that he had actually come just looking for her. If only it could have been that reason. Then again she had to be dreaming in order to think that would ever become true. No way was she going to display her true feelings so she turned away again. "I really need to go back to those girls." Then she walked off back inside.

All he did was stared at her leaving. It was true that he had come there initially for RV yet he was going to go to meet her in the beginning but then had decided to have a detour before that. Yet now when he had her there and then, he thought he shouldn't waste anymore time so he also followed her inside.

Simran and Sneha were again bickering at each other and Heer tried her best to resolve their matter and finally they agreed as she bribed them with a full bowl of ice cream.

They all made their way downstairs to the kitchen and she told the girls to go and set out the table whilst she served the ice cream in the bowls. They looked very excited and ran outside preparing theirselves for the treat.

Meanwhile Heer successfully had taken out the box of cream from the freezer and then searched around in the cupboards for the bowls. It was a huge kitchen so it was hard to find all the things and she looked frustrated. She just wondered where the chef and the servants had gone off at that time because if they would have been there then her job would have been easier. Whatever it was she finally found the bowls yet they were put high up. "Great!' she complained. Her height was good enough yet that cupboard was still a bit higher than her so she stood on her toes in order to reach out for them.

She struggled for the next two minutes yet it was difficult, when another hand intervened and pulled down the bowls for her. She looked uncomfortable and nervous as it was none other than Prem. She wondered what he was still doing there. Perhaps there was something he wanted to say. Then the events of previous night ran in her head and she felt that tid bit of embarrassment. What if he had come for that? What had she really done or what had she told him?

With minimal conversation between them she took the bowls and placed them on the counter to fill them up. All the time she could feel his presence towering over her and that just raised her heart beats further. The whole idea of someone constantly staring over you would make anyone conscious.

Prem wanted to tell her everything he felt yet he just didn't know the right way. He was afraid that she would take it in a bad way and he couldn't tolerate appearing so weak and helpless. He slowly went and stood behind her yet he had no clue whatsoever of the repercussions of his actions.

His presence was strongly felt behind her and the hairs at the back of her neck stood up. The same effect whenever they had become that close and she had lost her self control. Why did he do that with her all the time? The scoop fell out of her hands yet she didn't have the courage to turn around and face him. She knew if she did then he would catch her in the enchantment which was going to ruin her.

He gradually put his hands on both her shoulders and turned her around towards him. Her eyes remained cascaded towards the ground. He slowly moved in closer. So close that she felt his breath over her face and she was forced to stare into his shining chocolaty orbs. "Mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hain Heer." He said softly yet his silky voice played tricks on her.

"K...kya?" she stammered out of anxiety.

However before he could have said anything further Simran ran inside the kitchen and complained about her delay in the ice cream. He looked very irritated with the disturbance once again he moved apart from her quickly so the child wouldn't suspect anything. Then he looked towards her harshly. "Haven't your parents taught you any manners not to disturb elders when they are talking?"

Simran looked slightly afraid and angry too at him for saying that. "Why is this mean man still here Heer aunty?" she yelled at him like a typical five year old throwing her tantrums around.

"Because he has some important business here and you don't have the right to ask that question." He burst out on her totally not thinking that she was just a child. "Now get lost from here and wait outside until we come out."

The poor child burst out in tears and ran outside as never before had anyone talked to her like that. Even her parents hadn't been that rude with her or scolded her and she really missed them right then. She so hated Prem and just wanted him to disappear from there.

Heer appeared very displeased with him. "What are you doing Prem?" she looked appalled. "She is just a five year old. You don't talk to children like that." She walked outside with the bowls of ice cream totally ignoring him. She no longer wanted to talk to him as he was a very mean man. The magic broke and he was back to his original self.

Outside she searched for Simran and found her crouched in a little corner of the hall as if it was her secret hiding place. She felt sympathy immediately after seeing the tears in her eyes and just wanted to hug the little one. She crouched down in front of her. "You know my mother always used to tell me when I was small that whenever we cry a little angel always flies over us to throw down their special fairy dust." Simran looked at her still sobbing. "The dust makes us stronger and stops us from crying." She had really got the attention of the little girl. "And I believe your parents have also taught you to always stay happy right and never to shed these precious tears."

The five year old twin wiped her tears innocently. "Then how will the angel throw his fairy dust on me?" she was so sweet that Heer just laughed.

"Don't worry I think you've cried enough for him to throw a lot of dust on you." Heer hugged her. "And he has given me the special task to make sure his job is done." Then she tickled Simran all over and she rolled on the floor giggling. She couldn't let her be so sad and was really happy to see the kid smiling again.

All that time Prem watched over them and couldn't understand how Heer did that. She held so much love inside her heart and everyone around her loved her so much. Yet in his life love had given him nothing but emptiness. The way she lovingly explained to the kid and made her happy again really reminded him of his father when he was young. He remembered how whenever he was sad his father always used to make him happy again with those special stories of his. Then one day he was gone and then there was no one left to make him happy any longer. No one could tell him those special stories as he had lost his faith in them totally.

The three girls enjoyed eating the ice cream on the table with a lot of messing about and fun. Heer teased them a lot and the girls also played around with her.

Prem was left with less choice and just stood there watching over them. He wanted to leave yet his feet didn't move an inch. He had the best moment to talk to her yet still there were a lot of obstacles. He felt kind of bad talking to Simran that way, yet he had just taken out his frustration. Then again he really didn't know how to handle kids.

Just then he felt some tugging on his leg and he looked down to find a sweet toddler staring up at him grinning away. At first he felt awkward and totally hated the idea of the messy kid wrapping herself around him since he couldn't tolerate it. He picked her up just to move her away from him yet Suhaana appeared quite fond of him and didn't want to leave him. She rested her head against his chest and carried on playing with the rattle toy she held in her hand.

Prem was confused and didn't know what he had to do. Never before had he handled a small child before and here that one completely leeched onto him. Yes she was cute yet he hated messy children and he just became agitated with her constant drool falling onto his shirt.

"Oh God the bad guy has captured our little sister." Sneha announced as she caught up with the scene. She looked scared. Simran joined in with her and complained too. Hopefully Heer quickly came and took Suhaana out of his hands to relieve him and he fussed about his hands and shirt being dirty.

He watched Heer walk away with Suhaana sleeping on her shoulder comfortably and he remembered about how she was also pregnant and one day would look the same with their kid. That thought scared him a lot and he wondered how he was going to handle that when he couldn't even tolerate having the kid beside him?

The two twins teamed up and pounced onto him. "Attack the bad man." And they jumped onto him and began attacking him like anything. "Yaaah!"

In return he tried to defend himself and to take them off him yet they seemed quite strong and weren't ready to let go. They were nothing but monsters and he was going to sort them out alright.

The girls held onto his hair tight and entangled his legs together and just punched him with their small hands here and there not letting him escape. It was time for revenge and the best moment for it.

Eventually Prem caught both of them in his grip and took them off him. He looked at them with a mean face which really made him look like a monster. "Both of you need serious discipline and now I'm not going to leave you." He dragged both of them strictly across the hall and up the stairs. They squealed and cried to get out of his grip yet he was in no mood to listen to anything. He just dragged them all the way towards a room and then pushed them inside. "You're going to be locked in here until you learn how to behave." Then he locked the door from outside and went back downstairs.

After putting a sleeping Suhaana inside her crib, Heer returned back downstairs and found Prem alone there. "Where are Simran and Sneha?" she looked around curiously.

At first he was busy pressing onto his slightly hurt head and then he looked up at her. "I've just put them some place for punishment." He looked annoyed.

"Punishment?" she looked astonished. "For what?"

His headache had become worse. "Look Heer I haven't come here to discuss them and their problems." He came closer to her. "I wanted to talk to you about something very important."

She was worried about the children. "I really should find them." She tried to walk away yet he held her back by holding her hand.

"You can't keep running away from this Heer." He pulled her in towards her and she collided with his chest and looked in bewilderment. "I've got many questions in my head which my heart totally wants to ignore and simply wants to break all the norms. My heart is yelling out to me to just break all the barriers yet I'm still not sure whether I want to do that."

Gradually she understood what he wanted to say yet she believed his eyes said something else and his tongue something else. "What are you trying to say Prem?"

He looked confused. "I don't know myself." He turned away and folded his arms across his chest. "Me nahi jaanta ke yeh kya hain Heer. Bus itna jaanta hu ke jabse tum meri zindagi me aayi ho tabse sab kuch badal gaya hain or..."

A knock and some wailing were heard and Heer's attention turned towards it. She looked up and heard the knock coming from one of the rooms. "You locked the kids in the room?" she looked outraged. "How could you be so cold Prem? Chote baccho ke saath aisa koi karta hain bhala?"

Some how he looked less affected. "Thori dair ander rahenge to apne aap sudhar jaayenge." He stood with his whole body stern.

She couldn't believe him at all. "Don't you have any compassion at all? How could you even think of doing something so mean?"

In reply he smirked. "Compassion?" he glared at her. "That word has no place for me in my life Heer." Then he walked off outside after he gave her a sad look.

That look wasn't hidden from her and she could feel that something was terribly wrong with him so she followed him outside in order to find out. He wasn't beside his car and wasn't anywhere around near so she looked towards the lawn at the back and found him sat down onto a stone step. She had never seen him in that manner and truly felt for him. She sat down beside him and put her hand over his to comfort him.

He didn't retreat his hand away yet on the contrary he felt better with her touch. "I was seven years old when my father left us." She listened curiously as for the first time he opened up to anyone. "He just left us without even thinking how we were going to support ourselves or what was going to happen to us after him." He sniffed as tears trickled out of his eyes. "Didn't even think twice of how his decision was going to affect his wife or his two little children. Nothing." She still had his hand in her's. "He never thought how his children are going to grow up without him and how much his disappearance is going to affect them. Kabhi kuch nahi socha Heer. Kuch nahi." He continued to cry quietly. "I saw my mother struggling to raise us all by herself and from that day I'd decided that I'll take care of her. It made me realise that how practical the world was and very selfish too where everyone thought just about theirselves." He stood up. "You know who the main culprit in all this was?" it was a rhetorical question. "Love!" he stated. "That word had totally shattered my whole life because for that my father abandoned his family and went off with another woman. That word had totally become my enemy." She looked very sad too. "It held no importance in my life any longer and I grew so much hatred for it that I deleted it from my existence."

After a brief pause she walked up towards him. "You can't carry on blaming 'love' for this Prem." She sighed. "Love has got nothing to do with this."

"You're right." He sniffed. "That's because there is no such thing as 'love'. It's all farce and a scheme to ruin people's lives and to stab them in their backs." He looked terribly miffed about it. "Pyaar vyaar kuch nahi hota bus ek dhoka or kamzori ke ilawa kuch nahi."

Obviously she disagreed. "No Prem, you're wrong. You've totally looked at it in the wrong way. It's true that your father left you all for someone else but think that if he would have left his love then would he have been able to give you all the happiness you wanted?" he just stared at her. "That way he still wouldn't have been able to do anything. You can't hold onto your previous experiences for the rest of your life. You need to learn to forgive and move on and then see how beautiful this world really is."

Her words worked as magic because he was totally under her spell. With the patience she explained everything to him was something else and he just felt more for her than before. Yet he was afraid to admit it was love because that word really was destructible. "Love can't make anything beautiful Heer. It's just a horrible thing."

Heer held onto both his hands. "Let go Prem." She insisted. "You need to let go of all this hatred and see the world in a new light. Don't see what you've lost but see what you've gained after that and now too." He was locked by her shining pearls. "Warna ek din aisa aayega ke tumhaare paas kuch bhi nahi bachega Prem is nafrat ke ilawa. Bilkul akele reh jaoge."

He shook his head. "Please don't rob me of my hate." Tears flowed down.

Her hand crested around his face. "It's the only way I'll be able to take you into the wonderful world of love." She wrapped her arms around him and held him tight in an embrace. She knew he needed someone right then and she was going to be there for his support. Not only because she loved him, but because she understood his sorrow now had that he told her his whole story.

Out of everything it was that touch which relieved of many things. His mind was clear and his heart jumped around merrily telling him exactly what he had to do.

A lot of commotion was heard and they both broke apart. Firstly they exchanged glances and then ran towards the noise. When they arrived at the scene they just stood totally shocked as all the servants and many neighbours had gathered around looking desperate.

Everyone yelled and screamed looking upwards. Apparently one of the rooms had set on fire and all of them had panicked. They didn't know what to do and the emergency fire brigade was on its way yet the incident had just made them all tensed.

"Oh my God Prem, the kids!" Heer totally freaked out and ran inside the house to save them. She had left them inside and had forgotten about them and it was her responsibility. How could she have been so careless? She just ran like anything to get them out of there. Prem had followed her inside to stop her from being emotionally insane as that wasn't going to help with anything.

Thankfully the fire hadn't spread across the bedrooms and Suhaana was safe inside the room. She quickly picked her up from the crib and ran outside to put her into safety.

Prem noticed that the blazes could be seen through the glass on the doors of the same room he had locked the twins in. He brushed his fingers through his hair and just ran towards the room to break down the door and save them. It was true that he was cold yet he wasn't a cold blooded murderer. It was his fault and he had to save them.

As soon as Heer safely got out with Suhaana, RV and Naina had arrived and also panicked with the commotion. Then when they saw the fire they also freaked out and ran to go inside yet stopped when they ran into Heer.

"What the hell happened here Heer?" Naina asked as she took Suhaana in her arms and held her tight to make sure she was alright. "And where are Simran and Sneha?"

It was only then that Heer remembered how they were locked away in the room by Prem and that room only was on fire. She was horrified and simply didn't know how to answer that. She couldn't allow Prem to get in trouble like that even though it was his fault but she just couldn't tell them anything.

RV asked her again but she couldn't say anything and just told them that the kids were still stuck inside and she just quickly brought Suhaana outside. He didn't wait anymore and ran inside the house to save his girls. He ran like there was going to be no tomorrow as there really wasn't going to be a tomorrow if anything happened to them.

However Prem had beaten him in the race as he had already broken into the room. At first was welcomed by a heavy blow of fire towards him but he ducked in time. Then he saw how the whole room was lit up because it was full of cardboard boxes and wooden furniture. He felt terrible for have had locked the two girls in there out of his anger. He should have thought twice before doing that. Whatever it was he had to get them out at any cost.

He managed his way inside escaping from the falling wooden bits and the fire coming in and out from around him. "Simran!" he yelled out her name dodging a falling wooden box. "Sneha!" yet no one answered him and looked around the huge room which was full in fire. "Simran! Sneha!" he still couldn't hear them or find them.

The fiery room caught RV's attention and he also raced towards it and before entering saved himself from the blowing fire. Then he rolled inside and once he was safe from the fire he looked up to find his daughters. "Simran! Sneha!" yet just like Prem he also couldn't hear them and he just searched in the huge room dodging the blazing boulders falling his way.

Finally Prem heard someone coughing so he quickly went towards it and found one of the girls lying on the floor barely coming back to life. He went and took her in his hands and wrapped her around himself to save her from the blazes. She was alive which was the biggest point and he looked around desperately for a way out. Going out of the door was out of the question because the fire had totally spread across there. What was he going to do?

The fire had spread quite very much across the room and RV was really afraid for his daughters. He couldn't loose them. He just couldn't. He wasn't going to give up obviously and called out to them. "Simran! Sneha!" there wasn't an answer from them but then he ran into Prem and was relieved to find one of them with him. The situation was such that he didn't even think about what he was doing there yet the most important thing was to find his other daughter. It was then that he heard a meek voice calling out to him and so he left Prem and went to rescue her.

Both the girls were safely in the arms of both the men yet the way out was the biggest question. They tried to go back towards the door yet the fire in between prevented them and the falling debris also was a hazard.

The fire brigade had arrived outside along side the ambulance. Naina was totally on the edge as RV and her kids were trapped inside. Heer tried to calm her down yet was equally tensed for them all. Especially for Prem.

Eventually Prem got the idea of breaking out through the window by tying a rope around them to climb down. RV agreed yet there wasn't anything handy to tie around in that fire. He broke the glass window and saw that it led right outside where everyone was. However the building was quite higher so the ladder of the fire brigade wasn't going to reach but the rope was going to help.

There wasn't much time to think so Prem quickly pulled down the curtains of the window which luckily hadn't caught onto the fire by then. He tore them in two and tied them tightly together. Then he created a rope and told RV how it was good enough to get down and then the fire brigade ladder was going to be able to take them down.

It was a risky job yet they had no choice. Prem tied it around a wooden stand which hadn't caught fire yet. He moved it away and then told RV to go down first with one of the girls. Of course RV tried to argue yet Prem just told him to go down and he would follow next. They didn't have much time so RV just complied.

He held onto one side of the rope and climbed out of the window. The onlookers from down really panicked and yelled out to what he was doing. Naina ran there and yelled out to him as she was really afraid for him. Yet no one allowed her to go further and Heer had to make sure she handled herself since in her condition it was nothing but dangerous to run around like that.

Slowly, RV climbed down the wall holding onto the rope and his daughter whom he had told to hold tight around his neck. He promised her that everything was going to be alright.

Prem watched him go down and then saw how the fire was catching up towards him. He had to hurry up. Right then, all he could think about was to save the little girl's life regardless of his. "Come on RV, come on." He spoke to himself as he impatiently waited for him to reach the ground safely.

It took about five minutes for that to happen as the fire brigade intercepted in between and RV and the girl were safely onto the ground. Medical care immediately took them in to saftety and Naina ran to them to make sure both of them were alright especially her daughter.

It was Prem's turn now yet the fire had caught onto the stand by then. Yet he didn't bother about that and took hold of the rope hanging outside. He just needed enough time to reach the ladder and then it was alright. Even if he got the girl to it and he would simply jump.

As he made his descent Heer's heartbeat increased to the higher levels that she just couldn't remain calm anymore. The fire looked very bad and she just prayed that nothing happened to Prem and the other kid. The whole guilt had built up within her that she failed in her duty and hadn't looked after them that they got in trouble like that. If anything happened then she wasn't going to be able to forgive herself.

Half way through Prem could feel the rope loosening up and he still held tight praying that he just needed to get down further more to drop the little girl onto the ladder where the fireman stood waiting for them. Once or twice he even dropped slightly down and everyone down below panicked and screamed but he held on tight. The rope was loosening since the fire had caught onto it quite much. He didn't give up and kept going with the girl tightly secured against him. He couldn't let go of her trust like that.

What happened in the next two minutes, no one had anticipated it. The rope broke into two and as soon as he dropped the girl in the arms of the waiting fireman, he lost grip and fell.

"PREM!" Heer yelled out as she saw him fall.

Edited by awaazilicious - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww...premeer kissed..wow...hmm...
loved the update... it wasd awesome...but prem being so rude..
and he is like a supermna..hope nthng has happened to hm...
i really do hope..
and he is thnkng abt his and heer's child??
omg... anyways thanks for a lovely update
thanks for the pm..
love ya
take care
Edited by vrushika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsum! luved it!
Premeer kiss and heer's reaction towards it!
Heer consolin Prem!
Prem the superman! :P
I hope Prem is fine!
do update soon! i didnt get d pm =/
btw i luved ur siggies of Raj! <3 he is lukin truly awsum!
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh god...he felll...waiting for d nx update...

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