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Posted: 13 years ago
pls cont soon
nd is prem ko kuch akal de do pls
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Thankss for the awesomee updategood that preeth😡 was not able hear Prems words concentrated on taking Heer home , Ashlesha plans😉 work at the right time andd finally Rishabh truth was known to Preeth and Prem and finally decided too break the marriage of Manmeet with Heer and Veeras with Rishabhh ,
wohh sooo cutee moments of Premee❤️r to short butt the quest of Heer will defnetly will not leave Prems andd hope he soon realisess it soon and confesss andd hangoveer off the drink of 😕Heer makes her forget what happened this gave a way a nice chance for Mehr to teasee her,
waitinggg to seee nextt update soon interestingg
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~~~Part 29~~~

As Heer approached the breakfast table she hesistated to the most. She couldn't remember anything that happened last night and Preet looked very displeased. She didn't know what to expect and just felt too ashamed to meet an eye with him.

Keeping that in mind she silently sat down and ate whatever she found handy making sure she didn't have to communicate with him at all. Mostly everyone was silent on the table and Meher and Kulraj just eyed each other wondering about the tension between the siblings. Although Kulraj had always been the mediator between the two, at that moment she also was unsure what to do. She had also known about the whole drama they had planned last night yet Heer being drunk wasn't part of it.

Soon after breakfast Heer just left without any sort of communication with anyone yet Preet stopped her and she tensed up. Of course she knew it was going to come sometime or the other yet whenever it was going to come she wasn't that much prepared. She waited anxiously as to what he was going to say and mentally prepared several good answers.

Yet she got a good surprise when Preet didn't say anything as she expected and just hugged her. As she lay in his arms she wondered what happened or had she missed something? Perhaps she hadn't done anything drastic last night at all. Nothing came out her mouth as she just wanted to know what was the reason for such affection coming from him?

It was true that Preet had been very angry last night and it had lasted till the morning yet Meher had worked a lot to calm him down and had made him realise that Heer's life had been saved. Something he always wanted for his sisters so there was no point of keeping grudges against things. She had done a mistake by getting drunk yet he was there to save her in good time. It had totally calmed him down and his love had surfaced above it. "I'm just glad that the truth came out before it was too late or I wouldn't have been able to forgive myself for have made the wrong decision." He held Heer tight had provided a touch of comfort. "I'm sorry Heer."

That touched her. "No bhaiya don't say that. You've always tried to do what's best for me and this wasn't your fault." She tried to console him.

Yet he still felt very bad, "I'd forced the relation upon you Heer and I should have asked for your consent." He frowned.

However Heer made him understand that she never held him responsible for anything and whatever happened was for the good. "Chalo jo bhi huwa lekin bhaiya please Kul di ka rishta mat tore na." Tears brimmed her eyes. "Kiranji is a very nice guy and he really likes di."

Her pleadings hadn't gone to waste because Preet had thought of cancelling Kulraj's alliance too yet Meher had convinced him a lot and then Heer also pleaded. Kulraj hadn't said anything surprisingly which had made him think that he couldn't force another relation. He left Heer and went towards Kulraj. "Are you happy with your alliance or have you just accepted for me?" he wanted a straight forward answer.

Kulraj thought over that as initially she had accepted for him but then she had really fancied Kiran and wanted to settle down with him. She told her consent and Preet was happy about it and then the decision had been set that he wasn't going to break her and Kiran's wedding. He was going to put everything in the past for her happiness.

It was a great relief for all of them and Heer was the happiest. However there still remained one glitch as she couldn't remember what had happened between her and Prem last night. She had to ask Ashlesha again to get more details as talking directly to Prem was totally out of the question.

Manmeet's house

The morning had been tough on him yet it wasn't the first time as he was a regular drinker. Many things had happened last night and the only last thing he remembered was dancing onto the floor like a wild party animal. After that he didn't even know what took place and had their plan worked or not. He would ask Ashlesha as soon as he got ready. He stepped out of the shower and covered himself with the towel whilst drying himself with the other.

Then he had just gotten out of the bathroom that he got a fright since Ashlesha literally jumped onto him. "Aaah!"

"Oh Manmeet I love you, I love you, I love you." She kissed him three times repeatedly onto his cheeks as she was very much hyper.

On the other hand he was very taken aback and still in a state of shock and he tried to defend himself thinking that she would attack any moment.

Obviously Ashlesha was too jolly to notice his weird countenances. "You won't believe how happy I am today. Finally I've got you all to myself." She hugged him tight not at all bothered about getting wet stuck against his wet body.

He still remained unsure as he only had half the information. He remained cautious as he knew how her behaviour was unpredictable. She could switch any moment. "What are your intentions?" he asked innocently.

"Karna to bohat kuch hain." She squealed like a teenager as she held onto him tight. "But nothing is going to take place until you take the initiative."

It just didn't make any sense and he was confused. "What are you saying Ash and what happened last night?"

She still hadn't let go. "Tell me what didn't happen last night. At first I thought it wouldn't work out at all but you did the magic and finally it's all over."

It certainly relieved him as his misery was over and he no longer had to go through the trauma of being gay. It had revolted him and truly raised questions against his sexuality. He was glad to see his Ashlesha was thrilled as he had done everything just for her.

They were interrupted by her phone ringing so she separated and took the call. "Oh bhaiya I was just going to call you." She greeted cheerfully. "Yes you're right, our plan worked last night...yes not exactly how we had planned but it still worked." She listened to her brother who was very happy for her too. "It all happened with your help and I got my happiness." She was very thankful. "Ok bhaiya me and Manmeet shall come to meet you in an hour and then I'll tell you everything in detail." She laughed as he cracked a joke. "Yeah of course. Ok bye bhaiya." She cut the call and then happily embraced Manmeet again. She was glad that she didn't have to go to work since Prem hadn't called her yet. Perhaps he didn't require her assistance which gave her more time to spend with Manmeet.

Everyone seemed to be happy then as they all got what they wanted. Veera and Nihaal also celebrated that Rishab was out of the picture and soon Prem would agree on their alliance since Gayatri had already talked to him. They were confident and just over joyed.

Prem's house

Where so many celebrations took place, Prem remained glum. So much had happened and he couldn't figure out whether it was correct or had he seen the world in a wrong way. On one hand he was glad to have saved his sister's future yet now he didn't know whether he truly had saved it or ruined it. He had broken her wedding yet hadn't thought of what would happen next. How would he set up another alliance for her? Was his mother right that he hadn't thought at all about Veera's happiness? But he had only thought about her well secured future so what was wrong about that? Perhaps he should have done more research about Rishab.

Then there was Heer and her tantalizing questions which stood him at cross roads. Of course his heart wanted to answer there and then yet he was afraid of many things. His brain reminded him continously of what danger lay ahead if he followed his heart and he wasn't sure if he wanted to take that risk. Many clauses came in between where he couldn't just think one sided and embrace his new destiny with Heer. He couldn't leave everything behind or could he? He had locked himself in his room and hadn't even gone to work. He simply wanted to be alone to put all his thoughts in one piece and get a logical outcome.

By the end he concluded that he needed to speak with Heer anyhow yet how would he approach her? He was confused as he calculated several things further.

Heer's house in Shimla

Heer had constantly tried Ashlesha's phone yet it was unavailable. She couldn't have been more frustrated as Ashlesha was always around when you least expected her and disappeared whenever in need. She tried one more time and yet it still came unavailable so she decided to leave it for then.

Five minutes later her phone rang and she reached it excitedly had thought it was Ashlesha yet slightly frowned after seeing someone else's ID. "Hello?"

A rather cheerful voice greeted her from the otherside. "Hey Heer how are you?" It was Naina at her usual self.

Certainly Heer was surprised to receive a call from her and wondered several things. "Yeh I'm great." She answered weakly. "How are you and the kids?"

"Super." She answered back. "Actually it were the kids that I'd called you about." She paused which made Heer tense as to what must have happened to them. "Actually it was a big favour I wanted to ask from you. Me and Raj have to attend a appointment this afternoon and our babysitter has gone sick so could it be possible for you to take care of the three girls in our absence?"

Heer was unsure what answer to give. She knew it would sound rude to not accept it yet she also knew that it wasn't going to be easy to go back to Delhi after last night's incident. She had to be very frank with her. "Ummm...I'm not quite sure if I'll be able to come to Delhi today."

"Ohh..." Naina sounded a bit disappointed.

It made Heer feel guilty and she didn't want to disappoint her. "You know I'll talk with bhaiya about it and I'll let you know. I'm sure I'll work something out." She assured her.

Naina was glad and then cut the call telling her that she would wait for her answer.

Of course Heer told her that she would sort something out yet she was very doubtful and knew that Preet wasn't going to agree. After what happened last night he was never going to allow her to go anywhere alone anymore.

However she tried her best to convince Preet but he just wasn't coming up from a 'no'. She knew it was going to be that way yet she still wanted to take her chances. She tried everything but he didn't want to listen. She even tried to convince him how Naina depended on her and it was very important but he just wasn't ready to agree. He argued how he didn't know the Shekhawats that well enough to trust them.

Just then Kulraj appeared like an angel in disguise as she informed Preet how Kiran had invited her to a party in Delhi and hoped she would join him. It was the best thing as then Heer would be allowed to go with her too. It was hard work yet in the end he agreed to let both of them go because he trusted Kiran and knew he would take good care of both of them.

It was set then that both Kulraj and Heer left for Delhi after half hour when Kiran's driver brought the car for them. Heer told Kulraj about how Naina had asked her a favour to take care of the kids so she would be with them and then she could pick her up once her party was over. The two sisters were very much capable of taking care of theirselves yet they also knew that their brother was very protective over them as he loved them a lot.

In Delhi

Naina had received Heer's call that she was on her way which really relieved Naina. She had worried about her three girls a lot and had also made the decision that she wasn't going to go with RV yet after Heer's call she changed her decision and was going to accompany him after all.

After an hour or two the two women arrived in Delhi and first Kulraj dropped Heer at the RVS residence. Then she drove off telling her of how she would call as soon as she left the party. They both were assured and Heer went inside joyfully.

Simran and Sneha were thrilled to meet Heer and ran towards her. Even in the short meetings they had become fond of her and very friendly. She also adored the five year old twins very much and the one year old Suhanaa was awfully cute to not fall in love with. Naina was very grateful for her time and Heer assured her and RV that they needn't worry about them as she would take good care.

Once RV and Naina left, the twins were on a rampage and literally partied with Heer. They had already made a big mess of their huge room and simply joined Heer in with her running around and jumping. Sneha was rather subtle yet Simran's wildness didn't leave anyone alone. So they all had to join in.

Heer carried Suhaana around and then put her carefully into her play pen as she tried to control Simran and Sneha yet kids were never going to be easy to handle. If she had controlled Sneha then Simran was yelling on top of her lungs and then Sneha and her, simply got into their little little arguments and fights. Heer had to admit that it was some exercise and wondered how Naina and RV were so patient with them all.

Finally she got Simran's attention into doing something constructive with her and the eyes of both the girl's beamed. They always loved any sort of fun activity and they liked Heer further for have suggested it.

All of them got busy in setting a big plastic sheet outside on the lawn and then Heer made the two help her bring out all their poster paints and loads of paper. They were going to enjoy finger painting. It was very messy yet it was very fun and the girls were definitely going to enjoy it.

Prem's house

He couldn't forget the notion that Heer was supposedly pregnant and that too with his child. He had to sort it out with her. It was very serious as he couldn't think of ruining her life like that. If he had made the mistake then he was going to resolve it too like a responsible adult. Yes his principals were going to crash in between that yet he didn't care very much about them then. He had made a mental list of all the problems that had occurred and how he was going to solve them one by one. The first one was with Heer so he had to meet her.

Have had thought that, Prem quickly got changed into something more suitable than the casual clothes he had worn. Appearance had always been his first priority no matter where he went so how could he leave it then when it was a very important meeting he had to attend.

Yet as he neared the door of his room he found a file on the side table. It reminded him how it was a very important project report he had to hand in to RV. He had totally forgotten yet he had to deliver it so decided that first he would go to his house to hand it over and then he shall leave for Shimla to meet Heer.

RVS residence

Along with the girls, Heer had also become a child as she enjoyed playing with the paints with them. They had made all sorts of patterns with their hands and had simply just dwelled into the art. Both Simran and Sneha were on a competition with each other to make the most paintings and just simply played around with the paints making a total mess. It was very fun. Suhaana also giggled with joy from her playpen as she saw her sisters enjoying theirselves.

Prem arrived in the next fifteen odd minutes and entered inside the mansion but was disappointed when found out from the butler of how RV wasn't home and neither was Naina. He just sighed and decided he would come back after he returned from Shimla.

When he left back to his car he heard loud giggles from somewhere and he wondered what that was. He went towards the sound and found himself in the back lawn and he stood in his tracks as he couldn't believe what he saw. He couldn't believe what he had thought would take him far to achieve actually had come so near. Heer was right there.

Not long ago had the three ' Heer, Simran and Sneha had decided to clear up and wash away their messy hands. Yet that also turned into a game as Simran threw a lot of water around on the other two and in defence they threw water too. The three simply enjoyed playing with the water at each other in the huge tub outside. It was a whole lot of fun and they hadn't seen any one come let alone Prem.

On the other hand Prem was lost in watching them. In fact his eyes only concentrated on Heer and her very wet body. It wasn't intentional yet he couldn't help himself and literally got aroused. The way her sensuous curves excentuated due to the wet fabric pasted against her body simply blew his senses away and all sorts of uncontrollable feelings took over him. He simply wanted to grab her in his arms and to just enjoy each and every part to his content.

Her beauty gleamed under the sun as the water droplets all over her face glowed. She was totally lost in playing that she hadn't paid attention to her appearance. It hardly mattered since to her knowledge, there wasn't anyone else watching over them.

He didn't know how long he stood there yet he couldn't move an inch anywhere. Then suddenly the background changed and transformed into a different plain where there was only him and her. The place was a deserted farm. The wind blew softly as the leaves and hay flew from here and there slowly into the night air. He looked around and then saw a beauty bang in the middle.

She was wrapped neatly into a cream chiffon saari and the wind had blown the flap over her face. She stood in a seductress pose as if she took in the whole essence of the wind and let it play around with her body the way it wanted.

Slowly his cold fingers ran along her bare waist and she slightly cringed at the encounter. It gave her an uncontrollable sensation and she lost her senses totally.

I love you...

He played around as she tried to shift her body shape elsewhere to control the sensuous vibes.

Kaate nahi katte yeh din yeh raat

Kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat

Lo aaj main kehta hooon

I love you...I love you...I love you...I love you...

Yes she tried to get away from him yet he didn't let go of her hand

Koi nahi bus tum ho saath

Kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat

Lo aaj main kehti hooon

He pulled her in close and she collided with his chest and just molded into him

I love you...I love you...I love you...I love you...

Prem and Heer moved slowly to the beat of the wind as it ran a sweet song in their ears. She rested her head on his chest and her eyes were closed as if it was the best place ever on earth.

Kaisi hawa hain

Dhuli dhuli

Aaj fiza hain

Khilli khilli

His arms wrapped around her tight and she also held him close from the waist.

Kaisi hawa hain

Dhuli dhuli

Aaj fiza hain

Khilli khilli

He laid soft kisses one by one on each feature of her face.

Saara nazaara

Nayaa nayaa

Dil pukaara piya piya

Yet she shied away when he reached for her lips and moved apart to a distance from him.

Piya piya...piya piya...piya piya...

He followed her and praised how she stood in that sensuous stance once more tantalising his heightened senses.

Tum ne jo li angrai hain phir baat wahi yaad aayi hain. Lo aaj main kehta hooon...

He kissed her bare waist and moved up to her chest over the sari and then finally kissed her on the lips.

I love you...I love you...I love you...I love you...

Was it the magic of their romance or it simply was God's boon that it rained and they got wet under their shower of love. They lay onto the wet hay alongside each other with their arms locked together.

Mehka mehka

Tera badan

Behka behka

Mera yeh mann

She moaned as his fingers played around with ther wet body once more. He really had taken her to the highest peak of pleasure.

Mehka mehka

Tera badan

Behka behka

Mera yeh mann

He kissed her two eyes

Chalka chalka

Roop tera

He kissed her two cheeks

Halka halka

Nasha mera

He totally showered her with kisses all over.

Nasha mera...nsaha mera...nasha mera...

She hugged him tight and rolled twice along the hay

Jab aahi gayi main paas tere kehdu jo dil main hain mere

Lo aaj main kehti hooon...

Then she simply allowed him to have his way with her as her eyes remained closed all throughout.

I love you...I love you...I love you...I love you...

Kaate nahi katte yeh din yeh raat

Kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat

Koi nahi bus tum ho saath

Kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat

Lo aaj main kehti hooon

I love you...I love you...I love you...I love you...

Finally both drowned in each other's undying love for each other under the rain. It melted away and turned into heat as it touched them and their scorching love for each other.

Just then everything vanished away and Prem adjusted his sight once more and his hearing. The loud giggles had returned instead of the sweet soft tone of the wind and the tune. And the night had turned into day once more and he found himself on the lawn as before. His beautiful dream had broken yet the magic hadn't disappeared.

Simran, Sneha had run from the tub and simply played chase with Heer from a long time. They were lost in their innocence and Heer had also joined them and it was going smoothly when in middle of the chase as the girls escaped her, her hand was caught back and she was pulled back with a force. Yet she had very less time to react to anything as she found herself involved into a fierce biting kiss.

Edited by awaazilicious - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yaaayyy i'm the first oneee😃!!!!

the update was awesumeee⭐️!!!!

thank God preet understood n there was no rift b/w the siblingsss😊!!!

prem dreaming abt heer n him was suerb duper sensational n hottt😳!!!!


prem n heer was awesumeee👏!!!

the ending, their kiss, prem now really hav to answer heer's questionsss😉!!!!

plz plz in the next update let them declare their love esp prem plzz n tht heer is not pregnant plzz!!!

i read before u send me pm but still thanks for the pmmm😊!!!!

update soon n plz plz unite premeer soonnn!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update yaar
such a superb update
eagerly waiting next chap
thanx 4PM
pls cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the pm...
loved the update...
do continue soon...
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SPEECHLESS ☺️😍👍🏼👏😳❤️🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi . . . . . Thank u 4 d PM. 😊

Well, now abt the Update . . . .Awesome ! Though in d end it was a bit. . . umm ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️.
But you did an awesome job, the update was really good.

Now starting with the update -

Yet she got a good surprise when Preet didn't say anything as she expected and just hugged her.
Aww . . . . . I am really happy at his reaction. He didn't create kindda scene and Heer and Preet both are still in good terms, so I really appreciate you for not making any kind of drama over here. Great response by Preet. 😃

It was true that Preet had been very angry last night and it had lasted till the morning yet Meher had worked a lot to calm him down and had made him realise that Heer's life had been saved.
Meher is such a sweetheart. I really love her character over her. She did a great job by making her husband understand what is right and what's wrong. A true wife . . . . 😉 😆

He held Heer tight had provided a touch of comfort. "I'm sorry Heer."
Awww . . . . . 😍

On the other hand he was very taken aback and still in a state of shock and he tried to defend himself thinking that she would attack any moment.
😆 🤣, Manmeet is so cute . . . .He tried 2 defend himself thinking that she would attack any moment . . . . 🤣 🤣 🤣

He remained cautious as he knew how her behaviour was unpredictable. She could switch any moment. "What are your intentions?" he asked innocently.

"Karna to bohat kuch hain." She squealed like a teenager as she held onto him tight. "But nothing is going to take place until you take the initiative."

O Man . . . .this was really like 😆 🤣 🤣

I really liked the scenes b/w Ash and Manmeet . . . . . mast. 😆

And scenes b/w Heer and the 3 angels was super cute . . . . 😍

He couldn't forget the notion that Heer was supposedly pregnant and that too with his child. He had to sort it out with her. It was very serious as he couldn't think of ruining her life like that. If he had made the mistake then he was going to resolve it too like a responsible adult. Yes his principals were going to crash in between that yet he didn't care very much about them then. He had made a mental list of all the problems that had occurred and how he was going to solve them one by one. The first one was with Heer so he had to meet her.
Oho . . . .bechara Prem . . . .he has so many problems . . . . 😆 Now he will resole the problems like a responsible adult. 😕 😆 Responsible Adult. 🤣
So, he doesn't care abt HIS principles now. . . .Good. He better throw away his so called stupid principles in the drain, stop thinking from his brain and follow what his heart says And finally confess his love to her. 😳

And the rest of the scene was . . . . 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

But now Prem is in danger . . . . . he owes an explanation now. 😉

It was a very nice update. ⭐️ 👍🏼

Bye . . . . .Take Care. 😊

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