FF - ZINDAGI ~ COMPLETED!! - Page 87

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Zindagi is mixture of sorrows & happiness.Small moments of love in life makes our living in this world worthy & after our death it becomes insipriation for next genertions.

Zindagi FF – a cute portrayel of this thinking. Begins with a small thread which dealt the college track of teenagers but later turned to the sour & sweetness of life & ends up with a very good morale to the readers.Truth of life is body disapperes but the love remains in this wonderful world.

A story which given children obeying their parents without knowing wht they planning & some there goes against parents wish in each move.Nice drafting of 'Two souls with single thought & Two hearts that beat as one'…Effect of this line of Prem ''me and mamma won't go any where leaving you alone.' 😛 Yes…love can tear you apart, it can kill you…but it's the only thing in 'Zindagi' which put you back together to your soul.

Dear – one outstanding FF which touched heart many times & I salute your talent to making readers to feel the pain & joy of characters to their soul.To love and be loved by someone is everything. You & your writings doing the same. One grateful mind is constantly fixed upon the best. Therefore it tends to become the best. It takes the form or character of the best, and will receive the best & you possess such a greateful mind & each time you getting success while delivering your thoughts 👍🏼.

Hey Selvy it was tooooo good...just loved it.....bas heer death was sad but other than that it was awesome......Just loved harshiti story.....yaar main to tmhari aur fan ho gayi hun. Madiha

awesome ending

hey selvy...loved it....👍🏼

Shot 21

oh selvy you made me cry...
it is the first ff where i saw prem and heer died
but i have to say that it's a wonderful ff
love is always alive in the earth
awesome ff
thanks

Paddo

hey selvy....i have a request....plz start a new ff and write more os's...plz...

wow....lovely parts...

The story was lovely !