FF - ZINDAGI ~ COMPLETED!! - Page 84

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Shot 29

Few days later, Prem and Heer are returning home after attending a party. Suddenly the car broke down in the middle. Prem kicked his leg angrily. Heer smiled. Prem 'why are you smiling now? we need to search for a mechanic now.' Heer tugged her hand into his 'Prem, it was so long we walked together holding hands in the road.' Prem 'Heer, this is not a time for that. Its cold.' Heer shook her head like a baby 'Please Prem.' excitingly 'see I have the scarf. This I'll put around my head.' Prem 'this is not enough.' Heer 'you have your coat.' Prem 'Heer, listen to me. we'll catch one taxi.'

Heer moved away from him with a sad face. Prem can't see her sad face 'you are behaving like a child.' He took his things out of the car and locked it.' He put his coat on Heer's shoulder 'happy?' Heer shook her head like a kid. Prem teased 'no one will say that you are a mother of 15 year old girl.' Heer 'so I'm looking young.' She smiled proudly. Prem shook his head 'no. you are behaving like a child.' Heer hit his upper arm with her fist. Prem laughed.

Both started walking towards home holding their hands. It is a highway and the vehicles are speeding in hurry. Heer is walking on the traffic side. Prem 'Heer, you come this side.' Heer 'I feel comfortable on your right.' Both were talking about some random things and forgot that they were walking in the road. They were happily chatting. Prem put his hand around her shoulder and kissed her forehead. Heer gently pushed him away 'Mr. Prem Juneja, we are not in our bedroom.' Prem 'so what?'

Suddenly Heer's scarf fell down. Due to continuous speeding lorries, scarf is taken a bit far to the middle of the road by wind. Heer tried to catch it. Prem pulled her back 'leave that Heer.' Heer 'Prem, it will get damaged.' Prem 'its okay.' Heer 'it's a gift from you.' before Prem could pull her back Heer is in the middle of the road picking up the scarf. When she turned with victory of getting her scarf,a car came towards her in full speed. The driver applied to stop hitting on Heer. But Car hit Heer and she was thrown down on the road. Prem 'Heeeeeer' shouting Heer name rushed to her. He grabbed her in his hand 'Heer.' Heer head bleeding heavily and she fainted. Prem with the help of the same car took her to the hospital.

Prem looked at the closed doors of ICU. His body is here but his soul is inside with Heer crying to open her eyes. Prem saw Doctors rushing inside. With tears he pleaded the doctors 'Doctor, please save my Heer.' Doctor 'we will try our best.' Prem whispered 'Heer, why you ran behind that scarf? I shouldn't have listened to you.' He restlessly stood in front of the ICU recollecting all his moments with Heer.

He lifted his eyes when he heard 'papa.' Chahat ran into his arm with tears 'what happened to mamma?' Prem hugged and stroked her hair 'mamma will be fine.' both stood silently.

Rajveer touched Prem's shoulder. Ash gently took Chahat in her hug and made her sit in a chair. After several hours, doctor came out with sad face. Prem and Chahat ran to the doctor. Doctor 'Mr. Prem, I'm sorry. She wants to see you and Chahat.' Prem and Chahat are shocked.

Prem put his hand around his daughter. Both entered the room with tears. She is lying in the middle of many machines. Heer opened her eyes when she sensed her Prem and Chahat entering the room. She greeted them with smile. Prem cried kneeling next to her bed. He kissed her cheek 'you are alright Heer.' Heer managed 'Prem, you take care of our Chahat.' Prem 'Heer, why are you talking like this?'. Chahat cried 'mamma.' Heer 'Chahat, you should listen to your father.' Chahat shook her head 'mamma'. Heer 'I'm leaving Prem. I love you. Chahat, I love you beta.' Chahat hugging Heer and cried 'you are not leaving us mamma.' Prem cried 'Heer, no I won't be alive without you.' Heer 'Prem, Chahat needs you. You have to give her in his hand. I love you Prem. I'll be with you always. I love you Chahat.' She closed her eyes. Prem cried 'Heeeeeeer.' Chahat screamed 'mammma.'

Prem buried his face in Heer's shoulder and cried 'Heer, why you left us alone in this world? We can't live without you.' Chahat shook Heer 'mamma please get up. papa tell mamma to get up. mamma get up. see Papa is crying. Your Chahat crying. Mamma get up.' She is not in sense. Continuously shouting and yelling at Heer's dead body.

Prem after few seconds realized the situation and got up. He hugged Chahat 'Pari. Pari.' Pari pointing Heer 'papa tell mamma to open her eyes. Tell her to talk to me.' Prem 'Pari, mamma can't talk to us now.' Pari fainted after calling out her mother several time.

Entire world went blank for Prem and Chahat. Prem lost his love and Chahat lost the love of her dear mother.

Shot 30

One new male entry in this part. You can imagine your own choice of person.

10 years later

Prem is sitting in his favorite rocking chair staring at his Heer picture. The day, Heer left him still fresh on his mind. He never thought their happy life will end soon. But everything happened in a fraction of second.

Prem wants to see his daughter Pari as bride. He remembered the promise he gave to Heer just before her death. They never told about Preet's promise to Pari. Prem for the past few days searched for Preet's son as they lost contact after few years. Recently heard he is friendly with Sanjana's daughter. Prem doesn't want to create a clash with Sanjana again. He is very much sure that Sanjana wil be furious if Prem approaches Preet now. Prem doesn't want to spoil his daughter's life. At the same time, he is worried about Heer's last wish.

After her MBA, Chahat started helping Prem in business. Soon she took over everything and gave rest to Prem. Now Aditi Juneja is the one of the leading business woman in the country. Prem spend hours staring at his cute wife Heer's picture and talking to her always as if she is standing in front of her.

Aditi stood in front of her parents picture. Today she is nominated for young achiever of the year award. She never worked keeping winning award in her mind. She wanted to keep her father's dream high. She missed her mother very badly. For the past 10 years, Prem stood beside her as a loving father and caring mother. She shared everything with him.

She wiped her tears and moved to her chair when her intercom rang. She picked up the phone. Other side Receptionist 'mam, Dr. Harshad wants to meet you.' Aditi is confused 'who is he?' Receptionist 'from US. But he is not giving any further details. He wants to tell everything to you only.' Aditi after a second of silence 'okay. Send him in.'

Aditi sat in her chair. She looked up when she heard a knock in her cabin door. she 'come in.' A handsome man entered her cabin. Aditi smiled and got up 'welcome sir. I haven't seen you before.' He shook hand with her 'my name is Harshad. I'm a Doctor. NRI.' He sat in a chair opposite to her 'I think its enough for now.' Aditi settled in her chair 'what can I do for you sir?' Harshad 'my name is Harshad. I don't like calling me Sir.' Aditi 'Sorry Dr. Harshad.' Harshad seriously 'you are not my patient. Better call me Harshad.' Heer smiled 'sorry Harshad.' Internally Aditi liked the way Harshad possessively ordering her. Harshad smiled. He looked around and his eyes stopped in Prem and Heer picture in her room. 'your parents.' Aditi shook her head 'yes.' He 'perfect couple.' Aditi 'yes. I love them lot.'

Harshad sensing that she is going back to some emotional thought. He doesn't want to see any crystal falling out of her beautiful eyes 'well, Ms. Juneja, I came here to invite you for my hospital opening.' Aditi 'I don't even know you.' Harshad 'but its my father's advice to invite you. My mother's wish to open with your hands.' Aditi is confused 'who is your father?' Harshad 'that you will know t'row. Morning sharply at 9.' He got up 'come with your father Mr. Prem Juneja. t'row Sunday so you can't give any excuses.' Aditi unknowingly 'but where?' Harshad 'I'll send a car to your house exactly at 8.30'. He left the room leaving Aditi without any clue. But before closing the door 'you are beautiful.' Aditi blushed. He watched her cheeks turning crimson red. He closed the door with heart full of happiness. She whispered 'nice man but hard to read.' She smiled.

In the evening, Aditi entered the house in hurry. She searched for Prem. She found him sitting in the garden watching a tree which is planted by Heer just few days before her death. Aditi 'papa.' she hugged him. Prem 'Pari beta, you came early today.' Pari sat next to him 'ha papa. I couldn't concentrate.' Prem gave a confusing look thinking 'did she fell in love with someone?' Pari 'papa, today one man came to our office. He invited me for his hospital opening.' Confusingly 'but I never met him before.' Prem listened carefully as she told with a surprise 'what is his name?' Pari 'Dr. Harshad. He says its his father's advice and his mother's wish.' She curved her lips 'he also invited you to know the truth.' Prem curved his lips 'mystery man.' Both laughed 'ha papa.' she paused 'he is handsome and young. I think he is not married.'

Prem recollected all the words told by Pari. The last word made him think now. He is confused 'Is he Preet's son?' Pari is busy admiring a flower in that tree. 'papa, this flower looks different.' She pointed a flower. Prem walked closer to see the flower. 'your mother is blessing you.' Pari 'for what?' Prem 'may be for your marriage.' Pari 'marriage. No papa. I won't go anywhere leaving you.' Prem touched her head 'me and mamma won't go any where leaving you alone.' Pari hugged her papa. He kissed her forehead.

Next morning, Aditi got ready. Prem is also ready and eagerly waiting for Harshad's car. Exactly at 8.30, they heard a car horn. .

Harshad got out of the car and walked in. Prem looked at him. Aditi is correct 'he is handsome' He gave quick glance to his fingers to make sure he is not married. Harshad with a smile stepped inside the house. Aditi 'papa, he is Harshad.' Harshad bent down and touched Prem's feet for blessing. Prem kept his hand on Harshad's head 'long live beta.' Harshad said 'hai' to Aditi. Harsahd guided them 'shall we move?' Prem 'beta, what is your full name?' Harsahd 'just few minutes. You will know everything.' Prem smiled thinking his intelligence. They walked towards the car.

Harshad opened the front passenger seat for Prem. Aditi got into the back seat. Harshad drove the car carefully through the heavy city traffic. Harshad and Pari were in their own thought about Harsahd. Both didn't ask him any questions. Harshad thought 'like her papa she is also very cool and bold.' He liked the way both stayed quiet without digging him with questions.

Harshad parked the vehicle in front of a big building. The campus is neatly decorated for the opening function. Harshad got out of the car. He opened the door for Prem. Prem got out of the car and looked around. His eyes fell on the name board but its covered with silky cloth. Aditi also looked around found no clue about Harshad's intention. Harshad calmly 'this way.' he pointed the direction. He walked along with them.

When they reached the entrance they saw a lady walking towards them with Arti. A tall man closely behind her. Prem eyes widen and smile spread in his lips. Aditi noticed her father smiling looking at the lady coming towards them. Harshad stopped walking and Prem and Aditi did the same.

Lady took arti to them. Prem stood with a happy smile in his face. Lady bent down and touched Prem's feet. Prem hugged her. 'how are you Meher?' Meher 'fine PB.' Prem 'I thought you forgot your PB.' Preet interrupted 'but I didn't forgot my promise to Heer bhabi.' He hugged Prem. Aditi is totally surprised to hear their conversation. 'Papa, do you know them?' Prem 'ha. My sister Meher.' Heer touched Meher's feet. Meher kissed her forehead 'she is exact replica of Heer bhabi.' Heer took blessing from Preet.

Aditi 'papa, you never told me that I have Bua.' Meher 'reason for that will be known to you in few minutes beta.' Aditi looked at them confusingly thinking 'mystery family.' As Preet let them towards the area where ribbon is tied to be cut, Aditi lost in their confusion walked with them. Harshad whispered 'don't break your head too much then you won't be having anything to enjoy.' Aditi is surprise to get a tease from Harsahd. He behaved like a matured man. Now he is teasing her like a kid.

Prem and Aditi cut ribbons to open the hospital. When the name of the hospital is revealed, like a kid Aditi jumped 'papa, my name.' Harshad whispered 'ha. Chahat.' Aditi excitingly 'my mamma calls me Chahat. how do you know that?' Harshad 'I know everything Pari.' Aditi is surprised. She quickly 'okay Bua must have told this to you.' Harshad 'nice guess. But that is not true. I found that on my own.' Aditi rolled her eyes 'interesting. Then you must be detective not doctor.' Harshad 'its always safe to have additional job in hand.' Aditi 'good policy.' Elders were watching them. They were happy that they mingled so easily.

Preet cleared his throat 'Chahat beta, I want to declare my wish to reporters. Actually it was my promise to your mother. can I?' Aditi is confused and looked at Prem. Prem signaled her to accept. Aditi shook her head. Preet 'want to know what it is?' Aditi shook her head again excitingly wanted to know the surprise. She is already excited to see her Bua and her name for the hospital. Preet 'here or in the Press.' Aditi confusingly again looked at Prem. Prem 'she is ready to hear it in the Press.' Preet 'okay lets move.' Even thought Aditi is confused about the situation she is confident that her father won't take wrong decision.

Prem and Preet sat in the chair. Meher stood behind Preet. Aditi behind Prem. Harshad on the other side of Meher. Reproters are eager to hear the news from NRI. Preet straight away 'I'm glad to introduce my Son Harshad life partner.' Aditi looked at Harsahd and smiled. She looked around expecting a girl to appear before the Reporters. But none came. She didn't notice Preet, Meher and Harshad are noticing her expression. Prem is smiling looking at her daughter searching for a girl. Reporters excitingly 'who is that like girl?'

Preet is silent. Aditi is almost lost her patience. He looked at Meher and aked her in action. Meher replied in action 'don't know?' Aditi looked at Harshad. He kept his face sad 'don't know.' Preet enjoying Aditi's eagerness 'Aditi Juneja, Mr. Prem Juenja's daughter.' Aditi for a second forgot to suck air. She looked at Prem. Prem smiled. Aditi understood that her father is happy about this proposal. She also remembered Preet's words 'its my promise to your mother.'

Meher signaled Harshad to move next to Aditi. Harshad put his hand around her waist and pulled her closer. She came out of her shock of happiness. But she is caught in sudden feeling when his hands touched her. She looked at Harshad who is smiling looking at her shocked face. He winked at her. She smiled shyly. He whispered into her ears 'will you accept me as your husband?' Aditi unconsciously shook her head up and down. For a second Harsahd is shocked by her boldness. Aditi without knowing that she is louder a bit 'I agree.'

Reporters clapped. One shouted 'Dr. Harshad you gave a shock to great business lady.' Others laughed with a cheer. They started shouting congratulations to couple. Harshad return thanks to them. Aditi is still without able to come out of the excited shock looked down with a shy smile.

In a small party, Harshad and Aditi got engaged. Harshad and Aditi took blessings from Prem. Prem happily kissed her daughter's forehead 'congrats children. Pari beta your mother will be happy now.' Harshad to avoid them going back to sad thinking Heer decided to change the subject 'Aditi, papa is wishing you like a young man.' Prem smiled 'I'm not old young man.' He gave a gentle slap on Harshad's upper arm 'do you want to test my strength?' Aditi smiled 'my papa is best.' Harshad rubbing his upper arm 'surely not. This is enough.' Prem smiled 'you both take blessing from Meher and Preet.' Harshad and Aditi shook their head.

Meher 'Harshad bring Chahat here.' Harshad 'oh no. its really confusing me.' Aditi looked at him. He 'Chahat Pari Aditi.' She 'Harshaaaad.' He smiled 'which one you like.' She excitingly 'all three.' He sadly 'I'm going to find a new name for you.' She teased 'then I won't look at you when you call me.'

They were again called by Meher. They went to take blessings from friends and relatives. Prem standing in the one corner admired his daughter moving with her new family. Preet touched Prem's shoulder 'missing Heer bhabi?' Prem shook his head 'she wanted to see her Chahat like this.' Preet 'even now bhabi is here to see her daughter's happiness.'

Prem decided keep his Heer's thoughts inside him. 'Preet, how did Harshad agreed to marry Pari?' Meher came there 'he is like our Chahat. Always listens to elders decision.' Prem 'I'm proud of you for bringing him up like him.' Preet 'even you have done the same. When I announced her as my son's partner she only looked at you for acceptance.' Prem 'she is like Heer. Never goes against my words.' They all watched Harshad and Pari happily chatting.

Harshad entered his room expecting to see shy Chahat sitting on the bed waiting for him. He stopped for a second before closing the door. Chahat changed into her night suit sitting on the bed reading a book. Harshad stood before him keeping his hands on his hip. 'I thought you are traditional like your mother.' he shook his head in disappointment. 'but I was wrong.' Heer got out of the bed 'what do you mean by not traditional.' Harshad 'you are suppose to wait for me covering your head with duppatta.' Chahat 'its old fashion.' Harshad 'that's what I meant you are not traditional.' Chahat 'I'll show you how traditional I'm?' he pushed him into washroom 'now quickly change.' Harshad smiled and went inside looking at her hurry.

Chahat is combing her hair when Harshad came out of washroom. She thought he will hug him. But he straight away went to bed and sat thinking about something. He is talking to himself. Chahat sat opposite to him. She shook him once. There is no response so she shook him hard 'Harshhaad,' he looked at her with confusion. She 'what are you thinking?' he moved forward 'I was thinking how to call you?' she looked at him with anger and confusion. 'don't you know my name?'

He understood her confusion 'see.' he took her hand 'Your mamma called you Chahat. you papa calls you Pari.' She quickly 'you call me aditi.' He 'why?' she 'mamma remembers papa when she calls me Chahat. papa remembers mamma when he calls me Pari. You have to remember only me when you are calling me so you call me aditi. Its simple.' She sat like a kid finishing a long lecture. He laughed 'its old. So I have to think a new name.' he 'that is why your papa and mamma didn't call you by that name.' She 'for your kind information this name is selected by your mother.' He 'who ever the selector of this name. its old.' she looked at him angrily 'Old?' he teasingly 'ha.' She angrily 'your name is older than mine. Atleast more than 1000 people have this name in this country. Its very very very old name.' he 'yours is old.' she 'only yours is old.' He 'yours.' She 'yours.' Both started yelling at each other. He 'your parents don't even know how to keep good name for their loving daughter.' he laughed.

Chahat started crying like a kid in anger because he blamed her parents 'mamma called me Chahat not aditi. Papa called me Pari not aditi. Its only your mother kept this name for me.' Harshad jumped and knelt before her. Kneeling in front of her on the bed looked at her face from several angle with a teasing smile. That increased her anger. After few seconds 'you are looking too beautiful even when you are angry and while crying.' She stopped crying and looked at him. He cupped her face and leaned forward 'you are always smiling. So I just want to admire your face when you are angry.' She gave a killer look to him. He laughed 'see how sweet your.' She is about hit his chest but he caught her hands and pulled her into his hug. 'I call you Chahat. sometimes Pari or Aditi.' Interestingly 'even CPA. Short form of Chahat Pari Aditi. Its depends on my mood.' He kissed her cheek 'I love you.' she snuggled into his arms 'I love you too.' She giggled 'you are very naughty.' He 'its just the beginning dear.' He switched off the light to make her as his own forever.

Morning, Prem is sitting in his favorite rocking chair looking at Heer's picture with a smile. 'Heer, I finished my job in this earth. I fulfilled your last wish. Our Pari is married to Preet's son. Preet fulfilled his promise.' He heard Heer's voice 'come to me Prem.' he smiled 'ha. I'm coming. I'm just waiting to say good bye to our princess, Heer.'

Pari and Harshad came to Prem. Both took blessing from Prem and they knelt in front of him on either side of his chair. Pari 'papa' she kissed his cheeks. Prem smiled 'see Heer, our Chahat, our cute Pari, our princess of Juneja became Princess of Chopra.' Pari kept her head on Prem's lap with a shy smile. Harshad admired father-daughter love.

Prem smiled happily 'our princess became now Harshad's wife, Chopra pariwar's bahu, Aditi Chopra.' Harshad smiled teasingly 'CPA Chopra.' Pari hit him gently still keeping her head on Prem's lap.Harshad smiled. Prem too understood the full name of CPA. Prem stroked Pari's hair gently 'beta, I finished my duty. My Heer, Your mamma is alone. I'm going to her.' Pari looked at her father with a shock. He kissed her forehead 'I love you beta. Mamma too loves you.' She cried with confusion 'papa.'

Prem leaned back on the chair. His eyes focused on Heer's picture. He whispered 'Heer, I'm coming.' He saw Heer standing with open arms welcoming him. Prem soul moved out of his body and hugged Heer's soul. They looked at Pari and Harshad with a happy smile.

Pari cried 'pappaa.' She shook him 'papa'. Harshad checked his pulse. He moved to Pari's side and pulled her into his arms 'Pari' she cried 'see Harshad, papa is not talking to me.' He hugged her tight 'papa is no more.' She screamed 'no. papa. papa can't leave me alone like this.' Harshad 'papa went to be with mamma forever.' He pulled her into tight hug. Pari pressed her face in to his chest. Harshad 'Pari, we have to live in the path of their happy life. That is the only way we can give them happiness. They are with us to see our loving family.' They both hugged and cried.

Soul of Prem and Heer smiled with the satisfaction that their princess got a loving partner. They disappeared from there leaving their princess to happily with her prince.

Love story of Prem and Heer ended. It became the beginning of Harshad and Chahat Pari Aditi's love story. Aditi who grew up watching her parents love for each other followed their footstep and built a happy and loving family with Harshad.

Human being disappears after their death.

Love is always alive in the earth.

Happy to announce the end of my another FF. I started it as SS only writing 2 3 parts. But it became FF on request by my friend and with your encouraging comments.

My special thanks to my friends who are reading my writings from the day I first started writing in this forum. Few are still continuing reading and commenting. Some due to several reason you are not able to comment but I know you are reading it. Thanks a lot.

My Thanks to all those who supported this FF with your valuable comments. Also I like to thank all silent readers.

Awsome parts!!!

Can't believe that Heer died 😭😭.

Prem lived without his Heer for 10 years!!

Additi is a leading buisness lady and got the award for it. 😃😃

Harshad and additi got married 🥳

Prem died in the end and reunited with his sweetheart Heer whilst Additi lived a happy life with Harshad!!!

Thank you sooooo much for such an awsom,e FF!!

I really really enjoyed reading it.

You potrayed the characters and thier emotions sooo well it was like i am there with them!!

Hope to see more work like this by you till them here's a hug 🤗 for giving us such good fan fics. <3

awesome updates....

😭i cant tell anything more than this..

Originally posted by: Sukrutha

😭i cant tell anything more than this..

Both parts were awesome...........bt heer died😭.....never expected this....bt endin was great.....vry wel written...........thnx for pm...........