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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice update!

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awasome going....................................keep rocking very nyc plz update soon.......................oh heer is die plz dont do this......................keep pm me and plz update soon.............
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plxx update soon ...waiting waiting
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Prem shouted 'Heeeer. Don't go. I'll die.' Heer shook him hard 'Premmm. Get up.' Prem opened his eyes and saw Heer sitting next to him with confused face. He sat straight on the bed. He hugged Heer and kissed her face 'you are alive.' He kissed her more and more. Heer 'Premmm' she pushed him away 'what happened to you? what do you mean by I'm alive?' Prem looked around. He is in their room with his Heer.

Prem confusingly 'Heer pinch me.' Heer kissed his cheek 'you are not dreaming. I'm your wife.' She laughed teasingly 'And we are not in heaven.' Prem 'Sanjana.' Heer angrily 'what? Sanjana?' Prem 'ha I married Sanjana.' Heer knelt beside him on the bed keeping her hands on her hips 'oooh, you have that plan too?' Prem shook his head 'no Heer. I saw a dream.' Heer 'dream?' Prem 'ha, Heer in that we lost our kid. So you brought Sanjana as my wife. You died after our marriage. you took poison.' Heer angrily 'what? Won't you get nice dreams?' she angrily looked around. She took a pillow and started hitting him. 'you married Sanjana. What are you thinking Prem Juneja. I'm not enough for you and trying to marry Sanjana.' Prem tried to stop him. 'Heeer' he held the pillow and stopped her hitting him with pillow. 'you only.' She again hit him with pillow. 'don't ever think I'll do that in my life. Even after my death I won't allow you to marry anyone else. I'll be with you' she scared him keeping her hands on her cheek and with a wide open eyes 'as a ghost.' Prem pulled her into his hug and started kissing him 'I love you babe. I'm sorry.' Heer fully bathed in his loving kisses 'if you sleep without me you will get this kinds of stupid dreams.' She pat his cheek 'so don't ever try to sleep without me.' Prem 'i won't.' he burried his face into her chest. Heer 'drink water.' Prem 'no need. only you.' he started kissing her chest. Heer hugged him. Both cuddled together and slept.

Actually Prem was admiring Heer arranging their dresses in the closet. He is very tired after all Rajveer wedding rituals. Prem and Heer took care of everything in Rajveer's marriage. both were flying in air managing everything. Prem wanted to sleep as soon as they entered their room. But Heer wanted to keep it neatly. So Prem leaned back on the board to admire his wife. But he drifted into sleep. Heer saw him sleeping in sitting posture. She made him lay down properly on the bed. Heer noticed empty water jug. She took the jug and went down to get water. When she came back to their room she saw Prem sleeping peacefully. So she kissed his forehead and went to washroom.

When she returned from the washroom she saw Prem uncomfortably rolling on the bed. Tears rolled down his side from his eyes. She quickly climbed next to him in the bed to wake him up. Before she could reach him he started shouting her name in fear.

Prem is getting ready to office. Heer also got ready open the closet to take his coat. She felt dizzy. Holding the closet door, she whispered 'Premm.' Hearing some strange sound from closet door, Prem lifted his head to see Heer. He grabbed her in his hand when she saw her about to collapse.

Prem stared at the Heer who is sitting in the bed cuddling into his arms. Heer can sense his fear. She touched his chin 'Prem' Prem came out of his thought 'ummm.' Heer 'Prem, I know you are thinking about that dream.' Prem sadly shook his head 'I'm scared Heer.' Heer snuggling closer into his hands caressing his cheek with her palm 'Prem, i'll be careful.' Prem cupped her on cheek 'Please Heer, don't do anything that hurts you and our baby.' Heer shook her head negatively 'I won't Prem.' he kissed her forehead 'I love you babe.' Heer 'I love you too.' He started kissing her face lovingly to forget his dream and give Heer her gift for giving wonderful news to him.

Prem and Heer were ready to go to hospital to for Check up. they were confident that they will get twins. After breakfast Prem got up wiping his hands. He helped Heer to get up. Gay3 and Teji teasingly smiled. Gay3 'Prem, better you carry Heer every where.' Prem seriously 'sure ma. I'll do anything for my Heer.' Heer hit his chest gently and buried her face into his chest with a shy smile.' Prem looked at his wife 'are you ready Heer?' he is about to scoop her. Heer 'Premmmm.' Prem sincerely 'my wife feels little shy.' Elders burst into laugh. Prem 'come Heer, they don't have any other work than teasing us.'

Balraj stopped them 'Prem, we have selected a name for our grand daughter.' Prem and Heer at the same time 'grand daughter?' Teji 'ha.' Prem 'how do you know that?' Gay3 'we have experience.' Heer 'ma, its not predicted by experience.' Balraj 'but we are elders and can predict.' Heer and Prem exchanged looks. Prem decided to break the news of their choice of name. He doesn't want to fight with them. They are also predicting daughter so Prem doesn't want anymore confusion in naming. Already they have two names. Whether they get twins is not sure.

Before Prem could open his mouth after all this analysis Balraj 'we decided to name her Aditi.' Prem and Heer 'what? You selected a name.' Teji, Balraj and Gay3 shook their head proudly. Teji 'majority wins.' Heer 'ma, we are parents. Only we have the rights to name our daughter.' Gay3 'actually naming rights goes to Prem's sister.' Prem shook his head sharply. 'I don't have sister. So only we have the rights.' he smiled victoriuosly.

Gay3 'who said?' she moved towards the phone table and pulled out a cover. She went to Prem 'here is your sister's suggestion.' She pats his cheek lovingly 'you forgot Meher, Prem. but she didn't forgot her rights. She selected a name for your daughter.' Prem really felt sad for forgetting Meher for a second 'sorry ma.' Gaya3 'don't ask sorry to me. Ask Meher.' Prem opened the cover and saw a beautiful card wishing them. With her neat handwriting she wrote the name of her choice. 'Aditi Juneja.' Prem looked at Heer. Heer whispered 'now we have to pray for triplets.' Prem 'fingers crossed.' Both giggled.

Heer came out of washroom wearing her night suite. She saw Prem sitting in the couch lost in his own world. Heer sat in the bed expecting him to come to her. but Prem didn't move from his spot. Heer gently called him to bring him out of his world. 'Prem.' Prem didn't respond immediately. Heer slightly raised her sound. Prem looked at Heer. he got up and went to her. he sat next to her. She rested her head on his chest. 'why are you sad?' Prem stroking her hair 'dissappointed?' Heer 'I'm not.' Prem looked at her face. Heer 'i'm happy.'

Prem 'you wanted twins.' Heer 'yes. But now I'm not sad now.' Prem looked at her confusingly trying to get her point of view. Heer cupped his one cheek with her palm 'Prem, in your dream, we are expecting twins. You are already worried about that dream. Now that dream is not true. Its only dream.' Prem understood her point. Prem slowly shook his head 'yes.' Heer smiled. 'don't you want to celebrate our victory?' Prem 'what victory?' Heer 'its girl.' Prem hugged her tight 'yes. I want to make this day another memorable one.' Heer laughed 'my Prem makes every day memorable.' She kissed his cheek 'thanks Prem.' Prem confusingly 'for what?' Heer 'as you promised before our marriage, you made our days memorable.' Both smiled and quiet for sometime.

Prem 'now we have another problem.' Heer hit his chest playfully 'this business man always thinks about problems.' She giggled 'now what?' Prem 'name.' Heer 'whose name?' Prem 'Heeer, you wants to keep her name Chahat.' She shook her head. Prem 'I want to call her Pari.' Heer 'yes.' Prem 'Meher and others wants her name to be Aditi.' Heer calmly 'its so simple Prem.' Prem 'simple. How? Don't say to keep all these name. Chahat Pari Aditi Juneja.' he made a puppy face 'its sounds awakward.'

Heer 'not all three. Just Aditi Juneja.' Prem sadly 'want about Pari then.' Heer 'wait. Let me finish. You call her Pari. I'll call her Chahat. In records her name is Aditi juneja.' like a kid 'how is my idea?' Prem 'OMG, what a wonderful idea. How did you got this idea dear?' Heer proudly 'it all comes.' She teased 'needs brain.' Prem pouted 'oh.' He kissed her forehead and hugged her.

Ramphal and Anu are excited when they got a proposal for Sanjana. but Sanjana is adamant and refused to agree to marry that boy. He is in US. Sanjana 'I'm not interested moving out of this country.' Anu angrily 'why?' Sanjana angrily sat 'I'm not interested.' Anu 'I know the reason behind that. You are not worried about us.' Rishab 'he is nice boy.' Sanjana 'dad, you know about my love' Rishab interrupted 'Sanjana, I supported your love until he got married. Now I can't support you. I don't want to destroy a happy family.' Sanjana 'dad, why can't you understand my love for Prem.' She turned to other side 'I can't agree for your choice.' Anu is about to open her mouth. Rishab signaled her to be quiet.Rishab touched Sanjana's shoulder 'listen Sanju, Prem is not belong to you anymore.'

Sanjana angrily 'I won't allow him to live happily with Heer. I' hard slap fell on her cheek. Anu looked at her angrily 'don't you have brain. Talking like a uneducated.' Sanjana 'yours love marriage but you are not supporting me.' Anu 'in our case we loved each other. here Prem didn't like you.' Rishab 'Anu, leave her to me.' Anu 'she won't listen anything. instead of seeing her behaving like this I can die.' Rishab shocked. Sanjana angrily 'better you do that.' Rishab gave a tight slap to Anu.

Sanjana is shocked. Riahab angrily 'how dare you tell like that to my Anu?' Sanjana is shocked to hear this from his mouth. Her father always supported her every move. Sanjana 'dad, you love me.' Rishab 'but not more than my Anu. You are my daughter but anu is my life.' he looked at Sanjana 'do you anything about love. Ask Anu she will tell you about true love. you are thinking your father is very rich man but no. When I fell in love with Anu I was working as a salesman. Your nana ji didn't accept our love. He threatened Anu saying he won't give single penny from his property. Anu threw everything for me and came out of her house. he never complaint when we struggled for single time meal. After your birth your nana ji understood our love and accepted us. This entire property is not my own earning. Its all Anu's fathers property. I just built on it.' He pulled Anu into his hug 'I won't bother to lose you for my Anu.' Sanjana is shocked.

Sanjana understood that she lost her father's support and can't do anything. She accepted to marry the person for her parent choice. Rishan and Anu thought of finishing it as early as possible. Rishab told Anu to watch their daughter's move carefully fearing she may do something to stop the marriage. Everything was done in a jet speed. Within a week her marriage is over and sent to US with her life partner. Rishab and Anu breathed peacefully only after Sanjana's marriage.

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Prem holding his little angel in his hand sat next to Heer. 'Heer, she will be like you only.' Heer shook her head 'no. she has your eyes.' Prem 'may be but she will be your exact replica.' sadly 'I'll be left alone.' Heer shook her head 'Daughters always stay close to their father.' Prem 'then we should try for next child.' He pressed 'boy.' Heer hit his shoulder 'our daughter is not even one day. you are thinking about next child.' Prem smiled 'I don't want to leave you alone.' Heer 'so you plan to be with our daughter always.' She sadly turned her face to other side. Prem looked at his daughter 'see, your mother got angry. Now I have to pacify her.' holding comfortably in his one hand he leaned down and kissed her forehead 'angry?' like a kid Heer shook her head. Prem smiled 'see how I'm managing you both.' Heer looked at the way Prem holding their daughter in one hand and his other hand stroking her hair. She smiled 'you are clever.' Prem teased 'otherwise I can't be your husband.' Heer giggled. He kissed her forehead.

Prem kissed baby's left cheek 'my sweet Pari.' He showed her to Heer. She kissed her right cheek 'my sweeeet Chahat.' both laughed 'love you aditi.'

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Prem is sitting in the dinning table. Heer is arranging the table for dinner. Prem looked at the clock. Heer smiled 'you have 2 more minutes.' Prem 'I don't think she will reach home on time today.' Its Heer's oreder to their 15 year old daughter to return home before 9. she will be pusnished if she is late even for a second. but till now their daughter never gave chance to punish her. She is such a obedient and sweet girl never puts her parents in trouble. Prem and Heer as a parents gave her all the freedom but also taught her the values of relation in life.

Heer went to kitchen to fill the jug 'want to bet Prem? she will be in doors before the clock structs 9.' Door bell rang. Heer excitingly announced from the kitchen 'must be Chahat.' Prem 'let see how far you are guessing her perfectly.' Prem opened the door and surprised to see his 15 year old daughter standing with a smile. Chahat jumped into his hand 'papa.' she kissed him. both walked to the dinning table.

Prem excitingly shouted 'Heer, Pari is back.' The clock struck 9. Heer came with the water jug. 'how was the party Chahat?' Chahat 'so boring mamma.' She kissed Heer and sat in the table 'mamma, whats special today?' Prem 'don't you eat anything there?' Chahat 'no papa. they are not yet started the dinner. To be at home before 9 I decided to ignore the dinner there.' Prem 'is that is the only reason or you wanted to eat your mamma's dinner.' Chahat '50-50' Prem pat her cheek. 'your mamma understands you better.' Heer 'because she is exactly like you.' Prem 'me?' Heer 'ha, she is keeps her words.' she sat with them.

They finished eating their dinner. Chahat kissed Prem and Heer and she ran upstairs. Heer started cleaning the table. Prem helped her 'Heer, are you feeling difficult to do all this things. Can I ask some one to help you until Ramu kaka returns?' Heer cleaning the vessel 'no Prem, I can manage.' He hugged her from back 'I can't see my Heer suffering like this. You should train Pari to help you in this.' Heer 'she went to change her dress.' Prem 'but she gave good night kiss to us.'

Chahat 'paappa'. Prem looked at the direction. Keeping her hands in her hips 'mamma has trained me in all this things.' Prem kissed Heer cheek and moved towards the fridge. Chahat started arranging the vessels which Heer kept after washing. Prem opened the fridge 'Heer, how are you guessing her moves.' Heer 'Prem, like you she does everything perfectly.' Prem took cold water bottle. Chahat pulled it out of his hand 'papa'. Prem 'Pari.' Chahat 'no papa. You are not allowed.' Prem 'I'm not a kid.' Chahat teased 'but you will catch cold like kid.' Prem pulled her nose 'naughty girl, like your mother orders always.' Chahat poured the water in the sink 'mamma, why are you keeping cold water in the fridge?' Prem looked at Heer with sad face. Heer drying her hand with a towel smiled.

Chahat 'mamma, don't you get angry on Papa for doing like this?' Heer shook her head negatively 'he loves me more than his life.' she leaned on to Prem 'he acts like kid sometime.' Prem 'thank God, my Heer gave a good certificate about me.' Chahat laughed 'mamma, i want a partner exactly like papa.' Heer in surprise 'you are just 15 but thinking about life partner.' Chahat 'just giving you tips. so that you won't find any difficulty in finding one for me later.' Chahat kissed Prem and Heer 'good night mamma good night papa.' she ran to her room.
Prem and Heer looked at thier daughter's decision. Prem hugging Her walking towards their bedroom. Heer hands around his waist 'i'm happy Heer.' Prem 'for taking you like this.' Heer shook her her negatively. Prem 'then.' Heer 'we were able prove to our daughter as loving parent and couple.' Prem kissed her forehead 'its because of you.' Heer 'without your love and support we can't get good certificate from our daughter.' she kissed his cheek.

Prem looked at Heer who is lying in the bed and waiting for him. Prem lyed beside her 'Heer, are you feeling bad for not having son.' Heer shook her head 'no'. Prem looked at her confident face. Prem felt sad When Heer had miscarriage 3 years after Chahat's birth. Doctors said there is no chance for Heer to conceive again as her uterus is very week. They feared it may be danger to Heer's life if she gets conceived. So Prem didn't want to lose Heer. At the same time Heer too obeyed to Prem's loving decision for not going for another child.

Heer 'Prem, Chahat is our love. She has your characters and my features. Even if we had another boy we can't surely say that he will have all our features.' She cuddled into his arms 'so I never felt sad for not having boy.' Prem kissed her forehead.

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Edited by newt2007 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part loved it waitingggggg for next .


Edited by sweta2005 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
me......!!!! awsum update....luved it..!!!! 👏
Edited by shahrukh_divya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awsome update!!!
Luved it!!!
Happy that Prem was just dreaming and that Heer didn't really die!!
Premeer's daughter Additi is sooo sweet...
Sad that premeer can't have any more children but atleast they have Chahat!!
Luved the family scenes. <3
Edited by Xxcoolchick1xX - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hii selvyy...why didnt u pm me...ohh god i was waitingg fir this frm soo loong and finally u updated......nywayz the update was lovely....thank god it was all a dream,...luvd premeer scenes.......oooh god they r sooooooooooo perfect....luvd every scene of them.....good sanjana deserves this all slaps.....wooww chahat is fifteen now...... So fast......luvd the family scene....soooooo cute.....aww heer cant hav another child now...soooooo sad,....nywayz thanks for pm...update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !!
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank god its a dream and sanju got married
cute family scene between heer chahat and prem

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