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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
Hey the concept was awesome
the little jeer and fatty prem are so cute!
Can u plz pm me when u update
can't wait to read more
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haya tumhein suhana achi lagti he right kuch ziada he thatz why nah u mixed heer and suhana in one that was really like that suhana's entry
just read the pegla chapter
awesomeee
i like taani nd prem alongwith SUHANEER version
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@hajz.yup dear .heer ko mene suhaana jesa bnaya hai pr prem toh ishaan jesa he hai ..........n abhi inhe bara toh hone do...........
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great update pls dnt make it love tringle
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nice....
poor prem!....he was soo upset and heer slapped him!
plz start their lovestory soon!
continue soon!
thnx 4 the pm!
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hey...
that was a great update...
cnt wait to read the next one...
thanks 4 the pm...
and update the next part soon... 😃
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all the parts were awesome
please pm me when you update
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hey nyc concept
really very interesting
do add me 2 ur pm list
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gr8 yaar geud work!!luved it
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CHAPTER 3

TITLE:HATE LOVE STORIES
AFTER 14 YEARS
Hey all....i made a vm on premeeraani(prem-heer-thaani)
hope u guyz njoy!
prem in conference room
sum1:so, MR.PREM JUNEJA!.......finally apk hotel se humari deal final ho he gye..ab ahista ahista humari prtnership k bare mai bhi
prem:MR.SHUKLA.........aap ko achi tarah pta hai k mai partnership mai believe nhe krte.ya toh pora ya kch bhi nhe........hope aap smjh gye hogey.
MR.SHUKLA:see you MR.PREM...BEST OF LUCK ....😡n leaves in anger.......
sum1 from prem's staff:SIR apne MR.SHUKLA ki offer reject kr k acha nhe kya agar unho ne yeh deal final na ki toh humara bht loss hojayega............
prem:MR.SAXENA.mjhe yeh hotel kese chalna hai mjhe apse ya mr.shukla se sekhne ki zaroorat nhe .................kyunk mai is hotel ko pechle 2 saal k ander ander is maqam pr laya ho............aur mai yeh akela krte aya hona.na kabhi kisi ka sath lya hai na he loga.jab k mr.shukla ki company pechle 8 saal mai bhi yaha tak nhe phnchi..is baat ki wjaa jante hai aap..............waja yeh hai k unho ne yeh maqam pane k liye mehnat nhe ki balke logo k sath prnership ki .aur apne prtners k loss pore krte krte khud hi loss mai chleygya.............
mr.saxena:jee sir.sory sir
prem:ap log ab apna kaam kijye aur mjhe mera kaam sikhane ka kaam bnd kijye........
every1 leaves............
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heer enters prem's office
heer goes on reception:MR.PREM JUNEJA......
RECEPTIONIST:right way ma'am.........
heer enetrs prem's cabin..but no1 waz there.........
HEER:hmm...MR.PREM JUNEJA!!kool.........jis k liye heer maan apne subha ki neend khaarab kr k aye .woh cabin mai he nhe.how rude.........
prem enetrs the caBIn:xecuse me!
heer turns:xecused......n wese jao aur prem juneja ko bula k lao......aur s se kho k 5 min mai yaha aye wrna kisi aur ko dhond ley................
prem:mai he PREM JUNEJA HAI.........IS HOTEL KA MALIK........
HEER:HI.....N BY THE WAY TUMHE ITNE MANNERS nhe hai k kisi ko bula k wait nhe krna chaye
prem:I M SORRY MS.HEER..AB HUM BAAT KR SKTE HAI.
heer:obviously mai yaha tumhre cabin mai time waste krne k liye nhe aye.......
prem sits on his chair..
heer also take her seat
prem:so MS.HEER apne yeh hotel toh dekh liya hoga??.........
heer:dekha pr kch zyada nhe.only restaurant ......rooms n baqi cheezein abhi nhe dekhe........
pem:so aap mere cabin mai kya kr rhe hai.........
heer:wat?
prem:yes.wat r u doing in my office then?jaye pehle hotwl dekh kr aye n phr kal ki appointment ley kr ayega.now leave
heer :hey mr.prem wateva......shayad tum bhool gye ho k kaam tumhe hai n secondly heer maan se ochi awaz mai baat krna tum ko bht bhari parega..........
prem:kya krege?mjhe jail bheje ge.hm..........so bhejye ga first u leave n hotel dekhne ki bhi zaroorat nhe hai apko.ku k mai aise logo k apne cmpny k interior design krne ka kaam bhe dey skta jinko khud tameez na ho...........
heer:oh.......see whoz talking.jese tumhe toh bht tameez hai na.mr.rudy..........lagta hai tumhre parents ne tumhe baat krne ki tameez he nhe sikhaye.n for ur kind info.mai is office mai kaam krna he nhe cahte...tumhre parents ko tumhe pehle skool bhejna chayte manners sekhne
prem:BAS...bas..ms.heer .mere parents ...........n leaves
heer;hm.i will see him.......
n leaves
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heer thros all teh tissues on the floor..........
heer:how dare he?stupid.....wat the helll?egh....
rishabh enters her room.she goes n hugs his DAD.....
RISHABH:kya hua heer?kyun ro rhe ho?kya hua?bolo toh........
shje goes n sits on her bed
rishabh goes n sits on her bed n turns her face towards him:kya hau mere choti se angel ki eyes mai ansooooo......
heer:u knw wat DAd..AAJ mai us hotel gye teh prem se milney...there he...and strts crying......her father offers her a tissue......
heer:thnx.u knw DAD...........usne mjh ko badtameez bola aur jane ko bola.....he stupidd.......idiot.........i hate him i hate him i hate him..egghhhhhhhhhhhhh
dad:relax relax dear.....jus chill.dnt worry....
heer:dad usne apki beti se itne onchi awaz mai baat ki n u r sayin k relax......
heer:jabn tak mai uska woh sar wa boring hotel bnd nhe kra dete tab tak mai kahana bhi neh khaoge........
dad:oho...kisi k liye khana peena thri na chrte hai..n mai khud us se baat kroge.kisi ki kya himaat mere phool se beti ki ankho mai ansoo lane ki,..........
heer:dad plz.watz dis phool si.sounds so middle class
phool si......
dad:oh sorry my angel?
heer:yeah dats btr.......
dad:chlo ab rona bnd kro n give me a smile
dad:cumon cumon.smile smile.
heer laughs n hugs her father
dad;my baby.........
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thaani enetrs the airport........n calls prem:
thaani:hi prem.kese ho?
prem:mai theek ho.pr aap kon?
thaani:tujh se aise he umeed the k toh mjeh nhe pehchane ga
prem:dekhiye aap kia keh rhe hai mjhe kch msjh nhe arha..........
thaani:are buddhu..mai thaani baat kr rhe ho aur ab yeh mat pochna k kon thaani.......
prem:thaani.(n remembers all the scenes of him n thaani............)
thaani:kya hua buddhu..mera naam sun kr dar gya.kya?😆MAI KOI bhoot nhe bani abhi
prem:toh kaha hai thaani?14 saal baad........mjhe tujh se kiten baatein krne hai.tujhe sry kehna tha...aur...
thaani:bas bas prem.....mai mumbai mai ho......... tere ghar gye teh toh pta chla k ab toh waha rehta he nhe..itne mushkil se tera number mila un logo se.........
thaani:toh kaha hai prem?mene bhi tujh se bht baatein krne hai .....aur kch btana bhi hai........
prem:toh mjh se hotel aak mil na abhi?mjhe tujhe dekhna hai.
thaani;actully abhi toh bht guest aye hai milne toh shaam mai aa na mere ghar dinner pr........
prem:pr tere DAD...tujhe pta hai mai un se milo ga toh woh mere DAD ki baatein krege aur phr...
thaani:prem. bauji aur maa yaha nhe hai.....
prem:matlab?
thaani:woh america mai he hai
prem:toh toh yaha akele?
thaani:hmmm
thaani:chor na ab .......toh shaam ko ajana 8 baje.aur late mat krna............
prem:thaani toh jante nhe hai mai kitna khush ho...........
thaani:janti ho prem.mai bhi bht khush ho .mumbai aa kr.aur sabse zayada khushi is baat ki hai k mai tujh se milo ge
prem:thaani mai abhi tere ghar arha ho
thaani:nahi prem woh actully abhi kch guest hai aur abhi humne mandir bhi jana hai
thaani:tum 7 baje mere ghara ajana.phr sab btao ge apne bhi aur ter ebhi sare suno ge...
prem:thaani(suddenly some sound cums 4rm back)thaani
thaani:prem mai tujh se baad mai baat kroge.bye
prem:bye.......finaaly finally thani agye.......thaani ko sab bta do ga jo bhi in 14 saalon mai mene us k liye feel kia sab...........sab....
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precap:prem enetrs thaanis home..n after seeing sumthing he remains shocked.........
just wait for a big twist.........in the next chapter........
till then
keep reading
HATE LOVE STORIES
Edited by laviza97 - 15 years ago

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