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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

I love your ff so far...

Very nice twists and turns

Please add me to your pm list..

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: anishajk99
OMG Sahil is premeer's son?????????that means chahat's twin bro?????this guy is a mystery..........pls reveal everything sooon........

it wil be revealed... thx for commentin

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: sonia7
wow awesome updates

i have missed a lot

oh my god sahil is prem's kid so that means heer had twins?

well well prem shouldnt have been angry on her poor heer fainted!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i really like the bit where chahat told prem that she was crying coz of heer that was funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

well i like the set of juneja family they are gone to ambala and now prem heer can spend some time together great!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i wonder why sahil doesent accept prem as his dad?

thanks a lot for the pm

update soon

and this IS A LONG UPDATE

yeah got it.....its a long update sonia....thx for commentin....

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: blufate.14
oh god so much of suspense

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i noe....it wil be revealed... thx for commentin

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: samrocking30
sorry for late comment
part 2
it awesome part
part 3
sahil is premeer son omg what a suspense
thnx for pm

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welcum....it wil be revealed... thx for commentin

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Ayesha103
how old is sahil! im sure heer wouldnt let go of him if he was lyk 0-13 lol! update asap!

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yeah........will update today as much as possible...it wil be revealed... thx for commentin

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

ok so sahil is prems and heers sonn wooh hoo this boy is matured seriously i thought he is some bf type hahaha

and why did heer left him there ?? so mane questions unsleved

when prem will know abt him and wht sahil gonna do
m waiting

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#68

CHAPTER:-4

heer:mujhe yad hai teri kasam...beta...par ek bar to meri baat sun le....
sahil:mom i don't wanna listen anythin......mein aapse ye kasam li thi ki aapka aur mera rishta thabi khatam ho jaeya...jab aap prem juneja ke saath rahoge...aur aapne ne wohi kiya...
heer:sahil tu jo samjh raha wasie nahi hai beta...
sahil:waise nahi hai...phir kya hai maa???...aap ne apne 6 yrs ke beta ko chod kar aapne pati ke pas aagaye ho...to main kya samju mom??
heer:sahil............cryin...
sahil:mom main yahan nihal mamu kie saath hu...aur yahan mein bhout khush ho...so plz....mujhe prishan maat karo....aapne india 3 months phele gaye..main aapke saath nahi aaya kyunki mein dad ko nahi dekh na nahi chahata tha...par mom..aapne to.....
heer:sahil i...m..sorry...par....
sahil:mom meri kasam ke mutabik aap ya chahat koi bhi prem juneja ko nahi bataye gaye.....mein koun ho...aur haan chahat ko samja dunga aap apne aap ko samjae...
[sahil cuts the phone n calls chahat at ambala......meher picks up the phone.....]

AMBALA

meher:hello....
sahil:can i speak to chahat??
meher:haan...par aap koun??
sahil:woh mein chahat ka dost...hu..skoool ka kuch kaam tha...
meher:haan abhi deti hu....
meher calls chahat n tells chahat whose phone it is....
chahat:hello kaun???
sahil:chahat mein sahil.....
hearin the name chahat has tears in her eyes but controls her tears.....
chahat:bhaiya?????
sahil:mein tujhe phone isiliyekiya hai ki aaj ke bad mujhe phone maat karna...
chahat:par kyun bhaiya?mein aise ka kiya?
sahil:tune kuch nahi kiya chahat par mom ne jo kiya...usko dekh te hue to plz mujhe phone maat kar....
chahat:mom ne kya kiya bhaiya??
sahil:kuch nahi tu mom se poch le...aur yad rakh...to kisi ko bhi mere bare mein nahi bataye gayi.....tu mujhe promise kiya tha yad hai na....so aapna promise toda na maat...tujhe aapne bhai ki kasam.....
chahat:tik hai bhaiya...par jab mujhe aapki yada aaeygi to mein kya karo???
sahil:bas aapne aakeh band kar mein tere samne rahonga tik hai...juneja family mien kisi ko bhi mere bare mein pata nahi chala nahi chaiye...tik hai..mom ko yeh baat samja deh...tik hai...
chahat:tik hai bhaiya...
sahil:sorry tujhe bhout bura lag raha hai na...ki mein tere pass nahi..hu...mujhe pata hai ki tu aapne bhai se bhout pyaar karti hai ...par mom ne jo kiya....mein kuch nahi kiar sak tha hu...plz chahat....
chahat:its ok bhaiya....mein aapko samjh sakt thi hu....
sahil:bye chahat...aapna khayal rakh na...tik hai.....bhaiya luvs u a lot...
chahat:yes bhai...i will aap bhi apna khayal rak na..plzzz
sahil:tik hai....meri pyaari sis keliye sab karonga....
chahat:ok....
sahil:bye take care...
chahat:bye...
chahat hangs up the phone n wipes her tears before anyone cud see........
meher cums n ask her beta kis ka phone tha???
chahat:massi woh....
meher:mujhe us ladke ne bataya ki woh tera dost hai..par tu uske bhaiya kyu bula rahi thi??
chahat:woh phele mera dost tha uske bad mein ne abhishek bhaiya ke saath baat ki....
meher:abhishek??
chahat:haan nihal mamu ka ladka......
meher:US se phone tha??
chahat:haan massi mein phele wahan hi pad thi na....
meher:ok

JUNEJA MANSION....
prem:heer kya kahan sahil ne?
heer:kuch nahi shares ke bare mein phone kiya tha...
prem:oohhh
prem n heer both have their breakfast..prem goes to office..while heer alone at home thinks wht to do??
heer cleans the house n then durin the lunch time she has her lunch alone but continuesly bout sahil's words...n tears starts cumin out..
then after lunch durin....evenin she decides to call nihal to tell bout sahil.....
heer:hello
nihal:haan heer......
heer:bhaiya sahil asisa kyun kar raha hai??
nihal:heer sahil is angry at this moment.....bad mein kud shant ho jaye ga....
heer:par bhaiya...
nihal:mujhe malum tuj par beet rahi hai...mein aapne taraf se puri koshi karonga use maanne ke liye...puri khoshi karonga tu chinta maat kar heer...
heer:tik hai bhaiya......
nihal:tik hai heer...abhi ko tere se baat karni hai...
heer:haan
abhi:bua aap kaise ho???mujhe apki aur chahat ki bhout yad aarahi hai...
heer:mujhe bhi beta...tumhari aur sahil ki bhi....
abhi:haan bua...
heer sees prem comin from entrance...n she says bye to abhi....
n hangs up the phone...
heer:prem tum aagaye...
prem cumin closer...n sayin kyu mujhe nahi aana chaiye tha???
heer:prem....
prem:heer............
heer:jaao freah ho jao mein dinner laga thi hu....
prem tik hai....
both prem n heer hv their dinner...............after dinner prem waits for heer in liviin room sittin on couch n watchin TV..but heer does cums...so he goes n checks heer....
prem:heer....heer...
heer:haan prem...
prem:chalo heer...kitna kaam karogi??
heer:bas thodi der aur...
prem:ye kaam to tum bedroom mein bhi kar sakti ho....
heer's eyes shoot open...as she understood wht prem's intension are...
heer:prem...
widout sayin any word prem lifts her in his arms n take her to their room...
heer is protestin but prem payin no attention.....
prem make heer lay on bed n he lays beside her...
orem:heer jab chahat hui tab mein tumhare saath nahi..tha..par ab mujhe aapna bachpan dubara jeena hai heer....
heer understood wht he wants too say...
heer:par prem....
prem puts his fingers on her lips...n say sssshhhhh....nahi heer abhi nahi...
heer already in her nite suit...so prem removes her nite suit's knot.....while his lips r busy kissin...heer face...first eyes....then...nose...then lips...n they start kissin passionately while prem's hands undressin her...n her hands undressin prem....heer removed his shirt...then slowly she pulled the blanket above them.......prem undresss heer.....n prem heer became one..premeer.........again....
MORNIN....
heer opens heer eyes n see her position her head on prem's bare chest.....n they r covered wid blanket....heer smiled....n saw her nite suit lyin on grnd....she was goin to take prem pulled her bck...she thoughtprem might be sleepin but he wasn't...heer landed on him.....she saw him smilin....
heer:prem mujhe jaana hai...i hv to make breakfast...leave me plz...
prem:nahi phele mujhe kiss do....
heer:prem...kal raat diya na....
prem:woh kal tha...mujhe aaj chaiye..plz.......
heer gives quick peck on in his lips...but prem catches her....n starts kissin her passionately...
after...dat heer..wears heer nite suit n goes to washroom...n she close the door...but too heer suprise prem also cums inside...
heer:prem tum yahan kya kare ho...mujhe fresh hona hai...
prem:mein madat kar tha hu.....
heer:prem......
prem:tik hai mein jaa tha hu....

PRECAP:WIL NOE MORE BOUT SAHIL......................Y IS CHAHAT CALLIN SAHIL BHAIYA???
STAY TUNED...NXT PART ON ITS WAY....

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