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MimiLulu thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
Prem is a traitor? AAYYYYEEE RABBBAAA!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: amu142

ekdum sadoo types, haina!! God knows y Heer is soo deeewani after him!!😆😉

woh toh hai....maybe coz of his brilliant looks....😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
Helloji! read all the parts 😃 Yesh I know i ish aweshome 😎 🤣

Hai rabba! I love my character! 😃 It's so me! 🤣 dumb and lazy! 😎🤣 🤣 But i don't like Fari Bossji.. she tortures me 😭 bery bade fari L:

Oooohhh.. so prem ish dhokebaaz? 🤓 Bery bade! Sooo.. if i go tell fari boss she'll be happy with me na? 😃 yay! Fari Maam! That guy who speaks one sentence a day is a traitor! 🤣 🤣

hmm..anyway, on the serious side.. how does heer know prem? 😲 I wanna know! I wanna know! and I wanna know why prem's so weird too L:
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84

ok finished with all the updates here..

deepu is here too..i shud have known, jahan heer, wahan fari.
jahan fari wahan biru & deepu and may be vandy & amu.
so here we have Amu instead of Vandy as Fari's rival..and that too selling gossip magazines😆btw , i like the name hardikar...smthg di.fferent
i like Anu's attitude here....i'm th only sensible one here type.
poor shanu, boss fari is being bade to LJ's balika vadu😲 isnt she aware of his bashan tortures
aha, attitude prem huh...tough for heer to crack...now that makes it bery interesting
Prem works for both 😕 wonder who he is loyal to - amu or fari ?
plz update soon...
you girls are doing an awesome job
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
Chapter 9
Heer whirled around, "ANU!!!! What?"
"I thought I'd come and check out the competition too. Fortunately for us, Hardy Girl has chosen an open venue. Wonder why?"
Anu didn't bother ducking, just sat on the half wall and looked at the scene.
"Are you out of your mind? " Heer hissed, "Prem might see you! Get down here!"
Heer pulled Anu down onto the wet concrete.
It was Anu's turn to hiss loudly, "PREM?????? "
"Yes, you idiot, Prem! He's working on Hardikar's shoot. I don't know what to do."
Anu sat quietly for a good five minutes while Heer peeped over the wall and ducked a few times.
"Ok, this is a waste of time. Heer, let's go get some coffee."
Anu and Heer slipped away and walked towards Fleet, frozen and shocked. A few steaming cups of coffee later, Anu found her voice.
"First of all, are we sure this is THE shoot? The November cover?"
"Yes,it has to be. Those models only get used for this type of shoot. And Prem wouldn't be fiddling about there unless this was the main session."
"Well now Prem isn't the only one who knows what their cover is going to look like, we do. Heer, we tell no one else for now. Let's carry on as normal. But we'll have to change our shoot at the last possible moment and Prem shouldn't know till he's holding a camera."
Heer had her head in her hands, "What are we doing? How the heck are we going to do this?"
"It's either this, or Hardy Girl and Fari are going to have fisticuffs at Trafalgar Square. And I frankly don't mind that but we have a magazine to publish. Hopefully we can save the magazine and our careers."
"The only two places that will hire us and they're both daggers drawn, thanks to our charming camera guy!"
"You were drooling all over him until five minutes ago!"
"I have met him a few times, that's all. Thought there was a connection, I don't know why. Anyway that bit of silliness is gone now. Well and truly."
After another half hour, Heer and Anu got back to FarOut. They told Fari what Vanilla's cover was likely to look like. The clothes, the models, they left out the photographer's name.
"So who was doing the shoot?" Fari was chewing on a pencil, deleting a hundred messages from Biru and trying to visualise Hardikar's November masterpiece. They had both started as editors around the same time. Within a decade, both were established names. It was only a matter of time before they launched their magazines. Again, it was within a few days of each other. Big names in fashion had to deal with them both and almost lost the will to live. The competition was fierce. Fari would demand a designer to be present at the shoot, give an interview,and have lunch. Hardikar would tell the same designers that they could please themselves - Fari's five minute fashion fiesta or Hardikar's Hall of Haute Couture.
Fari hadn't appreciated that unflattering comparison and had upped the ante. She published an article on Hardikar's Hats. Every autumn,in October, the magazines did a special on English milliners. Hat makers who had come up with the best look for winter and the spring carnivals. Fari chose the same hats that Hardikar had written about, and wrote an opposite view of them.
Heer had found that a fascinating study in egomaniacal fashionista wars. In fact many students of fashion had found it a useful way to judge fashion. Heer had liked Hardikar's choices but Fari's out and out attempt to discredit a fashion guru's views was gutsy. Heer had decided that Fari was her hero.
"Excuse me! Hello!" Fari was demanding attention, "Heer, focus! Is their photographer someone we know?"
"Oh it's Mark Winterbottom."
Anu choked on her donut. Mark Winterbottom? Didn't Heer know that he died last month?
With a bit of frantic sign language Anu got Heer to change her story.
"No, not Mark, it looked more like Nick Templeton. I was a good distance away…couldn't see…."
Fari relaxed, "Oh him! Did you hear how he had the lens cap on when he tried to click me once?"
With Fari in a better frame of mind, Anu got to work on the design and told Fari that they would have to change a few things.
"Change away! And that Deepu needs to be completely erased from everywhere! Hope Prem didn't click too many of her. He should either burn them or sell them back to her!"
Heer was getting models organised again. Shanu rang around for even more models, ones that hadn't been used by Hardikar's Vanilla. Now that Heer knew which designers to avoid, she invited others.
With so much to do. Heer forogot about Prem for a while.
Prem was packing up at Billingsgate. Hardikar arrived just then to check on things.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86

oh it was funny heer metioned mark wo was dead and anu reminded her

and i cant believe heer forgot prem for a while wow
update soon
Edited by sonia7 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: amu142

dekh na Hiba, maine bhi wohi pucha hai!!

Maine Anu/ Fari Ki bachi ki Maa ke Bhains ko danda nahi maraa!
phir bhi sare FFs main Mujhiko yeh log Vamp bana dete hain!
But achi baat yeh hai, ke evry1 's scared of Bossji! Muhuhahahahaha

anu ki bachi ki bhains ki ma?? 🤣 thts a long relation if u ask me 😆😆 anu is very ebil!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
wel i finally made it to the latest update 😆😆 why do i get the feeling tht anu is the only one here who has a sensible head?? 🤓 want to know more abt the great amu hardikar now as fari is busy chewing her nails off and deleting ranbir's msgs😛😆😆😆 i hate tht nail chewing habit u know *wrinkles her nose*
the updates were awesome anu! how do u know so much the pros n cons of fashion industry? me is impressed!
p.s: i hope ur nt pissed off at me for bugging u abt the role thing wont bug u anymore! 😃 pinky swear! 😆
xx
hiba
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
Chapter 10
"You think that worked?" Prem was only half interested.
"Oh it bought me some time. Won't be long before they realise that this isn't the real deal."
Hardikar had had enough of Fari's snooping. Didn't that woman have any original ideas?
"Ok well I'll send you the bill."
"Fine. "
With that Prem left for FarOut.
Back at the office, Heer had organised and scheduled till her head spun. Shanu lent a hand in between getting to know Brad the temp. She told him all about the phases of the moon, he told her all about how to ski without breaking a leg.
As Heer took a break and stretched, Prem walked in. With a supreme effort at cool, Heer forced herself to look at him,
"Our deadline is the 15th."
"I assume you've booked the agency I always work with?"
Heer was tempted to say, "the double agent agency?" instead she played along,
"Nope, had to get a different lot. Fari may want a different look so I have to keep our options open. Can't get models at the last moment."
For once Heer had his full attention. He came and sat next to her, at her table.
"And I can't work with people who don't know what they're doing!"
"Are you saying I don't know my job?" Heer was calm and was just realising that this wasn't her job. She dealt with the actual fashion, draped on a living breathing model. The whole look. It had to satisfy her eye. That was her job. But thanks to Fari's intrigues, she had been thrust into this business of leading Prem a merry dance.
Anu who was at the next table, threw a screwed up ball of paper at Shanu. Shanu, who was used to this method of communication, unfurled the message, "Get Brad out of here. I'll leave first."
Suddenly Heer and Prem were alone. Heer hadn't realised. Prem hadn't either.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
wow they are on their own
there should be a romantic scenes
please continue soon

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