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Posted: 15 years ago
hey i guess u too said tht u cant write romantic scenes:-??
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Chapter 42
They got to Prem's Docklands flat. Heer had gotten into the habit of cooking for Prem. She felt it was something she wanted to do for him. Prem wasn't too keen on the end product but swallowed whatever she produced.
Today it was going to be her favourite fettucini tossed in anchovy and cream sauce. Without stopping to chat or do his favourite bit of cuddly catch up. So Prem decided to surprise her after dinner.
"That was delicious!" Prem said it almost automatically now and Heer didn't bother thanking him for the compliment. Even if she did, he would shake his head and point to his lips and pucker up. There was only one kind of thank you that Prem would accept from Heer.
"I've got a surprise for you." Prem looked triumphant as he pulled out a box .
"Ring" Heer thought.
"Open it"
Inside was a key. Heer picked it up and looked at Prem.
"Our new home."
"What!" Heer looked aghast.
"In Kensington. It's a townhouse, with plenty of rooms. Ideal for a large family."
"Prem!"
Prem took a deep breath and prepared for another argument.
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Chapter 43

After many arguments (and kisses in between), Prem convinced Heer to go see their new home. As soon as Heer got out of the car, she gasped. It was a classic white townhouse, what Kensington was known for. What FARI always dreamed of. Fari, who grew up worshiping anything London, said that once you have a house in Kensington, you are truly a Londoner.

"Umm Prem, did Fari, by any chance, help you pick this?" Heer asked curiously.

"For once, no. Nobody knows about this except the two of us. Why? You don't like?" asked a concerned Prem.

"No it's not like that. Why do we need to move here anyways? What's wrong with the apartment you have? This is so far away from Fari, she'll throw a fit once she finds out. Not to mention, she'll murder me if she finds out this is going to be MY home and not hers."

"Murder you for having something she doesn't? Heer, we are talking about Fari. She'll give you her first born, if you just ask."
laughs Prem.

"That's true but still......"

Prem pushes a worried Heer inside the spacious 5 bedroom townhouse. With it's huge windows and dark wood flooring, Heer falls instantly in love.

"Do you like?" Prem asks once they get a tour of the house and are back in the kitchen. "I'm thinking, we can start renovating it after our engagement and move in right after our wedding. I am sure Fari would love to help with the decorating!" Prem laughs as he remembers his second date with Heer at her apartment with all the candles and the flowers.

"Fari! This is so far away from her. Whatever she says, I know she only moved to London because of me and she's my only real family....well apart from you." Heer says sadly.

Prem goes near her and gives her a cuddle and a light peck on the lips.

"Umm you know the house next door is on sale too. Maybe Fari and Biru can...."

"Really? Are you sure? I mean really? You don't mind her having so close by? Checking on me, in the middle of the night?"
Heer says with a smile on her face for the first time the whole day.

Prem never seen her so happy before. "Well maybe the middle of the night part I would mind.....we could be you know busy! *Heer nudges him* But I would love to have Fari close by. Without her, we'll be quite lost!"

Heer thanks Prem by giving him the biggest kiss yet.
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Chapter 44
Prem could have watched Heer all night. She was ecstatic about the house. She was already imagining what would go where. The floorboards were really the best feature of the place.
After an hour Heer went and held Prem's hand.
"It's not true. I don't love this house more than you!"
Prem laughed. He was thrilled that he had got her something she really liked. He was having a few dreams of his own about the house. He wanted a full house. But again that would depend on his Jhansi ki Rani here. How had he let so much of his happiness depend on this woman? What a huge risk. But as Prem knew, no risk, no reward. And this bet seemed one of the safest he had made.
Heer tugged him towards the door. "I think we better get home. It's a working day tomorrow."
Prem let himself be led by her and locked the door. Heer's phone rang.
"Fari! Guess what! Prem's bought a new place in Kensigton!"
As Prem and Heer got into the car Prem could here Fari screaming, "What! What! What! Are you kidding? Are you messing with my head? What about me?"
"Calm down idyyat! The place next door is for sale. So get your butt down here tomorrow!"
Fari nearly collapsed with excitement and was being fanned by Mercedes.
Heer remembered that it was Fari who had called her," What did u call for?"
"Huh? Oh ya! I've got the engagement outfits for you both. Should I bring it to your flat tomorrow?"
"Ok after 6 will be great. How's Biru doing?"
"His plaster is coming off today. So he's happy. I'll drag him round to see the house."
"Well thank God for that! "
Heer rang off and her thoughts went to the 'engagement' a few days away. For the first time she thought about Prem's parents. They seemed nice. Not as fun loving as Prem but pleasant enough. Gayatri Aunty was a difficult person to figure and Heer hadn't said much to her when they had last met. Heer glanced at Prem as he drove. This man would keep her happy, she was sure of that. But a family consisted of many personalities and Heer didn't yet know how they all gelled with each other.
Prem looked at her, "What's the problem now?"
"No problem. Does there have to a problem?"
"When you're quiet, I worry."
"Then be prepared for a lifetime of worry!"
Prem chuckled," Oh yeah! Is that how it's gonna be? Well somehow I think the only thing you'll be worrying about is how to keep your husband happy."
"Urrgh!" Heer's hand covered her eyes and she shook her head, " Ya, that's going to be my all consuming thought, morning, noon and night! Gimme a break!"
"Oh I don't mind morning and noon as well! That's a bonus!"
"Prem, don't be childish."
"I will be till I have a child! At least that's what the experts say."
Heer decided to say nothing.
"No? you don't agree?"
"I prefer other people's kids. Easier. No responsibility."
"I see." Prem looked thoughtful. Heer was relieved that that had shut him up for a bit. It was unusual, she thought, for a guy to want a family straight away . Wasn't it usually the wives who nagged their husbands about this?
Back to thoughts about the engagement and the reaction they'd get. Daljeet Chachi wouldn't be too pleased to see Prem slip out of reach but still be in the family. Heer was beginning to get nervous. Fari and her pals were going to be her only support.
She felt Prem's hand on hers. " It's going to be alright." Heer appreciated him saying that. She felt a weight lift off of her, at least temporarily.
Edited by locman - 15 years ago
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Chapter 45
Fari stormed through Heer's front door," Aaye Rabba! Only 2 days Heer!
And you haven't tried on your outfits! How many things can I do at the same time?"
Heer didn't say a word. It was better to let Fari scream. It's what she did best, and it produced the best results.
"I got this Ralph Lauren suit for Prem at a ridiculously good price!" Fari smiled triumphantly.
"Oh? So you didn't get one made at Saville Row for your PJ?" Heer raised an eyebrow.
"How to do that when you are romancing him 24/7 and won't let him go?"
"Hmmph! I am romancing HIM?"
"ok baba! HE's romancing YOU! Thik hai? What's the difference? End result is the same na!"
"Why did you bring it here?"
"Bec'." Fari began but Heer stopped her, "Right, right'because he's here? He's never here!"
"You mean? Oooooooooooooo! You go to his place?" Fari looked impressed. "So what goes on there?"
Heer grabbed the suit from Fari, "Give me that! I'll see that he gets it and tries it on."
"There's no time! He needs to try it on NOW! I'll call him and tell him to come over."
Prem was in a meeting when Vandy buzzed, "I'm sorry sir, but there's a call you need to take." Vandy didn't sound pleased, which meant Fari was on hold. Prem excused himself and took the call, said he'd try to get there in 2 hours.
Finally he knocked on Heer's door and was pulled in by Fari before he could say hi. Prem looked questioningly at Heer, who beckoned him to her bedroom.
Fari laughed, "Oi! What's wrong? All your dreams are coming true go to Heer's room!"
Prem didn't know whether to smile but went obediently to Heer. "It's the suit. You need to try it on."
"Oh. Ok" Prem started removing his jacket and loosening his tie and Fari whistled a tuneless song and came over to get the Ralph Lauren out of its garment bag.
Fari took charge while Heer was used as a coat hanger. "Ok, stand still PJ and lift your arms while I tie this cummerbund. Fari got it round his midsection , stood back to have a look, adjusted a bit more and seemed happy. "Good! Now you need to try on the pants, coz if that doesn't fit perfectly then I need to change it."
Heer went slightly pale and stared at Fari who took the rest of the clothes off Heer and led her out of the room. "Heeriye, are you ok?" "Fine!" came the snap back.
Prem came out to show them. "Arrey wah! Perfect fit! Look Heer! Perfect figure!"
Fari went over and turned Prem round, looked left and right, dusted off some fluff and stood back to admire.
Heer watched and admired too, except she wasn't going to let Fari see it.
Finally the jacket and needless to say, it fit Prem well.
"All done! Thanks PJ. You can go back to work now."
Fari was in full mausi-mode today and Heer didn't say a word, not even when Prem said bye.
"What's wrong with you? No hi no bye? Poor bloke is gonna think there's some major problem!"
Heer smiled and let Fari lecture and scold to her heart's content.
Finally she left and Heer called Prem. "She's gone."
Prem was up the stairs in a flash and strode in through the open door.
Heer started to speak, "You looked ver....." But that was all he let her get out.
That's right folks! It's party time for Prem and Heer. In case you're interested, listening to Aaja Soniye (Mujhse Shaadi Karogi) will put you in the mood they are in right now. 😉
Edited by locman - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey awesoem i read all the parts
please continue soon
waiting eagerly
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Posted: 15 years ago
Finally finished reading all the parts
Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee work guys
Had so much fun reading it...
Loved Fari's character very much...she's such a good friend
i wish i can find a friend like her...
Waiting eagerly for the next part
if there are any pm provisions..can u pm me?
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Originally posted by: premeer4rever

Finally finished reading all the parts
Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee work guys
Had so much fun reading it...
Loved Fari's character very much...she's such a good friend
i wish i can find a friend like her...
Waiting eagerly for the next part
if there are any pm provisions..can u pm me?

Ya Fari is the best friend we all would like to have.
Unfortunately she's Heeriye's bestest friend, as she says, she won't withold even her first born from Heeriye.
Long live this friendship.
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Originally posted by: locman

Ya Fari is the best friend we all would like to have.
Unfortunately she's Heeriye's bestest friend, as she says, she won't withold even her first born from Heeriye.
Long live this friendship.



That's gr88
i too pray for that
long live their frienship
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Posted: 15 years ago
😊 Thanks Anu and Fari.

Wow, it's hilarious!

Looking forward to more!!

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