SS: Protector 5th Sept, Epilogue pg 127

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Lisa

@Aymee

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#901

Hi Mehak *** waves ***

I want to say that I so happy that I am finally able to comment on your SS 😃 but was 😭 to find out that this was your final chapter. Well, I am glad I am able to get the chance to comment.

I really loved and enjoyed your SS. My overall comment on your SS:

* I am was glad Prem finally confessed his love for Heer but was upset that he left her for so long.

* I couldn't believe while Prem was away, RR and Heer got engaged. I really wanted to rip RR's head off for thinking he can take Prem's place in Heer's heart.

* I was really surprised Heer's father shot RR but I was so happy he is permanently out of Prem and Heer's lives.

* Prem's proposal was very sweet.

* Maya was a great friend and supporter to Heer.

* Maya and Preet's hooking up was cute and funny.

Mehak, thank you for sharing with us your wonderful SS. I know you will be busy with school but I hope you can another one soon, whenever you get the time.

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sonia7

@sonia7

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#902

awesome mehak
thanks for the lovely ending
i love your writing style
i really think you should start another FF or SS
thanks for the pm hun

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-alisha-

@-alisha-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#903

it ended???awwwwww.....ill miss it.....

coming to the update.....it was great as ususal.....i always luvd ur flashbacks like the earlier one where prem holds heer in his lap and this one too....simply marvelous.....👏.....and the ahem scenes ka toh kya kehna...lovely

i will miss this ss a lot😭......macho man and his puppy love

Edited by alisha_harshiti - 15 years ago