Journey Of Undefined Relation *Discontinued PG-28*

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greeshma

@Greeshma....

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#91

hiii ashlesha..........

u have started a fantastic job along with maha

congrants............

PM me when u update

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dreamysouls

@dreamysouls

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#92

Hey gr8 update!!.
Introduction of Prem simply awesome....
waiting for the next update..

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366791

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#93

Great update

Wonder what Heer will do?

Stupid Naina

Thanx for the PM

Cant wait for the next part

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Nitty

@Nitty2910

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#94

thank you very much for the PM.

The updates were very interesting... so waiting for read wat actually happned to her.. and the FB seems interesting...

Waiting for the next update...and your PM..

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#95

Wow!
That was great!
loved it !
Can't wait to read what happens next!
Thnx for the pm
Update soon!

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...Nikhita...

@...Nikhita...

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#96

great update!!!!

but was real short....plz write longer updates.....

heer ragged in college.....wonder what'll happen now.....

so prem is a bad boy......cool......

continue soon!!!!

and thanks for the pm

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MoBiX

@MoBiX

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#97

ohoh geeti2 and maha u t wo r just awesome!!!

prem is a bad boy in dis FF?😕 opposite what he was in da show😆 me loving prem as bad boy by da way does prem saw heer's face or not ?😕

if yes then dis is da first ff that im reading prem is not lost in heer's eyes!!!😳

ohoho heer(mummy) is having teasr in her eyes how dare u bad boy prem (papa)in da first meeting only u brought tear in heer's eyes very bad papa*shakes head *

and maha and geeti2 u two better update next part asap😡😆

coz I can concerate on my vm 😆(now dont tell me dat u didnt told us)

dont get scrared it wont be dark and unlogic like previous🤣

missing u loving u

premeer ke chahat (mobi)😳

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Sunshine

@SunShine_A

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: -fsn-

ohkk thn ask maha only fr next tym ab main bhejti hoon tujhe😡😛😛 and i m very serious yeahh baby next update is myn so lets see😆😆 i will definately keep you waiting fr very long, I promise on that

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meeshti jain

@meeshti.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#99

hiiiiiiiiii ayesha and ash

that was really a nice update

poor heer

first day hi ragging

oh god

really want to knoe whats gonna happen now

pls update soon

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amreen

@Cutydevil

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#100

hello...my matlabi bro n my sis...hehe..sory for the late comment😛

mujhe nhi read karaya*sad muh* aqsa ne nhi likha na islia..bhai tu bhut matlabi hai..ok nw back to the shot...awesum,fab..i reli like the concept very intresting one.btw i alwayz njoying college part.lol...heer ki ranging woh bhi prem ker raha hai..lol..well now aftr reading this i can only imagine whn prem relaxing wid the cap on his face😍 kitna cool lag raha hai..hehe....waiting for nxt part...post soon ok..

keep up the gud work..

luv

amreen

Edited by mireen19 - 15 years ago