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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: 0711rokxoxo

Oh i luved the long update... 😳

hahah Mahi is really nice...😛
very nice precap
thnks for the pm

thaankoo😉 i mean😉 thankyou 😛 for liking it. i m going to do this for your comment👏👏 i have myself 4got precap hai kya i can't find tum ko pata he to batao😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey

i m a new reader and a new member on the site

i liked this ff

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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update soo premeer are in love!!!
Thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey brilllllllliant update do keep it up!wellllllllllllllllllllllll dun:D wonderful thanx 4 the pm ;)
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Posted: 15 years ago
thank you for this update ..............loved premeer scenes and meets
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanx a lot ,for de pm omg heer and prem getting romantic ahem ahem thanx :) :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
@snehaheer21 thanx a lot
This update dedicated to my lil sister
Sweety its the beggining just wait and read what comez in next updates (but not the one i m going to give now)
UPDATE:-)
When at breakfast all family members have finished. Gaya3 announces about Ph's wedding. Both get shocked
Heer n Prem: Maa itne jaldi. Abhi
Gaya3: Office se jaldi aa jana tum aur Herman tu bhi.
Prem does not think to protest more is good so he finally asks how much days left. So gaya3 tells its three weeks.
Prem: And I can see Heer till
Maheen: 4 days
Prem asks gaya3 to give him permit to take Heer alongwith him somewhere out the next day. She agrees. While Maheen's tough day starts after the guys leave for office.
Maheen's tough work may be defined as: she was going to make Heer learn how to wear indian dresses.
So, the final struggle bagan. In start Heere was making very foolish attempts. But finally till in evening Maheen'z hardwork proved fruitful. She had finally learned how to wear that. In the evening Prem arrived at home and rushed towards Heer's room. When he enetered Heer was brushing her hair. Prem seeing Heer in a white saarhi looking fab he rubbed hiz eyes cuz he thought
pReM: I em' not even drunkSo why do i look likely to see heer in a cute saarhi. Bekuz Heer n this kind-a-dress.
Heer unawear of Prem threw her hair at her back when some water droplets fell over Prem.
Prem: Heer kya kar ri ho
Heer: Sorry-------wo mujhe dair ho gayee.
Prem: And why is my room having your things in it
Heer: Kuz till our wedding its mine and your luggage is in the opposite mansion
Prem: Wahan koi ni hota Heer thats empty
Heer: Noh all boys will shift their sfter a week or so.
Prem held Heer's hand
Prem: I'll miss you sweet cheeks
Heer: Noh---you won't. (heer moved Prem towards the window) woh dekho saamne wala room you can see me through that one. Happy
Prem: Okeh
Heer: I have shifted your luggage there and see the moon its looking cute but incomplete
Prem: kuz we are being seperated
Heer: Now stop being cool. Be yourself
Prem: Fine
Maheen came in seeing the couple very busy. She said: Looks like kee you don't wanna go now.
Prem: We were just getting ready.
Maheen:Be quik Heer let's go and you come with the guys.
Heer: But--Prem..... woh
She pulled Prem outside from the room
Mahi: Prem its Heer's room now so go into your own room don't be here get ready
Prem: Tumhein toh na mein I'll see you
Maheen: We'll see.
At the shoping mall, all of them divide themselves so that they can do maximum shoping in less time. While Prem and Heer have nothing to do and just see others shop. Prem phones heer
Heer: Kyun phone kiya
Prem: Heer can I meet you at Ice-cream parlour?
Heer slowly walked out of the jewellery shop
Heer: Prem I can't come They are buying rings and other jewellery if I escape they'll know we're together.
Prem: Heer go in and tell the manager to give you the jewellery which I had ordered and wear it up.
Heer: I am not wearing it i am only collecting it. ( she collected it up)
Prem: I know why aren't you wearing it kuz you need help
Heer: Did I say so
Prem: I know that and yepp I really like you. I like like you.
Heer: You like like me.
Prem: You don't like me at all
Heer: noh I do
Prem: So prove
Heer: Are you going to say that I have to come to parlour
Prem: Noh so tomorrow I will tell you how to prove my likee-ness
Heer: it is not a word at all
Prem: Heer look upwards, downwards and now on right( it was a rose with a note) don't read it now when you get home fully relaxed then read
Heer: Okeh Fine and now don't do that thing
Prem: what you mean this
Heer: stop smirking.

Prem and Heer travelled in same car alone. Prem n Heer had the whole drive quite closely or should I say with Premz head burried into heerz shoulders kissing her and Heer totally trying to nibble her lips and his hands in order to control her pleasure.
so when the others reached home all of them ran into their rooms without even saying good night.
When Heer went into her room she read the cute lil letter which was very touchy she had a cute little smile spread across her face

So the next day Prem and Heer had left for Simla. Prem was driving and Heer was constantly looking outside on the roadside.

Prem: Hello madam mein kab se drive kar raha hun Mein

She lightly blinked and then softly replied

Heer: Prem its only been 5 minutes hardly.

Prem: I mean Heer these two days we have totally for eachother so please pay attention to me ihinn

Heer: Fine

she looked at him and Prem gazed at her.

Then Heer laughed

Heer: Prem kya stupidly dekh rahey ho Drive the car.

Prem: Fine i mean heer laug aisey he kartey hain matlab ki often BF stares at GF. GF stares at BF its normal

Heer: Then if its normal then it won't work in us

She smiled and thouroughly looked in his eyes listening to her fvt songs hearing the song Prem intended to start a convo

Prem: Really everything comes naturally

Heer: Yupp its from God

Prem: This too

he moved his hand to Heer's ear and took out her earing and then slowly moving laterally his finger reached Heer's lips which were all wet as he intended to go inwards Heer slipped out her tongue and moved inwards alongwith ladz finger

Prem: You're getting it now

Heer bit his finger she smiled with a wide smile

Heer: Right I em getting it and you know i told you its normal then it won't work in us but you don't really listen

Prem: Now I am not talking to you.

Heer: You can't even stay 15 minutes without talking to me

Prem: I can I will not talk to you till next ine hour travel---------------------- i mean 30 minutes-----------------------------------i mean 17 minutes

Heer: You look cho chweet ( she smirked alot ) keep on fighting with me I like this( she took off her other earing as well) Ye b rakh lo ( he took it) Tum gusa ho. ( he stared on road with a poker face) are you angry ( prem raised the volume of song) Prem you're angry a man who claims he can't get angry with me is angry with me.

Prem: Noh

Heer: I won you--talked it dint even take me 5 minutes.

Prem: yeah right

Edited by hajoo00 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOOO umeed hai ki tum logo ko achi lagey
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Posted: 15 years ago
superbb update...premeer scenes wer sooo cute....especially rhe car one......prems finger in heers mouth.....soooo sweet....awww prem has to live without heer till their marriage ...soo sad.....and wooww premeer goin to shimla....tht tooo alone...happpyy.....want more premeer romance...nywayz thanks for pm....update sooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh thanx a lot it was lovely dedication
premeer ❤️ ya i am waiting for de next update
as a sister i ❤️ u a lot 👍🏼 thanx for de pm

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