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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: NIMMY

bahut aacha tha................

Same here tumhare comment short and comprehensive tha anyhow acha kya tha😲 update ya precap😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha103

hey briliant updateeeeeeeee!weell dun

thankz ayesha😛 please to read yoyr comment
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Posted: 15 years ago
Its gonna be good update coming up
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update. i just loved every bit of it. thanks for the pm. premeer scenes are sooooooo romantic. waiting for the next update. update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Just typing the update i hope you like this but you won't
KUZ
IT WILL HAVE
many things you would never want to happen except for RR other surprises too are coming
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: hajoo00

Thankz alot khijz okeh short sa precap day dati hun for your cute comment
Precap:
Premeer having their luxurious and having TIME OF THEIR LIVES will be interrepted with RRz arrival in Simla and he will greatly disturbed the understanding and love time PH lookz like i gave you a total precap na Now start protesting
aww thanks sweety for the precap...cant wait to read it
Edited by khajju - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: khajju

Thakz a tonnes Khijz for your cutoo comentz

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Posted: 15 years ago

Imp: Now my vocationz have started so now I will update all my four fanfaicz hastily every week

And a loads of thanks to 😉Khadija😉 for commenting 👏sho shweetly👏 ye tumheray liye he nahin tumharay comments k liye hai.😛

UPDATE:-)

So when Heer and Prem had nearly reached Simla he stopped the car in a veeraan place.

Heer: I know you are tired but why you stopped here?

Prem: To realax

Prem got out of the car and opened the door of Herz side instead of tellliing her to come out he went up and sat in her thighs

Heer as felt him

Heer: Prem pagal ho

Prem: My arms they are breaking away

Heer: So hatto mujhe jaaney do mein drive karti hun

Prem: Nahin--------------- I mean Heer acha ni lagata na Dekho tummei fionce ho aur muhhe tumahara khayal rakhna he

Heer; Wo tum meray fionce ho aur mujhe b tumahara khayal rakhna he

Prem: Nahin heer

NO need for that

Heer: So kya chahiye

Prem: Smile

So getting the fact Prem was just wasting time

Heer: Prem tum bahut heavy ho so get up

Prem: Fine

So finally after a lot of wastage of time they finally enetered the hotel holding eachother stiffly Prem biked a room for two saying they were married.

Heer: Married

Receptionist looked at Heerz expression

Prem: Heer jaan wait we go upstairs then we will continue

He quickly signed and heer still puzzled abt Premz plan. Before Heer could ask anything Prem unbuttoned his shirt after locking the room from inside.

Heer: Prem tum pagal ho gaye ho go down and correct your mistake

Prem: Neechay meri galti khaddi he kya

Heer: Nahin

Prem: Baithi he

Heer: Haan

Prem: abhi jaata hun

Heer; aisay without your shirt coat or anything

Prem: yepp

Heer: noh[he turned around and then smiled]

Prem: Heer tum b heer ho

Heer: Now go and Take a bath

After being fresh Mr. Juneja came out looking for cute Cinderella he saw her no where. So he just down.

Heer was just about to come to her room when she saw RR she had seen him after a very long time seeing him there she just dashed into his chest. Just then Prem saw Heer hugging RR deeply but he just ignored. But Heer dint see Prem passing.

Heer: in high spirits: Rish tum yahan

RR: yupp kyun you've booked the whole hotel.

Heer: Noh just had not thought me wud find you here

Their chit chat continued Heer tried to leave RR but he dint give any chance to heer so she could skip.

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Late at night till 12.00 prem was waiting after that he slept hungry waiting for Heeer she came in likely 1.45 or something. She just changed and lied in bed after kissing Prem n whispering in his ears GOOD NIGHT [ itni takleef dainay k baad kahan ki good night hoti he] so she slept next morning

Heerz phone rang Prem got up and Heer was sleeping it was disturbing her sleep so Prem received the phone withourt seeing the no and came out to talk.

Prem: Hello

RR: I wanna talk to Heer

Prem had recognized it was RR

Prem: My wife is sleeping and why are you trying to disturb us early in the morning

RR: Wife!

Prem: Kyun log shaadi nahi kartay kya

Heer rubbing her eyes came out and hugged Prem from back saying

Heer: Prem kya hua

Listening heerz voice saying Prem he cut the phone in a shock

Prem led back Heer onto the bed and Heer lied over Premz chest. She said sorry to him

Heer: Prem I know mujhe raat ko bahut late ho gaya tha. I would not have messed the night so sorry for that wok al jab I went down I just saw R

Prem: Heer I trust you I love you I don't wanna know okeh kuz tum meri jaan ho aur mujhe tum per pura vishwas he

Heer; magar

Prem: Heer

Heer: Okeh fuf….fine

She loosened up rested on Premz chest. But this time wild thoughts playing in Premz mind while Heer lost somewhere in thoughts. Heerz innocent lostness totally reflected as she led Prem whatever he wanted to do. She was trying to be contented with what he was doing. Prem lightly striped off her drape and pushed her upwards near his lips. His hand made its way somewhere inside her when his chilly hands touched her cold body heerz hair stood up on one end and Heer held Prem as tightly as she could and involuntarily said:

Heer: Prem you won't dump me na

Prem: shockingly: Dump! What happened Heer?

Tears rushed down her eyes falling over Premz chest they both got up Prem lightly pulled Heerz cheeks and then covered her by putting shawl over her shoulders Heer slanted her head onto Prem's neck and told her why she was so gloomy. Anyhow they had a very great time there with eachother teasing fighting romancing.

So after a lot of fun time they returned home.

Heer left quickly before Prem could do anything to stop her. She left him alone in car bading a bye with a wink

Precap: All marriage functionz take place and at the end after phras it reaveals that groom is 😡RR😡

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Posted: 15 years ago
wht the heck r u talk is groom is RR?????


plz continue yar...dyin....//
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Posted: 15 years ago
Fantastic part... poor prem waited sooo long for heer... 😡RR is KMH hogaya indono ke beech main... waiting eagerly for next part

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