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I am writing this ff this is my first ff. In this ff we have a everloving adorable Heer but a bit modern girl who has been brought up in London. Her family lives over there Prem Juneja is her childhood BFF. Prem juneja is a man of own rules though he is an example for his younger bro but still nobody is perfect so is he

Every person in the world has a heart.


Every heart has a place within
that wants only to love and be loved.


They need to connect with that
place of love in their own heart
and in the hearts of all around them.it is time for them to stare on eachother with love(as a friend as a BFF) not with that love which they feel foreachother the love the attraction one feels for his/her partner


PH have to take a moment now
to open to the heart connection
to share their love with eachother as they do it with all people.
Chapter 1

Prem Juneja really very fussy

when it came to his business and

a great playboy when it was with girls representators.

His hobby partying around, sleeping and playing with girls.

Prem after the meeting came out of the conference room

Prem: phoned Preet who was in a pub: Where r u

Preet ran out of pub to the car

Preet: PB obviously at bed itzzz 11.00 in clock I m in bed

Prem: I m at home

Preet: PB aap India mein when u came here. Sorry

Prem: u r at

Preet: pub

Prem: u r lil bro so don't try to lie

I m at office in New York

But you just remember I m a genie so I can come to set u straight

Preet: Sorry

Prem: Enjoy yourself AT pub

Bye

Preet: what is with PB minute mein gussa and in next moment hezz ever sweet

He went in again as Maher bumped into him

Maher: where had u vanished??

Preet: PB

On the other side in Oxford University, London

Heer it was the last semester.

Her friends often tried to make Heer talk in Hindi but she always avoided as she was not well at Hindi there was only one person whom she talked to in Hindi that was her best friend.

Heer and her friends were pulling eachother's leg but most likely it was Heer who was being teased about Prem but she kept on denying and telling them he has a girlfriend he and she r just friends etc etc

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Thanx all for commenting
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice ff
i liked it somuch
add me in ur pm list
update the next part asap
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nice part

waiting for the next part
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THANKS PEOPLE FOR LIKING THIS ONE TOO BUT YOU DINT ANSWER ME THAT THIS UPDATE IS LONG ENOUGH OR SHOULD I WRITE MORE NEXT TIME
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hiiiiiiiiiii

its a nice ff
pls update soon
and add me in ur pm list
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hey...
really nice...
pls continue...
pls update soon...
and pls pm me wen u do....
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it was awesome update and i want to see prem and heer s first meeting so please update soon thanks
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hi
really lyk the story of ur ff
nd the length is gd not too long nd not too short, it sperfect 😉
lol, btw can u plz add me to ur pm list?
thnx

cnt wait fr more
do continue soon
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THANKS FOR LIKING THE FF ACTUALLY I HAD FORGOT NAMES THTS WHY I DINT PM ALL OF U BUT STILKL I PMed A FEW WHOM I REMMBERED
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SORRY SONIA BUT YOU WILL HAVE TO WAIT MORE FOR THE MEETING SWEETIE KYA KAREIN DRINK KARNEY K CONSEQUENCES DANGEROUS HOTAY HAIN NA ISLIYE


CHAPTER 2



Prem goes home n gets ready on the otherside Heer also getys ready but she feels like that she is a bit sad which she doesn't know why?? Prem tries to get ready I mean he pretends that he is getting ready as he sees G30 is beaming she is thinking sumthing Prem is looking at G30 through the mirror and then goes to her n asks her to give him his car keys but she says


Prem are you sure, you wanna go like this


Of course maa


Butt prem agar tu sheesha dekh leta toh
Tries to control her uncontrollable laugh


Maa I m ready n I will be late if I keep on looking at myself like girlzzzzzzzzz n seeing mirror its so girly I m not gonna I know I m looking nice




He takes the keys n goes out G30 tries to stop him but PREM JUNEJA TOH JAHAAZ PER SAWAAR HAIN. Prem when gets in the car realizes sumthing is getting loose. He then remembers that he wore the shirt, the tie tried to tie buttons and put tie on his neck opened the above three buttons gelled his hair n then????????????????? Makes face like oooooooohhhhhhhhhh PREM KYA KAR DIYA then gets out of the car n hiding himself gets in his room 4rm backdoor now he is in full dress n then gets out G30 is laughing n says



PREM WHEN WILL U GROWS UP.



Never PJ is always gonna be the same what was that
Mein nahi badloon ga kisi k liye b Ussey bAadlna hoga mere liye

Tu ne kiya kaha



Doesn't matter what, mujhe jaana hai ab mein waapis nahin aaoonga confirm. I mean I will see maa k agar aaj ki koi flight Hui to I will go straight to OXFORDSHIRE instead of coming bak hom den paking den going n carrying all that ridiculous stuff with me.



Okeh then bye. Apna khayal rakhna (it was as if GARNIER- APNA KHAYAL RAKHNA wasn't it I thought it was like that.)


Smirking he went out and lastly returned to say



Maa I will try to return kwikly (kisses her both cheeks n forehead). Maa aisa kartey hain na k Bau g aur Herman k waapis aaney k bad mein chala jaoon.


He dint want himself to go away n leave G30 bcs he was feeling like k maa aap ko akailey chor k nahin jaoonga. He hugged G30 n thought



I will send someone else to OXFORDSHIRE. I CANT stay without Maa. His eyes fill with tears but then he says to himself n tries to comfort him PJ U R THE DUDE YOU R SO well built. How can u be so girly?

Kya hua hmmm. Mein choti bachi to nahin hun, akelay reh sakti hun.



Nahin maa ?...


Herman is at the back of pj and says:
Haan sub samajhti hain maa. What do u think? You can spend time with Maa alone. Nope we are back. Now u can go to complete your hotel.


Bilkul ab tu ja befikar ho kar hum aa gayye hain
It's none other than LALLU.


Heer was getting ready too 4 the party. here she was cunfused what to wear but then after 2 hrs she decided 2 wear a white scotch with a simple pearl locket/ornament. she was ready n she left for PRIYA's home as all her friends had to gather there n then they wud go 4 the party. Now PJ had to go, by hook or by crook as now it was his destiny. So he had to go so he left after an hour of LALLU N HERMAN. Someone was there but not waiting for him. Heer had reached club but she was not in a mood to party her face was not that glowing one today as it wud be on every party. She was very worried unknown n worried that why is she so tensed. On the otherside Prem was in club by now surrounded by a large number of lass but paying no attention like he was not there. Finally his friend tried to move the crowd and gave him some space to respire freely. Prem looking quite tensed began to drink his friend tried to calm him but unsuccessful whole party went oin like that when he was drunk like HUM NAHIN JAANTEY HUM KHUD KAUN HAIN he was forced to sing sumthing PJ was about to sing when his friend took him 4rm the stage apologizing dat PJ has a call to attend he took him out n began to scold him that why he always drinks like this n soon he will become a member of alcoholism? his friend goes in bring his car keys n PJ leaves n drives the whole way himself his friend returns n sees PJ GHAYAB now he traks him n follows but PJ is not stopinn as he is in consciousness state PJ doesn't see the car cumin infront n when he sees its very late he turns n ends upo in an accident a very severe one

on the otherside Heer tells her friends dat she is going she is not feeling well. Heer goes out in parking area n asks the watchman to bring her car keys she then puts her hand on a broken glass piece unaware n huts herself her hand gets cut n bleeds which was on the watchmans table she gets hurt n cries. She takes the keys n drives with her wounded hand as soon as she enters the house TEJASWI who was outside waiting 4 Heer sees her she goes to her n sees wounded hand she tells a servant to bring first aid box n then asks Heer that how did she cut her hand. she says to TT that accidently she got hurt after that she bandages her and Heer then moves upstairs to her room. She changed her dress n wore her nightie n slowly opened her window n began to stare at MOON n thought abt its solitude. on the other side PJ is in hospital by now n is being treated his report reveals his blood to contain 60-80% alcohol n they tell his family to make PJ prohibit alcohol otherwise he will be suffering very soon from various diseases as he is consuming too much alcohol.
operation is carried out successfully but he is faint. G30 is quite worried as it has been a week n prem hasn't opened his eyes. She is ready to blast on PJ as soon as he gets back to normal and to make him sure that now on his drinking is banned.


It has been a week PJ has not opened his eyes. G30 goes in I.C.U n puts her hand on the stand (actually, this stand is attached with the bed n it gives a nice look to the bed I know hospital mien no nice thing but still.) She sees her sugarplum n cries remembering all his actions especially the ones whom which KD used to called PJ toliaallowtypes Her tear fells on his face n he tries to move but unsuccessful as his sensory nerves had been damaged very severely. G30 saw him changing expression she told the doczz n they said finally PJ had shown a little recovery n they recommended G30 that they shud make PJ avoid drinking. Bit by bit he recovered n G30 always tried to go to him in an angry mood but when she saw him all her anger just vanished off. As PJ gazed at her n then he would make up a melancholy n down in da dumps expression. After three weeks PJ got to see the outer world by his eyes again but still in the hospital area n not out. So now, he was recovering so he began to do a little office work in hospital in order to pass time. PJ ab tak nahin sudhray here he was the one who was flirting with all interns n doczz so therefore he was not complaining that much but still missing those representation giving girlzzz whom he met everyday in conferences. So that was a thing which was a bit uncomfortable but phir b kumi kaun puri karega so he had began to protest but when ever he began it was G30


PREM KUCH DINO KI BAAT HAI


But now PJ had been fed up from this sentence which he had been listening since the day he had began to interact normally which meant 15.689 days


Hey, PREM JUNEJA you are the DUDE u have rules of your own. How can u follow these sticky area rules no never PJ apni marzee se chalta hai. It has been 1209600 seconds you are in your senses n u hav not stepped out of this zoo




He said to himself. He had to stay here one more hour as he heard doczzz saying


PJ has improved we'll ask his family if they want then we'll discharge him


Noh noh I have asked them just discharge me right now. I wanna step out of this zoo.


Are you sure


Yeahup




He was in high spirits as now he was sure that he is getting emancipation from the hospital. He called G30 n told her that he was cuming but G30 proscribed him that he was from now on he is gonna not drive himself nor he can drink nor he is to come home at 3.00 a.m She was telling him but he was the one who was like SO WHAT. Prem was not taking note of all prosecution.


Maa aren't u happy mein theek ho gaya hun. I have recovered.


No I m not. You wanna make me idyllic


Yeahup I wan to


Then u are going to respect my orders. Only then I will be happy n contended\\\\\\


Maa you are taking advantage of my condition. You know nah dat I can do anything to please u this is thwarting


It means you have agreed. That's like my good boy


Maa.......... (Making up a glum n ominous face with a dishearting voice tries to protest)


Theek hai ab mein rakhti hun. You are cuming home n not going anywhere else okeh no office n no party stuff. Come straight home. Got it


Okeh bye maa



.............................................................................................................................................................................................


Here Heer she was in locker room alone as now university classes were off as students were busy with Christmas parties n drama stuff. SAhe was the one who was responsible for the whole activities but she was here alone. She was playing with sumthing. She was holding an anklet n was not thinking about sumthing specific, as she was lost in the anklet sumwhere with her mind blank. Somebody came n offered her coffee. She simply refused


Oh, to ab puraanay friends agar coffee dein toh u refuse. I have not forgot you if you have


Nope its not like that. I dint knew it was you. I m wretched


No apologies granted. Mai'm you wud have called me or some contact


First of all when u went to New York u din tell me. Secondly u were busy so much that u dint pay a heeed to mail me. Thirdly you had time to call Meher NB ( nihaal bhaiya) muma papa TT just u dint call me. So I was not even dying to meet you. But' this coffee I will drink it bkz its mine but don't think I m not angry. I have been gnashing teeth these two months just because of you.


He goes and stands at the back n then hugs her from the back n says


SSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH........................... Quiet I know you're angry but that doesn't mean you'll scold me like this. Actually dear I hada problem therefore I dint contact you. Actually my friend he had got a severe accident thts why


But still u cud have managed


Okeh sorry


No u always do it. This time I am not gonna 4give u like this.




so tell me how..........



mr. rampal do u think i am gonna tell u




yeahup




nohh m not. use your brain


i don't have



then use Priya's Ashish's Rahul's or anybody's else




okeh but tell me what r u doing with this anklet. don't tell me u were thinking about a guy holding this anklet



What I will kill u definitely How dare u..............


runs after him but then goes out smirking he also leaves after her



they go outside but RR was not a student but still was in there as he was an ex-student so he was permitted to stay. He sees Heer glaring at him he goes towrds her n sits on his knees n Priya who was with Rishabh also sits n he begins to sing in the ground

Aajeeb ithefaq hai
Kya mulaqat hai
Aajeeb ithefaq hai
Kya mulaqat hai
Mil gaye aaj phir
Koi toh baat hai
Takaluf chodiye
Aji tarruf kijiye
Ummm
Takaluf chodiye
Aji tarruf kijiye
Aaye aur chal diye
Dont say alvida
Dont say alvida

Heer quit angry remarked
All done can i go

He tries to get Heer happy but unsuccessful as Heer was not that well at hindi he knew it but still sang except Heer all the rest were amused by RR n Priya who had sang the whole song. This time she glared on Priya as well. She left to the music n arts department in west. somone told her there that she was called inthe hall she went there n lights were turned off it was dark but after a while lights turned on n a play was being acted on the stage


Priya read the following lines
This is the story of two friends at play.
One bumped the other, but she knew what to say.
What did she say?
She said, "I'm sorry. I'm sorry."
That was the thing to do.
And there are times
I need to say it, too. YOU?
these are song lines


When I get angry or don't like to share,
I take a deep breath and show my friends I care.
Its only fair!
I say, "I'm sorry. I'm sorry."
That is the thing to do.
And there are times
you need to say it, too! WHO?
Entschuldigen Sie mir?(German)
Pardonnez-moi?.(French)
Perdona. Lo siento. Hay que decirlo as? (Spanish)
Sometimes good friends can stay angry too long.
Let's make it easy and sing this little song.
Come, sing along!
Just say, "I'm sorry. I'm sorry."
That is the thing to do.
And when you do
You'll feel much better, too! WOOO!!!


it ended it was a song she loved it she went on stage n hugged RR n said


Thats like my Rish always sumthing different


thnks to god. But Rahul what was different in it
Priya gave a sigh of relief


Cant say Priya



As its 4.00pm now which means university is about to close so they all leave. RR goes with Heer to her home to spend time with her. They enter n when they open the door they are welcomed by the whole gang n sum1 else whom HEER is delighted to see and she hugs her.


This is really a wonderful day first RISH n now u



OKEH NOW TRY TO GUESS PEOPLE. HOW WAS IT. Tell me


Edited by hajoo00 - 15 years ago

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