FF - RISHTA I Part 1 - 43 !! - Page 2

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Originally posted by: sanyoprithviraj

nice concept but plz dont make heer cry much in this fic.
lets see who falls in love first.i hope it is prem and not heer nahi to wo sirf roti rahegi

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i'm trying my level best not to put tears in Heer's eyes.

Part - 2

Heer is packing her things to leave. She is tensed and confused about her decision. 'I agreed because I couldn't see his sad face. He is already upset about his father's health.' She stood before her parents picture. 'Ma bapuji help me. I had agreed to help Mr. Prem, but I'm little bit nervous about my decision. This should not spoil my future. Guide me. Bless me.'

In the airport Prem met Heer. 'Ms. Heer, I like to thank you for your help.'

Heer 'Mr. Prem, I agreed to this thinking you as my friend. There is no 'thanks' and 'sorry' between friends. Mr.Prem, don't repeat this again.'

Prem 'which girl calls her boyfriend as Mr.' she giggled.

Heer 'sorry Prem.'

Prem 'Heer, in the flight I tell you about my family then it will be easy for you to catch up.' Both finished their check in and boarded the flight. Heer sat in window seat and Prem sat in the next.

As soon as the flight started flying towards India, Prem started telling her about his mother, father and Preet. After a while Heer fell asleep. Prem is reading a magazine. Suddenly he felt a light load on his left shoulder. He turned to see Heer peacefully sleeping on his shoulder. For the first time he saw her face so closer. 'sweet and peaceful smile. She looks like an angel.' He adjusted his shoulder to give her comfortable position to keep her head. Soon he also fell asleep keeping his head on her head.

When he opened his eyes, he saw Heer's hand holding his upper arm tightly. He doesn't want to disturb her sleep. When she opened her eyes she saw herself on Prem's shoulder and his palm on her hand which is holding his arm. She felt safe and comfortable in his touch.

After collecting their luggage, Prem looked at Heer. Her face showed tension. He placed his hand around her shoulder. she is surprised by his attitude but she leaned on him 'Prem, I'm nervous.'

Prem 'I'm with you. believe me.'

Heer 'if uncle comes to know about our drama..'

Prem 'don't worry. They don't know anything about Sanjana. You just be yourself. No need to imitate anything.'

Before Heer open her mouth again 'PB' Preet waved to him.

Prem 'Heer, be calm. Preet is there waiting for us.' Heer smiled. They went to Preet. Preet hugged Prem. He gave a brotherly hug to Heer 'welcome Bhabi. what is your name? PB planned to give us surprise and didn't say anything about you.'

Heer 'Heer.'

Preet 'how sweet name and voice is also sweet as your name.'

Heer 'how is uncle?'

Prem is surprised 'I even forgot to ask about Dad but she..' he admired her affection.

Preet 'he is fine Bhabi. Still he is in ICU. Doctors have advised not to ignore any of his wishes. He will get upset if we start to give any reason or ignoring his request. That is not good for his heart.' Preet and Prem eyes filled with tears.

Heer 'Don't worry. He will be alright within few days.'

On the way to home Preet is continuously chattering with Heer. Prem is admiring their conversation.

When they reached Juneja house, an elderly lady came with pooja thali and took arthi to Prem and Heer.

Lady 'Bahu, step in with your right leg first, Prem Beta, hold Bahu's hand.'

Heer got struck one second.

Preet teased 'Bhabi, forgot which is your right leg?' Heer smiled. Prem held her hand in his and she stepped in.

Preet showed her room, which is next to Prem's.

Preet 'PB, you and Bhabi get freshen up we will go to the hospital to meet Dad.'

Both went to their room. Prem came out after half-an-hour. Prem is surprised to see Heer already got ready and chatting with Preet downstairs. She is wearing a pink salwar. He is completely speechless looking at her stunning beauty. She always wore pants and shirts to office. This is the first time he is looking her in traditional dress. He forgot that he is staring at her.

Preet snapped his fingers before Prem's face 'PB, it is enough. Later you can admire Bhabi now come we go.'

Prem managed to hide his expression on his face 'ha come lets go.'

In the car, Preet sat in the driver seat. Prem opened the back seat door for Heer. She smiled thinking 'my boss opening the door for me.' Preet is enjoying the scene watching them in the mirror. Prem sat in the front passenger seat. Drive to hospital is quiet.

Prem is thinking 'Dad should not get upset because of me. I don't know how i'm going to manage all these things.'

Heer is thinking 'did I'm doing anything wrong? What they will think about me when they came to about Sanjana later? '

They reached the hospital. In front of ICU gaya3 is sitting in a chair leaning her head back on the wall. She came to conscious, when Prem touched her feet. She got up and blessed him. Both hugged and shed tears silently. 'Ma, Dad will be okay. Don't worry.'

Gaya3 wiped her tears and looked up to see Heer standing behind Prem. Prem introduced her.

Prem 'Ma. She is Heer.' He thought for a while 'your DIL.'

Heer touched her feet. Gaya3 gave her blessing and placed a kiss on her forehead.

Preet 'PB, already I spoke to the doctor. You go and meet Dad.'

Heer sat with Gaya3 holding her hand. Gaya3 is happy that Prem has selected a traditional and affectionate girl.

Prem went to meet his dad. Lalit is happy to see Prem. he is in the middle of several machines. Prem's eyes filled with tears. He thought about his fathers active movements in office and his jovial character in the house. Lalit whispered 'Prem.'

Prem sat next to him and placed his palm on his hand. 'how are you dad?'

Lalit nodded 'um ... fine.' He looked around. Prem sensed he is searching for his DIL. 'Dad she is outside with Ma.'

Lalit 'bring. ..her... in. I... want .. to... see....my ... DIL.'

Prem went outside and called Heer. She came to Lalit and touched his feet. He sighed her to come close to him. She went near to him and bent down before him. He kept his hand on her head and blessed. He smiled and gave a satisfactory look to Prem. Heer sat next to him. Lalit face full of happiness. Prem is happy.

In the evening, Prem, Preet, Gaya3 and Heer went home. Heer helped Gaya3 to get freshen up. She fed her dinner and made sure she slept.

When Heer is about to go to her room she saw Prem in study room working in his laptop. She went to kitchen and made two cups of coffee. She handed over one to Prem and took a piece of paper and waited. 'Prem, do you want me to help?'

Prem 'ha Heer. This is the new project we are going to launch in Ludhiana.'

He automatically gave some instruction and she sat in the desktop in the room and started her job.

Preet came and admired them doing job together 'now I know how PB fell for Bhabi. She is also workaholic. '

Prem and Heer smiled and continued their job. Around 12 Preet felt sleepy and slipped out of the room silently excusing. Prem and Heer and finished the work around 2 AM. After arranging the table and switching of the lights in the room Heer turned to leave.

Prem 'thanks.'

Heer 'for what?'

Prem 'today you helped me in many things.'

Heer 'no thanks between friends' prem smiled. Even in the dark her face looked like a shining star to him. Prem pushed hair away that fell on her face. His finger on her cheek made her shiver and lost balance. He held her in his hand around her waist. He placed her palm on his shoulder. She avoided looking into his eyes. With other hand he pulled her face towards him and kissed gently on her cheek 'thanks'. They broke apart.

Before going to sleep, Prem tried to call Sanjana but she is busy. So he left a voice mail for her telling about his father health and a I love you.

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