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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: -fsn-
hey dear
nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii tum heer ko nahi mar sakti.
ab prem ka kya hoga.?
wait for the update.
plz update soon
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Fatima

lets see heer mari ya nahi and il update asap

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

[QUOTE=-fsn-]hey dear
nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii tum heer ko nahi mar sakti.
ab prem ka kya hoga.?
wait for the update.
plz update soon
luv
Fatima
[/QUOTE]thanks for liking aur heer ke baare mein baad mein decide karenge

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: cuteangelgirl95
awesome jst cant wait to read next part do continue soon thanks for the pm me

added u sweety and i l continue asap thanks for liking

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: cuteangelgirl95
awesome jst cant wait to read next part do continue soon thanks for the pm me

thanks added u will coninue asap

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: PremHeer_Chahat
awesome
continue soon
pm me

YA I L CONT AND PM U

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

its really nice continue and update soon plz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

ANTAHEEN

CHAPTER – 1

A girl dressed in wedding dress in coming towards the mandap with tears in her eyes
As she is coming down to her mandap her heartbeats are racing faster.
She is seeing towards her landline phone, which is kept in the side where the stairs are ending.
Her heart is telling her that this is foolishness but still she has a hope that might be it rings for the last time and she could hear the angel's voice that brought happiness to her life.
But the angel also cheated him why he didn't call why ?? he promised me that this time when he will call he will fix a date for us to meet but ………
Overcoming the fight that was going in her mind she saw towards the mandap at right of it her friends heer and prem are standing but she cant tell them what she wants ???
What happened to the guy he liked ??? is anything wrong ? or she got cheated ? or is he done talking to her and is bored ? what happened ?
What happened ?what happened ?

Then the moment came that she was fearing she was made to seat near her pheonsake or can say her life partner
Her mind is trembling with so many questions why she is making fool of herself for a person she never knows
Then someone said from behind
AROHI ! UR HUSBAND HMM HMM OOPS SORRY OUR JIJU MR . ADITYA RAJ IS WAITING TO TAKE UR HAND ATLEAST EXTEND UR HAND

The words aditya raj is moving in her mind like hell why its not him ? why its not arjun punj ??

Then her friend heer supported her from behind and putted her hand on her shoulder to calm her and said
Heer : I know u r tensed but calm down

Arohi just gave her a small smile

Her mind was trembling even she cant confess about her love to her best friend atleast this was the least she can do ??????

Arohi : heer !

Heer : I know u r tensed but calm down we will get lots of time to talk

Arohi thought that this is only my life and I have to live in this if he doesn't cares why should I we don't have any other intimacy rather that being phone a friend that's all arohi that's all

A drop of tear rolled down her eye ……..to her cheek and that was beginning of her antaheen life ……………..

A slow music goes on in the background

JAO PAKHI BOLO HAWA CHOLO- CHOLO
ABJHAYA JALNAR KACCH
AMI KI AMAKE HARIYECHI BAKE
ROOP KOTHAR NAACH KANACH
ANGULER KOLE JOLE JONAKI
JOLE HARIYEHCI KAN SONAKI
JALNAYE GOLPERA KOTHA MEGH
JAO MEGH CHOKHE REKHO EIN ABEK
JAO PAKHI ………

People don't know whats fate arohis fate is decided but two couples fate is yet to be decided who knew that life can be so merciless …………………………………………………

So life is antaheen …….. never believe to it
…………………………..

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