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saba khan

@premeeristry

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#51

Hey aishwaryaa nice update but soo short and we lack premeer
and ther was no meher n preet garewal.but i liked the suspense mode how u started the story
i know it takes time n lot of mind work i guess.but cont soon 😉

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Riya

@PrincessPatel77

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#52

Very intresting
continue asap
thanks for the pm
pm me

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cuteangelgirl95

@cuteangelgirl95

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#53

awesome loved pt 1 continue asap thanks for the pm me

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Afreen

@asyasahil928

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#54

hey
amazing start....loved it....👏👏👏 continue soon....and thanks for the PM...😊

love
Afreen

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sia

@luv_kdmhmd

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#55

Hi aishu

Ab teri tabiyat theek hia na?

Ab teri typhoid…..I mean jaundice kaisa hai😆

Wow what a chapter, ya seriously u have bcome a drama queen now, jab dekho tragedy ka hi topic choose karti hia. Ab arohi arjun se pyaar karit aur tu uski shaadi aditya se kara rahi hai. Prem aur heer saath hai, do they knew they chat with each other or no. aur teesre couple ka kya haal hai, wo kab entry marenge. Liked this update, wanna know how u will get back arohi in the life of arjun. Do update soon

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: meeshi.
hiiiiiiiiiii
awesome starting
very intresting
pls update soon

THANKS FOR APPRECIATING DEAR AND I L UPDATE ASAP

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: sonia7
continue soon i wanna see more of prem and heer

ya next part jst premmeer

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: sanju_veni
hey great update really loved it plz plz update soon want more n more premeer scenes

thanks
yanext timejstpremeerandilcont soon

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: premeeristry
Hey aishwaryaa nice update but soo short and we lack premeer
and ther was no meher n preet garewal.but i liked the suspense mode how u started the story
i know it takes time n lot of mind work i guess.but cont soon 😉

hello dear so u started reading this too
wellyai toolackedpremeer but itsjstmind workto exhibit whati want
so nect update only premeer dont worry

u l ave a small convo of them which will be interesting

and meher will enter but entry of preet is still having some time

thanks for liking sweety